Good story. I'm sad to see it end but excited to see what you come up with next.

Have you put THE HUNGER on here yet, i cant find it.

WWWWHHHHHYYYYYY! I feel like Superman when Lois lane dies I want to fly around the earth to make her live again. This is truly the most involved I've ever been w/ a story. Thank you for sharing your darkness, thank you for always making me & many other reviewers feel so special. You should feel nothing except PRIDE when it comes to this journey you took w/ all of us. Personally I don't mind ending not being all tied up pretty in a bow. Life has loose ends plus we can always imagine what we want like Miguel be ripped apart my one of his slaves. The one good thing I can say about this story ending is you can go back to your other stories and them take a breather and out do yourself I know you can you have greatness in you. Please keep writing the world is far more interesting w/ stories like yours in it. 

You did a fantastic job on this. I am sad she wont be saved, but you pretty much told us that from the begining. And I really don't think I wanted to see her death.
thank you for writing this, i enjoyed it, now I have to find a therapist. Lol

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm happy that she won't be saved which means that my muse didn't hijack my vision. You're welcome and thanks for reading! LOL at the therpist comment, I think many of my "readers" feel that way.

I was riveted by your tale.  Excellent work.

You did it!!! You ended it perfectly!!! You even added a rainbow for God's sake!!! You should be proud of this!!! never ashamed!!! You work out your inner demons by writing FICTIONAL stories... that's healthy not sick!!! Everyone has evil thoughts (granted, some are worse than others) but most people just aren't capable, or brave enough to put it in writing. I know I've said it before...but you are so talented... and I can't wait for your next project... So take care and know that your appreciated...

Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you so much! I know that I've thanked you like five thousand times for your reviews but let me thank you one more time. Yes and I added the rainbow just for you. Thank you for saying that but I know how sick this story really is. My mom read a few chapters and was horrified. But I'm black as the night in my heart and I can't help that. Yes everyone does have evil in them, I'm in love with it too, otherwise I wouldn't have any readers I suppose. Thank you, I really try to put myself out there and when someone as articulate and wonderful as you comes along it makes it all worth while. I have loved every review you've written, so thanks. This is the first story I've finished in ages, it makes me feel good that I can finish something for once. You're the best.

So sad!!! Even though they're as disfunctional as you can get... Alcede and Eric desperately want her to fall in love with them. The fact that she is in love with Anton is going to continue to be a problem for Eric at least. Nothing worse than being in love with someone that doesn't love you back! Eric is already unstable, adding this complication onto his long list of control issues is probably going to be what evevtually makes him snap. Anton nearly got what he wanted... If Alcede wouldn't have clocked Eric with the skillet he would be dead. Speaking of that...it surprised me that Alcede chose to help Anton over Eric... I don't know where they're going to go from here? But, I can't wait to see what you come up with... Oh! I can't believe Anton bought her a puppy, a cute little Corgi no less... If a rainbow were to pop up at some point... this fic would officially have something for everyone...lol. Thank you for sharing another amazing chapter.

Now I have a new favorite chapter. Now after all that's been said where is this going to go. I have no idea but I know I will be along for this fucked up demented crazy story that I just can't seem to get enough of. Loves & hugs. 

You never cease to surprise me! What were you (& Anton) thinking sacrificing himself for Sookie! I... I... I don't even know what else to say except get those kids home. Oh and can you drop a house on Miguel or something your the writer I'll leave it up to you. 

Brilliant!!! Since he isn't going to allow himself to kill Sookie, the next best thing is forcing her to watch him exercise his demons on the Hooker. He essentially made her take part... At this point she's so psychologically messed up I think she would love him no matter what. And I don't think he's even close to feeling better yet. ..

Good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens.

Nice chapter. How utterly twisted that he would sleep with his uncle to save her. On the same token, I'm sure that she will pay for it somehow later.

Hi I've been reading this story and its really fascinating me. I wasn't sure what to think of Anton but I'm so amazed at what he did for Sookie, coming there to rescue her from Miguel and then saving her now too. I hope he can still stay with Sookie when she goes back to Eric and Alcide although I wonder if that would be possible if they found out what happened to them. Its so dark and scary but also interesting too, great story :-)

Wow! Another fucked up relative...and shit! How many of them are there? Obviously incest isn't a concern to them! I wonder, is it nature or nurture that produced all of these monsters? Anton's uncles almost seem proud of his evil tendencies, like he's their favorite or something... He seems to truly believe a person's worth comes down to whether they're hot or not...his level of shallowness is astounding! And the thought of Sookie possibly getting pregnant by him is pretty terrifying... Is it awful that I'm hoping they've damaged her enough that, that can't happen? Her situation is so fucked at this point I'm actually wishing sterility on her... I absolutely loved the last line! I was kind of hoping and waiting for it to come around again... Ok, now to address your message at the end. First of all, at this point in the story, if someone is so shocked by the subject matter that they have to bail, they have either never read your work before ( too bad for them because you are so talented...), or they should have walked away a long time ago... this isn't puppy dogs and rainbows people... It was pretty evident from the beginning that this fic was going to spiral into serious darkness...So, each to their own... if they don't want to stick around after the next chapter. I'm all in until the end!

BAIL! After a cliffhanger like that, seriously! This is my favorite chapter (even though the ending is quite grim) but don't ask me why. I can't imagine the horror of Sookie becoming pregnant even if Anton was the father but being a sick bitch it would be interesting if Eric got her pregnant, I can't even imagine what he would think or do if she was pregnant with his kid (because we all know the pull and pray method is not the most reliable). Longing for the next chapter. I love your dark beauty.

hot damn.  after all of this they still get to rape her...smh cant wait for the next.  i really cant stand anton.  his family is really fucked up too, but there is something about how sallow he is that is so disturbing to me....which i know is probably ironic

Saddness, that's what I feel. I so thought Sookie was going to be "safe" w/ Anton I'm not so delusional that I thought they would make love but I did not expect for him to want no need to hurt her. When I  read gun shots I became so hopefully Stellan had somehow shot Miguel in his psychotic head. Am I demented that I'm looking forward to her going "home"?

Another incredible chapter! I hope Anton is able to protect Sookie but somehow I doubt he will.

I am still so enthralled with this story and extremely grateful to your commitment to it (very quick chapter additions).

Again, thanks for all your hard work, creative writing and insightful imagery. 

Can't wait for the next installment (and also kind of dreading it for Sookie's sake I think)

Xxx

Anton gets to be the great white knight. How these people can love each other but then be such horrible heartless creatures is mind boggling. Forgot to say thanks about delving into Eric & Miguel's past.  Hope to read you soon. 

Aww... a little fluff after so much angst. Nice little break from all the horror. Good job.

omg hes gonna turn her into a real addict.  thats do fucked up

You've set this scene up perfectly! I wonder if Manuel isn't more than a sadistic, white slaver, drug cartel running, murderer (Whew! That was a mouth full). In all honesty, if you chose to go in a supernatural direction he could easily pass for Satan himself. He's constantly surrounded by excess, depravity, and missery...and for the most part it's orchestrated by him...But, even if he's just a human sociopath, he's scary as hell. And the fact that he's highly intellegent and fluent in over ten languages makes him even more frightening. Because, smart, bad-guys are much more dangerous than stupid ones and they don't tend to make mistakes. I wonder what Stellen is up to? And poor Sookie...he just introduced her to shooting up heroin...the ultimate chemical escape from reality...this can't end well... Even though it was a shorter chapter it still delivered. Can't wait for the next one...

This is dark! I pray for a rescue I know Sookie will not get. I really really hope Miguel has an unfortunate accident and a painful one at that. Even if she makes it out alive part of her will always be dead. I'm so sorry Sookie. 😥

I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!! But that's one of the reasons I love your writing... God poor Stellen!!! Does he have anything to live for? The biggest surprise though was Eric's defiance...dude is at the end of his rope!!! At one point he even scared Miguel... When Miguel slammed Eric into the wall and the puzzle fell and broke, I couldn't help but think it was foreshadowing a major shift in the story...or maybe I'm just reading too much into it lol... thanks for another great chapter.

What a twist... hmmm... I can only imagine what Miguel is going to do.

OH SHIT!!!! I did NOT see that coming!!! Kudos to u for another fabulous chapter.  Once again the puzzled crashing to the ground as she is about to be taken from her masters....I love it! I really enjoyed the insight into Eric's past again, and I can not wait to see the retaliation the Miguel will recieved for his actions.  For once, I almost felt sorry for Eric... I'm so scared for her and Stellen right now!!! tty in a bit!

There were a couple lines I especially liked in this chapter....Sookie comparing herself to an eroding island was a beautiful way to describe her slowly losing herself...and describing Eric's eyes as being like a gas stove...I can totally picture them almost flickering in a crazy-beautiful yet dangerous way... Sookie is well on her way down the slippery slope of drug use at this point...and really who could blame her? Besides, it's not as if she has a choice...Eric likes her fucked up, so it's not like she can "just say no!", and it's the only way she can escape her torment. Speaking of torment, Miguel obviously has big plans for Sookie...that can't bode well for her... I like that you keep giving us little bits of of info on their pasts...It helps us at least try to understand what motivates some of their behavior. I also like that Sookie denied herself contact with Matthew... she may be slipping fast, but she's not stupid and she's definately not the naive girl she once was... Thanks again for another amazing chapter...

:) Nice chapter.

for a second there i thought she was actually going to do that...smh i love their mood swings it just discretly reminds u that this is a horror fic.  ttys

Wow what a chapter of an emotional roller coaster! The paragraph where she looked at the door and she longed for escape at the same time as accepting death, even perhaps welcoming it...that was intense. Also coping with all these sick (yet gorgeous) guys in love with her and knowing her life she once had is over...even the rest of the world has given up looking for her. How anyone could stay any kind of sane I don't know. I love your incorporation of music into this story. I connect to powerful lyrics like others do with scripture. 

Another lovely chapter, as always. Thanks for updating so quickly.

So i know she  would kill them the first chance she got right... but what if she like like started to lets say tame them to her touch....   to maybe calm them a little when they freak out right!!!..  she start to give them massages and hugs showing them affection  to....  I mean shes not getting out so she has to start thinking of ways to calm the monster right..Drugs  dont help right.. just thought some  way to  help her survive the wrough spots you know.......

you know it has just occured to me that the puzzle that is mentioned throughout this fic has served as a kind of time line for me, as the reader.  its like it represents sookies transition, not only in my eyes but in her captures minds.  its kind of freaky.  anywayz im really interested to see how the rest of the story plays out now that shes 'fully' trained and her captures are becoming so emotionally vested into her...as always cant wait for more

Good chapter.

All your work is thought provoking and requires the reader to explore all levels of emotion...the evil and goodness that exists in everyone. That naturally will rub some the wrong way, but that is exactly what true art is...You are amazing and I hope you never stop or change for anyone. I also hope this review gets through because none of my others have :(. 

I hate that you feel like you have to defend yourself your work is fiction it maybe inspired by people you've known but at the end of the day it's fiction. People are reading a story about 2 no 3 no 4 rapists and they're fine with that but a black guy selling crack is crossing the line? I love that people have opinions but I just find it funny what bothers them ex: hearing swear words or god forbid a woman's breast is bad but seeing people commit violence is okay. Alright it time for me to get off my soap box and read a new chapter. 

Hell woman how many chapters did you load?! You spoil us. I am never going to finish reading my book. I hope you're proud of yourself. I love Sookie is asking more question 1) because I like her bold 2) because I so want to know more about her captors. 

y would somene think u are racist? i must have missed tge part that "hinted" to that...lol

:) Nice chapter.

Not gratuitous!!! Deep!!! These characters are so damaged that they are led by their base desires with no regard for the consequences of their actions. They only care about getting off in whatever sick depraved way they can imagine. That's one of the reasons the sick fucks keep non consensual sex slaves. Their need to utterly control and debase is very telling of their own histories of extreme abuse. Although I'm not sure that applies to Miguel...I think he's just sociopath and a sadist. Poor Stellen...and I thought Sookie had it bad. Can't wait to find out whats going on with Anton...thanks for another great chapter....

smh!

wow...

I'm glad you gave us some background on Eric...Not that it's a contest but I think he may take the prize for being the most psychologically damaged...I mean the guy has blackout fits of rage (SO...SCARY!!!) And the fact that he can be so caring, almost sweet at times makes him even more terrifying...you never know who your going to be dealing with...talk about walking on egg shells!!! And I think it was pretty clear who made him that way...or at least took part in his abuse. He didn't like hearing her call for her daddy at all!!! I like that you didn't make him a complete monster though. How awful to commit these terrible acts of violence and have no control over it! I know he has a choice when he's coherent...But, I'm starting to think he doesn't really have control of his evil tendencies even when he appears to be rational. The fact that he's horrified by his own actions when he becomes lucid says a lot about his mental stability. He's hanging by a thread!!! I'm sad for him because I think there's a part of him that desperately craves tenderness and affection...he's just not able to control his other urges. And when you add his coke addiction to all his other issues, it's like adding gasoline to the fire.Excellent job fleshing out his character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter...

I AM COMPLETELY TAKEN WITH HOW MUCH EFFORT YOU ARE TAKING IN GETTING TO KNOW WHAT'S BEHIND THEIR  DARK AND TWISTED MINDS.THERE IS ALWAYS A BACKUP STORY IN EVERYTHING WE DO IN LIFE AND THE WAY YOU ARE SHOWING US HOW DO CERTAIN TRAUMATIC AND SRESSFULL ACTS LEAVE PERMANENT MARK ON  HUMAN BEIGHN AND VARIETIES ON WHAT ARE THEIR CONCEQUENCIES ON ONES LIFE IS REMARCABLE. I REALLY LIKE THAT YOU CREATED SUCH LAYERED CHARACTERS  WHICH GIVE US INSIGHT ON HOW CAN PEOPLE CHANGE IN ORDER TO LIVE IN CASE OF DRASTIC POSSIBILITIES. IN ONE WAY I LIKE THAT SOOKIE IS FINDING A WAY TO LIVE IN THIS SICK SORROUNDING BUT ON OTHER HAND I AM FEELING VERY SAD FOR HER AS SHE IS ON A PATH WITH NO POSSIBLE RETURN WERE SHE WILL MOST PROBABLY LOOSE HER ENTIRE FORMER IDENTITY. WHAT ARE PEOPLE READY TO DO IN ORDER TO SURVIVE IS REALLY FASCINATING. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE ABOUT ERIC'S AND ALCIDE'S LIFE STORY WHICH BROUGHT THEM WHERE THEY ARE TODAY. PLEASE DO CONTINUE AND DON'T BE SO HARD TO YOURSELF,I AM ALSO SOMETIMES TOO CRITICAL AND HARSH TO MYSELF BUT AGAIN I LOOK AT IT AS A WHEEL THAT PUSHES ME FORWARD AND MAKES THINGS BETTER, SO I CAN COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND, KEEP GOING  ;=)

: ) Thanks for the update.

lol i was wondering how u were planining on her not falling for them, at least anton....

So, so sad. I loved that you had Sookie touch the dusty TV screen and look into Brandon's eyes. It was like she was saying goodbye...I just wonder if Anton is jealous enough to make Brandon disappear because of her reaction. And the rape scene at the end of the chapter seemed so much more brutal because of Anton's running commentary and his level of excitement...When he said "yes beg him"...the whole thing just took a turn...I think the old Sookie was officially dead when she had the realization that she was falling for Anton even though he's a monster. And then after they were finished with her, when she was covered in spunk, and not caring, the fact that she laughed and then smirked made me wonder if she had finally snapped...and maybe a new Sookie was born ...I'm really interested to see where you take this now...Thanks for yet another great chapter...

Sometimes stories do take on a life of their own and you can only hang on for the ride. I myself get hijacked all the time. It is irritating but you have to follow where the characters take you.

i still cant get over the depravity of them.  u truly have a sick mind....though i love that about u haha anyways thanks for the shout out see u next time.

Wow!!! Anton is a real piece of work. It's like business as usual to kill someone with his bare hands...and then chop them up with an electric saw. Which I might add, he had with him on a trip to Disney World...just in case he needed to dispose of a body. It makes me wonder just how many people he kills on a regular basis. Thanks for another wonderful and disturbing chapter. I can't wait for the next.