Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I am just a little confused. He said he placed a ring on her right hand. An engagement ring goes on the left hand.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love this chapter
Date: 14 Apr 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the assignment grabbing. Lol
Date: 14 Apr 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad we got Heidi's story. I was having a hard time believing she would cheat on Alec. But now Bella is keeping a secret from Edward. I am worried about that now. If Edward ever finds outhe that Bella knew and did not tell him, will he be upset with her.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, that was a hot make out scene. Glad his parents approve.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella's dress sounds beautiful. I am glad that his family was so welcoming.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
So glad that her family is behind her and they are giving their support.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loving this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad Edward is being honest. He is going into this with no secrets.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like this Jessica too. She pulls no punches. DidDid Heidi really cheat on Alec? Could the baby not be his?
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Perfect date!!!!!!!! Edward is trying to be good and take it slow but I know he wants to grab Bella and kiss her and make love to her.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad that Edward and the King's talk went well. Glad Bella was not mad at Edward for just showing up.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter. In the other chapter when they were at Rose's bar, Edward's dad called, did I miss their conversation?
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMGosh! She turned him down. Why? Love the part with her daddy.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Lol. Love Rosalie. Can't wait to see what the King wants.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is working to get her back but what will his father say about that
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow have told him No. I'm impressed.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is so in trouble.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Why did they break up 3 years ago? Glad Emmett said what he did.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this story the more I read.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
What in the world happenedto them. I am assuming that Edward's parents, well no his father did not approve of Bella for Edward so Edward gave her up. Can't wait to find out if I am correct.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
The relationship between Edward and his father do not surprise me. Yes, I have more questions about Bella now. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel sorry for Edward and his family and their lose. What is the deal with Isabella?
Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
cute little story i think there is enough for a sequel though ;)
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
we need a epi on this one in the future!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella could have had a thing with James. She chose not to, because she is a woman. Like it or not men or more lax on the after we break up part. The usually dive in to new waters.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well.. I guess the king and queen did not break them up it was stupido..ward
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
so she shoved him away. I though his parents did it. HMm
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good girl. I hate it when the writer makes Bella into a hopless target for Edward. She can not refuse him, because he is so this or that. She is not worthy etc etc.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am with you I just don't see why he is doing this when King Carlisle broke it up the last time. I bet Bella wants nothing to do with the Rents.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
call Kate and leave her alone. I thought his father said to turn her out. she was not fit for the crown. Well old Alice wants to make sure that she does not anger them, to hell with Bella's feelings.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would never want to be part of a royal family. It is worse than being in the government. Your life is not your own.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
same old Alice.. not my favorite character.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
if he hurt her and I am thinking he did, she just brushed him off after listening to his story.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
aww that was nice of rose and Em.
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
loved this story
Date: 10 Feb 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love it so far and can't wait for you to finish it :)
Date: 04 Feb 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved the chapter!(:
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Date: 27 Jan 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
Did I miss Alice getting pregnant? I loved the chapter.
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No, it wasn't mentioned in the previous chapters.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
thank you for the upadate...little Jax seems to be doing fine
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. =)
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
Woo Hoo. Love bossy Bella. Renee is really a pushy thing huh?
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Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Nice update
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Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
:)
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Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it
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Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved the chapter(:
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Thanks. =)
Date: 16 Jan 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
They both seem to be settling into their new roles. Heidi is so strong to keep this secret.
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Date: 16 Jan 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love it
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Date: 16 Jan 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
good chapter! can't wait for more :)
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Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more :)
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Thank you. =)
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Don't blame her for being mad at him over the comment.
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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
loving this
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Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
thank you for the update.....Will Bella get the time off?
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We'll see. Thanks
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter
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Date: 08 Dec 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
just finish ch 22 12-8-13
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Thank you for reading. =)
Date: 27 Sep 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
Heidi was very brave to keep this a secret. I hope one day she gets her happy ending. Alec would want her happy.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
oooh her not telling E is going to come back to bite her I[m afraid
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow...what a twist!!!!
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
Finally Edward's parents will let him be happy and have Bella.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
The Queen says to Bella, "Isabella, I know we - the King and I - weren't very receiving of your past relationship with my son, but I want to assure you it had nothing to do with you."
So what did it have to do with???Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
hmmm I want King C to actually say the words and explain their bitchiness from before.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Woo hoo for party.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sounds like Alice isnt all that happy about E and B together
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
yey they finally talked.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it, but Bella can really be way out there in her thinking....Her life will be under a microscope so if she can not handle the pressure she needs to let him go...
Date: 13 Aug 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more :)
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Thank you
Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
great story! I can't wait for your next update
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Thanks!
Date: 08 Aug 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the chapter. They are so cute.
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Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really liked this chapter.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Jul 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Amazing! cant wait for more ;)
Date: 11 Jul 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!, can not wait for the ball...I hope there is no problem for them, they need a Happy day..
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
I don't like this Alice, Bella mught understand her, but I find her selfish and vain. Sorry...
On the other hand, I just adore this Edward, it's the little things he does, though at first I wasn't completely on his Team, he proved me he could win my support.
Maybe time will make me see Alice in a different light... maybe not.
Thanks for the update! Just a quick question: How old are Edward and Bella? I think you mentioned before, but I can't seem to remember. Thanks.
~Mina
Date: 30 Jun 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love it! I'm so glad they are finally getting it together.
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Thanks. ;)
Date: 28 Jun 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
i love - want more, much more - please???
Author's Response:
Soon, don't worry. :) Thanks!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it!..can not wait for the ball
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Thank you.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm totally picturing her swirling around a library on a rolling ladder and singing, a la Beauty and the Beast.
Author's Response:
Now that you mentioned it, I could see her doing that as well. =D
Date: 27 May 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
I know all women are different but I don't think anyone should turn away love because of fear. I think in our day and age, too many people turn down long term happiness for instant gratification or instant happiness, which is short lived and ultimately only makes you unhappy.
Date: 21 May 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is being crazy. Would she rather Edward hid the fact that he was with Kate? No, it would have bit him in the arse later. He did the honorable thing and told her the truth. She needs to be an adult and accept it. They were not together. He did not cheat. They love each other, even though she is a chicken shit. She needs to get over her fears and love the man or she will never be trully happy.
Date: 18 May 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I sat down this morning to read this story and two hours later I have read all 17 chapters, only to be left wanting more!
What a great story, I love what you are writing. Keep up the good work!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 18 May 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jess is hilarious. Glad she is trying to get B to see reason.
Date: 18 May 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Whew. Glad he isnt going to go with Heidi. hmmm she should have heard him out about Kate though. Although he worded it like he was cheating on her when they were together.
Date: 18 May 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jess seems like a good friend in this one. Poor E having B hide from him
Date: 18 May 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
awww sweet little date.
Date: 18 May 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm still want to see the original convo with Daddypoo. Sounds like he had alot more to say back then.
Date: 18 May 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm So did Carlisle give E the ultimatum before or after he talked to B? hmmmm James is a real creepo
Date: 18 May 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
ooooh even more info. You are keeping me at the edge of my keyboard!!!!! Alice is a bit annoying. And a story where I actually like Jess,
Date: 18 May 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
E is pining away..... Still want to know what crawled up King C's arse. Rose is a blast.
Date: 18 May 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
hmmmm you have me wanting to know the exact promise and break up scheme now. Naughty Alice....set up or no??? hmm And what is Carlisle's problem with her? She may not be royalty but she's from a rich, sorta prominent family isnt she???
Date: 18 May 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
E is getting persistent huh? Wonder if Daddy C knows yet? ugh Creepy James.
Date: 18 May 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jake is funny. Despite what Esme said, sure sounds like Carlisle pretty much forced him to dump her.
Date: 18 May 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Riley stuck with Victoria. Glad E rescued Heidi from the vultures.
Date: 17 May 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm Sounds like her family isnt too supportive either.
Date: 17 May 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
oooh cant wait to hear more of the history of these two. Esme may not have had an issue with B but I bet Daddy C did.