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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.  I am just a little confused.  He said he placed a ring on her right hand. An engagement ring goes on the left hand. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love this chapter 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love the assignment grabbing.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

Glad we got Heidi's story. I was having a hard time believing she would cheat on Alec. But now Bella is keeping a secret from Edward.  I am worried about that now. If Edward ever finds outhe that Bella knew and did not tell him, will he be upset with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, that was a hot make out scene. Glad his parents approve.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 20

Bella's dress sounds beautiful.  I am glad that his family was so welcoming. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

So glad that her family is behind her and they are giving their support. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

 Loving this story.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am glad Edward is being honest. He is going into this with no secrets. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

I like this Jessica too. She pulls no punches. DidDid Heidi really cheat on Alec? Could the baby not be his? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Perfect date!!!!!!!! Edward is trying to be good and take it slow but I know he wants to grab Bella and kiss her and make love to her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am glad that Edward and the King's talk went well. Glad Bella was not mad at Edward for just showing up. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved this chapter.  In the other chapter when they were at Rose's bar, Edward's dad called, did I miss their conversation?  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMGosh! She turned him down.  Why?  Love the part with her daddy.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

Lol. Love Rosalie.  Can't wait to see what the King wants. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Edward is working to get her back but what will his father say about that

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow have told him No. I'm impressed.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is so in trouble. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Why did they break up 3 years ago? Glad Emmett said what he did.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am loving this story the more I read. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

What in the world happenedto them. I am assuming that Edward's parents,  well no his father did not approve of Bella for Edward  so Edward gave her up. Can't wait to find out if I am correct.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

The relationship between Edward and his father do not surprise me.  Yes, I have more questions about Bella now. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

I feel sorry for Edward and his family and their lose. What is the deal with Isabella?  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 25

cute little story i think there is enough for a sequel though ;) 

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 25

we need a epi on this one in the future!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

good story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella could have had a thing with James. She chose not to, because she is a woman. Like it or not men or more lax on the after we break up part.  The usually dive in to new waters.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well.. I guess the king and queen did not break them up it was stupido..ward

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 11

so she shoved him away. I though his parents did it. HMm

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good girl. I hate it when the writer makes Bella into a hopless target for Edward. She can not refuse him, because he is so this or that.  She is not worthy etc etc.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

I am with you I just don't see why he is doing this when King Carlisle broke it up the last time. I bet Bella wants nothing to do with the Rents.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

call Kate and leave her alone. I thought his father said to turn her out. she was not fit for the crown. Well old Alice wants to make sure that she does not anger them, to hell with Bella's feelings.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

I would never want to be part of a royal family. It is worse than being in the government. Your life is not your own.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

same old Alice.. not my favorite character.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

if he hurt her and I am thinking he did, she just brushed him off after listening to his story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

aww that was nice of rose and Em.

 

TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

loved this story

Reviewer: pinkdiamondsparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

I love it so far and can't wait for you to finish it :)

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 24

I loved the chapter!(:



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

Did I miss Alice getting pregnant? I loved the chapter.



Author's Response:

No, it wasn't mentioned in the previous chapters.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 24

thank you for the upadate...little Jax seems to be doing fine



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Thank you for reading and reviewing. =)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

Woo Hoo.  Love bossy Bella.  Renee is really a pushy thing huh?



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Thanks! =)

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

Nice update



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Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)



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Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it



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Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved the chapter(:



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Thanks. =)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

They both seem to be settling into their new roles. Heidi is so strong to keep this secret.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love it



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Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

good chapter! can't wait for more :)



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Thanks. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more :)



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Thank you. =)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

Don't blame her for being mad at him over the comment.



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=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

loving this



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Thanks

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

thank you for the update.....Will Bella get the time off?



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We'll see. Thanks

Reviewer: chris1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter



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Thanks

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

just finish ch 22 12-8-13



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Thank you for reading. =)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

Heidi was very brave to keep this a secret. I hope one day she gets her happy ending. Alec would want her happy.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

oooh her not telling E is going to come back to bite her I[m afraid

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow...what a twist!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

Finally Edward's parents will let him be happy and have Bella.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2013 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

The Queen says to Bella, "Isabella, I know we - the King and I - weren't very receiving of your past relationship with my son, but I want to assure you it had nothing to do with you."

So what did it have to do with???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

hmmm  I want King C to actually say the words and explain their bitchiness from before.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

Woo hoo for party. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Sounds like Alice isnt all that happy about E and B together

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

yey  they finally talked.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love it, but Bella can really be way out there in her thinking....Her life will be under a microscope so if she can not handle the pressure she needs to let him go...

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more :)



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Thank you

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

great story! I can't wait for your next update



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved the chapter. They are so cute.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

I really liked this chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: robstenize Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Amazing! cant wait for more ;)

Reviewer: silviafarro Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

i love it...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!, can not wait for the ball...I hope there is no problem for them, they need a Happy day..

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 19

I don't like this Alice, Bella mught understand her, but I find her selfish and vain. Sorry...

On the other hand, I just adore this Edward, it's the little things he does, though at first I wasn't completely on his Team, he proved me he could win my support.

Maybe time will make me see Alice in a different light... maybe not.

Thanks for the update! Just a quick question: How old are Edward and Bella? I think you mentioned before, but I can't seem to remember. Thanks.

~Mina

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love it! I'm so glad they are finally getting it together.



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Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

i love - want more, much more - please???



Author's Response:

Soon, don't worry. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!..can not wait for the ball

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Thank you.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm totally picturing her swirling around a library on a rolling ladder and singing, a la Beauty and the Beast.



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Now that you mentioned it, I could see her doing that as well. =D 

Reviewer: fleurdelysff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

I know all women are different but I don't think anyone should turn away love because of fear.  I think in our day and age, too many people turn down long term happiness for instant gratification or instant happiness, which is short lived and ultimately only makes you unhappy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Bella is being crazy. Would she rather Edward hid the fact that he was with Kate? No, it would have bit him in the arse later. He did the honorable thing and told her the truth. She needs to be an adult and accept it. They were not together. He did not cheat. They love each other, even though she is a chicken shit. She needs to get over her fears and love the man or she will never be trully happy.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

I sat down this morning to read this story and two hours later I have read all 17 chapters, only to be left wanting more!

What a great story, I love what you are writing. Keep up the good work!

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

Jess is hilarious.  Glad she is trying to get B to see reason.

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Date: 18 May 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 16

Whew.  Glad he isnt going to go with Heidi.   hmmm she should have heard him out about Kate though.  Although he worded it like he was cheating on her when they were together.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 15

Jess seems like a good friend in this one.   Poor E having B hide from him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

awww sweet little date.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

hmmm still want to see the original convo with Daddypoo.  Sounds like he had alot more to say back then.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

hmmm So did Carlisle give E the ultimatum before or after he talked to B? hmmmm  James is a real creepo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

ooooh even more info. You are keeping me at the edge of my keyboard!!!!!   Alice is a bit annoying.   And a story where I actually like Jess,

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

E is pining away..... Still want to know what crawled up King C's arse.   Rose is a blast.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

hmmmm  you have me wanting to know the exact promise and break up scheme now.    Naughty Alice....set up or no???  hmm   And what is Carlisle's problem with her?   She may not be royalty but she's from a rich, sorta prominent family isnt she???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

E is getting persistent huh?  Wonder if Daddy C knows yet?    ugh Creepy James.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

Jake is funny.   Despite what Esme said, sure sounds like Carlisle pretty much forced him to dump her. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Riley stuck with Victoria.  Glad E rescued Heidi from the vultures.  

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Date: 17 May 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm Sounds like her family isnt too supportive either. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

oooh cant wait to hear more of the history of these two.   Esme may not have had an issue with B but I bet Daddy C did.

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