Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it. Is it complete? It sounds like it. Thank you
Date: 06 Aug 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aïe!
Google Translate. French. Montréal, québec
Date: 01 Jul 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love the story, can;t wait 4 more. Great story.
Date: 30 Jun 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
really enjoyed this story they've come along way im hoping that you will finish it someday
Date: 24 Apr 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
AWWW she told him she loves him....
Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward why are you talking in public???????
Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Km so glad they're getting to know each other!
Date: 23 Apr 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope she gives him a chance! Gotta love Ali!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awwww how sweet he is when he is worried.
Date: 23 Apr 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Don't hurt him :( is it bad that I feel for Edward?
Date: 23 Apr 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm completely hooked!
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
What are their ages? Is he a lot older than Bella?
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is he autistic at anything? Or is he just use to getting what he wants?
Date: 11 Apr 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
Welcome back! I had to reread the entire story. The powerful Aro is not to smart.
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! More please!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
controlward I like
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
loving this story now
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
your Edward became very stupid to tell this in public place, since he was being so careful, then as to your Bella is anyone so stupid to open a door b4 seeing who is on the other side?????
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love reading strong Edward stories and I thought this was one, not sure now?
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
funny how hot was that. please continue i can't wait to read the finish story
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
They are adorable. You are good
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like that!!!Sooooooooo HOT
Date: 06 Apr 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
i hope she'll make it
Date: 06 Apr 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
i hope bella will be fine and edward get revenge
Date: 06 Apr 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh shit edward got himself in trouble now
Date: 05 Apr 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
I guess that will teach them to go ahead and take off the panties. I never understood keeping them at the ankles. Take them off and be free.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope they kill James
Date: 04 Apr 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
interesting start, and I always love strong Edwards, and it looks like you are writing one for sure
Date: 04 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks for the update
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
yummy chapter.
WELCOME BACK!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
welcome back!!!!!!!!! yeah for another great chapter.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMGosh!!!! How funny. Love me some Emmett!!!!!! Glad that they found Aro. Now maybe Bella and Edward can move on with their life. I like they new kinky side.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
looking forward to more
Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
:) I hope you are able to continue this
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ooh, is she faking?? She's a smart one. That's if she's faking of course.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I like how crafty and aware Bella is. Although I do sense that by the time she can actually get away from Edward, she won't want to.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
omg!hope their ok.fab chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow go bella hope they don't catch up with her first.fab chapter
Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
poor bella.hope she can hold on till edward gets there.fab chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
omg!poor bella hope edward saves her in time.fab chapter
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
fab chapter
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
so glad bellas ok,fab chapter.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
fab chapter.hope bella doesn't do anything silly.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmm i think shes warming to him just alittle bit,fab chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
Another great story, i cant wait to read more... Hope to see some soon
Date: 14 Jan 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really want to read this and I noticed that you haven't updated since August ... Are you going to complete this story or would it be better for me to skip it?
Author's Response:
I plan on continuing, I just don't know when. I've come to a point where it's hard to write and I'm trying to get through this. I've become a little depressed w/ my writing lately and don't feel it would be up to par if I tried to force it out right now. The words just won't come right now. I'm not going to abandon. I'm just trying to get my mojo back.
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
i loved reading this story, thanks abk
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
great story, just started reading it. I'm up to chapter 18 love it!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
Why would you be nervous about this chapter. GREAT JOB!!!!! I am so glad that Edward and his men had a plan and got James.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter! I love the way they tricked James. And the proposal was just flat out sweet.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
This was by far one of the best chapters. I am so glad they caught James. I hope he rot in hell! WTG Eddie, catch a crock. Great engagement setup too!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
James never considered he wouldn't have the upper hand here, that was his downfall, not that we mind much. He walked straight into a trap. Finally he is going where he belongs and will stay there. Things are just settling as they should, and as Bella said, getting James has turned into icing on the cake, good but not the most important thing.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved this chapter I loved most that Edward beat the shit out of him that was wonderful. I also love the conection that I felt for them once the treat of James was gone. Thanks cant wait for more.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad Edward got to punch James in the face a few times!! hahahaha that was priceless.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad they got James...Glad Edward got to get him.
I bet they have geogeous wedding even if it is at the house.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
I guess James wasn't really thinking or paying much attention if he confused little 5 foot 4 Bella with 6 foot 2 Edward! It was terrific! I'm so glad he is out of their lives... will they be involved with the trial? Will B&E's start cause a problem? I can't wait to see the rest of the story play out.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh no James found her! Hurry home Edward!!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow is right!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
thanks for the update!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Woo Hoo James is caught without any good guy bloodshed!!!. Yummy celebrating.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
So glad they got James. Now how are they going to catch Aro?
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank goodness!!!! Wonderful Chapter
Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ok, is James' part the same night that we just read with Bella and Edward??? If so, where was Edward going? What did Evan interupt them for? You always leave me wanting more and more. Great job.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh gah...you can't leave me THERE!! I wish this could be the story of my life :) (minus the psycho stalker...ha) but you planned his engagement perfectly! The dress is beautiful and that ring is GORGEOUS! I'll just be happy if I can find me a good man someday soon. But all the rest would certainly be icing on top of a serioiusly perfect cake!! I hope this review entices you to update ASAP!! I cant wait for what you have in store for us next!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow, that an impressive cliff hanger. I hope you don't have writers block now and can get another great chapter to us. Loved your sotry, plot, characters. Really a very unique story. Great job.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
thanks for the update! can't wait to see what james is going to do