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Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it. Is it complete? It sounds like it. Thank you

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

lol

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 23

;-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

oups!

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

:o)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

:o)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

:o)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

:-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

:-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

;-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

;-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

horror...... lol

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

wow

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

;-)

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aïe!

 

Google Translate. French.  Montréal, québec

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow!

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love the story, can;t wait 4 more. Great story.

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

really enjoyed this story they've come along way im hoping that you will finish it someday

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it :)

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

Lmao!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

So sweet!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

Awwwwwww =)

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Phew!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

AWWW she told him she loves him....

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Go Bella!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

:('

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Edward why are you talking in public???????

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Km so glad they're getting to know each other!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hope she gives him a chance! Gotta love Ali!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awwww how sweet he is when he is worried.

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Don't hurt him :( is it bad that I feel for Edward?

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm completely hooked!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

What are their ages? Is he a lot older than Bella?

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh Edward! :/

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

Is he autistic at anything? Or is he just use to getting what he wants?

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Lol oh wow! 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

Welcome back!  I had to reread the entire story. The powerful Aro is not to smart.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! More please!

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

controlward I like

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

loving this story now

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

your Edward became very stupid to tell this in public place, since he was being so careful, then as to your Bella is anyone so stupid to open a door b4 seeing who is on the other side?????

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love reading strong Edward stories and I thought this was one, not sure now?

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

funny how hot was that. please continue i can't wait to read the finish story

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

They are adorable. You are good

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

I like that!!!Sooooooooo HOT

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

i hope she'll make it

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

i hope bella will be fine and edward get revenge

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 11

oh shit edward got himself in trouble now

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

I guess that will teach  them to go ahead and take off the panties. I never understood keeping them at the ankles. Take them off and be free.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope they kill James

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

interesting start, and I always love strong Edwards, and it looks like you are writing one for sure

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

yummy chapter.

 

WELCOME BACK!!!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

welcome back!!!!!!!!! yeah for another great chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

OMGosh!!!! How funny. Love me some Emmett!!!!!! Glad that they found Aro. Now maybe Bella and Edward can move on with their life. I like they new kinky side. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

:) I hope you are able to continue this

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ooh, is she faking?? She's a smart one. That's if she's faking of course.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I like how crafty and aware Bella is. Although I do sense that by the time she can actually get away from Edward, she won't want to.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

omg!hope their ok.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

wow go bella hope they don't catch up with her first.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

poor bella.hope she can hold on till edward gets there.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

omg!poor bella hope edward saves her in time.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

so glad bellas ok,fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

fab chapter.hope bella doesn't do anything silly.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmm i think shes warming to him just alittle bit,fab chapter

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

Another great story, i cant wait to read more... Hope to see some soon

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really want to read this and I noticed that you haven't updated since August ... Are you going to complete this story or would it be better for me to skip it?



Author's Response:

I plan on continuing, I just don't know when.  I've come to a point where it's hard to write and I'm trying to get through this.  I've become a little depressed w/ my writing lately and don't feel it would be up to par if I tried to force it out right now.  The words just won't come right now.  I'm not going to abandon. I'm just trying to get my mojo back.

Reviewer: abk Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

i loved reading this story, thanks abk

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

great story, just started reading it. I'm up to chapter 18 love it!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

Why would you be nervous about this chapter. GREAT JOB!!!!! I am so glad that Edward and his men had a plan and got James.

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter!  I love the way they tricked James.  And the proposal was just flat out sweet.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

This was by far one of the best chapters.  I am so glad they caught James.  I hope he rot in hell!  WTG Eddie, catch a crock.  Great engagement setup too!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

James never considered he wouldn't have the upper hand here, that was his downfall, not that we mind much. He walked straight into a trap. Finally he is going where he belongs and will stay there. Things are just settling as they should, and as Bella said, getting James has turned into icing on the cake, good but not the most important thing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter I loved most that Edward beat the shit out of him that was wonderful.  I also love the conection that I felt for them once the treat of James was gone. Thanks cant wait for more.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

I am glad Edward got to punch James in the face a few times!! hahahaha that was priceless.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

I am so glad they got James...Glad Edward got to get him.

I bet they have geogeous wedding even if it is at the house.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

I guess James wasn't really thinking or paying much attention if he confused little 5 foot 4 Bella with 6 foot 2 Edward!  It was terrific!  I'm so glad he is out of their lives... will they be involved with the trial?  Will B&E's start cause a problem?  I can't wait to see the rest of the story play out.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh no James found her! Hurry home Edward!!!!

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Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wow is right!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

thanks for the update!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 23

Woo Hoo  James is caught without any good guy bloodshed!!!.  Yummy celebrating.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

So glad they got James. Now how are they going to catch Aro?

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thank goodness!!!!  Wonderful Chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ok, is James' part the same night that we just read with Bella and Edward??? If so, where was Edward going? What did Evan interupt them for? You always leave me wanting more and more. Great job.

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh gah...you can't leave me THERE!! I wish this could be the story of my life :) (minus the psycho stalker...ha) but you planned his engagement perfectly! The dress is beautiful and that ring is GORGEOUS! I'll just be happy if I can find me a good man someday soon. But all the rest would certainly be icing on top of a serioiusly perfect cake!! I hope this review entices you to update ASAP!! I cant wait for what you have in store for us next!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow, that an impressive cliff hanger.  I hope you don't have writers block now and can get another great chapter to us.  Loved your sotry, plot, characters.  Really a very unique story.  Great job.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 22

thanks for the update!  can't wait to see what james is going to do

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