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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2018 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

not as good as the first looking forward to the thrid

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Great Job!!  Off to read the next one!  Thanks for sharing.  It was quite a honeymoon.



Author's Response:

Hi ssamekraemer

I'd love a honeymoon like theirs.

Over the moon that you enjoyed the boys honeymoon.

Huge thanks for reading and reviewing every chapter. You are wonderful

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Loved the part with the idiots!  These two are great!



Author's Response:

Hi Samekraemer

The teletubbies picked on the wrong men.

Glad you enjoyed it

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

H.O.T.



Author's Response:

Hi Samekraemer

Thank you. I don't think I'll play a game of pool again without thoughts of these guys.

Take care

maryhe;;

 

 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Hi Samekraemer

Glad you loved it. Thank you for reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

I thought the discussion was brilliant!  Great job.



Author's Response:

Hi samekramer

heheheeh, I enjoyed being with the boys on that one.

Glad you liked it

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Off with a bang! 



Author's Response:

Hi samekraemer

Oh yes, they's on honeymoon, gonna be a lottta banging.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: no sleep Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

" I'd come so hard it looked like I was being tazered."

I'm sorry. i thought I reviewed this some time ago. I enjoyed the two boys honeymoon. You have a way with the sex scenes like no other. I love your descriptions -- they're both erotic and humorous. 

I've been behind with Twilight fics between RL and another fandom, i was trying out a action story when I thought of your fics. You are an exceptional writer.

Wait... " I have a short story being published ..." YOU GO GURL! I'll have to check it out later.

Sandra:)



Author's Response:

Hi Sandra

 

Wow thank you for such a wonderful review. 

I know what you mean about RL and other fandoms. RL and loss of muse has prevented me completing Hostage Chicago Takedown. However, I promise I will not leave it unfinished. I have been reading a LOT of NCIS ffn recently, along with Criminal minds and LOTR. I am writing a little NCIS one shot, between RL. 

I have also been doing a complete rewrite of Dakota Skies. I have been converting it to the 3rd person, removing duplicated scenes and adding new ones. There are a few sex scenes in that, that turn comedic, too. I have one other conversion project -Rainbow Airlines is having a rewrite to the 3rd person, more characters introduced and having a return flight added. I have 3 Original fictions in the works, a comedy near completion, a ghost story just started and another venture into history, in the planning stages.

The short story was published as part of a Dreamspinners Anthology called Don't Try This At Home. My story is called Boys, Toys and Carpet Fitters by Taylin Clavelli.

So as you can see, even though I have not been around ffn much, I have been busy. Roll on 2014.

Hope you are well and had a Merry Christmas. All the best for the new year.

Hugs

Yvonne  xx

 

 

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

I loved this story. I can't wait to start the 3rd part.



Author's Response:

Hi sonogal

Glad you enjoyed it. Huge thanks for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

x

Reviewer: no sleep Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Jasper was just too cute with the crazy accents and trying to wake Edward up. I'm so envious of their honeymoon, so far.I thought the gay God discussion was interesting. I often wondered why women had to suffer and i often thought men bodies were better made. :)

Author's Response:

Hi no sleep

Thank you for reading and reviewing the boys honeymoon.

My apologies for such a late reply. The good news is the follow up story has just been posted on TWCS.

Glad you are enjoying their Hawaiian sun frolics - I hope to hear from you again.

Take care

maryhell

x

 

 

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Oh my luau, it's back to RL, honeymoon's officially...over! Boo whoo  ;P

and, Marcus is back on the scene...Ew! Thanks for the news flash, Charlie!

So, with this development, is there more to this story?

 

Paradise, with Jasper and Edward, was purely, BLISS!

Thanks!

Rita



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Bless you sweetheart. Your reviews have been absolutely wonderful - thank you.

Yes, the boys paradise is over with a bump. 

There is one more adventure to experience with them. I am in the planning stage. It will be called Hostage, Chicago Takedown. I have the first chapter written, but have more to do before I start posting.

All the very best

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Those T-shirt slogans were a hoot!

 

So happy our Boyz gave those homophobes their cum-uppance! The Tele-Tubby names were spot-on, too!

 

Sad...we're cumming to an end of the Boyz honeymoon :(



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Glad you liked the T-Shirt slogans. I got the idea from where I was on holiday. There was a shop full of T's along those lines.

The homophobes certainly picked on the wrong guys. I think they went away with a new perspective on things.

Yes the honeymoon is coming to an end, but it won't be the end of the boys.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Write on cue...Edward 'scratched' Jasper's itch...and, ate balled his but't', good!

 

Wish I could see The Packs reaction to the posed PC camera shot!



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

HHEHEHE - at times I wish I had a camera that could see around corners. I wouldn't put it past Alice, on future ventures, to beat them to a destination and install extra spy equipment.

Thank you for reading and revieiwing.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Edward, thinking about Jasper...brought a tear to my eye and caused my heart to clench.



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Jasper is everything to Edward. Without him, he would not survive. Their love for each other is boundless.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Yeah?  and, they even call it a...Rosary. I think I'll have to say some...Hale Mary's after that one  ;P



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

HAHAHAHAHHA - I had a lot of fun writing that chapter. Over the moon you enjoyed it too.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Mahalo, for the first go 'round

 

That one line was priceless, what Edward said after he kept Jasper from slipping in the shower...

Careful there, love, you can't fuck if you're broken ;}

 

Jasper's view of his husband, rinsing off in the outside shower...breathtakingly beautiful.



Author's Response:

Hi Rita

Oh my life. Wow you read fast, and I am sooooo grateful.

Glad you enjoyed the boys. This story is all fluff and romance. I think they deserved it, after their last adventure.

Take care

maryhell

 

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

I loved the picture and mirror idea - and the sexathon, obviously! They certainly were creative and the session after the 'ring of fire' was steaming!

But what a place to end! Damn! Now I can't wait to get to the next installment.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

HEHEHEHHEEHEHH - sorry about that. 2 chapters of the next installment have been written. Just got to work out the finer details of the story. Let's just say Jasper goes into protective mode.

Over the moon that you have enjoyed their story. 

Take care 

Yvonne

 

 

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Loved this chapter! The way they dealt with the offensive Teletubbies was hilarious and I can't wait to see what everyone thinks of the t-shirts.

And of course the scene in the jacuzzi was HOT! I'd been looking forward to reading that part; it was obvious they were going to have some fun in it.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Oh yeah, they are some horney boys. Who can resist fun in a jacuzzi.

Glad you liked the way they dealt with the Teletubbies, it will teach the baddies not to have pre-conceived ideas about people. Let's face it, they were plain nasty.

More fun to come.

Take care

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Ooh, another hot one! I loved how they did it on the pool table, yummy! They're not going to want to go back to reality and work.

The messages from everybody were hysterical, especially the one that appeared to be from Esme on first reading, hahah.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

After all the angst of Hostage, I thought a good dose of Romance should be in order. No they really aren't going to want to go back to reality, especially when they find out what's waiting. OOps

Glad you liked the messages.

You really have been a busy bunny today - excellent. Thank you for reviewing them all.

Take care

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Aww the start of this chapter was so sweet and now they have another great place to play in - I can't wait to see what they're going to get up to in that jacuzzi!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

OHHHHHH they will get up to plenty in the jacuzzi. heheheheheh

enjoy

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Another great chapter, those boys are so hot together and I will never learn - I'm reading at work again! Tut!

Their discussion was hilarious, especially when they started talking about female parts. I'm all for laughing at myself too :)



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Naughty naughty. Reading at work. If I had two hot guys before me, I probably would too.

Glad you are enjoying the fluff and their observations.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Yvonne

Reviewer: Hanks Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

So glad to still have more of their story to read! I forgot to comment at the end of Hostage how hilarious Tanya was when she discovered they were married. I'm sure it's going to take her some time to live down!

So envious of their honeymoon destination, it sounds perfect! The wrestling for which one got to do the carrying over the threshold was funny and that image of Edward under the showere...yummy! 



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah

Oh Definitely. Tanya was a loose end that needed dealing with. Alice will make sure she is not forgotten.

Glad you like their honeymoon destination. I couldn't make up my mind between the two, so decided to have both.

I see many more lemons in their future.

This story is all Romance.

Enjoy

Yvonne

 

Reviewer: mod Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

I have really enjoyed theses stories.  Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Hi mod

Many many apologies for not replying sooner to your review. I got rather lost in my other projects. 

Over the moon that you have enjoyed the boys - they have a place close to my heart.

Yes there will be a sequel. I have already started it, and I never leave a story unfinished. I just need to finish my other two projects, so that I can give it my full attention.

Thankyou for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Loved their frolics on their honeymoon, so hot. Marcus is back on the scene...oh shit. I'll bet that put a damper on their welcome home party. I have loved this sequel. Thks for writing & sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

Heyyy Debbie

Sorry for taking so long to respond to your review. I have been away on holiday.

Thank you for loving the boys. Yup Marcus is back and flexing his mafia power. Quite right about it putting a dampener on their welcome home party. The sequel will be drama and action based, with a good dose of loving. Want to get a few chapters under the belt before posting, so we are looking at a christmas P day.

Speak soon luv

Yvonne xx

 

 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Yay so glad Edward managed to kick the ass of those guys, that was sooo much fun - esp the part when jasper said no man goes behind his man only him lol so funny.

Author's Response:

HEYYYY Misty

This was my personal fav of all the chapters. Love writing action scenes, Love Jasper's sense of humor. I can't for the life of me write anything toally serious.

Take care bb

Yvonne xx

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Oh my God, Edwards striptease.....happy days......lol.  I remember watching Hawaii Five-0 and that theme tune, as kids we all used to run around da daa-ing it, ah those were the days, hahaha!!  Another t-shirt for Alice, so appropriate for her, I can't imagine why she didn't appreciate the dick one, bwahahaha!!

I've loved their honeymoon, it was good to be back with the boys again, I've missed them so much.  I can't wait for the next part in the saga, just please promise me that you'll keep all of them safe, you know me and my need for a happy ever after, lol.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Sorry for taking so long to respond to your review. I have been away on holiday.

Oh yes, Ed's striptease is a fav of mine - happy days indeed. 

I love me a happy ever after too, though I can't guarantee a safe journey. You know me - I like to throw in some drama and a few hair raising moments.

I would like to get a few chapters done and dusted before I start posting, so we are looking at a christmas P date.

Thank you for loving the boys and sticking with them.

Take care

 

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Lol, those t-shirt slogans are hilarious and I love the special one for Alice on the webcam, hahahaha!!  I bet the guys provided quite the entertainment on the beach with their song and dance routine, I think it's a wise move not to tell anyone about it, lol

Those Teletubbies on the hike were complete arseholes, I'm glad that Edward and Jasper taught them a lesson, pity they couldn't leave them stuck up a tree or something.

I never thought about the jacuzzi thing, but yeah, imagine lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Oh my, a game of pool has never looked so good, phew.

I loved the e-mails, trust Emmett, lol, and what about Alice the dirty perv, bwahahahaha, I have a vision of her nose pressed up against the screen trying to look down at the floor to see Edward and Jasper, hahahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

HAHAHAHA - I totally agree with your sentiments re pool. I had exactly the same vision of Alice while writing. I'd have been doing the same.

I think the boys and Emmett could have a prank war - it would be interesting to see who won.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Lol, between their fear of sharks and Jasper's fear of being boiled alive, they're not having much luck with water are they.  I'm sure he'll be fine with Edward there to protect him and keep him sober.

I'm glad that Edward doesn't lock everything away in his head that happened at the bank.  He needs to talk about it to process it and I think it's something that will come up for him for years to come, gradually getting less and less at time goes by.  They're so lucky to have each other.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

They are city boys who feel safe on land - can't say I blame them. On my hols I saw some Orca's and they are damned huge.

Edward does have a tendency to lock things away, but Jasper knows him so well, he is the only one sometimes who can reach him. Ed therefore doesn't hid anything from him. Jasper is Ed's rock. I agree, it will affect him for years to come. He was so used to criminals only seeing the uniform, then the bank incident made it personal and it got to him more than he ever imagined. Jasper will help him become stronger from the experience.

Take care

maryhell x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Aaaannndd just as I thought Edward was missing the biggest point of his argument he brought it up, the Immaculate Conception.  God was sooooo gay.  Jesus is the son of God but God couldn't bring himself to, as Edward might say, put his snake in the grass to create his son he had to do some freaky mind control IVF with a virgin no less.  Now if you were in to women why would you do that, you'd want to have your fun, get your rocks off and strut around pointing and saying 'I did that', lol, quite literally.  Lol, I love Edward's mind, I bet he has so much fun roaming around in there.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Love the IVF thought. laughted my socks off at that. I just might have me some more fun roaming around in Edwards mind in the next story too. Who knows what we will find in there?

Loved your review - thank you.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

The boys are back and on honeymoon, woohoo!!

I love, after everything that happened, how happy and carefree they are.  I think I'm going to enjoy their honeymoon just as much as them, if not more, lol.

I do love Mrs Cope, I'm sure it was completely necessary to throw water over Tanya, hahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi jane

Yes the boys r back. It is good to see them carefree and happy. Of course it was completely necessary to throw water on Tanya, the other option was to get one of the guys to give her mouth to  mouth. Mrs Cope didn't want them catching anything. lol.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Indigold10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Loved this story!!!!! Edsper are so very sexy and you are soo good at writing them :) Can't wait for the next story with them!



Author's Response:

Hi Indigold10

Sorry for taking so long to respond to your review, I have been away on holiday.

Over the moon that you loved the boys - I love them too. I will get right on and write their next story, but I want to be a goo few chapters in before I post, so we are looking at around christmas before I post.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: lexifisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

i am so looking forward to the next installment. thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story. definitely will check you out on amazon!

Author's Response:

Hi lexifisher

Over the moon that you enjoyed their honeymoon. Sorry I took so long to respond, I have been away on holiday.

I want to get a few chapters in to the next in the series, before I start posting, so it will probably be closer to christmas before I post the first chapter.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: lexifisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

go boys! i like the statement they made. the end love scene....so very nice!!

Author's Response:

Hi lexifisher

This was my personal favorite of all the chapters. I love writing a bit of action. AAANNND I have to admit, the imagery in my head during the last scene was ..... well I think you can guess. lol.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: lexifisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

the family is so funny....i love the boys putting on a show for the camera ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Lexifisher

I think underneath it all, the boys are exhibitionists. Now that everything is in the open with them and their family they can be as expressive as they please. However, they are also the masters at playing pranks.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: lexifisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

sweet! sweet! loved it. thank your for this.

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

great ending with a good cliffie..

plz if you have time read and review my stories in here or in FFiction(there are 4 stories there)..I'm ArekWhitlock there;) so I know what if think about them;)

 



Author's Response:

Hi Rashell

Sorry to take so long to answer your review - I have been away on holiday.

Glad you enjoyed the story.

Yes I will now read your ffn stories and send you a review - am looking forward to it.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

it was a great chapt..

Bravo!!!

Those rats needed a lesson..

 



Author's Response:

Hi Rashell

I love it when the boys get to kick butt. Serves those Assh***s right - they deserved all they got. This was my favorite chapter.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Great messages from the Pack and Ed's Parents;)

The love scene was super hot;)



Author's Response:

Hi Rashell

MMM yes, the boys sure had fun. Glad you enjoyed the imagery.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

This chapt was so romantic:)



Author's Response:

Hi Rashell

Thank you for reviewing. Nothing like a bit of true romance to warm the cockles of your heart.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

OMG!!

Ed?? I think your brain is thinking too much!

It's all Eve fault if we suffer!

I'm italian and catholic (of course) but I loved to read about Ed's thoughts about God;)

God loves us all!!:)))))))))))))))))))



Author's Response:

Hi Rashell

I agree with you. God loves us all. It is fun to speculate though, even if it is total BS. lol.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: 35nanou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Voilà une fin de lune de miel des plus intense de part la blessure de Jasper qui limite les activités physiques mais également car ils ne peuvent rester éloigné l'un de l'autre très longtemps et ont besoin de se le montrer constamment....et puis n'est ce pas le but d'une lune de miel!
Malheureusement à leur retour la réalité les rattrape bien vite et les voilà reparti à la poursuite des malfrats et en plus sous condition de Marcus qui est loin de faire l'unanimité mais ont-ils vraiment le choix!
Je suis vraiment impatiente de tous les retrouver dans une nouvelle aventure trépidante et de pouvoir lire ta fiction originale le 8 octobre!
A bientôt.

Author's Response:

Salut Anne
Désolé de prendre si longtemps pour répondre - j'ai été loin en vacances.
Absolument correct les garçons ne peuvent pas juste garder leurs mains l'un de l'autre, il est qu'une lune de miel est tout de.Mon nom d'auteur pour mon original fic est Taylin Clavelli, l'anthologie est 'Vous ne devriez pas le faire à la maison'. Il a été sorti une semaine maintenant et je n'ai pas d'indication que les révisions sont (si chacun).Content vous attendez l'acompte suivant impatiemment dans la série - je suis près du chapitre 1 finissant, mais veux être quelques chapitres dans avant que je le poste, donc il ira sans doute vivant autour de Noël.

Take care

Yvonne xx  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

oooh... There's gonna be more?!?!  WOOOOOOOOOHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 



Author's Response:

Hi there

Sorry my response has taken so long - I have been away on holiday.

Oh yes, there will be more. I have started chapter 1 of the next in the series.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: dazzlingrockstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

It sounds so beautiful and perfect! Their 'fear' of the water made me a giggle; not because they were scared of the sharks but because their jobs pose just as much danger and they don't think of it the same way. Very cute chapter!



Author's Response:

Heyyyy bb

Sooo good to hear from you, on the eve of my vacation. Glad you enjoyed the boys. Yep I guess you're right, danger is danger. They're going to find out exactly how much danger in their next adventure.

Take care 

Yvonne xx

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

The END???!!!  Awwww.... can't wait for the sequel!

 

Great story!

 

Catherine



Author's Response:

Hi Cathering

Yep the poor oys have been dragged back into reality. I have started writing Chicago Takedown, though I have a lot of plot to sort out.

Thank you for loving the boys

Take care

Yvonne

xx

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Wonderful ending, sad to see them have to leave their happy honeymoon bubble.  Very excited for the next story, this is a great series.  Congrats on being published.  



Author's Response:

Hi bbbluez

Glad you liked the ending. Lots of action to follow in the next story. 

I am sqweeeeeeeeeeing over being published - many thanks for the congrats.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Great chapter. I am said they had to return from their honeymoon but happy you will continue with another story. Congratulations on being published. It is well deserved! You are a fantastic writer.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

Glad you enjoyed the story - yes, sad it's over, but they had to go home sometime. I have started on the next story, so it's a case of watch this space. 

Many thanks on the congrats and your very kind words. I'm blushing. SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Take care

maryhell x

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Loved the conclusion of the honeymoon and the reunion with the pack.  I'm looking forward to the next story in the series.

 

Congrats on being published.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbi84

Oh yeah - The Pack is back together ready for a new adventure. 

Thanks for the congrats - I'm really excited.

Take care

Yvonne x

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Glad they stood up for themselves against those dickheads and nice bit with Edward taking care of his  man.  Jasper seems to have overcome his  issues with the jacuzzi.  I can't believe there's only one more *whining*.  



Author's Response:

Hi bbbluez

The boys take care of each other and they do it soooo well. I think all issues could be overcome if dealt with like that. lol:)

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Funny emails and reactions to them.  The boys sure are logical and right about women as wingmen!  I also really liked the game of pool.  



Author's Response:

Hi Gillian

Sorry it has taken me so long to respond - I have been away on holiday.

Glad you liked the e-mails and their logic. I don't think I'll look at a pool table the same again. lol.

Take care

Yvonne xx

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

So glad those boys taught those assholes a lesson.   Annnd... um... sooo lovin' Docward taking care of his man... and his ass.   :))

 



Author's Response:

Hi HeatherJoy

I love it when the boys teach assholes a lesson. Give me a bit of Docward any day. I think I'd feint if he ever walked into my hospital cubicle. lol.

Take care

maryhell x

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

The t-shirts were perfect for everyone.  Loved how the boys handled the bullies.  Nothing takes away the pain of a sprained ankle like some lovin' from your husband.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbie

Glad you liked the t-shirts. Those bullies definitely needed teaching a lesson, and oh yeah - there ain't nothing like a bit of man loving!!!

Take care

Yvonne x

Reviewer: Lisa_FanFicCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

I liked when they kicked those bigots asses!! XO



Author's Response:

Heyyy Lisa

Oh yeah - I'm with you there girl.  

Take care

Yvonne xxx

 

 

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

I prefer Ed as a lover not a fighter but he is hot when he's a fighter! Loved it. Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

I know what you mean about liking Ed as a lover - I do rather enjoy writing fight scenes though. All good fun either way.

Take care

maryhell  xx

 

Reviewer: 35nanou Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Hike

Oh j'ai adoré ce chapitre, chaque moment était ludique à sa manière! Le début était si drôle avec l'attribution des tee-shirts en fonction des personnalités de chacun d'entre eux et je dois avouer que celui d'Esmée et Carlisle m'a tout particulièrement plu, va savoir pourquoi....
Une petite randonnée est toujours très agréable pour visiter un endroit et ainsi voir tous les paysages et autres qui ne peuvent être vue de la route. Edward et Jasper se seraient bien passés de la rencontre inopinée avec les homophobes du coin qui se croient plus malins que les autres mais qui au final n'ont réussis qu'à se prendre la branlée de leur vie. Pas sûr malgré tout que ça leur serve de leçon, à défaut on dira que ça aura permis à Edward et Jasper d'avoir un entrainement imprévu avant le retour au travail!
Quel meilleur réconfort qu'une douche puis une séance de jacuzzi légèrement améliorée par une intense et passionnée séance de sexe pour finir cette journée sur une note positive!
Merci beaucoup pour ce superbe chapitre et à bientôt.

Author's Response:

Salut Anne
Je dois reconnaître que c'était mon chapitre préféré de l'histoire entière de HTH. Fantastique que vous l'avez apprécié aussi. Oui, rien tout à fait comme un jacuzzi après une longue aventure de jours et une bonne dose d'amour d'homme. Le tee-shirt de Carlisle de Pensée promouvrait son ego, étant donné qu'Esme porterait. Non sûr que je ferai avec eux dans l'Otage d'histoire suivant - Takedown de Chicago.


Je posterai le chapitre suivant aussitôt que je le renvoie de Nancy. 


Faire attention


Yvonne xx    

Reviewer: Foster Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Love this story and these two boys thanks



Author's Response:

Hi Foster

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you love the boys. Two chapters to go.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: Lisa_FanFicCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Umm me likes when E tops.. But damn, that's gonna leave a stain on the pool table felt!! ;) he he

 

XO



Author's Response:

Heyyy Lisa

I think Jaspers drool will have left a stain, but anything else got shot up the wood sides - his ass was hanging over the edge so that Ed could use his giraff tongue on it before he decided to go cavediving. 

Last two chapters are with Nancy. I will post them when I get them back.

Take care

yvonne xx

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

I will never look at a pool table ever again the same way.   :))

 



Author's Response:

Hi HeatherJoy

 

HAHAHAHH - I don't think I will either - thankfully.:)

Last two chapters should be up in the not too distant.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: iamonlyone Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Sheeeeesh!  That was H.O.T.

Ready for more .... :D

 



Author's Response:

Hi iamonlyone

Glad you are ready for more as more is on its way. The last two chapters are with my beta, so will hopefully post soon.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Love the prank they pulled on Alice.  Hoped she was watching!! LOL



Author's Response:

Hi shewoolf

The boys can be evil when they want to be. lol. I most certainly would have been watching and probably ensuring the owners of the house had cctv installed too. 

Last two chapters are with my beta, so will hopefully post them soon.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: 35nanou Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

J'ai adoré chaque étape de ce chapitre pour des raisons diverses comme l'humour, l'espièglerie, le débordement de luxure et d'amour....
C'est exactement ce qu'il me fallait ce soir merci beaucoup, beaucoup pour le partage et promis, au prochain chapitre, je te ferais un commentaire qui en aura le nom mais aussi la consistance.
A bientôt.

Author's Response:

Salut Anne


Content vous avez apprécié chaque partie du chapitre - il a été amusant pour écrire. Il m'a fait regretter que je n'aie pas de table de piscine. Deux derniers chapitres sont avec Nancy. Je les posterai aussitôt que possible.

Faire attention

Yvonne    xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Oh, I definately enjoyed!!! I sure wish that your stories would come with sound effects. Maybe you could get Alice to figure out a way. Great job once again. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

Glad you enjoyed - HAHAHAHAH maybe one day I will have the technical know how to produce a sound track - alternatively a narrated version of the story (including sound effects). If there was a way - Alice would have found it. lol.

Last two chapters are with my beta and will post when I have them back.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Yay pool table secs. Always wanted to try that but never been anywhere private enough :(. Great chapter, thks for updating again so quickly Debbie

Author's Response:

Heyyy Debbie

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. One day I'm sure you will get your wish with the pool table. Last two chapters are with Nancy. When I get them back I will post.

Take care

Yvonne xx

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

That ending was scalding hot!  Loved the packs messages, hysterical.  Can't blame Alice  for wanting video.



Author's Response:

Heyyyy bbbluez

MMMm makes me want to buy a pool table. I am sooo with Alice. Last two chapters are with my beta so will hopefully be up soon.

Take care

maryhell x

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pool

Great chapter!  Loved the emails from the pack, Carlisle and Esme, the reasons it's better to be gay and the lovin' was hot.  I agree with Alice, I'd want to watch too!



Author's Response:

Hi Debbi

Thank you for reading and reviewing. MMM it almost makes me want to buy a pool table. lol. I'm with you and Alice, but at least we have our imagination. 2 chapters to go, which will hopefully be up soon.

Take care

maryhell 

 

 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Loved this chapter.  Jasper being afraid of the jacuzzi was hilarious.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbi

 

Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter is complete and ready to go.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Aww this was such a sweet chapter, they are just soooo cute together. I can imagine some hot secs scenes in the jacuzzi, pool table, granite tops, all the bathrooms and not forgetting all them beds. I hope they're there for a month LOL, and they may even grace us with some more wacky theories. Thks for the update, Debbie

Author's Response:

Heyyy Debbie

Please feel free to use your imagination re where they satisfy their loins. Yes, there will be some fun with the pool table next and somewhere down the line, the jacuzzi. Other surfaces will be mentioned but only in passing. The reason being is that, as much as I love the boys, my true love lies with writing drama and action. I really do find it hard writing love and fluff. I am aching to get started on their next investigation. Therefore there are only three chapters remaining to this story. 

I just might manage to slip in another wacky theory or two. I'll have me a think.

Take care bb

Yvonne xx

 

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

They've been through so much but at least they have each  other to help get through it.  Jasper and the hot tub..hehe!



Author's Response:

Hi bbbluez

Agreed, I couldn't write a honeymoon that didn't reflect on what happened at some time. I'm glad they have each other to get through it. I want me a Jasper. The hot tub will appear again in a couple of chapters time.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

What a lovely honeymoon for the boys!!  :)



Author's Response:

Hi Gillian

Yes, the boys are enjoying themselves. The other half of this story is much more active. I believe the pool table comes in to play in the next chapter. lol.

Take care

Yvonne

xx

 

Reviewer: 35nanou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Je me suis rendu compte que je n'avais pas fait de commentaire pour le chapitre 2, désolée.
J'ai vraiment adoré, il est à la fois doux, plein d'attention mais surtout espiègle dans leurs différentes interactions et jeux et épique pour ce qui est de la théorie d'Edward qui me plait bien! :) Toujours est-il que j'ai beaucoup rit et que ça a été un bon moment de détente en les imaginant dans leurs diverses activités dans leur paradis sous le soleil!
MERCI et bientôt!

Author's Response:

Salut Anne
Sur la lune que vous avez apprécié le chapitre deux. J'avais un rire en l'écrivant. Il est magnifique que vous reconsidériez chaque chapitre, bien qu'il ne soit pas attendu. Beaucoup mille mercis pour être un lecteur si fidèle.
J'ai aimé ce chapitre parce que, comme vous disent, il a montré la détente de garçons et être humain. Nous tous avons des idées folles et petites excentricités. 
Faire attention
Yvonne xx    

Reviewer: 35nanou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Ces 15 premiers jours de lune de miel ont filé à la vitesse de la lumière e c'est ce qui arrive quand on est bien, quand les garçons peuvent enfin profiter l'un de l'autre sans être interrompu par qui que ce soit même si la mer n'a pas été leur domaine de prédilection! (Je les comprend, quand j'ai vu Jaws, ensuite j'avais les pieds enroulés dans ma couette pour dormir!)
Maintenant, ils ont quitté leur havre de paix mais ça ne va pas les empêcher d'en profiter également même si c'est de façon différente car il y a beaucoup de possibilités dans cette nouvelle maison...
Le fait d'être ensemble sans soucis apparents fait remonter bien des souvenirs désagréables pour Edward qui aurait pu les empêcher d'être mariés et heureux mais Jasper est là pour rassurer Edward et les faire revenir dans la réalité de leur lune de miel.
Très beau chapitre, merci beaucoup et à bientôt.

Author's Response:

Salut Anne
Bon recevoir des nouvelles de vous. C'était un peu de chapitre joli - le bonbon et le travail social.
Ah oui il y aura sans doute des possibilités dans la nouvelle maison. La table de piscine peut être utilisée dans le chapitre suivant.
Il n'y aura pas beaucoup de chapitres quittés à cette histoire. Comme vous pouvez sans doute répéter, je ne suis pas cela dans l'écriture de tout le duvet et des baisers. Leur sexe devient épicé en haut un peu dans le chapitre 4 et ils reçoivent autre action dans le chapitre 5. Le chapitre 6 sera le dernier avant qu'ils reviennent à la maison à un nouveau cas et que j'aime faire le plus - un drame d'action angsty.
Faire attention
Yvonne xx    

Reviewer: Lisa_FanFicCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

They're cute and a bit perinoid and I love them! LOL 

 

XO



Author's Response:

Hi Lisa

Oh I agree, but in his defence he probably wouldn't have thought about it, if he hadn't seen the program in the first place. It was a cute chapter, but the boys are back to some table sex in the next chapter.

Take care

Yvonne

xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Jasper is afraid of the hot tub! So cute!! Loved it. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Heyyy ant1gon3

Yeah, it was a bit of a cute chapter. Glad you enjoyed it. Cut turns animal next when a table gets involved.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Reflections

I love the bubble they are in.   



Author's Response:

Hi HeatherJoy

They are in a lovely bubble - they're up to some table sex in the next chapter.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell x

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Loved this, the theorising at the end was so funny. Like you would imagine two guys theorising whilst high, coming up with all sorts of reasons why they are the dominant of our species LOL

Author's Response:

Hi Misty

Over the moon that you enjoyed the chapter and the boys theorising. Men sure are a funny breed. Next chapter coming up today.

Take care

Yvonne

xxx

 

 

Reviewer: bellemeer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

God, it makes me want to get married just so I can have a honeymoon like your boys!

Droolworthy to say the least, LOL

bellemeer



Author's Response:

Heyyy bb

Thank you for the advertising luv. OH YEAH, I can just feel the sun beating down on my back with the sea breeze lapping around my extremities while I laze in a hammock. SIIIGGGGHHHHH.

Take care luv

Yvonne xxx

 

 

Reviewer: bellemeer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

I do so enjoy the sexy playfulness you bring to these characters - they truly are delicious!

Can I have a set????????? I promise to play nice.........

bellemeer



Author's Response:

Heyy Belle

I would happily give you a set of anything you wanted bb.

Yup I'm back and will be on line soon. Congrats on Mardi Gras - WUHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

Take care

Yvonne xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Oh to be a gay man! You make it sound so wonderful! I hope to come back as one in my next life. For now I'll have to endure all the awful thing that go along with being a het woman. Edward might have something to his theory! Thanks for the smile. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

Glad to raise a smaile. I agree with you, I'm a het woman that would like to come back as a gay man or maybe a cat??? All good fun eh. Thank you for reading and reviewing - much appreciated. Next chapter will be up at the weekend.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Lisa_FanFicCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

I LMAO at E! (and you) Yvonne! You two had a couple of good points! LOL

 

XO



Author's Response:

Heyyy Lisa

Had a wail of a time with the theory. Glad you enjoyed it - I wasn't too sure how it would be received. All the readers here love slash, but it still gets to being on dodgy ground when mentioning religeon. Thank you for reading and reviewing - it really is appreciated.

Take care

Yvonne  xxx

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

LMAO!!!!!!   omg.. Shellfish?!    BWAHAHAHA   hmmm interesting theory u have there, Edward.   lol   



Author's Response:

Hi HeatherJoy

Glad you enjoyed Edward's theorising. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be up this weekend.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: angelmak Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

I'm beginning to think Edward is right, he also forgot to mention menopause which men don't go through, it's something to think about. Loved this story, can't wait to see more of the honeymoon.



Author's Response:

Hi angelmak

Good one - I forgot about the menopause. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be up this weekend.

Take care

maryhell   xx

Reviewer: lexifisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

that was too funny.... i loved it! it's amazing how many crazy conversations you have with your partner.... i think that's a good sign.

Author's Response:

Hi Lexi

Glad you liked their discussion. I agree, funny and wierd things go through brains when relaxing. Quite right - it is good that the boys can have such conversations. Next chapter will be up this weekend.

Take care

maryhell  xxx

 

 

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

That discussion at the end was pretty funny!  It also made a lot of sense, lol!  :)



Author's Response:

Hi Gill

Glad you liked their discussion. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be up this weekend.

Tale care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Loved this chapter.  Edward has some interesting theories and some of them (or maybe all of them) make sense.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbi

 

Glad you like Edward's theorising. Thank you for reviewing. Next chapter will be up this weekend.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Orientation

"Wakey,  wakey, hands off  snakey" - that just made me smile.  Loved their theory talk,  I'm a girl but for a minute was thinking that this  oddly makes some sense (I've  wondered  about the dynamics  of  the disciples  too).   



Author's Response:

Hey bbbluez

 

Your review made me wipe my brow and go PHEW thank heavens for that. Thank you for putting my mind at rest. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Nice....



Author's Response:

Hi shewoolf

YAY you found the boys. More fun ahead and an interesting discussion.

Take care

maryhell

x

 

Reviewer: lexifisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

wonderful! thank you for sharing.

Author's Response:

Hi lexifisher

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you are enjoying the boys.

Take care

Maryhell

 

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

I am so glad to see these boys again. And the chapter that is full of lemony goodness. I am wondering (I feel like an idiot) why would it be better to use condoms due to the nature or their jobs. Great chapter and I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hi Ant1gon3

Glad you are enjoying the boys. I'm sure you've asked this question over on ffn too re their condoms. In their line of business, they can be inadvertantly covered in all sorts of disease transmitting gunk. Hence, regular testing. Therefore, for the protection of their partners, they responsibly use condoms.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: Lisa_FanFicCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Cute, sweet! XO



Author's Response:

Hey Lisa

Glad you're enjoying the boys. More cute and sweet to come and hopefully some downright sexy. I also forsee an interesting discussion in their future. MMMMMM???

Take care

Yvonne  xx

 

Reviewer: oddfin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Hi there! This Sandfish as "Oddfin". Don't ask what burst of inspiration resulted in that name;-)

Hey, I loved this chapter and that you updated "Hostage". It was also nice that you set this in Kaui. I was there some years ago and we stayed at Waimea Canyon as well as at a cottage on the beach. Gawd, we certainly took note of the shark warnings and stayed away from the surf boards. Haha--even stayed a bit in Honolulu after a too long flight before the short haul to Kauai. Nice memories. Thanks for re-igniting them:-)

Well, your writing was amazing as usual and these two are just the perfect pair-and on Honeymoon. And unlike their friends back home, we have front row seats, thanks to you. I can't wait to see what you have coming next;-) 



Author's Response:

Hi oddfin/Sanfish.

Awww, thank you for the wonderful review and compliments re my writing. It's good to know the boys are still loved. OMG yes, we definitely have front row seats.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Sexy as hell!



Author's Response:

Hey bbbluez

HEHEHEHEH - it is a honeymoon after all. More lemons to come and a bit of a controversial discussion in chapter 2.

Take care

maryhell

x

 

Reviewer: Letty Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

so glad you decided to update hostage again, great chapter can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response:

Hi Letty

Glad ur enjoying the boys. Sexy times ahead - this is all the fluff and bumf before they get back to solving cases.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Nice to see these boys back. Mrs cope throwing water on her was funny as hell. They seemed to have really enjoyed their first day at the cottage so far and so did I. Thks for sharing, debbie

Author's Response:

Heyy misty

Glad ur enjoying the boys. Sexy times ahead and a somewhat controversial discussion in chapter 2. 

Take care

Yvonne

Reviewer: Liliom99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Thanks for writing more about these boys. Loved their honeymoon, perfect combination of outdoor activities, relaxing, and sexy times. Can't wait to read more about it. 



Author's Response:

Hi Liliom99

Glad ur enjoying the boys. There are most definitely sexy times ahead, a honeymoon wouldn't be the same without a good Lemon or 10. In chapter 2 they have an interesting discussion.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: Lovingyou-4ever Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Loved it can't wait for the rest...  



Author's Response:

Hi Lovingyou-4ever

Glad you're enjoying the boys. I will update when I can.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

The boys on their honeymoon, this is going to be so good.  Loved what Mrs. Cope did to Tanya.



Author's Response:

Hi Debbie

Glad you are enjoying the boys. It's going to be full of Lemony goodness and a couple of wierd thoughts. One raises it's head in chapter 2.

Yes Mrs. Cope just couldn't help herself.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: Raeya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Lovely to read about their honeymoon.

Author's Response:

Hi Raeya

Glad ur enjoying the boys. They have quite an interesting discussion in chapter 2.

Take care

Yvonne

x

 

Reviewer: TLCATLADY Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

I absolutely love this...just wish I could figure out how to get update and author alerts on twcs.  I mark my favs, but that doesn't seem to do it.  TLC



Author's Response:

Hey TLC

What you do is go to your account and select Edit preferences. You tick what you want to receive alerts about, then save the preferences

Thank you for following the boys over to TWCS - it is good to know they are loved.

Take care

maryhell

xx

 

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

So excited to see this!!  Already the boys having a wonderfully sexy time in Hawaii.  Question, what would not using condoms have to do with their job?  Just curious.  :)



Author's Response:

Hey Gill

 

I guess it's a precaution. They have the potential to be around blood and all sorts of stuff, every day. So to protect themselves and their partners they use protection.

Glad you are there to see the boys. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Oh yeah - sexy times ahead for the boys.

Take care

Yvonne x

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Jasper you're one lucky man...I'd let Edward compost a symphony on me as well;)

Nati 



Author's Response:

heyy Nati

I simply drool at the thought of Jasper. I am a Jasper lady, but I have to agree, I'd let Edward compose a symphony on me too.

In chapter 2 they have an intersting discussion.

Take care

maryhell

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