Date: 21 Jan 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
Are you still planning on writing the sequel?
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love it . Want more
Date: 10 Apr 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 34
Please continue and not for a sequel!
Date: 05 Mar 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm ready for the sequel. Love this story ;-)
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
Buh Bye evil vamps
Date: 04 Feb 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
So......Edward and Victoria meet their end. Good for Bella, she saved her mate ;-)
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 33
buh bye pussy ward. Good riddance
Date: 08 Jan 2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Kick ass Bella! Kick so much ass!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh Vicky you pissed off the wrong woman. Buh Bye Vicky.
Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
Goodness. This is a really evil Edward! I loved it when Bella put Esme in her place! I'm worried for Nahuel what with the newborns attacking him, but Peter and Jasper should have no trouble taking care of them. Hopefully both Bella and Nahuel will be stronger now they are in close proximity.
I'm sorry that you feel you have lost your juju. Please don't give up! It is very rare for me to enjoy a story that isn't B/E HEA but I am loving this one!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
ack.... evil place to leave it. Glad she told off Esme. So weak.
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 31
Please update soon.........loved this chapter.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
keep on writing kiddo.. Kill Edward save Bella's mate..
Date: 14 Dec 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
come on Warrior Mate.. slay
Date: 12 Dec 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh Malice...you are one stupid moron. Wonder how she made him thing she was his mate?
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
oh Malice..... you've let the major out now. dun dun dun
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
I loved that last line.. So darn funny. I bet a Major would get tired of being called Jazzy. Sounds gay!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
hope pussyward and psychotoria dies painfully and slowly.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
oh Eddie.....you are going to regret screwing with her mate
Date: 08 Dec 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
Uh oh.........I think the next time Bella get's a hold of Edward she will tear him apart and burn the pieces along with his brother Jasper's help!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.....keep 'em comin' ;-)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
so Edward is in with Victoria. Well crapola, I hoped he was dead.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh pussyward....you are gonna regret that.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
aww for Leah giving him the talk. too funny
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow I like the Denali's in this.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
glad Bella got to get stuff off her chest.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love Garrett. Glad B yelled at the pack to protect charlie.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
ah so Kate and Garrett have been lied too huh? Cant wait to see what B does to E.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 20
awww nahuel is taking good care of her. Maysun is annoying
Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is so much stronger and I really like that. I hated Bella stumbling and can't speak.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you Ellie Good chapter. Glad Bella did not kill Charlie.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you Ellie.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well all I can say is what I said on Fan Fiction, write because you want to. Most of us don't know anything about B Whitlock. One person can not destroy what you enjoy, if you enjoy it. Just stop and think so many of us enjoy your stories. I don't like everyone of them but you are a good writer. You write about things others don't and everyone is not going to like them. Just do it because you want to.
Your choice but if all the good writers leave what is left? junk
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow!!! What an amazingly captivating & intriging story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Don't get discuraged please because some of us have truely enjoyed reading ur stories very much so!!! Trust me I really do appreciate all ur hard work & dedication in writting for us!!!! I know how much effort & time it take to write sooooo Thanks soooooo very much!!!! I do review very often, but I am currently reading over 280 stories currently & therefore am reviewing many stories all at once & try to spread my reviews amongst every one. I rate this story as a #10 out of #10. Please keep posting ur stories here because I truely have enjoyed reading them!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh Wow Alice send Kate after her. hmmmm
Sorry to hear you are leaving. I'll miss you. If you need anything, please let me know.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
i hope charlie is ok.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh no Charlie!!!!! Hope Leah gets to be happy now
Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
We might justhurt you. Why would she kill her father?
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Paul.......Hope he gets his act together and can help keep Leah safe.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
love seth. Awww Paul Does Leah know? Jake needs to be broken more. What a dick
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jake has real nerve. Hope B knocks him on his arse.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't blame bella for wanting to help Leah and tell off Jake. Glad Nahuel is supporting her.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like these women they are good for Bella. Stable not about clothes and things.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
you have a good story.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
oooh zafrina is a bit POd at Carlisle huh?
Date: 13 Nov 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Go b for first feed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
yeah successful change
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ah the protective sister triplettes. Cool
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
ugh crappy turning dreams
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Go nahuel. take what is yours buddy
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
eeek clumsy Bella
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
stubborn old bella. LOL for them arguing though
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
awww nahuel has his mate. How cute
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
surprised they didnt ask about the vegetarian thing.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. Now how did B meet her initially?
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love it......can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ooohhh.....I'm so glad Nahuel got to Bella in time to save her. :-)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story so far! I can't wait you read more.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for more please update ASAFP.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
it's realy great! :)
Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story idea, cant wait to read more.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yes.......please keep writing this story. Now I'm hooked!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
thank you for the update.yes you should keep going........I can't wait to see how it all unfolds