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Reviewer: NessaRose93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 3:54 PM Title: The Race

Where is the rest of the story?!?!?!?! I got to the last chapter and got so sad!!!

Reviewer: megawill Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 7:52 PM Title: The Dream

I really miss this story. I hope you are okay and that the holidays are finding you well.

Reviewer: nub682 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:11 PM Title: The Race

I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter. please post a new one soon!!!

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:35 PM Title: The Dream

I like the story so far. I'll be waiting for the next Chapter!!

 

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 10:11 AM Title: The Dream

man these cryptic chapter are killing me, I dont know if Bella is actually hurt or if he just needs to see her. Can you please make it so we know.

Apart from that, loving the story and I cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Raybilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 10:04 AM Title: The Dream

Nothing is happening, 24 wasted chapters, so I am leaving you to it. Hopefully you get to the point eventually but I'm out of here.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:53 PM Title: The Dream

I think Bella and Edward are so cute together. Bella is right Charlie and Renee need to let it go. Everything turned out ok. Edward needs to be patient. Get the degree in pre-med and then apply to graduate schools for music and medicine. By the time he is done, Bella will be old enough to actually be his girl.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!  I really like getting comments like this.  And believe me when I say Edward's situation isn't as simple as it sounds.  Things are about to get complicated with Carlisle.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:19 AM Title: The Dream

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:16 AM Title: New Insight

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:58 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:25 AM Title: Bad Dreams

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:59 AM Title: The Flight

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:56 AM Title: New Problems

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:02 AM Title: Patience, My Grasshopper

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 5:10 AM Title: Pain Killers

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:52 AM Title: Ragweed & Dandelions

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:27 AM Title: Breaking Old Habits

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:06 AM Title: The Passenger

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:04 AM Title: Keeping a Wish is a Promise

Wow! I can't say that I blame Charlie but Carlisle should have been backing him up. Not by getting him out of a suspended license. Maggie will be good for him. He needs someone until he can be with Bella.
Okay, that's probably all you'll get out of me for awhile. Back to smiley faces.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 2:29 AM Title: Broken Traditions

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 2:04 AM Title: The Boy Next Door

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:56 PM Title: A Wish is a Dream

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Author's Response:

Thanks for all these!  They made me smile!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:32 PM Title: Living Up to Expectations

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:06 PM Title: The Airport

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:03 PM Title: Tattoo on My Heart

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 1:38 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 1:20 PM Title: Ignorance is Bliss

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 1:04 PM Title: Insistence of Innocence

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 12:47 PM Title: Level Head

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Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 12:24 PM Title: Playing Field

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:52 AM Title: Babysitter Blues

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:32 AM Title: 6 years ago . . .

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:17 AM Title: The Race

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Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:51 PM Title: The Dream

all caught up! this story is so beautifully written and i love the "now" and "then" chapters. you can totally feel the struggles of all characters - at that age how you analyze everything to death, and everything is life or death. great work - i feel like alice right now, with a little pout of my bottom lip, because i read all the chapters written so far. xoxo *.*



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, thank you so much for this!  I mean, I love all my reviews, but I really loves one like this.  And thank you for reading.  I really like writing this story even if the inspiration for it is getting a little more difficult to come by, but I definitely plan on finishing it.

Thanks for reviewing too!

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 8:54 PM Title: The Dream

More please!

Reviewer: Legal-Assassin-006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 10:37 PM Title: The Dream

Oooh, he's dreaming about it. Short and sweet. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 3:33 AM Title: The Dream

Anxiously waiting for the next update. This was really good but kinda short but great cliffie.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:52 PM Title: The Dream

IM CONFUSED!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 5:00 PM Title: The Dream

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: we wants the redhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:24 PM Title: The Dream

Grrrr. Update soon

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:16 PM Title: The Dream

I hope hope hope that you can update soon. 

Reviewer: melinda3351 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:27 PM Title: New Insight

in love with this story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 6:12 AM Title: The Race

Thanks for the update. I was just wondering though how the last chapter ended. What was Bella's and everyone's reaction to the watch that Bella got Edward that he wore on Christmas morning at the breakfast table. Everyone had to have seen that and at least said something. At least, Bella's reaction if nothing else.

 



Author's Response:

I didn't really think about that when writing, especially with so much story to write.  And I don't think Edward would've made a big deal about it, even if it was a big deal.  I might touch on it in a later chapter when things get a little shaken up, but for right now, I'm trying to help everyone along in moving on.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 9:49 PM Title: New Insight

I just love this story, & I hope to see more of it soon! ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Legal-Assassin-006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 6:03 PM Title: New Insight

You don't know how long I have waited for this update. I loved the chapter. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I'm hoping to get the next (albeit short) chapter up this weekend.  Keep your fingers crossed for me.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: we wants the redhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:57 PM Title: New Insight

Hope you update soon. :)

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 8:43 AM Title: Babysitter Blues

Any luck we can get an update for Christmas or New Years? Has been awhile since you have updated.



Author's Response:

I don't usually make promises when it comes to chapters, but I'm going to do just that.  I promise to have a chapter on this story done by New Years.  And if I break my promise, I will dip myself in boiling lava and die!  I'm so sorry it's been so long!  My inspiration on this story has been seriously lacking, and I didn't want to force it.  I want to finish it.  I swear!  Now I guess I need to go write!

Reviewer: BrittanyKite Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 1:03 AM Title: The Race

I hope you update soon! It's been months, and this story is pure gold - I love it. 

Reviewer: cofey Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 9:13 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

hi hoping u plan to continue 

xo



Author's Response:

I'm working on my stories this weekend.  Keep your fingers crossed!

 

Thanks for checking in.

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:08 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Update soon please, I miss them.

Author's Response:

Stay tuned.  I promise I'm going to finish this story.

 

Thanks for checking in!

Reviewer: rpattzgirl85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 6:55 PM Title: The Race

I love this story and can't wait for the next update!  



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And I promise I'm working on it.

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Legal-Assassin-006 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:31 AM Title: The Race

I hope you are still planning on continuing this story.



Author's Response:

I know I keep saying this, but of course I will finish this story.  I have other responsibilities right now, but finishing my stories is always on my list of things I must do.  It's also sometimes an issue of writer's block, so it takes time.  Thanks to keeping touch with it.   You have no idea how much it means.

Thanks!

Reviewer: dexmic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 11:03 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Can't wait for more!!!! Great story, i miss it!!!! Update  please!!!

Reviewer: Carmen1029 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:56 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Yay! They're getting closer. Oh Bella better be a bombshell & I hope when Edward see's her when she's 16 she knocks him on his ass! LOL! & I think that Garett needs to get with Alice! But those are just my opinions

 

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Oh, you have no idea just how right you are, and it's going to be completely cute!   And so far, you're the only one who's said anything about Garrett and Alice, so thanks for noticing.  I've got a lot of this story mapped out, so it's just an issue of getting it written.  Be patient with me, and we'll see this through.

 

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ImaTwiTard Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:39 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Are you finishing this story?



Author's Response:

I've been asked this many times, and I always say yes, because that's the truth.  I WILL finish this story.  It's a long story and will require a lot of my time to do, and I want to focus on finishing my fanfiction stories so I can move on to my original stories.  So yes, I will finish this.  Unfortunately, I can't exactly say when.  Please be patient with me, and we'll get through this.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:57 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Update soon 

 

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 12:10 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I was just wondering if you were going to finish your lovely story you have going on right here. You haven't updated in awhile.



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm going to finish it.   Believe me when I say that I know I haven't updated in a while.  I have it marked on my calender, so the date is sometimes staring me in the face.  My writing on this story is kind of blocked right now, but I have notes, so with any luck and hope, I'll have a few new chapters to post as soon as I can.  Fret not, I WILL finish this story.

Thanks for commenting.

Jo

Reviewer: Bookgirl1974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 9:51 PM Title: The Race

I love this story and am getting withdrawals.........any chance of an update soon? 



Author's Response:

Oh, gosh.  Well, I can say it will be updated.  When?  I don't know.  I love writing this story, but it takes a lot to get in the headspace because Edward is, well, male, and Bella is barely a teenager.   I don't want to say specifically because what if I say yes, soon, and then nothing happens.  I'm currently suffering from writer's block on quite a few of my stories, but I promise, I haven't abandoned any of them.

Thanks for loving my story, and I hope to give everyone an update as soon as I can.  :-)

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 1:41 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I must tell you that I have truly enjoyed reading your story.  I apologize that I have not reviewed on a regular basis, but I get so caught up on reading that I just want to get to the next chapter.  I think that their story is just so very sweet and I know that sooner or later, there will be some angst when they finally get together.  When that feeling is there, it is there....LOVE.  It is funny because my husband is six years older than I and he is my brother's age.   Once again, I truly enjoyed reading and hope that an update will be coming whenever you can get it done.....THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher



Author's Response:

Oh, gosh, well, first of all, don't worry about reviewing every chapter.  You let me know what you thought when you needed to, and hey, that's better than nothing.  Also, again, I'm really glad you're enjoying my story, and yes, an update is in the future.  Stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 12:44 AM Title: Keeping a Wish is a Promise

I kind of knew that the car went into the river.  I am sure that he feels so much guilt about his sister and Bella.  It is hard to erase that memory of driving into the river with your sister and her best friend.....especially when your drunk off your ass and not sober.  They were all very lucky.  I am glad that he met Maggie and has someone to hand out with.  Someone also has a crush big time on Edward.  Bella.....I remember my first boyfriend.  I was in 7th grade.  THANKS FO RTHE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 11:00 AM Title: A Wish is a Dream

I feel so very sad for Edward.  He is just so very sad.  I think that I figured out what happened.  He must have been driving drunk with Alice and Bella in the car and he had an accident and landed in a canal or river or something...........If that is the case, then Carlisle and Charlie do have a right to be upset, but how long should he be punished for.  I can see that he is really longing for Bella.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 10:21 AM Title: Playing Field

Well....this fic is getting much more interesting.  It is weird, however, that Carlisle is always giving Edward the stern look, as well as Charlie..I guess that something happened and Edward must be still paying for it.  I am sure that we will find out.  i have not seen some updates lately.  You will be finishing this right?  I hope so.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher



Author's Response:

First of all, thanks for reading!  And yes, something happened in the past, and it's still a big wound that needs to heal.  I hope you keep reading so you can see what else happens.  And yes, I'm finishing it.  It's just taking a little while for me to get it written.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:29 PM Title: Babysitter Blues

Awwww



Author's Response:

First, thanks for reviewing, and second, I know!  It starts out being really cute, but the interesting stuff is still to come.


Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:18 PM Title: 6 years ago . . .

I think Edward may have loved her from day 1!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:10 PM Title: The Race

Awwww 

Reviewer: Escala1880 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 9:53 PM Title: The Race

More, more, more!!!  I love it!



Author's Response:

More is on the way.  I'm glad you like it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 7:58 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I just started reading this story, it's great! Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you're enjoying it!   There's loads more to come.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 2:35 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Now that was a sweet chap :)  So,  if Garrett notices what's going on, does anyone else? Could that be another reason why Carlisle and Charlie are always keeping an eye on Edward?  How soon can 4 years get here?  LOL   I'll be patiently waiting for your next update!



Author's Response:

Well, I tried to make it nice since so much other bad stuff had been happening, and I'm going to be working from scratch on the next several chapters, so they'll be a little slower coming, but I'm hoping to give a little payoff in another few chapters, so stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 5:04 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I REALLY.REALLY,REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! PLZ I BEG OF YOU TO UPDATE ASAP! THANK YOU SO MUCH,YOU ARE A GIFTED WRITER AND I THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT. LOVE YA !



Author's Response:

I'm really, really glad you're enjoying it so much!  And I'm working on this and many other stories right now, so the best I can say is that I will update as soon as I possibly can.   Lots of goodies are on their way, I promise.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:46 AM Title: Bad Dreams

I CANT WAIT FOR THEM TO BE OLDER!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:02 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Did she spnd the night with him?  Or did she just fall asleep for a minute?  I think Garrett is good for Edward.  He needed a little push.  But now what.  I cannot wait to hear what he has to say to Garrett.



Author's Response:

Well, nothing happened, and knowing this Edward as I do, he'd just let her sleep.  And yes, Garrett is a good friend.  I'm sure their next conversation will be very interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Georgie20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 4:24 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I believe that Carlisle think Edward has feelings for Bella,so excited for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

That's possible, and let's not get started on Charlie.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 3:34 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Oh, they have it bad, which is so cute.  But, it seems they may be garnering more attention, for this attraction, then they really will want.  Thanks for another great chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, and it's going to get a little more cute until well, I can't say.  Anyway, yeah, the attention's bad, so we'll have to see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:12 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Love this story. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  There's more where it came from!

 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:14 AM Title: Keeping a Wish is a Promise

DOES HE HAVE TO HAVE AGIRLFRIEND?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:34 AM Title: The Boy Next Door

BELLA IS CUTE AND SMART.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:22 AM Title: A Wish is a Dream

THIS EDWARD SEEMS SO SWEET AND SENSITIVE,I LIKE IT, HIM.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:04 AM Title: Living Up to Expectations

WHAT DID EDWARD DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:49 AM Title: Tattoo on My Heart

I HOPE THATS THE LAST WE HEAR OF SIBOAN!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:27 AM Title: Ignorance is Bliss

THIS IIS VERY SWEET

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 4:36 AM Title: Playing Field

I KNOW THIS IS LATE BUT HAPPY B DAY! I LOOVVEE YOUR WRITING STYLE, YOUR HONESTLY ONE OF THE BEST! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US! LOVE YA



Author's Response:

First off, thanks for reading!  I love everyone who reads my stories.  And thanks for reviewing.  I appreciate the birthday wishes, and I'm flattered by your words.   I will continue to share as long as people continue to read.  And I do hope you finish reading what I have posted.  We're about to see a little bit of a payoff, so stay tuned!

Thanks again!

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 12:30 AM Title: The Race

Awesome!

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 12:17 AM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

well geting some where



Author's Response:

Yep.  And there's more where that came from.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 10:34 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I truly hope that E&B get together, despite her age, and have a HEA. Sometimes, although it's very rare, and if you're lucky enough, you find your soulmate...no matter what ages you both may be. They both need to embrace this gift, because that's what it truly is...a gift. I hope everyone around then keeps their meddling and their opinions to themselves...ESPECIALLY Charlie & Carlisle. The behavior of those two is borderline ridiculous sometimes.

I also hope Edward waits for Bella, and in the mean time, doesn't do anything stupid like ignoring her, getting in a relationship with someone else, or sleeping around, all because of Bella's age, or because he thinks that he's not good enough, or she deserves better. He needs to forgive himself, and let go of the past, and focus now on what's right in front of him - Bella.

Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)



Author's Response:

Wow.  These are the kinds of reviews I love - not that I don't like any of the others but still.  For another reader to have this kind of feel for one of my stories.  I love it!

And while I can't exactly give anything away about what's to come, let me just reiterate that this story will be laden with angst, but that doesn't mean to rewards won't start coming soon.  We'll see about some of that, okay?

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  You have no idea how much I appreciate it.

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 9:33 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I truly enjoy every chapter of this evolving love



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm enjoying writing it!

And thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 8:51 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Can't wait to read about Edward's and Garret's conversation. Loved the watch idea for Christmas. Everytime he looks to see what time it is he is going to think of Bella. Even better I love the music gift from Edward. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it took me a while to figure out what she would get him, but I pretty much knew what he would do for her.  I think Edward's going to be the enriching force in Bella's life where the arts are concerned.  And she'll probably keep him smart!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Legal-Assassin-006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 8:32 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Awww, Edward's glass was shattered thanks to Garrett.  I wonder if he will start to act different now that is aware of how he is around Bella. Loved getting more into Edward's head this chapter. Can't wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he thought he was doing good keeping it to himself.  We'll have to see about that because it can go both ways.  Anyway, that's all I can say.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 8:30 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

great chapter....so garrett tells him he is in love with bella;-)) looking forward to the next chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:40 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Garrett is a good-and insigtful- friend. I just wiosh Edward would realize that he IS good enough for Bella. He just needs to give her another year or two before he asks her out on a date( I started dating at 15 1/2) - can he swear off other girls for tha long?



Author's Response:

Garrett is a good friend, and I've got some good things planned for him.  As far as Bella and dating, with Charlie, that age might be pushed back just a little bit, but not by too much.  I'm hoping to slip in a few innocent things here and there before they actually start "dating."

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:31 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

Loved it. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 6:32 PM Title: Warm, Golden, Perfect

I'm glad that Ben got Edward to see that he had feelings for Bella.  I think he  knew all along just didn't know what they were.  I think that Alice knows that Bellla is in love with Edward.  Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

I'm sure you mean Garrett, and yes, it's good that someone make Edward see what he feels.  It's always someone else who tells us how we're behaving, isn't it?

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:33 AM Title: New Problems

Some how I missed this chapter. What is Edward going to do about Bella???



Author's Response:

I don't think even he knows yet, as seen in the newest chapter.  Don't worry about missing it.  It happens.  But at least now you're up to speed.

:-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 1:49 AM Title: Bad Dreams

I am glad that Maggie was not real attached to Edward. Glad that Garrett got to come home with Edward. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

There's more to come!

 

Thanks fore reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 1:45 AM Title: Bad Dreams

 Oh,  he does look at Bella differently and he's  starting to realize it. How he feels at peace when he's around her and it seems natural.  Garrett's sees it and he's also witnessed Edward's nightmares, screaming Bella's name.  Who else has or will notice it?  Edward had Maggie, this beautiful woman, who he got along with very well, but he realizes he doesn't or ever will he fall in love with her.  To me, she's more like a very good friend with benefits that helps Edward get away from what's really going on in his head, to get away for a while.  I'm interested in how Edward's conversation with Garrett is going to go or is Garrett going to call him out on it first?  :) 



Author's Response:

There will be more talk between Edward and Garrett.  What they'll say, who knows?  And then it will get very interesting!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Legal-Assassin-006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 10:41 PM Title: Bad Dreams

Awww, I love how Garrett already can see something between Bella and Edward.  Wonderful chapter as always. Can't wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

I know!  He's one of my favorite characters to write. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:27 PM Title: Bad Dreams

Another great chapter!  The pieces are slowly coming together.  I'm never very good at the whole, guessing game.  But, he could go to Pennsylvania to be closer to Maggie, but I don't think so.  We know he's not in WA because in the now" chapters, he's flying home.  Huuuummmm.  Juliart to work on his music?  I really don't know, sorry! :( Thanks for the update! :)



Author's Response:

Don't worry about guessing.  I just like to mess with you to see if yoy know where it's all going.  Sometimes I don't even know.  And yes, he's flying home in the "Now" chapters, but from where, I'm not sure yet.  He hasn't told me.

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 1:06 PM Title: Bad Dreams

Wow! Simply amazing cant wait until the next update.

Author's Response:

Great!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 12:54 PM Title: Bad Dreams

great chapter....i think he will do something with music.....so did bella have an accident and is in hospital? looking forward  to the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Well, I can't answer your question just yet.  There is a chapter in the near future that will shed a little more light on that.  Right now, we're building Edward and Bella's friendship, and then there will be more later on.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 4:04 AM Title: The Flight

Hoping to get another update soon. I am dieing to know what has happened to Bella. 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:09 AM Title: The Race

Oh okay. I am really bad at reading those parts since most are repetitive. Can't wait til the next update.

Author's Response:

It's okay.  I know a lot of authors use that space for the same thing chapter after chapter, but I use it as a space where important information can be put.   Don't worry too much.  Trust me when I say that we're in this together.

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