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Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

Loved to hear she got her just dessert. I'm going to read the "Mother of books" next. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you enjoy that story too.  It's only about 10 chapters.  I had thought I'd get back to it some day, but alas those characters have gone away.

Did you read my "Out of Time-A Halloween Love Story" yet?  I honestly don't remember what you've read of mine so far.  Sorry.

Hope to hear from you again, soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 30 (re-edit) The Dinia Steel Show - The Cullen Interview

Absolutely loved it. Perfect ending...  Would have loved to find out what happened to Leah. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It appears that you are one of the few who reviewed understand my ending.  :D  As for Leah, what do you think would have happened to a person such as she is?

Hope to hear more from you soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 Doris Wilson ( Ms. O's Maiden name )

Sorry  I haven't reviewed earlier.....  but I love your story. Thank you for not dragging the rape on.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reivew.  I am very happy that you liked my story.  I tried to work several stories into the fabirc of the main story line.  The rape was only to draw attention that even in what we believe to be a safe environment we can still be at risk and to always be on guard.  Been there done that!

Hope to be hearing from you again soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 29 (re-edit) Ending and Beginning

Hi ;) I finally finished re-reading this story ;) thanks so much for putting so much effort into it for us to enjoy ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for re-reading.  I often find I need to read something a couple of times to catch all of the subtle nuances I'd missed before.  I did put a great deal of thought into the story/stories worked into the fabric of the main story line.

Hope to hear from you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Redtini Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Hale/McCarty Interview (Re-Posting)

Wow, that was hot and sexy and I want Emmett and Rose to be hired.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I have to admit I was really out of my depth, but everyone seems to have liked it also.

Appreciate you and your support.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: Redtini Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Applicants Re-edited

Love the family that F*^%# together. Bella is doing well so far. Love it!



Author's Response:

I'm always surprised when someone actually gets that little sentence, thank you.  I thought it was rather good myself.  

I'm very please that you are reading and enjoying what I've written.  This was the very first story I pubished.

See you next chapters.

Thanks again for your support.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia 

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 18-(re-edit) Rose and the Bitch Slapping Contest- Part 2

thanks for the 3 re-editted chapters posted since my last r&r ;) and a belated merry christmas and a happy new year to you and yours ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I wish I'd had the beta then that I have now when I first wrote this.  Appreicate your comments so very much.

See you next chapters?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 14-Dinner with Bella and Edward (re-edited)

A Christmas wedding sounds very nice.  Love Mrs. O's back story and how well Edward and Bella are adjusting to everything.  A wonderful chapter and can't wait to read more.

Lots of Love



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've really never been one for big anything in RL.  I'm really a very low key and simple woman.  :D  I love writing backstories for my characters.  Gives them more "teeth".  We're about half way through.  I think there are 30 chapters all together.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 14-Dinner with Bella and Edward (re-edited)

i thought that since you came back and re-edited some chapters (9-14) from when i read it to completion i'd re-read them and review them i found that it was like reading it anew so thank you for putting the effort into them for us ;D 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really didn't have a good editor first time through.  Now I have a good one.  I'm so happy that you're enjoying reading this.  I really appreciate your taking the time to re-read and to review.

See you next chapter?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 12 (Re-Edited) The Night that Bella and Edward were Attacked

this was a particularly brutal chapter. i'm glad Bella finally recovered, as much as anyone could recover from such a vicious attack. it seems fitting that Caius was left to the mob to be dealt with...



Author's Response:

Sorry I just saw this.  Please forgive me!  Yes it was a hard one to write too, but I do believe in reality, and even more when I first wrote this.  Yeah, don't you know the "mob" had fun with Caius!

Miss hearing from you.  Did you see I'm going to be published????  I'm so excited.

Talk to you later.

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 (Re-Edited) The Night that Bella and Edward were Attacked

Great chapter.  It was hard to read, but I know how hard it is to write a scene like this and you did very good.  Until next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks Clo.  You're correct it is, and this isn't the first time in Bella's life that she's been abused.  I volunteered as a Rape Crisis counselor and I can't stress enough how careful we need to be due to the still Victorian attitudes about the act.

Thank you so much for your support and I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

Hard Hugs & Love

Carol

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 11-Denver House of “O” (Re-Edited)

Another great chapter.  Love seeing Carlisle and Esme and getting to know the depth of their love for each other.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Clo.  I'm glad you appreciated it.  Looking forward to your next chapter!

Hard Hugs

Carol aka Dinia

Reviewer: Redtini Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 Bella (re-edit)

Mrs. O is one smart woman! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I know my BDSM world is different, but then, it is my world.  *grinning*

Appreciate your support.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Atlanta House of "O" - Re-Edited version

Love the care and responsibilities of being a good Don that Jasper betrayed in this chapter.  I like seeing that your character didn't just jump right into that type of sex.  Another wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm happy that you're enjoying this story.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 - NYC House of "O"

Sorry for the delay in reading.  I loved this chapter.  The dress sounded wonderful and the way Bella handled the situtation was written wonderfully.  Waiting for the next chapter to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks Clo.  Means a great deal as you know when one of your peers takes interest in a story. It's a different type of BDSM story - as I"m sure you've figured out by now.

Love you my Friend

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Seattle House of "O" - Re-edited version

Wow, just wow.  I loved everything about this chapter.  Until next time...loves and hugs.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Praise from one of my piers.  :D

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 (re-edit) The Dinia Steel Show - The Cullen Interview

AWESOME story ;) thanks for completing and posting it on here for us ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks!  did you notice I've been re-editing it?  I'm not finished re-posting the edited chapters, but it was orignally finished.  confused?  Try being me.  LOL.

I look forward to future comments from you.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Jasper Whitlock Interview (re-edited)

Jasper is a lousy Dom .He put a gag in with no non- verbal option to safe word. He basically beat her up. She was safe wording and he knew it and didn't stop. That is the biggest no no EVER and he should be black listed, not her honoured buddy buddy

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7-The House of "O" Four Openings (Re-edit version)

Another very well written chapter.  Loved all the detail.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I did put a lot of effort into it - actually did with most of the chapters.  LOL.  I appreciate you saying so!

Loves and Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Jasper Whitlock Interview (re-edited)

Loved it.  I enjoy how it is all coming together. 



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  Thanks for reading  :D

Love and Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Hale/McCarty Interview (Re-Posting)

Loved the the interview and the flashbacks....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I hope you continue to enjoy the re-done chapters.

See you next chapter?

Hard HUgs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

I remember the original and although I did like it  I remember thinking it needed more... it seemed "hurried"  I look forward to reading your new version.  (Please don"t remove the original just yet it be nice th re~read it before starting the new one)  : )   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Applicants Re-edited

I enjoyed reading about the applications.  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Let's see.  Maybe it's about Rose and Emmett, or maybe it'll be about Jasper, or better still maybe the Cullens?  Hummmmm.

xo

 

Reviewer: Redtini Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

Such an original concept! Can't wait to dive in!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I try.  :D  Not sure wgat tg=he posting schedule will be as yet,  Looking forward to reading what you think of the rest.  Don't look for a lot of sex scenes from me.  I think I've got two maybe 3 in the whole story.  Each chapter contains stories from the different House of O's.  I did a ton of on line interviews with Doms and subs alike.  I got a lot of actual ( or so they said ) events that took place to individuals and stores alike.  No boy wanted their names used as references so they could have been blowing smoke, but it made for good story telling.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Means a lot.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 Bella (re-edit)

Love this Bella.  I am looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Clo!  I'm very pleased that you seem to be enjoying my story.  I hope you'll like the set up of The House of "O".

Hard Hugs & Love

Carol

 

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

Can't wait to read more.  I really want to see how Bella handles being a Dominatrix.



Author's Response:

Thank you Clo.  I have to warn you, this isn't you "normal" BDSM story.  It's more about the individual Houses of O' but I hope you'll like it anyway.  Sunday is the day that I'm shooting for chapter 2, if my beta agrees.  :D

Thanks for reading this Clo.  Love you oodles and heapes.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 30 (re-edit) The Dinia Steel Show - The Cullen Interview

Absolutely perfect closing lines!
I'm chuckling at the mild deception and protective angle taken during the interview. How could anyone believe these two would stop practicing the craft that brought them together! Haha.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I was rather pleased with "the interview".  For being my first writing work I didn't do too badly.  I know I'm going to have to go back and re-edit it if I decide to make it into an e-book.  I am sooooooooooooooooo happy that you did enjoy it.  It's also brought me a new Friend which is pricelss IMHO.

thank you again

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 (re-edit) Ending and Beginning

All of their lives have played out as I expected, I suppose. Even Rose and Emmett have taken the ride as far as they wanted to and are now ready for the next phase of life.
Three children for E&B, just like they agreed upon.
Thank you for sharing this storyline and taking the time to research the subject matter.
It showed in your writing that you wanted to accurately portray this lifestyle and all the possible situations surrounding it.

Author's Response:

Thank you again for your time.  I am over the moon that you enjoyed it.  

I reallydo look forward to hearing from you again, and again and again.

However, do you mind if I don't anwser the rest of the reviewed chapters?  :D

Talk to you later.  Hope you had a happy birthday

Biggest and Hardest Hugs!

Carol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 28 (re-edit) Of Birth & Death Part 2

How did Jenks overlook the bar?
I guess I'm a bit shocked that Edward and Bella decide to leave the very environment that brought them together. But then again, experiencing new things makes life all the more interesting.
Ha, Leah was linked to Jacob Black. Serves her right!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 27 (re-edit) Of Birth & Death - Part 1

I'm sad that Doris didn't get to see her newest addition to the family. I guess it's now time for everyone to move on. I can see each of the couples moving away from The House of O as their children arrive. As for Carlisle and Esme, they might as well continue through until retirement. Or the families move again!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 26 (re-edit) More Wedding Bells

Indeed, Edward and Bella are always of like mind!
The timing of the wedding and pregnancy work out well considering some of the recent stresses The House of O had been experiencing.
Will either of the other two locations experience any drama/trauma?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 25-(re-edit) Close Call

Sad occurrence.
I wonder if our nature to desire a single partner is ever a real concern in the world if BDSM?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 24 (re-edit) Wedding Bells - Atlanta

Birth control, I almost forgot about that decision.
Mrs. O will probably figure out the next slow point in the business calendar and book the wedding within that time frame. A month or two, I'm guessing.

Author's Response:

Please forgive for not answering each and everyone of your wonderful reviews!  Today has been trying to get my daughter's problems settled.  She's 43 years old, but still mama to hold her hand.  :D

PLEASE know how much I appreciate your reviewing each chapter.  I don't many people actually read this story when I first published it, what 3 years ago?  Anyway, I may publish this as an e-book some day.  :)

If you didn't all you questions aswered within the story line, let me know and I'll do my best to answer them.

Again, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Email if you'd like at:  gardiniasteel@gmail.com I think I'd like to get to know better.  :D

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 23 (re-edit) Leah Clearwater

Vanilla can be even more rewarding with your true love.
I presume Leah just crossed the lines into harassment by mentioning her application and asking for special privileges from Edward.
DNA from Leah's cup...... Fantastic move on Mrs. O's part.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 (re-edit) Revenge Should Be a Cold Dish

It pays to have the mob, very greedy lawyers and PI's in your back pocket!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 21 (re-edit) Wedding Shower for Alice and Jasper

Did Edward discuss with Jasper the recent revelation that Tanya and Jacob worked together to lure Bella into Jacobs's death trap?
I'm a bit surprised that Rose would feel slighted by the corporate head office needing to review the events being discussed and broadcast to the region. After all, it is a a business that has legal and personal responsibilities to the owner.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 20-(re-edit) Some Bella History

Wow, twice in one life time. That's an overwhelming bought.
I'm not a violent person but have to say this chapter has piqued my thoughts towards Edward's way of thinking.
I'm sure Jasper will second that thought.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19-(re-edit) The Past Rears It's Ugly Head

More wiser words were never spoken; Mrs. O really understands to importance of transparencie.
Will Leah sign up for another location or become a stalker of her former Dom?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18-(re-edit) Rose and the Bitch Slapping Contest- Part 2

Liam was indeed weak based on the standards set before each and every Dominant.
Well it would seem that Rosalie has made a name for the organization as well as the NYC's location.
I hope you pair up Maggie with a respectable Dom in her future.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 17-(re-edit)Rose and the Bitch Slapping Contest

Oooooo, Liam has a lot to answer for as well as learn when it comes to maintaining a healthy relationship with a submissive
I'm very curious had long the misbehaving subs will feel Mistress Hales punishments.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 16-Bella and Edward Learn About the Blues(re-edit)

Julie London and Bessie Smith are the only two jazz singers names I did not recognize. That makes me feel pretty good. I like Etta James as well. I didn't really think if Doris Day as a jazz singer so much as a regular pop artist of her time.
I liked this chapter of delving into character depth. Hehe.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 Re-edit Bell&Jasper How They Met

That was an eye opening experience for Bella. Haha. The beginning of a true friendship.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14-Dinner with Bella and Edward (re-edited)

When children arrive, Doris will make a fun and fabulous grandma.
Everyone's family is expanding!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 Doris Wilson ( Ms. O's Maiden name )

That adoption idea came out of left field. But you made me smile!
Doris has a very colorful history and thoughts on reincarnations of ones self.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 (Re-Edited) The Night that Bella and Edward were Attacked

By not informing the authorities of this heinous event and allowing Mr. Caius Jones to walk free the submissive was being disrespected by the community. As if they turned a blind eye. The personal privacy issue does not out weigh the physical safety of this individual. It also set the stage for Edward and Bella's attack.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11-Denver House of “O” (Re-Edited)

You have created a near perfect world for those who want and need something more in their sex lives. If only real life could have so many fail safes in place.
I liked the direct approach by Dr. And Mrs. Cullen. They ensure the link to our humanity is not lost while exploring our darker desires.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Atlanta House of "O" - Re-Edited version

Savannah Georgia is a beautiful location.
I really enjoyed the riverfront.
I'm presuming the Grand opening was a huge success like Seattle and New York.

Author's Response:

But of course.  I believe I get more into Atlanta's operations more in later chapter.

I'm pleased that you're enjoying my story.

I too enjoyed Savannah's Riverfront very much and Tybe Isand also.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 - NYC House of "O"

Now that was an amazing display of emotional power, physical control, and respect given to an individual that was not ready to grasp the level of responsibility required to be in this type of binding relationship.
I presume word traveled fast and now Miss Swan has been elevated to superstar status within the BDMS world.
The other grand openings will be highly sought after attractions.
Emmett's Uncle is a nice twist of flavor to this location.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Seattle House of "O" - Re-edited version

This chapter was a bit choppy in flow but the fabulous message of their finally pairing up was received load and clear.
Mrs. Cope and Mrs. O are adorable surrogate mothers. Gently prodding their precious younglings into the next phase of life.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 7-The House of "O" Four Openings (Re-edit version)

Between Mrs. O and J. Jenks everything appears to be iron clad.
You mention rooms within the club for "the most wanted and the shunned Doms/subs". What happened to the shunned Dom/subs?
Membership is near sellout capacity.
Are there any troubles outside of the clubs boundaries that affect the daily business conducted in the club?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Cullen Clan Carlisle and Esme Cullen (Re-Published)

So Edward doesn't gave a formal degree but is considered brilliant and is business savy. What has he been doing to earn income other than train Doms/subs?
Mrs. O has just watch from a front row view her very beautiful team finally fall into place. Yet LA still without a location or manager. May be she should wait until Atlanta and Denver are established.
Will Emmett be in charge of designing the New York building renovations?
Esme and Carlisle have to be pleased with their good fortune and the direction their children have taken.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Jasper Whitlock Interview (re-edited)

Will there be fireworks during Alice and Jasper's first meeting? Or with Edward and Bella for that matter?
I'm wondering if the distance and number of clubs will create any difficulties?

Author's Response:

*smiling*  Have you found the answer to your Alice and Jasper question yet?  Or about Bella and Edward?

I don't think any real difficulties will arise due to distance or management.  After all it's my World.  

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

I look forward to more of your comments about the story line.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Hale/McCarty Interview (Re-Posting)

How often will the managers meet up with Bella and Mrs. O?
Will the New York location be as central a location in the story as Seattle?
Must read on!

Author's Response:

Ahhh so many good questions, and my only response to them, at this point, is you'll have to read on to discover the answers, and they don't satisfy you, let me know.  :)

Yes!  You must.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Applicants Re-edited

I'm presuming Edward and Alice are the children that Esme Cullen referred to as attending along side her and Carlisle.
Jasper is already linked to Bella and I seems the occupations of Rosalie and Emmett ensured their consideration.
What has caused Bella's unrest through violent dreams?

Author's Response:

Yes, you presume correctly.

Yes, Bella and Jasper are linked in a couple of ways.

Rosalie and Emmett have interesting sides to their personalities that make them perfect for each other - of course.

The viiolent dreams Bella has form part of the story line.

Thanks again for your reading and reviewing.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 Bella (re-edit)

Who knew a degree in Clinical Psychology could get you a management position in an exclusive BDSM club. Haha
Thus appears to be the beginning of a very solid working relationship between theses two very different women.

Author's Response:

Hey, it's my world.  LOL.  Most of the Doms that I interviewed were actually psychologist.  

Yes the two women hit it off very well.

Thanks again for dipping into my world.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

I wish I could give credit to the link or person that rec'd this story but I am unable to recall where it came from other than another author.
I'm vert intrigued by the carefully laid foundation of this story. I already love Mrs. O' Keefe.
She is a truly unique grandmother. Haha

Author's Response:

Thank you.  This was the very first story I ever wrote.  I did a great deal of research and intereviewd many Doms and Domes as well as submissives.  It was actually kind of scary to be honest.  All of the Doms wanted me to come to them and allow them to dominiate me.  While all the test I took indicated that I was geared to be a Dome.  LOL.  Anyway, it was "interesting" if nothing else.  Also to be honest, part of the Ms. O' personality belongs to this old woman.  LOL.  Not going to say which parts though.  *grinning*

I wish you could remember who recommended this to you too.  

Oh, yes, my current beta was horrified by all the mistakes my first editors let slip and is going through every living one of my stories and re-editing them.  It's a slow process.  

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30 (re-edit) The Dinia Steel Show - The Cullen Interview

Enjoyed this story.

Thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I really appreciate your taking the time to let me know.  It was the first thing I'd ever written.  Some day I'll go back and re-edit it.

Again, thank you for your review, and I hope you'll try some of my other stories as well.

Wishing you the best.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

Very interesting. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

IT'S GOOD TO RE-READ THIS STORY IT ALWAYS WAS A FAVORITE. I JUST WISH IT HAD A SEQUEL.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 7-The House of "O" Four Openings (Re-edit version)

What an interesting set up. I can't wait to read more about it. :) Kelly

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Cullen Clan Carlisle and Esme Cullen (Re-Published)

I'm excited. I can't wait to see how things develop between Edward and Bella. :o) Kelly

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Jasper Whitlock Interview (re-edited)

*giggles* Let me guess, Alice will be sent to work with Jasper...I would sure love to know all about Ms.O's backstory, it seems that she would have a great life story to tell. :o) Kelly

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Hale/McCarty Interview (Re-Posting)

Looks like things are going well so far, but I'm looking forward to 'meeting' the Cullens. :o) Kelly

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Applicants Re-edited

I wonder who the Cullen's two adult children are. Hmmm...I'm curious as to Bella's dreams; I can't wait to find out her background. Mrs.O is a trip; I love her! :o) Kelly

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 Bella (re-edit)

This is fun; I can't wait to read more! :o) Kelly

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

I liked this first chapter. I'm intrigued. :o) Kelly

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 Bella (re-edit)

Many people have tried to successfully write a BDSM story and a lot have failed and a handful have achieved it. 

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

Interesting!

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