Date: 15 Jun 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderfully done! I loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I just re-read through this story again. I hope you'll have the time to post the next chapter on this story again. I've really enjoyed what you have posted so far. Hope you have a safe and Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can't believe she took his phone. I know I said that Bella should take a step back and I'm still thinking that but I'm now thinking that Emmett needs to be a little bit more assertive with her, lol. I'm glad Carlisle annoyed her enough for her to give him Emmett's address, that was a good move on her part as nothing is going to get sorted until they talk, which is about to happen. It feels wrong to say I'm looking forward to what Emmett has to say because it's going to be upsetting, but I am and he needs to face his demons.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I understand that Bella needed her say and needed to protect Emmett but maybe if she'd made Emmett answer the phone and speak with Carlisle then Carlisle could have apologised and they could be on their way to talking about what happened. Both Carlisle and Emmett have strong women watching over them and protecting them which is really good and nice but sometimes they're going to have to take a step back and let them get on with it.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Emmett really needs to talk to Carlisle. I'm sure he didn't mean what he said in the message he's hurt, confused and probably a little angry that Emmett's been ignoring him. I hope Bella doesn't lay into him too much, after all he doesn't know about Emmett's past.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jul 2013 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
My heart is aching for both of them. I hope talk this though soon. They were good together. Emmett obviously had something very traumatic happen, and deserves to have someone like Carlisle in his life. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my God! What happened to Emmett to make him withdraw like this? Whatever it is he needs to talk to someone because he'll never be able to out run it. The date started so well. Lol, both of them having first date meltdowns on what to wear and then both of them being late. I hope Carlisle doesn't give up on Emmett.
I'm so glad you're back.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nooo!! What happend? things were going so well, hopefully whatever happend in Emmett's past will stop holding him back so he can be happy, and hopefully Carlisle is willing to work throughit with him. Wonderful update!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle's certainly gone on Emmett, he's been watcing him for quite some time and now he has him in his clutches, lol. Carlisle wanted to be more of a gentleman with Emmett but things didn't turn out that way so I hope their date goes to plan. I hope, as well, that Carlisle turns out to be everything that Emmett's ever wanted and he doesn't go back to all his one night stands.
Lol, Sam thinks he knows something but he really couldn't be wider of the mark.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Hello again!
Carlisle sure is head over heels for this one, I mean who wouldn't be! You are quite right, that night was not how how he wanted it to be for their first night together to be. Their date??? Hmmm I have an evil streak a mile wide in me *GRINS*.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
You big tease with Emmett's dream, gah!!
Lol, 'I don't kiss on the first date.' Such a tease. I'm sure Carlisle wouldn't be judging Emmett on the size of his apartment......the size of something else maybe, bwahahahahaha!!
Jane x
Author's Response:
Oh Jane!
You have made me laugh so much! Yeah the dream... well.... I couldn't get them outta the bedroom and as much as I love that side of things, they needed to be normal. Well as normal as they can be!
Their first date will be interesting that is for sure! And Carlisle, judge size?? *SNORTS*
Lou x
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really like this. Carlisle is such a surprise, he seemed so mild to begin with but now he has Emmett in his apartment he's like a man possessed, lol, a wolf in sheeps clothing and Emmett is his lamb to the slaughter.....well not quite, but you get the idea I hope.
I like Rose, she's funny and has no filter. I've only ever said 'I like Rose' in one other review, she's one of my least favourite characters so it's a nice change to be able to say that.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Hi Jane,
Thanks for reading and reviewing, so glad that you liked this. Carlisle, yeah he is certainly not the gentleman that he appears once behind closed doors with the man that he has lusted after for so long! I mean can you blame him??
Rose is someone that I wanted people to like, outwardly people will see them together and assume, as Emmett did that they are a couple but nope!
I hope you continue to love this, I have more coming up.
Lou x x x
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fun times. Loved Rose. Meg