Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 30
I loved it thank you
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
cool little story;) great ending ;) thanks for sharing it on here for us 'D
Date: 26 Feb 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
Nice story, the three car crashes were overkill
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
This chapter was a little weird. It started out awesome, but the whole goth doctor Edwar's ex seemed to contrived.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love the teasing build up and how cute Bella is when learning to drive.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, terrific story. I can't wait to read more and hear more of the past story.
Great chapters.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
This was a nice story; very lovely. I wish all deliveries were that easy. I had pre eclampsia & an emergency c-section.
I love HEAs. I'm kinda sad it's over but I like where it stopped.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Alice to the rescue?
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
What's up with Rose?
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
So Charlie doesn't exactly get father of the year?
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
LOVE THIS!!!!! I am kind of sad that it is over. You did an amazing job writing this story. I have really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awesome!
:)
*IDK if I missed this detail, but how were Charlie & Edward friends in the first place? Edward is caring, nice & a good person-basically the exact opposite of Charlie. Yet, Edward knew Charlie & his other friends. ??*
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Soooo funny!! Loved their banter!!!
:)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oooohhhh! The plot thickens!! This is really good!
:)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
So sad it is over that was a great story Thanks so much.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
This has been an amazing story to read. I have looked forward each week for the next update. Thanks for all your hard work and dedication in writing this beautifully well written story. Will u be including any OUTTAKES??? I give this story a #10 & am sad it has come to an end.
smileya987
Date: 03 Nov 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love a stry with sch a happy ending. Awesome job.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love the name Landon.
That was a really sweet ending.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow a baby for the couple. they deserve all the happiness
it seems the family has grown quite a bit
love the bath at the end. i think all parents have expierenced the exploding diaper and the relaxing in the tub
have a great time with the story. thank you for writing
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks good chapter
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
oh come its your birthday ,,,you know just what to ask for
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
great story, thank you
Luv
XOXO
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thank U , I really enjoyed your story :)
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
C'est un bon chapitre et une bonne fiction.
Merci.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awww sweet ending. Yea baby!!!
Thx for writing and sharing
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
:) loved this story
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!! I hope Rose has finally excepted Bella and will not be mean to her any more.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
I have looked foward to following this story each week!! This has been an amazingly beautifully well written story!!!! Could u do all of us a huge favor Please???? Could u pleade fix the banner on this site so those of reading this story will not have a blank x with no image for the last chapter. Please fix for the final show down and ending of this wonderful story. We would all love u for it if u could juct fix this image on this site Please!!!
Thanks,
smileya987
Author's Response:
We tried to fix it, but it didn't work. I think it's because of the site because it doesn't show any of the banners... Anyway we will retry to fix it, but I wouldn't hold my breath on it working. sorry :( you can go visit our group on facebook to see the banner and the other pictures :D
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love it! They both deserve all this happiness. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 29
wonderful chapter.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awww sweet wedding. Nice honeymoon surprise
Date: 26 Oct 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
thank you for the up date...very good.....well done.the wedding was nice and the honeymoon was amazing.Edward got her good
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
sweet good thing Rose made up and she is pregers ;)
Date: 26 Oct 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'M GLAD SHE CLEARED WHERE SHE STANDS WITH ROSE. VERY CLEVER FROM EDWARD THE HAWAII FLYERS
Date: 26 Oct 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks good chapter
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
oh my i sure hope rose has learned her lesson
i am sure glad edward and bella are honest with one another and communicate
loved it
Date: 20 Oct 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great Story.
I suppose Rose wasn’t going to completely change overnight.
Its sad that she thinks a young girl with no experience of life till she was forcte to marry Edward was/is a whore.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
Rose needs her ass kick for what she did to Bella and for they way she is talking about her. It is a good thing Dr. Love came to save her lol
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
I have truely loved reading this story. Thanks for such an amazing and beautifully written story. Keep up the great work. I love following along w the story. Just a note the image for your story is showing a red x can u please fix.
smileya987
Author's Response:
I don't know what the problem is. It worked just fine until yesterday (that I know of)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
GENIAL,J'ADORE BELLA PAS TIMIDE ATTEND LA SUITE MERCI
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
Rose got what she deserved. lol!!!!!!! I hate that Bella is upset on her wedding day. We all thought that Rose had changed.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad someone put Rose in her place. What a scummy hitch.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
ROSE NEEDS TO HURRY AND MAKE AMMENDS WITH A CONSTRUCTION WORKER AND A COWBOY. AND ALSO ALICE SHOULD APOLOGIZE TO BELLA, SHE WAS ALSO DISMISSING BELLA'S OPONION ON THE WEDDING DRESS
Date: 19 Oct 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thank you for the update..........Rose got what she deserved..How did she not know that was Emmett
Author's Response:
Two words for your question...Dumb and drunk :))
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella va se faire tatouer !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
C'est un bon chapitre !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward s'est réveillé !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Tanya a fait ça ! quelle salope !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward se rapproche de Bella, c'est mieux.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella a eu un bel anniversaire !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Première leçon de conduite pour Bella.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Mon Dieu ! quelles nouvelles !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup cette fiction !
Merci.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ah ils se sont embrassés !!!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
J'ai hâte qu'ils discutent tous les deux !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Mais pourquoi est-il si méchant ?
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella est contente d'avoir l'air plus agé !
Tout ça pour plaire à son mari.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
J'aime bien cette Bella, elle a du caractère.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward et charmant mais il ne veut pas se rapprocher de Bella, je crois qu'elle va tout faire pour qu'il change d'avis.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
J'aime ce chapitre !
Charlie est horrible mais il a quand même fait le bon choix pour sa fille, il doit l'aimer quand même.
Merci.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks good chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow. That was impressive!
Date: 13 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
go bella go. ride that man
hot damn you are hawt and i love her putting jasper in his place
love it
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
LOVE IT!!!!!!! Loved the angry sex!!!! Also love that Bella got Jasper back with what she said. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh that was hott as fuck! man I hope she gets pregnant if nothing else just to show him a thing or two... poor jas bella shut him up on that last note.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
I will be sad when it is over been a great story. She is ready to have a baby with him?? They are good together 3 hours and 7 min WOW I want one of him lol
Date: 12 Oct 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad Lauren is gone. Parents like hers are what ruins the school systems. Yummy end
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
thank you for the update..I'm so proud od Edward
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW OF COURSE IT IS HOT IN HERE! I LOVED THEIR 'ANGRY SEX'
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks good chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 26
good chapter. happy..
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. So is Porno Bears something that happened in real life?
Author's Response:
Actually, yes. The porno bears happened but nobody was high. I was having some dumped on the table in front of me. and I was in the middle of a joke with by friend, when I decided to tell her what I saw. and tell her I did, because the 69'ing and the other pervy stuff were happening right in front of me. (it probably doesn't make much sense right now but it was funny for us and that's why we decided to put it in the story)
All that being said, thank you for reading and reviewing our story.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Car accidents must me a Masen thing. Charlie is the drunk driver. Bella is his next of kin. Sue is what, girl friend?
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad Dr. Goth did not give them trouble.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
so funny.. broken his pp. lol
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
:-) good direction
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Tanya was going to hurt Bella. Now Edward will be hurt. I hope Rose is happy with her FRIEND.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad he put Tanya and Rose in their places. Bella's birthday and Rose acts like that. She is really nasty.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
well Edward is trying to take care of everyone. Problem is some mistakes need to happen for people to learn. If they won't kill them let them be. You make dumb mistakes you get hurt, a little. That is when you learn.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
ahh they are finally connecting. So this is why Charlie asked Edward to take her. He had raised his siblings. Charlie what a mistake he is.