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Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it thank you 

Reviewer: tinaspice02 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

Nice story

Reviewer: tinaspice02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2021 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 30

Nice story

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2020 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

Cute story

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved the story.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

cool little story;) great ending ;) thanks for sharing it on here for us 'D

Reviewer: littlemadangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Nice story, the three car crashes were overkill 

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

This chapter was a little weird. It started out awesome, but the whole goth doctor Edwar's ex seemed to contrived.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love the teasing build up and how cute Bella is when learning to drive.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, terrific story. I can't wait to read more and hear more of the past story.

Great chapters.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

This was a nice story; very lovely. I wish all deliveries were that easy. I had pre eclampsia & an emergency c-section.

I love HEAs. I'm kinda sad it's over but I like where it stopped. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 30

Love it

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Alice to the rescue?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

What's up with Rose?

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

So Charlie doesn't exactly get father of the year?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 30

LOVE THIS!!!!! I am kind of sad that it is over. You did an amazing job writing this story. I have really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awesome!
:)
*IDK if I missed this detail, but how were Charlie & Edward friends in the first place? Edward is caring, nice & a good person-basically the exact opposite of Charlie. Yet, Edward knew Charlie & his other friends. ??*

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

Soooo funny!! Loved their banter!!!
:)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oooohhhh! The plot thickens!! This is really good!
:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

So sad it is over that was a great story Thanks so much.  

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 30

This has been an amazing story to read. I have looked forward each week for the next update. Thanks for all your hard work and dedication in writing this beautifully well written story. Will u be including any OUTTAKES??? I give this story a #10 & am sad it has come to an end.

smileya987

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 30

Love a stry with sch a happy ending. Awesome job.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 30

I love the name Landon. 

 

That was a really sweet ending. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

wow a baby for the couple. they deserve all the happiness

it seems the family has grown quite a bit

love the bath at the end. i think all parents have expierenced the exploding diaper and the relaxing in the tub

 

have a great time with the story. thank you for writing

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

oh come its your birthday ,,,you know just what to ask for

Reviewer: anncarol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 30

great story, thank you

Luv

XOXO

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it :)

Reviewer: shannen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thank U , I really enjoyed your story :)

 

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 30

LOVED IT

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 30

C'est un bon chapitre et une bonne fiction.

Merci.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

Awww sweet ending. Yea baby!!!

Thx for writing and sharing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) loved this story

Reviewer: sashai1015 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

Sweet story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!! I hope Rose has finally excepted Bella and will not be mean to her any more. 

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 29

I have looked foward to following this story each week!! This has been an amazingly beautifully well written story!!!! Could u do all of us a huge favor Please???? Could u pleade fix the banner on this site so those of reading this story will not have a blank x with no image for the last chapter. Please fix for the final show down and ending of this wonderful story. We would all love u for it if u could juct fix this image on this site Please!!!

Thanks,

smileya987



Author's Response:

We tried to fix it, but it didn't work. I think it's because of the site because it doesn't show any of the banners... Anyway we will retry to fix it, but I wouldn't hold my breath on it working. sorry :( you can go visit our group on facebook to see the banner and the other pictures :D

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

Great story. 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

I love it! They both deserve all this happiness. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 29

wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

Awww sweet wedding. Nice honeymoon surprise

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

thank you for the up date...very good.....well done.the wedding was nice and the honeymoon was amazing.Edward got her good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

sweet good thing Rose made up and she is pregers ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'M GLAD SHE CLEARED WHERE SHE STANDS WITH ROSE. VERY CLEVER FROM EDWARD THE HAWAII FLYERS

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

great chapter!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it :)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

oh my i sure hope rose has learned her lesson

i am sure glad edward and bella are honest with one another and communicate

loved it

Reviewer: anncarol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

Great Story.

I suppose Rose wasn’t going to completely change overnight.

Its sad that she thinks a young girl with no experience of life till she was forcte to marry Edward was/is a whore.

Luv

XOXO

 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 28

Rose needs her ass kick for what she did to Bella and for they way she is talking about her.  It is a good thing Dr. Love came to save her lol

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

I have truely loved reading this story. Thanks for such an amazing and beautifully written story. Keep up the great work. I love following along w the story. Just a note the image for your story is showing a red x can u please fix.

smileya987



Author's Response:

I don't know what the problem is. It worked just fine until yesterday (that I know of)

 

Reviewer: BAGHERRA Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

GENIAL,J'ADORE BELLA PAS TIMIDE ATTEND LA SUITE MERCI

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

Rose got what she deserved. lol!!!!!!! I hate that Bella is upset on her wedding day. We all thought that Rose had changed.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 28

Glad someone put Rose in her place. What a scummy hitch.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 28

ROSE NEEDS TO HURRY AND MAKE AMMENDS WITH A CONSTRUCTION WORKER AND A COWBOY. AND ALSO ALICE SHOULD APOLOGIZE TO BELLA, SHE WAS ALSO DISMISSING BELLA'S OPONION ON THE WEDDING DRESS

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you for the update..........Rose got what she deserved..How did she not know that was Emmett



Author's Response:

Two words for your question...Dumb and drunk :))

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Merci !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella va se faire tatouer !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 17

C'est un bon chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

Edward s'est réveillé ! 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Tanya a fait ça ! quelle salope !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

Edward se rapproche de Bella, c'est mieux.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella a eu un bel anniversaire !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

Première leçon de conduite pour Bella.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

Merci !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Mon Dieu ! quelles nouvelles !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bon chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

Bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup cette fiction !

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ah ils se sont embrassés !!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

J'ai hâte qu'ils discutent tous les deux !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Mais pourquoi est-il si méchant ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella est contente d'avoir l'air plus agé !

Tout ça pour plaire à son mari.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

J'aime bien cette Bella, elle a du caractère.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward et charmant mais il ne veut pas se rapprocher de Bella, je crois qu'elle va tout faire pour qu'il change d'avis.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

J'aime ce chapitre !

Charlie est horrible mais il a quand même fait le bon choix pour sa fille, il doit l'aimer quand même.

Merci.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 27

lol

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

Wow. That was impressive!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

go bella go. ride that man

hot damn you are hawt and i love her putting jasper in his place

love it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 27

LOVE IT!!!!!!! Loved the angry sex!!!! Also love that Bella got Jasper back with what she said. GREAT JOB!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

oh that was hott as fuck!  man I hope she gets pregnant if nothing else just to show him a thing or two... poor jas  bella shut him up on that last note.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

I will be sad when it is over been a great story.  She is ready to have a baby with him??  They are good together 3 hours and 7 min WOW I want one of him lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad Lauren is gone. Parents like hers are what ruins the school systems. Yummy end

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

thank you for the update..I'm so proud od Edward

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 27

WOW OF COURSE IT IS HOT IN HERE! I LOVED THEIR 'ANGRY SEX'

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

good chapter. happy..

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter.   So is Porno Bears something that happened in real life?  



Author's Response:

Actually, yes. The porno bears happened but nobody was high. I was having some dumped on the table in front of me. and I was in the middle of a joke with by friend, when I decided to tell her what I saw. and tell her I did, because the 69'ing and the other pervy stuff were happening right in front of me. (it probably doesn't make much sense right now but it was funny for us and that's why we decided to put it in the story)

 

All that being said, thank you for reading and reviewing our story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 23

Car accidents must me a Masen thing. Charlie is the drunk driver. Bella is his next of kin. Sue is what, girl friend?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 22

I am glad Dr. Goth did not give them trouble.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

so funny.. broken his pp. lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

:-) good direction

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

Tanya was going to hurt Bella. Now Edward will be hurt. I hope Rose is happy with her FRIEND.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am glad he put Tanya and Rose in their places.  Bella's birthday and Rose acts like that. She is really nasty.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

:-)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

well Edward is trying to take care of everyone. Problem is some mistakes need to happen for people to learn. If they won't kill them let them be. You make dumb mistakes you get hurt, a little. That is when you learn.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

ahh they are finally connecting. So this is why Charlie asked Edward to take her. He had raised his siblings.   Charlie what a mistake he is.

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