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Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

My personal bias is against canon Jerkob. To me he is a sociopath. It's all about him . His wants, needs and wishes. He is an abuser in training. I think you captured his essence quite nicely. Thank you for writing

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep

I wondered if Jerkob would make an appearance. Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

Again, wonderful. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless

Wow! Wonderful. thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

Well written but oops...a dream. Thank you for writing

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

Heartbreaking. Never ceases to move me.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

Wow. This is brilliant. Thank you

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad jake is gone, question though: the scene with Victoria, was that real or a dream? 

The whole Jake scene, much more believable then in the book. I gotta say, I don't think this is the last they see of Jake, I think he'll be back. 

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7

Good hope the dog is gone for good

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep

Exciting.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

LOL me too

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless

Good chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

I like it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: katemarlin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

nice story.. looking forward to the next chapter.. i like where this is heading..you have piqued my curiosity

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

Don't be anxious, you have a good story. After having sex those two will not part. So please don't do that. It is time for her to leave her daddy and start her life. Best just do it because staying there with Jake will only add to problems. Tell Charlie you guys have much to discuss and are going on a road trip before going to college. Then you need to talk.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

poor thing she thinks she is nuts. Well who can blame her?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

shower time. if that rat leaves her now..well  you know.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

oh what can you say?  Edward you selfish fool. Carlisle you are the leader that does not lead.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Merci pour ces bons chapitres.



Author's Response:

aelita48,

 

Okay - I give up. ;-) I tried Googling this (as I don't speak French) and I've just gotta ask - what's it mean?

 

Thank you for the review!

~anyanka jenkins~

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

I think the more understanding was always Edward, putting up (in Eclipse) with things he should have not. Here he is coldly angry in a very satisfying way.



Author's Response:

Camilla11,

You know, I do agree with you. Maybe my husband is rubbing off on me. Don't tell him I told anyone - but he watches the movies with me and he'll yell at Jacob, "Ahhh don't put up with that man! C'mon!" But I am in agreement with you Edward was way too understanding in Eclipse. I rather liked that he pulled the whole "Mrs. Cullen" thing at the campsite. Jacob needed to know. Anyways, while I do try to keep my Edward truer to cannon - I for sure felt that after nine months away he wouldn't be in the mood to be overly accomidating. He gave them space, allowed them to talk, but when she said "no" he came barreling in like a Terminator. Haha!

Thank you for the review and hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving!

~anyanka jenkins~

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

WOW! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, SEXY AND ROMANTIC!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

this is such a good story, different twist... and wonderfully complicated, at least from Bellas mind, so it seems



Author's Response:

Twifan1228,

 

Thank you so much for the review! We have to remember that Bella doesn't accept Edward's love (without any doubts that is) until the end of Eclipse. Until then, everything is suspect in her mind - she's not pretty enough, was he off being distracted, why would he choose her over anyone else, etc. etc. While I'm not a fan of that (just take his love already and believe him when he says he loves you girl!) - I do understand the reasoning behind it and the fact that she has to draw these conclusions for herself. With that in mind, she's finding it difficult to believe Edward returned for any reason other than obligation OR that's he's not really there at all and it's just a delusion. See you next week and thank you again! :-)

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

I answered your last message. Just in case u didnt get it i am on ff.net and my pen name is the same

Author's Response:

Ooops! I did get it, but I've been busy. I bet you'll never guess what I've been up to? **pretends to whistle nonchalantly** I'll be in touch today or tomorrow. Very excited! :-)

~anyanka jenkins~

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

Im on ff.net.. i use the same pen name

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep

Im so glad you are.posting again! Id be happy to help as a beta.. granted im new in the game but i can help as much as i can!

Author's Response:

That's awesome! I cannot seem to contact you on the website, are you on Twilighted or FF.net where I could send you a message? If not, would you prefer a FB message or email?

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

AMAZING SIMPLY AWSOME

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

OH MY GOSH BVELLA HE CAME BACK WAKE UP

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

So so sad

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

OMG.  Love it.  Dream or not, It is wonderful!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall

looking forward to more

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

:)



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless

looking forward to more

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless

OMG!!! Edward has to show himself!! 



Author's Response:

This chapter will become important a little later on, so make sure to keep it in mind. I don't want to give too much away! :)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

If only I had such pleasant and realistic dreams! Thank you for sharing. If Edward leaves after making love to a half-sleeping woman, I might just have to kill him myself!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

OMG..........that was ssooooo H o t !!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

Loved it

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While

I'm loving this so far! Does she wake up and flip out? Or.. Will it be Bella's point of view of their tryst? Edward better man up and stay there!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

These lines broke my heart:". I knew this dream was more dangerous than any nightmare could be, I would surely pay for this dream when I awoke. The pain would be powerful, I may not be able to withstand the attack." I've always been an empathetic reader, getting so attatched to the characters that my heart breaks with theirs. New Moon made me cry so much that I even surprised myself! Your writing has done the same.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

Oh, poor Edward! He truly never had a chance, did he? Love.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

Wonderful job describing Bella's feelings.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

Loved the 1st chapter!!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

so I see, Edward is going to keep his stalker, creeper tendencies....  hehehe  

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

I think this will be a good story! I've never been a beta before but if you would like one I will be more than willing to try!!

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything

Loved it



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so glad! I already have several chapters written and will publish another one next week! :)

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