[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 11:44 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
What a good story...I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Well written, well done.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
Thank you getting rid of James! I loved the confrontation with Edward & him. This truly was a perfect ending!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
I'm so glad here was an Edward POV. Also, Edward admitting everything to Carlisle was perfect! I had even wanting E&B to have a bit of a lemon but I'm oh so glad you didn't let that happen!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
Now THIS will be interesting.
Good story. Thanks for writing.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Don't know if you still check your reviews but this is GOOOD. I started reading at work at lunch and I kind of got uncomfortable. A little warm feeling kind started, so I had to stop.
I've had this on my to read list for quite some time. Glad I finally started it. I think it's going to get a little HOTTER soon.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:32 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
That was a beautiful HEA! I love that they decided to have a baby! It really is different when you have a baby with someone you love! Good for Edward becoming a better person too! I really enjoyed your story and your writing. Things flowed so well! Great work!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
I think bringing James back was risky, but turned out great. If it finally got Carlisle's head surgically removed from his ass, then halleliuia!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Kate - there are no words! How can you tell someone you wish they were aborted? Carlisle is torturing himself, and he isn't even sure why! The end of that chapter was heartbreaking!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
Renee had some very valid things to think about. It will be harder to forget than forgive. Sigh!
Date: 03 Dec 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Oh my! What a train wreck!!! They are all wrong here, but who will be the first to forgive?
Date: 03 Dec 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I am shocked he stopped, appalled by Bella's willingness to do that to Carlisle, and furious with Carlisle for doing the same dang thing again. Why does he feel it is his business to make all of the decisions for everyone?!
Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Thank goodness nothing happened! Dr Cullen was simply hottttttt! Holy crap -the mirror!!! Enough said!
Date: 03 Dec 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Please no! I really hope nothing happened!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
If you hate weddings it was nit apparent. Assward really is sure of himself! I am glad Bella was not mute when he declared he would be in her pants before he left! I really thought Edward would follow her outside, but as far as she knows he did not.
Date: 02 Dec 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Well, that was interesting! I'm not sure how to feel about Bella thinking Carlisle smelled like Edward and not the other way around!
Date: 02 Dec 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
Things could get very messy with this bunch! I am with the girls here! It is time for someone to knock assward off his high horse. Unfortunately it is Carlisle's decision to make.
Date: 02 Dec 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
I am not sure if I am ready for a love triangle with father & son. (although it is pretty hot!) Seattle kind of turned a corner, but I wonder if they still are in denial.
Date: 02 Dec 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
I enjoyed the trip through Carlisle's psyche! His history, according to Esme, dictated that he was going to have s hard time with commitment. It only makes sense that he would be having internal debates.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Too funny that Charlie bought their pathetic story! Esme was very open minded, but can she keep this from Charlie? I am super curious what she meant about Carlisle.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
Oops! Did they forget where they were?! I am not sure if it is better for the person to be Esme or Charlie!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Bella has a snarky side! I am betting she just might be a handful for Carlisle!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
I love a naughty Carlisle too! Something about his hot, slightly older, doctor self making moves on 20 something Bella is simply hotttt,
Date: 01 Dec 2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Interesting choice having Esme & Carlisle as siblings! I am glad Charlie gets a hot woman. I get sick of him always being written with Sue! I always feel he is better than that!
Date: 09 Sep 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Love at first sight IS possible!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 11:58 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
This was amazing!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 8:11 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
thanks for the story.. and the HEA. i was a nice little read!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
thanks for the story loved it!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
damn that was HOT!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
complicated.... ed doesn't like the word but that is what it is
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
this is getting complicated
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
damn that was hot panty change please!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
ohhhhh!! rejection..
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
dilf!!! damn bella just go for it.. i really couldn't sleep with someone my dad's age but wtf!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
hope this is going to be good after ed and jas carlisle would be next. he is everyones dilf
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
my first thought is 'this is going to be awkward'... but im keeping an open mind... lol
onto the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 10:37 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
so very awesome also everything from start 2 finish was written & described damn well
Date: 18 Sep 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
so very awesome this here is
Date: 18 Sep 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I loved it..
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:02 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
This was a really great story! I'm definitely going to read it again!
Thanks a lot!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
Thank you for this totally perfect chapter!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
OMG! Thanks for the really amazing chapter!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
my heart is in painfully broken pieces...
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
this chapter was hilarious!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
I love Edward. But I'm remaining at team Carlisle (for this story).
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
It was really hot! Thank you!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
It's really hot!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
thanx for the chapter!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 1:29 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
beautiful *sniffles*
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
ummm... cold shower... STAT
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
teeheehee... sexy... wet... Carlisle... yummy!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
This is the first time I don't think I need Edward in the story...and then there he comes. PLease don't break his heart.
Author's Response:
Does Edward even have a heart to break? I can't give anything away, but I promise Bella doesn't break his heart...romantically speaking
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
Oh Yum!!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
I've been reading on my phone and it won't let me review, but I just want to say that I am loving your story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 6:53 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
THIS STORY WAS SO HOT...I NEVER REALLY THOUGHT OF CARLISE THAT WAY, BUT YOU MADE HIM SOUND SO FREAKIN HOT WITH A HUGE COCK. YOU HAD ME BREATHLESS A FEW TIMES AND WISHING THAT MY HUSBAND WAS NOT AT WORK AT THE TIME. A VERY EXCELLENT STORY!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it...and that your husband apparently benefited from the times he was home LOL
Date: 25 Jun 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
RIGHT AT THIS MOMENT I AM A HUGE CARLISE FAN!!! i AM HAVING TROUBLE TYPING . LOL!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:16 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
I wanted to review this story as I read it, but it was so addictive that I couldn't stop! Wow, congratulations on such a moving and very hot story. I fell in love with this Carlisle.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 2:41 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Absolutly a great story
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:42 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
I am so glad I came across your story. I am not one to like anything that's not E/B but I have to admit I was rooting for Carlisle. I have a friend who I pimped your story too who said " tell me this isn't a C/B fic?" and all I could say was "girl"! So now I'm awaiting her reponse. Last time I checked she told me to leave her alone-she was reading! Lol
angel
Author's Response:
First, thank you for all your reviews! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I know the idea of non canon pairings doesn't always go over all that well with some readers. And thanks for pimping it out ot someone else! I hope she enjoys it just as much
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
At first when James came into the picture I just knew he was up to no good but I have to say it was a good thing. When Carlisle came to her house I was doing the happy dance. Bella didn't have to be the one that put herself out there.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
I am so glad that Esme put her foot down and Edward and Carlilse had the talk....maybe he'll forgive Bella now.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
Gosh I cried while reading this....poor Bella! Renee had some good advise.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
I wanted to slap many faces during this chapter.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I didn't see this chapter coming!
Angel
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Omg that was hot! The mirror thing is a total turn on!
Angel
Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I really think Edward knows about them and he's trying to hurt his dad.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Wow! Emotional chapter. I think Esme is right about the L word.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Oh this chapter had my feelings everywhere.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
edward just pissed me off with how rude he was....the truth was a little shocking though.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
i have never been an fan of stories that Bella hoks up with anyone but Edward but I now have some new fantasies!
Angel
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
I think the shower was hot! Yum
Angel
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Esme really surprised me here.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
I am cracking up! wonder who caught them?
Angel
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
woooo that was hot!
Angel
Date: 29 May 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
Oh how I squealed like a school girl when he put his hand on her knee...loved it!
Angel
Date: 29 May 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Oooooo... I just started and I likes!
Angel
Author's Response:
I hope you continue to like!
Date: 19 May 2010 5:30 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Such a great ending. I love that everyone is happy. I like the thought of Edward and Angela in this story.
Again, what have you done to me woman! I never read and enjoy non-canon. I usually stop reading when I realize what is going on. I kept reading in the hopes that Edward and Bella would end up together and I ended up falling in love with your Carlisle and Bella together. That's quite an accomplishment.
Anyway, that was a great story and I'm telling everyone to read it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It really does mean sooo much when readers tell me that I've changed their views one a non canon pairing. I went into this totally thinking it was be Bella and Edward, but I love where the characters took it. I couldn't have been happier with the ending.
And thanks for pimping it out to everyone!
If you're interested, I am working on something else right now and it should be up in the next month at the latest. It's called Playing With Fire so be sure to keep a look out for it!
P.S. I have every intention of reading and responding to all the reviews you've left, but right now I have a child screaming for me lol. I'll be back to finish later.
Date: 19 May 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
That was great! I'm glad James became the good guy and helped Bella on her road to redemption. Edward was amazing in this chapter. Yay for him being a good son. I knew that picture would be important when I read the photographer taking it I just didn't know how important.
Their reunion was great. I'm so happy they are together. So exited to read the epi next :)
Author's Response:
When I wrote that scene with the picture I knew I wanted to use it somewhere, but didn't know where. And then right there at the end was a great place for it, especially with Edward delivering it.
Date: 19 May 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Kate is a major bitch. OMG she deserves to be alone and miserable.
The end of this chapter had me in tears. Edward broke my heart. I think what got to me the most was him realizing how in his treatment of his father and Bella he was no better than his mother. I could totally see Edward holding back in his relationship with Tanya over all of his daddy issues. This breakthrough could be what it takes for them to have an actual realtionship. I would love an ending with Bella and Carlisle happily married and Edward happy with Tanya. OMG, it's so blasphemous for me to want Edward happy with Tanya. What the hell have you done to me, woman!
Author's Response:
You are the ONLY person who said she wanted Edward with Tanya. Only person. Even knowing that Edward would not end up with Bella readers were begging me to have him with someone other than Tanya or end up alone. Seriously, some wanted him alone rather with Tanya. In the end, he out grew her though and knew he wanted something more than Tanya could give him.
Date: 19 May 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
After hearing what Carlisle told Charlie my heart breaks even more for both him and Bella. I think he would feel a little differently if he knew Edward's intentions from the start, but I don't think he would be any less hurt. The fact that Bella was going to do it even though her head was telling her no.
What a great point for Renee to bring up. I don't think Bella could handle Carlisle looking at her differently thanks to this SNAFU of a mess.
I'm begging for an EPOV. I hope you did it.
Author's Response:
I wanted Renee to have more of a purpose than just the flighty mother. I'm glad you liked her being more to Bella rather than Bella being more to her.
Date: 19 May 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
I think the declarations of love before the fall out was totally necessary. I think Carlisle might have been a bit more cruel and crass if he wasn't still flying high from the declartion and their activities.
You make it even easier for me to like Carlisle and Bella together by Edward being such an ass. I was rather shocked that the stopped before they could go to far. I would love an EPOV to know exactly what was going through his mind during that and after.
Author's Response:
I agree if she had come right out and told him what hapened with Edward he may have focused all on that and pushed the feelings he had for her away. But by having expressed it to her, and she to him, and them acting on that love it helped the situation a bit.
Plus, like I said. If Carlisle came to me and told me he loved me, yeah I wouldn't be thinking spilling the beans right then either
Date: 19 May 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Of course Carlisle would end things for Bella's own good. That was totally a reply of what he did when he lied to Edward about his mother.
I'm surprised, yet I'm not surprised Edward figured it all out. Hell, he probably knew Bella snuck into the room with Carlisle the last night he was in Forks. If he didn't then it wouldn't take a genius to figure it out. All of her little slips during the drunken games were enough for an intelligent person to at least wonder.
I'm a die hard canon-pairing hoor and you have me going against my norm and I'm actually wanting Carlisle and Bella together. That rarely happens.
Author's Response:
I was very angry with Carlisle in this chapter. He wasnt' allowing Bella to make her own decisions and thought he knew what was best for her, and instead of talking to her about it, made the decision for her. Some compared it to the part in New Moon when Edward left Bella. Honestly, I never even thought about that when I wrote this chapter, but I guess it fits
Date: 19 May 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
So, it seems both of the Cullen men have revealed secrets to Bella that they don't give up to anyone. I can see Jasper figuring things out pretty damn quick thanks to Alice's little slips. Edward is still quite the enigma to me.
Date: 19 May 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I knew Bella was going to get into trouble playing I Never or Truth or Dare. I'm at a loss as to what Edward is really after or what he really knows. I haven't figured out if he is truly interested in Bella from what Esme as told him about her or if he just finds Bella a fun challenge right now.
I want to think nothing happened other than kissing between her and Edward but not sure what to expect with you.
Author's Response:
"but not sure what to expect with you" LOL I really love that. I love that people don't know which way things are going to go and if it will end up like they think it should or like they want it to.
Date: 19 May 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Wow. Well, if it's not love Bella has at least opened Carlisle back up to the possiblity of it. I wonder if them starting their relationship as sexual will hurt them. Edward is having to work for any communication he gets from Bella. Will that make whatever connection they end up with stronger? I have a feeling the next week when Carlisle goes to Seattle will be interesting. Especially if Edward is staying in Forks for that time.
Date: 19 May 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Hmm, it seems Edward is getting under Bella's skin. There's nothing funnier than her basking in post-coital bliss and thinking of Edward when she smells him. She's so screwed.
Alice walking in on them was hilarious. I'm so loving her right now :)
Author's Response:
I had a love/hate relationship with Alice while writing. She's annoying at times, but loves Bella and wants nothing but the best for her.
Date: 19 May 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
I'm absolutely loving Assward. He is total win!
Wow, I wasn't expecting that secret. Will learning this secret make Bella look at Edward differently and maybe not be so bitchy to him?
Obviously we aren't done with dinner. Will there be a battle going on under the table? I can totally see Carlisle and Edward both trying to grope Bella. That would be too funny.
Seeing that Carlisle gave up his happiness to keep Edward from feeling the hurt of his mother abandoning him would he do the same and give up Bella if he thought Edward loved her?
Author's Response:
I was terrified to write Edward! I'm so glad he was well recieved.
Date: 19 May 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
LOL, I love that Charlie now suspects something is up. Yes, Carlisle you should be afriad of Charlie with a gun. You had me laughing so hard at so many different things in this chapter. My hubby thought I'd finally cracked.
OMG, Bella seemed awfully giddy when she saw Edward. I have a feeling the introduction of Edward just turned her already crazy sex life upside down. Let the fun begin :)
Date: 19 May 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
Oh my damn! Seems like Bella has gotten to Dr. McHottie. If this turns out with B&E I can see Bella at least being good for Carlisle and opening him up to the possiblity of a realtionship with someone else.
Date: 18 May 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Well, hell, I totally called that one wrong. I fully expected an outraged Charlie. Luckily Bella's non-panty clad rear wasn't on display for him and Esme.
See, now that's the problem with no strings sex, feelings always get involved and strings automatically appear. I can't wait for Edward to show up and complicate things :)
Author's Response:
LOL I hadn't even thought about the no panty thing with Charlie and Esme walking in on them!
Date: 18 May 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
Holy Hell! Freaking busted! I'm thinking Esme caught them because if Charlie did I have a feeling it would've been a lot more explosive.
Date: 18 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
I should've known Carlisle would show up at the club. Lord knows neither one of them would be getting any action in Charlie's house. Dr McHottie definitely has some good moves. That was hot and worth the short 4 chapter wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad the lemons were citrusy enought for ya!
Date: 18 May 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Damn! So, Carlisle never married. I'm interested to know his history now.
That was so cruel Carlisle. You got her all hot and horny and tell her no. Glad Bella got the last word.
Date: 18 May 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
I love that Alice is calling Bella out on all her BS. Arent' best friends awesome?! Uh oh, Carlisle's getting touchy-feely under the table. Bella, that a green light to sexy times with future step uncle Dr McHottie :)
Date: 18 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I like that Charlie is marrying Esme and Carlisle is her brother. Makes me feel a bit less squicky about Bella and Carlisle. I already like this fiesty Bella.
Date: 15 May 2010 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
what a lovely epilogue. and what a lovely name for the baby.
Date: 15 May 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
Great story - I thoroughly enjoyed it. thanks for sharing :D
Date: 13 May 2010 9:15 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Great job! I loved the story.