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Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Magnifique!

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your writing is so great! What an intuitive take on Elena.  Thanks for keeping me reading!



Author's Response:

Not at all! Thank you for taking the trouble to read. ;)

Reviewer: Fefe Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I Love love love I cannot stand Elena and you did a great job of capturing her manipulative motives. Please keep the stories coming.



Author's Response:

I was going to write some of the relationship between Elena and Christian from the start but that is very tricky without sounding like I'm condoning what she did. But yes, more stories on their way!

Reviewer: pinkie1013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy elenas point of view.

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

nicely done! I'd be interested in seeing your take on the some of the other scene's where she's involved - the dinner where their old relationship is discovered by Grace or the conversation when Christian gets drunk after finding out about the baby. Great scene though :)



Author's Response:

Oh yes, gotta write those scenes!

Reviewer: E-Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really good! I'm a big fan of your other fanfic stories, esp. Taylor's. I liked how their dinner byplay really illustrates the diff between his relationship with Elena vs Ana. I hope this isn't a one shot--I'd love to read more!



Author's Response:

Sorry, goodheart, it is a one-shot, but I'll definitely be writing more about the evil Mrs Robinson.

Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a great story! I can't stand that evil bitch, but it was fun to read your version of how their dinner went!!!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

You captured the manipulative evil of the Mrs. Lincoln in my mind.  Based on her showdown with Ana both at the fundraiser and Christian's birthday, I felt she underestimated Ana and was trying to push her away.  I'm sorry I keep repeating myself but I really HATE this woman.  I hope that Mrs. Gray destroys her socially.  As a mother I know just sending her away would not be enough.  She wouldn't press charges because of the publicity and Christian is now of age.  That would not mean I would let it go...just saying.  Something else I never understood.  How did she get Ana's email address?  I've read the story twice and it was never explained.

Loved this!



Author's Response:

I'm sure Grace cutting Elena socially would have an effect but not as much as we might hope. Elena is a successful businesswoman but I can't help thinking that her prediliction for young men will end up catching her out at some point. There's a 3 year cut off date for the statue of limitations on this but because of the extreme nature of her relationship with Christian, I think the law might work differently. But by this point, Christian would be the bigger loser. Wouldn't you just want to go and slash her tyres?!

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

You bar none are the best ff writer out there! Every story you write is AMAZING!

Author's Response:

Crikey! And thanks a lot! PS Wow!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh that was very good.....Makes you hate that vile woman even more....

Reviewer: lisalilac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the story!

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