Date: 20 Jul 2017 5:24 PM Title: Something More
II really enjoyed this story. The only 'complaint' I have is that I need/want to to be expanded. Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful story.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:44 PM Title: Something More
This was fucking fantastic...wishing and hoping for more, please!
Nati
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Something More
Loved it and would enjoy reading more.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:05 PM Title: Something More
Please continue the story, it could be amazing and i would love to read about how esme deals with alice and rosaile
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:45 PM Title: Something More
Why were dad and granddad keeping her a secret? He could have made his move already. I guess they have to put business first and their son's love life second. Hm, such delicious potential I see in this story. Would love to read Esme's smack down on her Daughter-in Laws.
Wondering how Carlisle will track down Bella?
I know your a busy mom, just want you to know how much I enjoy your gift of writing. Think you for sending a ray of sunshine into an otherwise quite day for me.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:14 AM Title: Something More
Excellent as always bb any chance you might be continuing this?
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Something More
Is there any chnace of you continuing this story?
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Something More
I loved this one-shot. I could be thebegining of a lovely story.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:53 PM Title: Something More
I know this is a one-shot and I enjoyed reading it, but it one that I think would make an awesome full length story. :D
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:48 PM Title: Something More
Loved this it would make a good expanded story
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Something More
This is going so well, I would love for you make more than a one shot for this contest.
Please give us more.
Hopefully waiting for more.