[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2019 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hope it’s not whitewashed liked the ffn version
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2019 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hope it’s not whitewashed liked the ffn version
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 41
5 years later and this is still a great story. Edwards failure and Bella's acceptance was very well written. Thank you for sharing this story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 41
awesome story ;) i loved the extras ;D
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 41
ROFL That was hilarious.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:46 PM Title: Outtake II
woo hoo Get her E. you get a happy lemon dance for that one
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:43 PM Title: Outtake I
Glad she is getting therapy for herself
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:40 PM Title: Fandom Against Juvenile Diabetes outtakes
Cool seeing E's pov for somethings
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue II
Wonderful ending. Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue I
Great follow up. Glad E can walk again and everyone seems to be getting thier HEA
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 34
oh wow. Poor E. Rose is probably going to kick herself over the kid comments in that previous chapter. Glad E is alive though
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow you keep surprising me with the twists and turns. Poor E.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
oh wow I missed that even with the clues you dropped about Riley. Ack
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 31
Those two really need communication lessons.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
Glad Ang called. I hope She's safe somewhere. Yey for Rose and baby
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
Yummy chapter. Nice present./
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad she got to say some things to Renee. yey party
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad the Rose and Em thing went well. LOL for Doctor DILF
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ugh Riley just had to do that huh? Ah well. Glad Rose is trying
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 23 EPOV The Incident
Ugh what a crappy shower
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad the therapy with oliver is going well. Yea the Ben thing is worrying me too.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
hmmm forgot about Ben being friends with Eric. Ugh Skankya again
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow Charlie got in a few punches huh? Eventually I think they are going to have to tell the families the real story. Sweet date. Glad Riley was able to help B
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
hmm Is Ben really changing Ang or is someone blackmailing her with something. Glad the therapy is going well. Charilie is too funny
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad Alice is being supportive
Date: 28 Feb 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
glad she agreed to go to therapy. I think they need it.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh wow. I really want Irina and Skankya to die now. oh My
Date: 27 Feb 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh wow. Poor E. and yes male rape happens more often than people realize. Its just not reported. Wonder if Skankya knows? ah well. Evelyn is too cute.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank goodness for Riley. You had me worried with him for a minute. Uh oh what is Angela hiding? ya scaring me.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
aww for interfering Alice. Ugh for being sick. oh no for Tyler. Def need to call the FBI or something.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ugh for Lauren being Kate's kid. That sucks. Nepotism is really hurtful often. ROFL for Diego and jealous E
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Guess Kate doesnt see whats up with Lauren huh? wonder how long till she notices. Yey for baby. Glad he's in counselling.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
woo hoo for new baby cullen. Glad B got the job. ROFL about the porn and Esme.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
wow Maybe call the FBI instead of local cops? Rose is a real piece of work. Such a hypocrite.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm Why do I have the feeling that Aro and Skankya and her Daddy have gotten E into some big crap?
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad B got to put that Skank in her place. What is Carlisle hiding? Cancer? Ya killin me. Wahta is going on?
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
hmmm now Em is turning on E too? What in the world?
Ugh Skankya and eric huh.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm now what was Carlisle alluding too I wonder?
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yea Rose is a bit of a hypocrite. LOL for Felix.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Alice is really between a rock and a hard place. B really thought part of that through huh? I think they need some kind of counselling.
Did Aro ever get in trouble for his part in the quid pro quo sexual harrassment stuff?
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I had a feeling that drunk Bella was going to do something stupid. Think they def need counselling, both together and alone.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Go Bad Ass Bella!!! Love her putting the dog in his place. Esme is so cool
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm sounds like Aro needed to be sued for threatening E. Sigh. Ugh Jake is a goober.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm Sounds like Aro is trying to hide something. Jake is a goober. Guess he didnt the casual, FWB memo. LOL
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh Sounds like E is a real jerk. Sounds like he admitted it so not sure how its going to work into a mistake or misunderstanding. Guess we'll see.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 41
That was amazing.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 1:59 AM Title: Outtake II
Wow! What a homecoming.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 12:47 AM Title: Outtake I
It's so good to see 'real' characters. It's not all perfect.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 11:56 PM Title: Fandom Against Juvenile Diabetes outtakes
Emmett is crazy. I love it.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue II
That was such a amazing story. Just what was needed when your snowed in.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue I
No jumping. Just glad they are together and happy.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 34
And even if he never walls again that doesn't mean he won't be able to have sex or father a child.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 32
Well I'm really sad that I got that one right. Poor Edward all this time his worse fear has been coming true.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 31
They really need to stop all that. But I'm glad at least one of them smartened up.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
God you have so many possibilities there. I'm not sure the she is Tanya though. Irena is still out there.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow! They took not just one major step but they put everything on the line.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
What a amazing chapter. So much was revealed and settled.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
It is amazing that Rosalie and Edward will be civil for Bella and Emmett.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
God that was hot and they didn't even have sex again.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 23 EPOV The Incident
Edward asking Charlie permission to marry Bella was amazing. Really funny.
Mcharlie kicking Edwards ass not so much.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
This chapter was great. But your comment at the end was even better.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Why does Tanya not feel right? Is she really that smart.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
You know I don't think Riley is really who he says he is. I think it's James.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow. I can't wait to see Charlie in action.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella took it very well considering. I'm glad she made it known that she wasn't mad at him for what happened. Just that she was mad he lied.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Guys have so much pride that over 90% goes unreported and its almost always harder for a man to prove rape then it is a women.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I know that it is a real problem, it's just never talked about. I'm glad you are shedding just a little light on such a horrible problem.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
God I hope Ben isn't involved with James or Edward's life in Chicago somehow. You introduced Riley and that is scary. Then Tyler dies. I mean was it really suicide? He didn't seem to have a drug problem. And that is the easiest way to murder someone and get away with it. And from what I gather James is good.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh god. Edward is not going to forgive himself for this, hopefully Bella will be able to help him get over this.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad that Bella is doing what is best for her.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love how Bella got thru her first day.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's so good that they are starting over slowly. I think this is going to help them both truly heal.
And yeah another baby.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
It's sort of sad that Bella had to lose her friendship over this. But at least it's happening now.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella is very strong and truthfully I don't blame her for the choice she made. Really there was no choice at all.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so glad Bella confronted him. I'm glad she kicked Tanya's ass, so to speak. Now she has to drag the truth out of Edward. I think he got evolved with the mob somehow. I think Tanya's dad was mob and it followed him to Chicago one if the biggest mob cities.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh shit. Bella beating Tanya's ass is just what Bella needs to feel better. I hope she goes for it.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
There are so many possibilities it makes me glad I don't have to wait.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope Bella doesn't let the power go to her head to much. I hope she doesn't abuse the power Edward I trusted in her.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Alright I don't really hate her. And truthfully making him work for it is the right things to do and I'm glad that she is thinking if herself first here while going for what she really wants.
And I wonder if Edward is Eric's silent partner.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hate Bella for that. It was almost just as bad as what Edward did. Bella knew he still loves her and she used him anyway.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad that she is able to remember those times now. Because even if she never gets back with Edward. (Which I'm really hoping she does.) at least she will be able to look back with happiness and not just grief. Esme really is brilliant.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh it is sort of sad seei g them together. It's plain to see they still love each other.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad Bella is in a good place even if she doesn't have the best taste in men.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
It makes me sad but proud at the way Bella handled herself. Yeah maybe the sexy outfit was a little much but she stood up for herself and wouldn't take any excuses. But I'm really glad Edward didn't deny it. So to me that means he's not a complete waste of space.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 41
Awesome story!!! Not at all the turns I expected it to take!! Great job.
Keep up the great work!!
:)
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
Thanks! I really enjoyed this story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:02 PM Title: Outtake II
I'm of to have a smoke and then a cold shower ;
That was hot!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 1:29 PM Title: Outtake I
Thanks! I love outtakes ;)
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Fandom Against Juvenile Diabetes outtakes
I love his POV ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue II
Thanks! I love the kids names ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue II
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great story. The agony is killing me though.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue II
It was a great story. I'm glad I took the time to read it.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue I
Thanks awesome chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue I
I just found this story yesterday and couldn't stop reading it. I was even reading it on my phone while I was at the store. I cried reading it the last few chapter. It was a wonderfully written story. I can't wait to read the next part.
-Lisa
Author's Response:
Thank you Lisa! I hope you weren't in the store when you cried. That would have been awkward (for others more so than yourself.) I'm glad you thinks so and I can't thank you enough for your lovely review <3
Date: 12 Aug 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue I
...i....i love you. like...i seriously love you and this story, but mainly you.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh! Thank you <3 I'm really glad you love it (and me) XOXOX
Date: 12 Aug 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue I
That's beautiful! A baby girl ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks :) XOXO
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Solo good
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Thank you
Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
Ok, there'e some happy fo rme ;)