Date: 17 May 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue
I had never read a drabble before...How cute and what fun for a quick read. Thanks - Xanath
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue
awwww!!!! *sniffs* amazing ride!
Author's Response:
I aweed loudly after writing this! And might have had a little tear... Poor Garrett wasnt in the final. for more reasons than just one. If I ever do outakes, Ill show Garrett, what men do in Town of Man to get off... haha. Thanks for reviewing and being an epic host of Drabble Wars this goes for Jess ALSO! MWAUH!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 60
Yay!!!! Great job, Mona.... especially on such short notice!
xoxo
texasbella
Author's Response:
Sometimes I can think up some awesome shit on short notices! And truthfully its usually what I write the best. AND x3 lol, If you notice I've gotten better with each drabble.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 59
wait... is rose good or bad... she's good right? she's helping bella...
Author's Response:
She is good, an organic body compliments of eddie boy!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 58
do it bella.. do ittttttt!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 54
so this is a good nurse?
Author's Response:
SO many people asked about the NURSES, they are twins with different eye color, it was supposed to be a clue for bella in her drug induced shit to say hey I have kids and their twins... omg i have twins. I suppose I didnt think it out enough!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 53
killing me here mona!
Author's Response:
I love killing people apparently with my epic weird writing...
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 52
ahh fuck a bigger duck!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 51
there's the girl they needed.... heave ho to the ho!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 49
omg!! go jasper, go jasper!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 48
i want them together!!! waaaaaaaaa!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 47
hey! It's my birthday! (in the story)
Author's Response:
Happy birthday! *giggle*
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 46
hmm, another plot twist...
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 44
*starts plotting how to get Renee to Vegas to play some slots* hehe
Author's Response:
Oh, I so am okay with this!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 43
awww, damn hormones!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 42
well fuck a duck!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
the wonders of alternate universe science!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
I just love Jasper...
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 37
splish splash time? and perhaps a head out of his ass time...
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 36
all together now EYE ROLL
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
shush away dear heart
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 33
and why is that strange creepy looking dude?
Author's Response:
Riight, seriously I was just staring at the doc like why would she listen to you?
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
uh oh, did Angie not get hers?
Author's Response:
Oh she got hers, only she is a cry baby... thinking she done did wrong by letting it happen. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
happy sigh
Author's Response:
Right, he is the kind of man i'd like to borrow occasionally!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
giddy up!
Author's Response:
Ride that boy cowgirl! Thanks for reviewing babes!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
hahahaha... pure brilliance at the end!
Author's Response:
haha... who isnt a pile of mush after the big 'O' I sure am... then I get hyper haha. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
yeah, decided not to wait, I'll just have both accounts up and hop over here as needed ;)
Author's Response:
I jumped over too and even sent you a long review reply. MWAUH! thanks for reviewing and sticking with me through my rollercoaster ride.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue
What a great story. I like that it was different. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks. I have been coined the 'writer of weird' I shall live up to it... Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue
This was a very interesting story a little crazy but good none the less. Thanks for taking the time to share this with us. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review and saying such kind words!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 42
Whose the snitch?
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
I have noticed the dates are going backwards, im sure there is a reason behind it. but i want to know why this is?
Author's Response:
I thought I only had one date wrong, I am sorry for the error but it is supposed to go forward.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is becoming very interesting. I have so so so many questions but I will just read on and see if they are answered.
Author's Response:
If any aren't answered I'd be happy to set anything you need striaght or even have a longer indepth conversation about it. I am on Twitter Mona_Rider and on FB as www.facebook.com/MoneRiderFF
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very promising, and i cant wait to see what you have in store for this story.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue
This. is beautiful! I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing... and I can't believe anyone loved it but YAY!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Epilogue
great ending!! Loved this little story! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me and reviewing!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 60
yay for Rose! :)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 59
so i wonder how Rose came back??
Author's Response:
Edward made her an Organic body... Sorry I didnt have enough time to add all the dynamic of answers but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 58
yes shoot her! :) LOL
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 57
well that is interesting.... they keep sedating her will have had to have long term effects!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 56
well at least Jasper is on his way
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 53
well that is not good.... I am sure Renee came to take the babies... and is prob going to tell everyone that Bella is dead and then raise the kids herself :(
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 51
yay for babies :)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 50
oh jeez! so if my calculations are right she is still about a month away from giving birth, (if she goes on time) Can't wait to read more tomorrow!
-Kate
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 49
twins huh?? hopefully one of them is a girl, and that Jasper is sincere :)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 48
huh... disconnected
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 47
hmm... ok wonder why she is in hiding?
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 46
huh... so victoria got sterilized?
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 45
hmm .. wonder what that is all about?
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 44
hmm.. well thank god for Zafrina... she is helpful being there all the time
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 43
aww :) at least she gets to still see him :)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
well at least they had some time together... hopefully it is a girl and they can get the ball rolling on their plan :)
Author's Response:
Exactly! thanks for reviewing...
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 41
ok so she is prego.... sept 30
Author's Response:
Yes! Thanks for reviewing...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 40
so they stay there until they are prego??
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 39
lol sideways huh?
Author's Response:
I think they were going at it like rabbits too haha... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 38
good job! LOL :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 37
Jasper... start with "Im sorry" lol
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 36
oh yeah he will have to do alot to make up for that.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
jealousy...ah yes, well will they get in trouble??
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 32
well that is interesing... so if she has a boy then she can't do anything yet? hmm...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow this is getting good! I cannot wait to see more jealous and possessive jasper. Please update soon
Author's Response:
I am, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
wonder what is up with her... probably didn't know what was gonna happen when she got there ... see what happens when you don't educate your kids? they freak out! LOL
Author's Response:
Angela... is a preachers kid! She thinks she was to go get sperm injected inside and go home. not have sex and be defiled. Good thing for Bella she had Rosalie! Thanks for reviewing...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 30
shower time :)
Author's Response:
Shooooower time.. *giggle.* thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
yeah not likely that he will forget LOL :)
Author's Response:
Riiight, but a girl can wish... hope... especially Bella. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
hallelujah indeed!
Author's Response:
haha I loved that part... *grins.* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
of course he does... LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 25
oh :) See ya tomorrow!(even if you are a little mean for leaving us there!)
Author's Response:
You will get more tomorrow than the FF following... they don't get the sex scenes! Thanks for reviewing... and tomorrow is only two hours away. I may slip another in. MWAUH!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
hmm so are Zafrina and Garrett still there?? lol
Author's Response:
Outside of the cottage... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
we went back a day??
Author's Response:
Maybe Mona needs to watch the dates and certain details better... Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
:) excited for the next few tonite
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and I tried to get em all in. :D
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
so romantic! LOL :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
:) we will get to the 25th or chapter 25?
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
:) i am just sitting here waiting for new updates to pop in my inbox! :) LOL
Author's Response:
Your loving it... that makes me so happy! *grin* Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
hmm... :) I vote for a few more :) LOL
-Kate
Author's Response:
I voted for a few more too! WE WON! haha Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
hmm... wonder who it is?? :)
Author's Response:
hmmm... wonder. *winks* Thanks for reviewing babes!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh! answers only lead to more questions! :)
Author's Response:
Riiight... if only I could just blurt them all out! *wink* Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is getting good I cannot wait for more.
Author's Response:
I am so excited to give more... Thanks for reviewing..
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
well Renee is just a jealous little..... ugh... ok Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Yes she is.. *Hint* she is power hungry also. Thanks for reviewing...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
huh ... well that was interesting.... :)
Author's Response:
I think it gets more interesting and better as the chapters go... to be atleast. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
well won't that be cozy with her guard there the whole time! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Riiight, I'd be all creeped! But thats me.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh can't wait to read the rest of this little video of Dr Edward cullen! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
I just love him in this... He is a sort of background character but he does put alot into the story. *hint for you* thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Very ready :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviewing...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
can't wait to see what happens when she gets there! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing... I will keep updating as I can! :D
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella :( maybe Renee will come around before she leaves.
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing... *wink*