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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would love to see this completed.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

Could u Please, please update this story at TWCS!!!! It's been over 3 weeks since u updated at FF.net but yet have not updated this story here at TWCS yet!!! PLEASE UPDATE THIS TRUELY UNIQUELY AWE INSPIRING & CAPTIVATING STORY AT TWCS PLEASE A.S.A.P.!!!

Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait for the update

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

I absolutly love, love this truely inspiring & absolutly beautifully well written story!!!!!!! Could u please, please UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is truely a captivating & intriging story!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

I have truely absolutly loved reading this story. What I love most about this story is that this story line is so uniquily different from so many others out there. Pleasssssssssssssssse update this amazing story more often!!!!!!!! I am always intriguied & captivated every time a new chatpter is posted. I most definatly give this story a 10 out of a 10 star rating!!!!

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love this and cant wait to read more, I hope you will update this again soon.

Reviewer: keemastcloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm sorry that happened to you.. Believe me when I say I know how u feel. I hope the nail the bastards to the wall by their junk... But wonderful chapter as always.. I will be waiting on pins & needles for the next!!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow!!! This is truely such a beautifully captivating story. This is an amazingly well written story. I definatly am looking forward to future updates please update frequently. I will be looking forward to seeing further development of this intriging story. I am definatly rating this story as a #10 out of #10. This truely is such a unique story line & is completly different from so many ot there. Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication to this story!!!

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

This story is incredibly interesting. Waiting for the next update will be a torture.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

DAMN BELLA IS FRIGGIN AWESOME WHEN SHES PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SHE SAVED ROSALIE YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

EEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP HES COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Okkervil Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oooooo!! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow!I can't wait to see what special power Bella has!

Reviewer: CarlaIsabel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

aleluia she is remebering cant wait to see what else will she remember and what will happen when she is edward again. please update soon

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love it. Looking forward to the rest of the story very much

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait for more please update ASAFP.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, goodness! I wonder if it is a good thing for Bella to remember this right now. She is already pretty upset over being pregnant.

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

i really like this

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

I want to thank you for updated and I confess I was feeling the loss of its history which is very good.

She finally saw the glamor alert, even though she has a Gran looking for her. If I understand right they just want the baby? Bella is not important? Another thing, I see these four with Bella, will appear when the prince's father baby?

Flower I hope the next update is soon please.


Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story! I am so glad that Bella is reading the book on fairies. Wow! I hope that Bella picks up some other cool tips to protect herself from the fairies! I wonder what she will think when she sees Edward!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Props to B for keeping her cool when she saw everyone's forms for the first time! I would have given myself away in .2 seconds!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just saw a performance of Midsummer for the first time last week, so this story is fortuitously timed! I like your spacing; just disjointed enough to jar, but not too new wave-y.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

YAY SO HAPPY FOR THE NEW CHAPTER STILL WAITING FOR EDWARD TO SHOW UP WHICH I HOPE IS SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SummerMarine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hi i really like this story and i hope you continue to update:)

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think she really is pregnant right now? I hope to read how they will tell, or remind her that she lost her virginity, they are "fairies" that she's pregnant with Prince "fairy" and wait for the attack it lol. I have one, hahar03;r03;.

Eager for more, I'm dying here lol

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

This queen is horrible and abhor any evil act it. But this show was horrifying, worthy of a true horror story kkkkk, I had nausea in reading, I do not know how I managed to read everything. I hope that this queen also deposed from the throne to die with their wickedness along with their pupils equally perverse.


Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well, the seed took! Edward should be returning soon!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Queen Elizabeth is truly scary! I hope that she doesn't find out about Bella!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, loved your story. It is completely different from the usual stories known. And this difference makes it comfortable. Both in content and in presentation. Holds the attention and mystery leaves us curious for more.

I found his explanation of the fairies important to understand the story and its unfolding. I just thought a little strange Prince Unseelie take the virginity of the virgin human Bella. Hinted that he forced her that was kind of charmed by Alice (Mab), taking her virginity. The "fairy" Edward, only took advantage of the little virgin lol.

Jokes aside, here's a great story, congratulations. I've put in favorites and will happily follow. XOXO

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am in love with this story! I am adding it to my favorites and I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

So interesting. A refreshing new view of our beloved Edvard and co. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh loooooooooooooooooooooved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow super happy that you updated and good chapter want to know more about what's happening with Bella and if she's pregnant and also want to see Edward around her!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: BertieBott Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm very intrigued with this story so far. I love the fey myths and can't wait to see how you intwine them with Twilight...

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