Date: 31 Mar 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
i luv it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reaing.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 12:24 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story! I know it might have been weird for some people, because Edward and Bella were raised as siblings, and in all honesty if it wasn't "Edward and Bella" I might have been a little put-off myself. But this is fanfiction and as long as E&B got their HEA I am happy too!
I think you did a great job of describing their relationship, the bond they shared that wasn't really that of siblings, and the maturity that they exercised in letting their feelings grow, even thought they may have felt a lot of guilt and shame. The story overall was a postitive one and just goes to show that the heart wants what the heart wants and you can't help who you fall in love with.
Renee was really awful to her family and I'm glad she ended up alone - she deserves it for abandoning her family that way.
Thanks for sharing the story - look forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. When I wrote this it was with that in mind. Thinking that no one would read this type of love story if it wasn't B&E. I wanted to see if people would follow these two anywhere. LOL.
I really appreciate you reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:12 PM Title: Epilogue
great story
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate it
Date: 28 Oct 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
YAY CHARLIE
Date: 28 Oct 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
POOR KIDS, IS CARLIESLE WITH ESME? IS HE EDWARDS DAD?
Date: 28 Oct 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
I GUESS THE SUBJECT MUGHT BE UNCOMFORTABLE FOR SOME BUT THERE IS REALLY NOT ANYTHING INCESTUOUS HAPPENING SO THIS STORY DESERVES MORE REVIEWS
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 27 Oct 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
do they know he is adopted?
Author's Response:
Edward and Bella do not know he is adopted at first, no.
Thanks for checking out another of my stories.
Date: 03 Oct 2011 12:07 AM Title: Epilogue
Amazing story. The epilogue was simple but perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm so gald you enjoyed.
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:38 AM Title: Epilogue
loved this story! glad edward and bella got the hea!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:32 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow, I really Liked this story, Great Job :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry I missed seeing this review before.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:30 PM Title: Epilogue
wow, loved your story from chpt 1 even thru REnees admission. Loved that ending !!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:29 AM Title: Epilogue
oh wow.. this story was absolutely amazing..
5 coffee's out of 5 :P
xx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:19 PM Title: Epilogue
With the warning at the beginning, I admit I started this story one eye closed and a semi icky look on my face. By the end of the 2nd chapter, I was leaning into the monitor itching to get to the next page!
This is a truly exquisite piece of work. I love the looks back they each take and how they seem to be talking straight to me while still telling the story in an entertaining way. Edward cracks me up with his "side notes."
You took a fantastic plot twist, boxed it up with honest coming of age feelings, then wrapped it with an endearing dialog bow. So well done! Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful tale with us all.
whyuh
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a wonderful review. I hope that you will check out some of my other fics as well and find them to your liking.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:43 PM Title: Epilogue
Great ending! I loved this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I knew it!!! This is gonna get good!!
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
OOOHHH!! Am I quick to assume that Carlisle could be his long lost father? I'm loving this story and should really be doing things around my house right now but can't tear myself away from this story!! I guess I'll have to just keep reading to find out!
Author's Response:
Yes, good catch! Thanks for the review.
Date: 21 May 2010 3:38 PM Title: Epilogue
VERY GOOD I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed.
Date: 01 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
That is the funniest freakin sex talk I've ever heard/read what ever. LOL
Author's Response:
Ha ha, thanks. Glad you are enjoying.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm only on the first chapter and I'm already in love. This is gonna be hard huh?
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yes it will be a bit hard for our couple.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:45 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow!! That was an amazing story!! I loved it!! Thanks for sharing such a great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed. I hope you will check out some of my other writing as well.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:31 AM Title: Epilogue
thank you for writing!
your story was very pleasant to read and very emotionally involved
sorry for my English I am French.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:04 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow. What a beautiful tale.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I hope you will check out some of my other stories as well.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
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Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 3:37 AM Title: Epilogue
I liked this but i kind of wish we could hear more about edward and bella
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:40 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank God I finally found the story whole....PERFECT.
P.S. I loved more the fact that Charlie after Renee turned gay and fell in love with Phil. priceless.
I loved your story...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, it's Belinda (may have been using the pen name Lou B J or something at the time) who did the banner you're using! Do you know to make it bigger you just download it into My Pic after making an account there, grab the number/code thing from the click on the green little tree under the box that you write your summary in, and paste the code in the pop up box. It took me reading about it in the Twilighted Forums to understand it for my own fics.
Hope your story does well here too. :)
Author's Response:
I use dropbox to store my pics, for some reason, this one always comes through small.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:27 AM Title: Prologue
I have a feeling i read this elsewhere...
Author's Response:
LOl. yes, it is on FF, but I am moving shop as they say. Just in case.