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Reviewer: wiltshireglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening

Pure white virginal room...hot as hell!
I hope he's kind to her when she wakes up.

Reviewer: paola2208 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening

Hot, Hot !! Reading this chapter at work was not a good idea...

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:37 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

Ungh, I'm curious how far the delicious Dr. Cullen will take their first scene.
Bella appears to be well read on the potential outcomes of her desires to please Sir, yet, I wonder will his lust for her young body push her too far this first time?
Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

Wow, that was intense. Our little Bella just became Dr. Cullen's kitten and he doesn't even realize it yet.
I can't even image what their first full body congress will be like if this small amount of contact can affect each of them so forcefully.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Always Be Prepared

She may fantisize about a man with that much intensity but I'll bet she will be shaking in her shoes if she gets to see it in action.
Why would Dr. Cullen refuse the chance to train his perfect submissive. Unless he prefers an already experienced sub.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Prom Night

Glad I found this perfect piece representing a May - December romance with a delightful twist of dominance.
Really like the olderward/youngerella!

This has hottness potential written in every line.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

Please update soon =)

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

What has she gotten herself into indeed!! Oh Bella, you are entering the world of the big boys now. I hope she's ready!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:00 AM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

Well, she just got a tiny taste of the reality. Is she ready to move forward?

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:34 AM Title: Always Be Prepared

Well, Bella is definately doing everything she can to get what she wants.  Is she truly prepared for the reality? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:17 AM Title: Prom Night

I love this!!! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

Grrr!! Cockblocked.

I've never been a Jake fan, at all, but I love him in this story.  Being the gay best friend suits him so much, hahahahaha!!

As much as Bella blushes she squashes her shyness and embarrassment well to tell Dr C what she's been imagining. *fans self*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:24 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

Holy fuck!!!

I should imagine Dr C's thinking all sorts of things from the law suit he could face to downright uncontrollable lust, lol.  Is Bella too naive?  Knowing what we know I think he would be underestimating her if he thought that she was more than just a little naive.  I do think she's a little naive, he's already said he can't give her hearts and flowers, Bella's ignoring that side of herself in order to get what she wants but Dr C knows that there will come a point that she will begin to want that side too.  She's already put her trust in Dr C and from his point of view he can completely mold her into what he wants her to be.

Oooh decisions, decisions.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:09 PM Title: Always Be Prepared

Lol, I'm going with obsessed with a dash of crazy, in fact Bella'a obsession knows no bounds.  I still can't wait to see what she has planned.  If it was me I'd die a thousand deaths if Dr C told me eff off and grow up but I'd probably throw up on him first just to make my humiliation complete, hahahaha!

I wonder if he'll be pleased with all her prep, or whether he would have preferred to 'school' her himself?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:56 AM Title: Prom Night

I love this already.   I can't wait to find out how Bella intends to put herself 'out there'.  I'm not sure I could be that brave or brazen but if you know what you want you should go out and grab it, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: leesmee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:47 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

Love this story ..looking forward to more

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

Real good

Reviewer: sslyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:23 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

oh holy hell is it hot in here?. . .  *must go find find my husband* 

Reviewer: sslyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:52 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

Holy shit. That was hot.

Reviewer: sslyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:38 PM Title: Always Be Prepared

Bella's fantasy was hot! Good for her for going after what she wants. Can't wait to see how Dr. Cullen will react.

Reviewer: sslyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:21 PM Title: Prom Night

wow, one chapter in and its already hot in here.  Can't wait to read more.  Your stories never fail to make me smile.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. Also waiting for AToH. Love that one.

Reviewer: reachrathi1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:32 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

i came to this site thinking u have updated the next chapter. but i read this same chapter coz its worth reading againg. wil b waiting for ur next update. pls make it soon. and wats with this bad news stating that its gona be only 7 ot 8 chapters?

hummm....wateve i came from fanfiction. so i dont know wat to say to u....

 

u r a very brilliant writer. thats for sure.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

I love these two! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: fanficgirl8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:20 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

so fucking hot! i love it! :) 

Reviewer: sueq Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:19 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

LOL. Just loved your CENSORED version of Chapter 2 on FF. Such a clever girl!

Glad you're continuing over here since I really like this story and your writing talent!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

Hope you're updating soon honey!!! Can't wait, anticipation is one Byartch of a killa! Thanks!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:05 AM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

Hot Damn!!! Loved that! Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:05 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

I think this has had a great lead up pace;-))

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:38 AM Title: Always Be Prepared

She's all of the above...but I love her courage and planning! Hope it comes off ok and that she keeps her nerve! Thanks for writing this!

Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:10 AM Title: Prom Night

Awesome! Happy to have caught up with ya over here thanks to you AN!!

I love me some DarkDomward! Thanks Soapy!!!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:55 AM Title: Always Be Prepared

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Prom Night

:)

Reviewer: majose77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:34 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

You came (har, har) and we followed!

Reviewer: Crazytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

Wow! Congratulations. Can't wait for more.)

Reviewer: Crazytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:01 AM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

I hotttt! 

Reviewer: Crazytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:45 AM Title: Always Be Prepared

Omg! I think both. Go for it Bella!

Reviewer: Crazytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:31 AM Title: Prom Night

Loved it. Can't wait for mor.:)

Reviewer: RoseE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: Prom Night

Your Bella is incredibly bold as well as sweet and appealing. I love that she had the strength of mind and the will to go after what she feels will make her happy. That takes character.

You're an excellent writer. Bella's inner dialog and imagination are easy to envision. The rest of your dialog and pacing really flows smoothly, making your conversations and scenes (with Renee, Jacob and Angela as well), believable.

I'm so looking forward to your updates. I hope we get to see a Dr. Cullen POV someday. Thank you. ~RoseE  xx

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:39 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

soo good ;)

Reviewer: GigiAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:29 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

As I followed you to this site I found this one. I enjoying it thoroughly. Keep them coming (pun intended.) Thanks and blessings.

Reviewer: JoanaS Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:37 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

i can't wait for the next chapter!!!

so hot!

Reviewer: karen4honor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:17 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

YOWSA!! goood to know she affects him as well!! *ninjagrins!*

Reviewer: karen4honor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:06 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

WHOOOOSH!! WOW, THAT WAS POWERFUL STUFF!! *remembering how to breathe now!!* thanks for shring this story!

Reviewer: Dinia Steel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:09 PM Title: Prom Night

Of course I want more!  I'm a needy bi-ch!  Seriously I think the story line has real promise.  Hope you get inspired soon.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:36 PM Title: Wishes Granted?

GAH!!!!!!!!!!!  So amazing :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:31 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

GAH!!!!!!!!!!!  You are amazing!  Thank God that didn't take long ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:22 PM Title: Always Be Prepared

GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!   If that is how he is going to be...PLEASE don't make us wait long to have them get together ;)  I LOVE this Edward!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:19 PM Title: Prom Night

Gah, that fantasy is SO amazing...cannot wait for it to become real :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:41 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

I totally forgot, that you had also this story on ffn. But now that you are posting it also here, it will be easier to follow without the fear, that it will be removed.

Great story so far. I can't wait for more Bella and Doctorward-action.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:48 AM Title: Wishes Granted?

Oh, now that was a cliffie!!! Don't care how long it takes I will wait for the next chapter!!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:26 AM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office

Don't be nervous, wonderful chapter. Only Bella could be this lucky!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 5:46 AM Title: Prom Night

Think you have out done yourself with this story!  Can't wait to hit the 'next' button!  Thank you - Cheri

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