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Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 7:17 PM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

This was a great story.  I liked the baseball theme and how best friends became husband & wife.  They extended family that they have surrounded themselves with is great!

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

Charlie sounds like a wonderful man & father.  He really looked out for the ones that he loved.

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

Charlie sounds like a wonderful man & father.  He really looked out for the ones that he loved.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 4:22 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Such a good story to enjoy during spring training. Thank you!

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 4:02 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Such a good story to enjoy during spring training. Thank you!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 11:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Great story!  Love Baseballward!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 16: Separations

Love this story!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

Great deal!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 14: Commitments

Yeah, I was wondering the same thing!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 13: Changes

Well, that went well!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

How very foresighted of Charlie.  Love it!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: Surprises

Oh, no!  Someone is going to cause trouble.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

Wow, over react much, Edward.  He was acting like a spoiled child!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Trials

So apparently Jacob wasn't talking to Sam as I first thought.  Wonder who he was having that disgusting conversation with and why Carlisle didn't speak up in the meeting with Sam and Jacob especially after Sam indicated there had been previous problems.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 8: Opening Day

Glad Jacob showed his stripes so soon, but I can't believe that Sam didn't shut him down when he was discussing her in that manner in his office.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 6: Springtime

Well, they handled that well!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 5: Reality Bites

Damn Papparazzi!  They ruin everything!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2016 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Press

I'm glad Jacob is married.  Bella won't put up with him long.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Changes and Chances

So lovin this!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Reporters and Recruiters

So glad he realizes he loves her.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Will

Oh, Bella, u can't hide from the inevitable! 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2016 12:08 PM Title: Prologue

I started this on Fan fiction, but realized it had been moved over here.  I'm so glad it wasn't pulled entirely.  Can't wait to read more.  I love Baseballward.  It was a Twilight FanFiction Recommendation.  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Thank you for writing an amazing little tale of love and baseball. You wrapped it up perfectly.

Sherry

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Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 18: Vows

Perfect way to pay homage to her father.

Sherry

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Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 17: Injuries

Oh that sucks, but it happens to the best of them.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: Separations

Bella knows how to get her team in gear when she needs to.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

I didn't see that twist coming, but it's fantastic anyway.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 14: Commitments

*fist pumps*

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 13: Changes

Edward sure does have game.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

Eww... Jacob is a sleeze. Gald Leah busted him and told Bella. I love how Charlie foreseen the feelings Edward had for Bella and left him a letter, explaining there was a clause to allow a relationship between them.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Surprises

They sure got hot and bothered quickly after their blow up. Please tell me it wasn't creeper Jacob watching them, reading on to find out.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

Relationships are hard, even without the added stress these two have.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 9: Trials

Jacob really has some gall. At least Sam tore into Jacob for his behavior, knowing his past. I really hope she's able to fire his ass.

Bella and Edward are just finding out how hard relationships can be with complicated lives.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 8: Opening Day

Jacob creeps me out.

Sherry

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Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 7: Game On

I'm beginning to think Bella owning the team may be jinxed.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Springtime

It's so cool they finally declared themselves, but spring training around the corner. Something doesn't sit well with the timing with the paps running wild.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: Reality Bites

Damn paps.

Sherry

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Date: 06 Feb 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Press

I love this determined Bella. Edward better get on the ball. lol

Sherry

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Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: Changes and Chances

I really can hardly wait for Edward and Bella admit their feelings toward each other, but with Jacob joining the coaching team, I see potential problems.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: Reporters and Recruiters

Poor Bellla has got so much on her plate to handle. I have no doubt she'll come through with flying colors with a few battles on the way to victory.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Will

Poor Bella is gonna have a hard road to travel with this team.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:16 AM Title: Prologue

Great start, you got me choked up a bit.

Sherry

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 3:47 PM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

amazing little story ;) i enjoyed the ending and how the fact they lost at the end was was a good idea because thats reality everything can't be perfect all the time ;) thanks for sharing this on here with us ;D

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 9:28 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Loved it all

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 11:20 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

As Edward said, there's always next year! Despite the heartbreaker of a loss, he and Bella have so much to be grateful for.  Good friends , loving family, healthy children and each other, that's worth anything!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 18: Vows

How sweet that they named their daughter Charley Grace, after her dad! Made me go awww.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 17: Injuries

That's just one of the risks, playing a sport, injuries. Poor Edward, he's not ready to retire quite yet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 16: Separations

There's a real good reason for the why you shouldn't be in love with the team owner clause. It takes your head out of the game I guess.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

Poor little thing, pneumonia and pregnancy all at once! Somebody should have reminded those two about birth control! At least they're both happy about the baby and she said yes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 14: Commitments

That went just right and now they are truly together. The only shoe to be dropped I can think of would be a proposal of marriage.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 13: Changes

He helped win the game, goes home to set the stage for dinner and romance! What a guy! Bella has to feel so loved and cared for!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

See, I told you Jacob was a creep! I just didn't know how bad he was! I'm so glad Bella had him arrested and fired him to boot! The letter from Charlie was so sweet, no wonder Edward shed a tear!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 11: Surprises

And I'll bet dollars to donuts it was that creep, Jacob! Now he's got something to hold over their heads! Damn, I was afraid they would forget to lock the door! Now that they have made up , I sure hate for them to have more grief to deal with!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

That was a little puzzling. Made me wonder if maybe Bella is right and Edward is just mad because he didn't get his way? Maybe he wants to mark his territory as a reaction to Jacob. I don't know , except they are both unhappy about it, that's for sure.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 9: Trials

I hope two things come of this chapter. One, that Jake messes up his probation and gets fired. Two, I hope Bella and Edward can hang in there for each other.Then I hope you let the Mariners have a winning season!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 8: Opening Day

I knew that creep Jacob was going to be a problem, yuck! Guys like that are so clueless, thinking their slimy advances are welcome! It's a shame Bella and Edward have to hide their relationship from the public.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 7: Game On

People sure are being piss-ants about Bella owning the team, what a bunch of jerks! I wonder why Carlisle calle the guys and told them to hurry ?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 6: Springtime

Finally got up the nerve to declare themselves, yay! Now if only they could stay together happily. I know that's not probable!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 5: Reality Bites

Don't you just love the creepy press guys that do that to people, famous and otherwise?  It's as if you are not entitled to a private life because "they" say so!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Press

So Jacob has already made a move on Bella, and Edward isn't going to stand for it! Good for him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: Changes and Chances

Bella must have decided to face the press vultures and show them  she's not afraid of them, which is smart of her. Now she has a new manager it should help ease the burden of running the team, at least a bit!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: Reporters and Recruiters

Oh brother, first her, now him! These two are meant for each other, both too stubborn for their own good! I would worry about Bella if she didn't have doubts about her ability to run the team, that's only normal.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Will

Atta girl, Bella, jump in with both feet and let them know who's boss. Oh yes, don't forget to be stupid and hide your love for Edward, that always works out so well! Wonder who she'll get to manage the team?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 1:41 AM Title: Prologue

Sad to start this story with Bella losing her beloved father! Hope it gets happier somewhere along the line!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2013 2:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

I'm glad everything worked out for them in the end. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17: Injuries

It's such a shame. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16: Separations

I think that has to be the worst thing for pro athletes. They make tons of money. But they miss a lot of family time. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

A bottle baseball baby. Yeah

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14: Commitments

I'm glad that they finally were able to share that. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

Its nice that Charlie had the insite to write letters to everyone. A lot of people don't get that chance. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: Surprises

I so knew that Jacob was going to be watching. But on the plus side I'm sure Edward got his game back. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

Men!!!!!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 9: Trials

Wow that was fast. But they have known each other for years. So truthfully it probably won't be that big a deal. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 8: Opening Day

With the exception of Kacob they had a pretty good day on the end. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 7: Game On

A Friday the 13th game does seem like a bad oman. Professional sports players are known to be very superstitious.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 6: Springtime

Well really the story would of been boring if they didn't have any problems. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Reality Bites

It's really a shame that they almost first kiss was interrupted in such a horrible way. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Press

Yeah Edward is going to go for it. 

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Date: 01 May 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3: Changes and Chances

Bella is very strong to go into the lion dens. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Reporters and Recruiters

Ahhhh. He's just as stubborn. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Will

Oh so stubborn. It's apparent already that Edward has feelings for Bella. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 6:54 PM Title: Prologue

Poor Bella. To lose the only family she had at such a young age. But thankfully it looks like she has a great support system. 

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Will

WHAT EDWARD NEVER FIND OUT SHE IS DREAMING HE WILL FIND OUT I'M SURE OF THAT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 3:06 AM Title: Prologue

BELLA SAID CHARLIE WAS HER ONLY FAMILY THEN CALLS EMMETT HER BROTHER ISN'T THAT HER FAMILY?



Author's Response:

Emmett is not her brother. More of a surrogate brother. Charlie was her last living relative, but the players become a sudo family.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:28 PM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Very good! Thx!
:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

this was really good!!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:28 AM Title: Epilogue: Change of Season

Sweet ending! Loved the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope that you will check out my other stories.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 18: Vows

I wonder what the future will hold for Edward. And yay for the baby!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 17: Injuries

Ow. Poor Edward, knee injuries are a bitch!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 16: Separations

Great chapter!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

Aww, a wedding and a baby. Poor Bella though, to have pneumonia while pregnant would be awful!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 14: Commitments

Loved it

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 13: Changes

Well it's about time! :-)

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 12: Disturbances

Glad Jacob got arrested and loved the letter from Charlie

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 11: Surprises

I'm glad they made up, but whoever is watching is bound to make some trouble.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

I know they are both at fault for spending enough time together, but Edward is being a baby!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 9: Trials

Well this could prove to be very interesting

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 8: Opening Day

I have a feeling Jacob is going to be stirring up quite a bit of trouble

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 7: Game On

Uh oh, that is not good. What did Carlisle hear?

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Springtime

I'm so glad they told each other how the feel but tat last line has me worried!

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