Date: 29 Nov 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh!!!! This was awesome!!!!!!! I noticed that you have not updated this in a while. PLEASE PLEASE START BACK WRITING!!!!!! I need to know what Edward had planned. I hope you update again. I will be waiting
Date: 23 Jan 2016 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was really good while it lasted. Wish you would have at least finished their day out.
Date: 27 Nov 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don't know if you plan to post an more of this story this story by far is one of the best that I've read in a long time I hope you do hope you write more
Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
just reread ur elf and elf on holiday and loved them .. hoping u will finish this fic
xo
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice day for a walk in the park.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really hope u can continue this
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was so hot!
I wish my picnics in the garden could be like that!
Can't wait for more!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
So cool to see the story of Elf continued. It is a shame that some pictures did not work/were visible, they would have been great additional visuals. But the story/chapter itself was nevertheless damn hot.
To see their visit/stroll in the park continued would be great. I wonder what other things Edward has planned for Bella before the showdown, with Makenna.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved their naughtiness in the park! X
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story
thank you for sharing your pervy mind
cAn wait for next chapt
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad this was extended!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for there afternoon in the garden and what else will happen, Can't wait :)
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey you! So I added "Story to Favorites"
This will give me any updates RIGHT?
Thanks - Susie Mook (bsmook@frontier.com)
Author's Response:
I hope so hon... but I'm still trying to figure out the logistics. I'll definitely let ya'll know on FB when this starts up again :)
xoxo
tb
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story
Author's Response:
thank ya ma'am!
xoxo
tb
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Bella comes a long way in short period of time. Can't wait to see how the rest of the afternoon in the garden goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks Debbi! I'm still trying to get stuff sorted out, but will keep adding as soon as I keep writing!
xoxo
tb
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awsome!!! I love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much darlin'!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
MOREEEEEE!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so happy that you are continuing this story and can't wait to find out exactly what his "later on" plans will be. Little Elf has made fantastic strides in 4 months and fits right into the lifestyle. Love that you do your research and we get to benefit from it.
Author's Response:
Hey lgk!! So good to see you over here as well! Trust me, I have fun "doing my research". (grins mischieviously)
Thank you so much darlin'!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 02 Jun 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks love!
Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just lovely!! So I am out of the country during this ban and only have cell use on internet. So WTF happened ?? Has anyone made a list of what stories we lost and where to find them??
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you liked it!
As for the list, there's a new group on FB called Removed Fic Support... that's probably the best place, they are trying to keep a running doc as stories are pulled... but there have been LOTS. Soapy Mayhem, CaraNo, kitkat681, Irish Chicka, SexyLexiCullen... just to name a few... were all hit. It's a mess.
xo
texasbella
Date: 02 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sad to see you leave ffn, but joined this site so I could still follow you. Don't like the gore, don't even go there because I read when you post on facebook, thats nightmares for me, lol but love everything else. ♥
Author's Response:
Thank you freespirit! And trust me, I know the gore isn't for anyone... no hard feelings here!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 02 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a pleasent surprise. I loved Elf and am so happy that you are giving them life again. Yes I am on for this ride. Thank you so much for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much darlin'! As soon as I finish getting moved over here and can think straight again, I'll get back to writing :)
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 02 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy hell Bella, I have missed these two but damn. Need MORE asap please.
Author's Response:
LOL... I'll get to it as soon as I can Dawn... thank you!
xoxo
tb
Date: 02 Jun 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
GAH!!!! So amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait for you to continue! I really hope you get some writing done soon, you are amazing :D P.S. It's princess07890 from FF.net
Author's Response:
Hey princess!! So thankful you are over as well... I hate that I'm having to do this... but alas, it's out of my hands. I'll try to get back to writing ASAP, I know I owe ya'll a UW chap as well...
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 02 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely awesome! Love the visual aids as well. This is looking like it will be my new favorite site with all the hullabaloo going on on FF.net. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey darlin'... love the positive attitude... thank you for reading and enjoying and as soon as I finish getting all my stuff moved over here, I'll get back to writing... there's still lots of naughtiness to come for Sir and Elf!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 01 Jun 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am enjoying this, I'm surprised I didn't find it sooner, will there be many updates?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much darlin'! I hope you read Elf first, as this is the sequel. Once I've finished moving everything over here, I'll hopefully be able to get back to writing this and will get updates out as soon as I can.
Glad you enjoyed it!
xoxo
texasbella