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Reviewer: JonathansKitten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Chance Encounters

I am loving this story!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you.  That makes me very happy.  :D 

I appreciate your taking the time to let me know.  <3  Reviews are very encouraging.  

Reviewer: balesp Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - First Date

Oh my!  I just found your story and absolutely love it!  I hope you post an update soon!  I would love to read the rest of the story.   



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I am working on the rest of the story bit by bit.  Every new review encourages me that much more.  I won't post until the entire story is complete because the story is complete for the reason it was written (the prompt).  This way I will also be able to post updates regularly (weekly or bi-weekly) until it is complete.  :D

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelations

Wonder if Charlie thinks that Carlisle is too old to be "coming on" to Bella. 



Author's Response:

Your question will be answered in later chapters.  :D

Thank you for taking the time to review. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - First Date

Ah meeting with the wolves.   Sam seems ameniable other than the name calling.   Hot head jake as always.

 

OMG that was the funniest first date I've read in ages.   Oh charlie...rofl overprotective dad.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I like Sam, so.... *winks*  Jacob seemed to be a bit that way to me. 

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

I love the overprotective Dad role.  I guess I just love Charlie.  He seems like a good father, IMO.  ;D

Thank you so much for reading and WOW! for reviewing every chapter! 

That means so much to me that you took the time to let me know how you liked them!  :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Thanksgiving Weekend

Oh Duh....Jake smelled Alice.   Forgot about that part.

 

Ah so B is still E's singer.   Thats awkward.     Charlie is funny.   yey for date

 



Author's Response:

LOL - Yeah, that's what he was smelling.  ;)

Yeah, he is. 

I love Charlie. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Separation

so glad Jazz is there to help him.

 

Hmm now what was Jake smelling I wonder?   Nomads?

 

From other review: "Granted its his daughter but B could do lots worse than a doctor.   LOL"    This was directed at Charlie.  Sry.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love Jasper.  :D

Jake was smelling Alice from when she went to retrieve some more of Bella's clothing for a more recent scent. 

----->  “I had Alice drop by Bella’s place in Seattle first thing this mornin’ after she left and acquire a new set of pajama bottoms.”

Oh!  I see.  Yeah, Charlie doesn't know what to do with himself since he hasn't had to deal with her dating yet.  ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Chance Encounters

Always thought Rose was selfish.  Guess Carlisle is supposed to be lonely forever.   Jeez.   Glad Em, Esme, and Jazz backed him up.   Alice is too funny

I have math issues too.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too.  How horrible would that be?  She has love, but doesn't want him to.  :(

I was trying to figure out a subject that Bella wasn't very good in from the books and never remembered a mention of Math.  Since many people have a hard time with it, I thought it would be a good one.  Besides, I had to take a Math class my first semester of college and hated every minute of it.  :P

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelations

Dr Delicious...yum

Granted its his daughter but B could do lots worse than a doctor.   LOL



Author's Response:

LOL - Yes, delicious.  :D

His daughter?  Are you having a hard time thinking of Carlisle and Bella together?  ;)

Thank you for continuing to review.  :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Meeting

I liked Carlisle intro last chapter.  My brain and fingers were not cooperating.

 

LOL for suspicious Charlie.   



Author's Response:

Good to know.  ;)

Charlie is a cop.  I never thought he could be that clueless.  :D

Thank you for reviewing again.  :DD

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 6:36 PM Title: Prologue

Like this start.  Never liked Renee.  Bella never got to be a kid with her around JMHO.

Ah for Carlisles intro. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  That's what I thought about Bella's life with Renee too. 

Um, you didn't like his intro, or you mean you feel bad for him?  I'm going with the former.  :P

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate it.  :D



Reviewer: agipe Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Thanksgiving Weekend

Great disaster! Lol! I really hope you continue this story! I would love to see more of carlisle and Bella and their chemistry. And I would love to see how Edward does with the Bella singer / bloodlust thing! 



Author's Response:

LOL - "Great disaster!", huh?  LOL 

You still have another chapter to read, it seems.  Hope you like it.  :D

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  <3

Bell :D

Reviewer: keii100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:05 PM Title: Prologue

mmm .. la historia empezando con el pie derechoo..



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, I understand only a few words from it: 

la historia = the history

con = with

el = the

Online translation shows it to mean:  The history starting with the right foot.  

So, can I take it to mean that I started on the right foot by writing their histories first? 

Thank you (Gracias) for the review  it means a lot.....even though I had to "work" for it.  *winks* 

Bell :D

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Separation

...Well. *gulp* Jasper sure has an interesting way of desensitizing Carlisle. Carlilse's old mannerisms definitely confused Charlie. Will be eager to see how Carlisle reacts when he sees Bella again.



Author's Response:

Yeah, old world meets the modern era.  Definitely not something a parent today would expect. 

Their next meeting will be something.  That is true. 

Thank you very much for the review and reading.

Bell :D

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Separation

I love that they are getting closer ..... Thank you

Author's Response:

As they say, "Slow and Steady wins the race".  ;P

Thank you so much for the review.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Bell :D

Reviewer: lovinthevamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Separation

I am totally in love with this story and can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Aww.  Thank you so much.  I am very pleased to know you are enjoying it. 

Taking time to let me know you like it is very kind as well. 

Thank you,

Bell :D

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Separation

This is really a good story.  I don't normally do B&C but I am really enjoying this.  I like the spin where Vic is already dead.  So no drama there.  Interesting to see Dr. Sexy and Jacob go to blows.  I know Dr. Sexy'S beast is a kick ass.  LOL



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying this story.  Dr. Sexy is pretty good at managing his best, isn't he?  ;)

I wouldn't want to be the one who has to confront it once it manages to break free. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me that you took the time to let me know your thoughts.

Bell :D

Reviewer: agipe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Chance Encounters

Ohhh! I don't think Bella can ignore the pull to Carlisle! Can't wait to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

She does seem pretty intrigued, doesn't she? 

Thank you, your review means a lot to me. 

Thank you for reading,

Bell :D

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Chance Encounters

Love your story ... Thank you

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it. 

Thank you so much for reviewing.  Each review means the world to me. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: agipe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelations

I like this story so far!  I can't wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it.  I hope you like the next chapters. 

Thank you for your review.  It means a lot to me. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Chance Encounters

I hope Dr. C. makes the first move!  LOL



Author's Response:

One never knows, Bella is quite the modern day woman.  ;) Then again, you never know with Carlisle either. 

Thank you so very much for taking the time to review.

Bell :D

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Chance Encounters

Very glad Carlisle 'happened' to meet up with Bella in the park. Even more pleased he has accepted that she IS his mate. With that in mind, I wonder how he will handle the next two weeks?



Author's Response:

Carlisle has a lot to think about and there are things he has to deal with until Bella's next appointment. 

Thank you sooo much for reviewing. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: agipe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Meeting

Oh boy! I hope Dr C will pop into her room tonight!!! 



Author's Response:

LOL - All I can say is, keep reading to find out what happens next. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:11 PM Title: Prologue

Awesome story. Love it so far

Jukie



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are liking it so far.  :D

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  

Bell  :D

 

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Meeting

Just found this story and love it!!



Author's Response:

Awww.  Thank you.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.  You are not too far behind on finding it.  It was only first posted on Friday, June 1st.  :D

Thank you for reading and reviewing. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Meeting

I must say you are nailing these chapters.  I am a E&B fan, but I do appreaciate a good B&C story as well.



Author's Response:

Awww.  Thank you.  You have no idea how much that means to me, especially from a canon reader.  :D

Thank you for your reviews.

Bell :D

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Prologue

OMG, this has to be one of the best first chapters I've ever read!



Author's Response:

LOL - Thank you.  I appreaciate that. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Next chapter coming soon. 

Bell :D

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Meeting

Very eager to read more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it.  :D

Next update will be in a few short days.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  :D

Bell

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 1:37 AM Title: Prologue

I really liked your story and I'll be rooting for a quick updateDesfazer edições



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I really appreciate that. 

The next update will be coming sooner than you think. ;) 

Thanks for reviewing.  :D

Bell

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Prologue

I can't wait to read more.... Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. 


I am glad you enjoyed it.  :D

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