Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2023 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2023 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2023 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowbutterfly32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2020 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2020 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: white wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story. I do not know how many times I have read it. I do not know why you do not still have it on fan fiction? I amjust glad that it is somewhere to be able to read it . Thank you for writing for us who do not or cannot.

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh I love this story. I love Edward. I love that Bella is told she jumps the gun, assumes, points fingers, I loved it. Great story. 2

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh I love this story

 I love edward. I love that Bella is told she jumps the gun, assumes, points fingers, I loved it. 

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh I love this story

 I love edward. I love that Bella is told she jumps the gun, assumes, points fingers, I loved it. 

Reviewer: shedevil Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

Please update your story. I was so sad to see it gone from the other site but so happy I found it on here now I’m just missing the other chapters 

Reviewer: Claudia12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

Super happy to have found you here! When will you post the rest of this story and the sequel?

Reviewer: Claudia12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

Super happy to have found you here! When will you post the rest of this story and the sequel?

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

It was great while it lasted.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

Why Am I Reading when I know it's about to end?  Cause, dammit it's good.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

THis is really good. Not sure why you never completed it.  I think I've read it before.

Reviewer: Pollie1599 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I know it’s a long shot but plzzzzzzz update 🙏🏼

Reviewer: loveofchrist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Dear mathisson, I have always enjoyed reading your stories,but I don't know what has happened to the rest of your stories? Are you on another site I don't know of. if you can email me back , I would appreciate it.    Thank you.

Reviewer: Alimarie91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

I read your story on fanfic long ago was sad that it was pulled but I found you took me awhile but babydoll it was worth it 

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Uh-oh!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Quisha1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Please tell me you're finishing this story

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm rereading this lovely story. Thought from the AN on FFn, that I could find the entire story here. But alas, it seems I must go in search of your blog. Hope it's there.

Reviewer: kriscrow1122 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait for the update!!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

Please update and finish this story

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love this fic! PLEASE come back and finish it. :)

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

I really like this story. Will you update/finish it?

 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you post the rest of this soon.  I'm dying to re-read it.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Mathinson we are rereading this story I hope you put the whole series please!!! 

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑

Reviewer: heather98 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey I wanted to know where I can read the rest of this story. I remember it from fanfiction.net but then when I went back to read it it's gone.

Reviewer: JuiMasenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi mathisson... I wanted to know where could I find the other stories that you have written... I am a huge fan of your work and love to read your stories repeatedly. The feeling in each one of them is sublime.

Thanks!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 8

Please tell me where I can read the rest of this. I read it a long time ago an I absolutely loved it. I really want to re-read it please.

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: DrMemeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey. This is a great story!!  Please continue

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oooo now I've got to wait :( 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ahh damn now I've got to wait...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sorry for your troubles on FFN but I'm so glad your here! Since S&S is already complete. What is your update schedule? So excited go read it again as well as Hands of Fate. Much success! XO

Reviewer: shedevil Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm so happy you posted this story here.When i seen you took it off ff.net i was so sad.please update soon i cant wait for you to have it all up again.

Reviewer: xBellaLunax Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

More please!!!! 😁😁

Reviewer: silversimon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thought from your note on FFn that everything was transferred here. Apparently not, or not yet? Sorry that FFn isn't protecting its authors and don't blame you for leaving, but it's a PIA although not as much of one as I'm sure you and the other authors are dealing with. Best wishes.

Reviewer: Crazyinagoodway Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

When you updated on fiction press I had an itching to re-read this story, only to find it isn't fully posted here! Are you going to move all of your stories here now? You mentioned moving them to your blog but the link got cut out of your post!

Reviewer: Eeffle_Luna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

It is horrible what has happened to you on ff.net. I tried to search for your blog and Facebook but couldn't find you, I am a great fan of your work and to think someone could do something like that is sickening.

 

Much love from a honest reader,

Kirsty

XXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx

Reviewer: Eeffle_Luna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is horrible what has happened to you on ff.net. I tried to search for your blog and Facebook but couldn't find you, I am a great fan of your work and to think someone could do something like that is sickening.

 

Much love from a honest reader,

Kirsty

XXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx

Reviewer: liza213 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

please keep postin I want, no need, to finish reading it. I don't know if you saw my message yet on fanfiction.net but I love your story so much and I NEED to finish it or it will haunt me for the rest of my days.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awww yea for Edward. Hmm caius really wants to die. And lemme guess that Jimmy is james

 

Please finish this here. 

Reviewer: TAB Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love this story! Please update soon.

Reviewer: TAB Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Damn I just found this story and am loving it so far, but now I see it hasn't been updated in a while. Please tell me it hasn't been abandoned.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love your dialogue with edward. Makes me giggle. This story is great. For a girl who never wrote a mob story...your doing a great job!

Reviewer: twigirl10 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Will you be writing this story further along ?? I really like it, its one of the very best I've started reading in TWCS n I really wish you gonna write it ahead n may be finigh it somedy !! plz plz plz update !! pretty plz !!

Reviewer: Isla the Island Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

Really enjoying this story, good work. Update soon :)

Reviewer: RoseMariecullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am loving Irish Edward!!!!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loving this story and looking forward to how it will all play out.

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

I like the story, it has a very good plot. however, the spacing of the story is very distracting. its very hard to read, if you could possibly double space the words it would help, please

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love the start to this story looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Divalicious408 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Sweetest makeup ever!!! LOving it and can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: SmillaGW Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG, this is soooo fabulous. I love this story, it is very quickly becoming one of my top favorites. The dialogue is to die for, and the characters.....sooo sexy.

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh another story to be added to my TBR list. Nice to see lots of authors from FF here at TWCS.

Thanks for sharing your story looks good.

 =)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

another great chapter, cant wait to read more...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yea for Angela. Oh poor b

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

Dayum. The boy is going all out ain't he.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

Holy shit was that chapter just fricking cruel!  I hope there is some sort of explaination EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad Charlie told them Edward had to work for it. He is being a gentlemanthough.

Reviewer: ariggs412 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is an amazing start! I'm very glad Edward talked you into writing this:)

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

So glad you're posting over here as a back up!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG. I almost spewed pepsin out my nose at Tonto. Lol for convincing her into a date. Hmmmm wonder what Charlie is up to?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yea for Eddie taking care of mikey

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

At least Charlie knows ben. Lol for the Blonde and her iq

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loving it so far. Oh mikey...you are in for it now.

Reviewer: Chachi94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I read this story at fanfiction. It has more chapters over there so I hope you plan on moving them over here too. This story is awesome. I love me some mobward.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yikes on the formatting but love the story

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

OK I am Ilive2read on ff and fb. Glad to have you here cause I really don't want to lose this one. Glad it hasn't thrown you off too muchalso.
thanks for being willing to start over somewhere else to give us fans a chance to find out what happens.
Vicki

Reviewer: BellaWinsor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

HEY BABE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I finally found my way around all this crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mathisson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for moving this over here! If FF pulled this, hell would have broke lose!

You must login (register a new account) to review.