Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
God I loved this story. I hope you do continue it someday. One of the funniest things I've read in quite awhile. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
OF course! That's the Last step, instead of the first. But will he put a baby in her the old fashion way???
Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thought that babies couldn't leave the hospital until the weighed 5 lbs? Number would have had to stay awhile.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
OH Fuck. I'm sure Ed fainted.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh god, baby blocked.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
NKOTB no no no no
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
AWE he's sensitive.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
hahahahahahaha GO TEAM EDWARD
You should post this on other sites. It's too good to set with so few reviews. I've had my account here for years, but most people don't bother with using this site.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh jeez, his word vomit is the best ab workout ever.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh geez, Edward's word vomit. Priceless
Date: 13 Jan 2020 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
You're killing me.
Date: 12 Jan 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad I'm not drinking anything. I would have ruined my computer.
Date: 12 Jan 2020 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
THIS is hysterical. hahahahaha love love love
Date: 15 Jun 2018 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
YES, YES, YES! (Ha)
Please if you would ... Sequal, or just more of this.
My d.o.h. ( dear old husband) said I hadn’ laughed that hard since he asked me to marry him. I still don’t remember what he said, I just remember the look he was making. That was 41+years ago.
‘Love this . O and by the way , He was up stairs when he swore I woke him up again “heehawing”.
Thanks
Date: 11 Dec 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
I had to re~read this favorite little gem of mine. I always hoped there would be a long! long! sequel after this was finished but.... Well maybe one day 😉 READ YOU SOON
Date: 20 May 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for sharing.
Sherry
Date: 20 May 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
About time Edward. lol
Sherry
Date: 20 May 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lizzy is such a fun character.
Sherry
Date: 20 May 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Gotta love Lizzy for trying.
Sherry
Date: 20 May 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was unexpected.
Sherry
Date: 19 May 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
What a way to go into labor.
Sherry
Date: 17 May 2016 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Seven minutes of heaven, lol.
Sherry
Date: 16 May 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Opening a new chapter in their lives.
Sherry
Date: 15 May 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Looks like life is heading in the right direction for them.
Sherry
Date: 15 May 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett is gonna end up getting beat up by a pregnant woman.
Sherry
Date: 15 May 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love Esme's persistance.
Sherry
Date: 15 May 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
The joys of dealing with family.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
Renee has struck.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Seriously, Edward is a doctor, but he isn't acting like one.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward has a lot of catching up to do.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like Emmett's lightheartedness about the situation.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward; he's a sucker for one and an idiot for the other.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2016 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Out of the mouths of babes.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Looks like they are off to a good start, lol.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Now that progressed quickly.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love love love this story! Awesome job writing it.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
It's about time they get marry.....4 kids later......lol.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Lizzy comes around. Glad all 3 babies are doing ok. Wow, 3 babies. I can not imagine.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love what little Lizzy says at the end. Lol.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
What? ????????? Triplets! !!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!! Lol!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMGosh! What a way to start labor. Lol
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Finally! !!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love how Edward worries about Bella.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad they are getting things work out.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving this story.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love the comedy you write with.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is too funny. I am loving it.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Lol!!!!!!!!!! This is too funny!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Lol!!!!! How old is Edward? He is,acting like a teenager. Lol.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Lol!!!!!! Love Edward's reaction to Bella's dad and Charlie's reaction to Edward.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
Lol!!!!!! Love how Emmett is.
Date: 22 Dec 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
They are too funny. I started reading this story a while back. I do think know if I read and did not review or if for some reason I lost the story to read.
They are too funny.
Date: 06 Dec 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
i loved this little story ;) i love how you write a confident bella and a shy edward ;) and he's uncut!! fabulous ;) i'm british as well ;) and i would love it if you wrote some sequels to your stories ;D
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please write a sequel to this fantastically funny story. I love the way you have portrayed my favourite characters. Their dialogue has me in stitches constantly. Thank you for your amazing sense of humour.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
I thought he saw her naked when she dropped the towel..a few chapters back
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
This story is too good
Date: 07 Apr 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the story hope you do decide to continue maybe they'll have even more kids that would be hilarious.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really loving this story.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, that explains some things. They are killing me and making my laugh.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting and funny. But how in the world did Edward know that Lizzy was his daughter? How did Bella really get his sperm....luck of the draw???? I can not believe that Alice told Lizzy that Edward was her daddy. Bella and Edward should have been the one to tell her that. I would be pissed if I were Bella.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh wow i loved this chapter
especially towards the end i couldn't stop laughing, i had to stop reading at one point
Date: 31 Oct 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really loved it! it's been quite a while that I've read something that made me laugh out loud. Thank you for that :) Because I liked this story, I wish that it had a little bit more details in the story, and less of a "speed through time" approach. you are quite the witty writer ;)
Date: 31 Oct 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! you are an amazing writer! It's been ages since I've laughed out loud while reading a story. I'm really enjoying this one ;) I can't wait to see where the story is going to go. Thanks again for witty writing :)
Date: 07 Aug 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
loved it
Date: 27 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Absolutely love their story. Got to laugh alot, and even got a couple of small lemons. Would love to see at least a couple of future takes if you never write a sequel. This was the perfect little story for a drab weekend. Oh, and loved how you worked Twilight and the cute guy into the story. LOL Hope to keep reading your great stories.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Lol love it love Edwards IMS;)) love the twilight reference, my 7yo said about the same. I said something about watchin the twilight zone and she said mom how could u forget your favorite movie it's the twilight saga not zone;))
Date: 26 Mar 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
finally thank god. i thought they were going to combust
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
i love the last line that was priceless
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh god so love it all
thank you for writing
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh my god these families are gojng to kill me they are too much
i can not wait to meet renee
loving it
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh my god twins didn't see that coming
oh mama esme will have a field day as well as alice
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh my god i love this little girl
i can't believe she got him to spend the night
and bella got in the bed--man i love this story
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
i laugh and laugh more
love it
Date: 26 Mar 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
god i love this story
edward is a hoot
seems he is all business and no life. alice surely helps things along.
love it
Date: 26 Mar 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my god i am in love with this story
i am so glad i went to your site to see what else i can read and came across this story. love it
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love everything so far that you have written!!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's perfect the way it is, but it would also be fun to see if they have another boy! This was a lot of fun to read, so silly at times, and so sweet at others!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
These two are just a little backward, but they finally got to the proposal part!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
What a wonderful thing to bring home your babies and their mama, with all the family waiting to help and loving you! What could be better?
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
The child has a great future before her as a negotiator of some sort! She really knows how to get what she wants! Three babies at once, what a three-ring circus that's going to be!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
The carnival must be in town, as the ride just keeps on going around! Who knew a third one was hiding in there? Everyone's going to be over the moon!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
Babies, bless them, do pick some of the strangest times to decide to enter the world!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm so happy for them, the poor little deprived things! They finally got together, and about damn time! Just wait until the babies get here, they really won't have time then!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
This pregnancy has even inspired Alice, it seems! Just wait until everyone finds out about the twins! Moving right now is the sensible thing to do, still it must be stressful.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wonder what Edward meant when he said everything went tits up? I thouight it was all going real well!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Trust Emmett to barge in at exactly the wrong time! I want to know what they are having as much as Bella and Edward do!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
Esme is acting like a crazy woman, no wonder Bella is angry! The part about Edward crying over feeling the babies move kind of got to me, too!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
The fun just never ends with this outfit! With Emmett spilling the beans, so to speak, that save Edward from having to confess to his folks.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
We seem to have stumbled into the twilight zone, with Bella and Edward coming back from the doctors and finding his parents stoned on the couch! Damn, I love this story!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
These two better get busy and find a way to tell everyone everything! You can see them fall in love right in front of their daughter, so it looks like a wedding and a bigger home are in the near future.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love Charlie, I really do, he's such a good guy, and a good dad. He's finding all this just too funny, as do I!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG, could this get any better? Edward seems to have a penchant for fainting at momentous news! Sure shocked hell out of Emmett to hear all the goings on.