OMG AWESOME!!!!! story ;) i read this on ffn ages ago and i still LOVED reading it again ;) i forgot about the ending though ;( i looked at your profile and there isn't a sequel to this? i really hope you write one asap but you do have some interesting stories still incomplete so i'll have to wait ;D

I loved this story. I have read it now about 4 times. I would love to see you write a story with even a stronger Edward (Vampire fo course) with all the abilities in this story. Yes and the first vampire too and maybe age 20, you know more adult mentality. Bella about the same age/mentality too. Still in charge and controlls the vampire world, but no one knows it just romurs as in this story. As a business man in the human world and ruthless. No problem in killing a human if they are evil just like killing a vampire for braking the rules. Have him a Veg. because it does matter the kind of blood he drinks it doesn't effect his strenght. Bella the human drinker until she learns different from the Cullens or Edward. I love reading a powerful and confident Edward vamp or human who is just as powerful and confident in his love for Bella. An Edward who controls both worlds but finds balance he lacks thru Bella. Jacob was too much a child, never should have been in the story. Not a Jacob hater just never for Bella. The two together was a bad example of a future abuser and an enabler. Sorry to ask you for this but you are great a this and can get your story and point across while keeping the person reading wanting more. I only read complete stories because it gives you a better understanding, but I will keep a check to see if you can come up with something. You will be the only one I do that for. Thanks so much and no pressure if you can't you can't okay!

OOoooh! I like this!

This used to be over on FF.net, didn't it? Kind of nice to see it getting a whole new readership. Used to be one of my favorites, just for Edward NOT being an angsty idiot.

Very, very interesting!! I'd love to read more! Please update soon!!!