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Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

Aww..so cute! Please tell me Seth gets a HEA too?!?!

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Is there a reason that Bella is non verbal?

Enjoying the story so far...

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

Real good

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

I think you need to do a future take of Edward & Bella having a baby of their own, then it would truly be a HEA!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

wow! i cant believe its over! how could you leave them childless!!!!!!! have you thought about doing a sequel? ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

this is an AWESOME story!  ;) btw bella said mrs weber when in the shop but it was crowley in the vicarage? other names for a condom:- rubber or jonny? ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

wow! just a thought when you mentioned the tip of his member;) it sounded like he was circumsized? i thought they didnt do that back then and the dont do it in england even now unless for medical reasons? ;)

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

Good story.

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 27

Yeah Edward, making a stand.

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad mrs. Cullen heard what Tonya said.

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great story, full of intrigue and emotion.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks for the reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying. :)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 28

fantastic story sad its come to an end glad both bella and emmett got the happy endings they deserved.perfect ending.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 27

fab chapter aww that was so romantic.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

I cannot express how much I loved this story!  Your characters were fresh and exciting and you opened a whole new world to your readers.  Thank you!  I keep wondering though if Bella and Edward will ever return.  Most wo made that voyage didn't, and some that began it never finished it.  I have ancestors who made that journey.  Out of 12, the father was buried at sea from typhus and upon arriving in New Orleans, his wife and 6 of the children died.  Only 4 sons remained alive and they split up and went their seperate ways and formed the family we have today.  

It would also be wonderful to know if Bella's dreams came true and she was able to give Edward children.  Again, thank you for a marvelous read!



Author's Response:

Yes the trips were quite grim, I did a little research as I was writing it was very interesting, fanfiction has improved my knowledge of history!! Your family history sounds interesting.

At the end of the story I did hint at them returning to tell of their adventures to their children and family, so I want you to believe they do get their HEA, I love a good HEA ;)

Thanks for your lovely review xx

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved the story, looking forward to your next adventure.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you xx

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

well done really enjoyed this story keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you and I will do xx

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 28

I am so sad it is over but it was a great ride I so love them all.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Ahh thanks xx

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

J'aime bien ce premier chapitre !

Merci.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

Really mixed feelings about this last one! Happiness that Edward and Bella are wed in the gypsy way, and are working together. Sadness that they have no child of their own and are setting off for America, leaving their loved ones behind. Well, as they both said, it's not forever, and they will be back one day. I'll think of them that way, having a good, useful life and seeing all the family again! Thanks so much for such a wonderful tale, I look forward to another from you!



Author's Response:

I do hint at the end that they have their own children, when they return and tell of their adventures to their own children and family ... makes it all happy again? :)

Thank you for your lovely reviews and support xx

 

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great story!!! I loved the ending and in my mind once they get to America they will have a family of their own.
Looking forward to your next project.
Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you, yes, I hinted at the end they told their adventures in the new world to their children and family when they returned and they lived very happy ever after **sigh**

Thanks again xx

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

This was a wonderful story.  I hope you continue with their adventures in America 



Author's Response:

If a strong enough stroy line does pop into my head I would love to continue their adventures....lots of scope in the new world...hmmm... now I'm thinking!

Thanks xx

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 21

another skeleton in the closet...

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 27

That ending was so sweet and just so perfect, and so romantic!  Rosalie and Emmett's wedding sounded just like them, and it's great that Mrs. Hale is going to hang on to see her grandchild! In a way, I'll be sorry to see the end of this lovely story, but hope you will write lots more!

Reviewer: anncarol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 27

love it!

Luv

XOXO

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

so sweet!

uhoh is daddy c going to walk in on something again...

or will it be em?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

even got some lovin goin on for seth! yay!!

gonna be some fireworks in eddie's room...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow that's a hell of a question! awesome day for them though...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

yay everybody is in love and happy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

No not the last chapter this has been a great story thank you. I loved how he showed them that he loved her more than anything so sweet

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 27

Omg! I about fell out of my chair because I was swooning so dang hard! Hopefully, that'll shut 'em up!!!!!



Author's Response:

How fantastic, I've never made anyone swoon before ... I like!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

gotta be strong and fight for what you really want....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

just a little sexy time....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 14

a glimpse at the hea for them all.

haha jasper and alice - busted! and daddy c about died! lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

poor bella. and to find out about momma e after she felt so welcomed....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

bella and em have more to them than meets the eye.

eddie is home!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

wow ed, you just left....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

3 months isn't too long of a wait.

woohoo alice and jasper!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

what the hell eddie? and momma e?!?!? bella will blow eddie's mind when he gets home....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

they saved her. and then she saved them. and marcus is no longer a worry for em and bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

marcus is a sick fucker that's for sure.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

and em finds his rose... then he jumps in front of a horse...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

things are looking up i think

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

wow that was just a....lot over the line leah....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

another chance meeting drawing them all together...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

this one sounds like it will be interesting.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter and I am sad it is coming to a close.  It is sad that there lives before was so sad but now life was going to be full of love.



Author's Response:

That's a nice way of looking at it. :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

aww that was so emotional brought tears to my eeys.fab chapter.

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm glad Edward saved his first time for his true love. Nice romantic story 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

And a very lovely surprise it was, too! It's a little sad to hear that only two chapters remain, and then we'll read no more of Bella and Edward, Emmett and his Rose, Jasper , Alice and all the rest. It was so touching to read of the burning of the caravan, save for the few small tokens they rescued. It's a great new life the two siblings will have, but you can't help but think of the old days, now and then!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

I loved the extra chapter!  Thank you!  It was especially touching and moving to me having lost both my parents some time ago.  What makes it especially touching is not only the simplicity of what they found and treasured, but their choice of life over death.  The pain could have made them shut down emotionally, but they each chose to honor their past by living their futures.  Kudos!  You have a real winner here!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the heartfelt review and sharing a little bit of yourself, I did try for simple and touching, I'm glad I achieved it.xx

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 25

The old condom used to be called French letters.  or so I have read.

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 25

SOMETHING TELLS ME HE SHOULD HURRY TO TOWN AND BUY HIS SELF A FEW BEFORE MOMMIE DEAREST CUTS HIS BALLS OFF OR PUTS HER TO BED IN HER ROOM TO KEEP THEM APART THEY  WILL NEVER LAST A MONTH LOL

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 25

Bella can be in no doubt as to Esme' s feelings towards her now. She certainly stood up for her future daughter-in-law, leaving no question but she cares for her. It was cute how she threatened the two of them if they dared get pregnant before the wedding. Gossip is such an ugly, hurtful thing, I hate it!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 25

Ouch!  What a lovely way to find out you are the gossip of the town!  If I were Bella I would have been more than appalled.  Great work here.  

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

Tanya is lucky she is not around or Mrs Cullen would have her head on a stick lol.



Author's Response:

Now that's an idea!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

ooo go esme get em told they defo won't gossip again,fab chapter.bet edwards face was a pic lol.update soon



Author's Response:

I love Esme with bite, I can just imagine Edward's face when he gets into trouble with his mum

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 24

Canwe please burn the maggot riddled cunt whores at the stake?! fucking hate tanya!



Author's Response:

Love your passion, I hate T too, wonder who is the most hated??

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thy proposal at Alice and Jasper's reception was lovely, especially since Edward's mother was all for it. Too bad Tanya couldn't leave the area without spreading her poison, like the snake she is! Wait until Edward hears  about this vicious lie!



Author's Response:

Tanya never does anything without being horrid! Thanks for the review and the wonderful support you've given me xx

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

ooo tanyas horrible.hope they don't believe her evil words.fab chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

:) thanks xx

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 24

You deserve to be reviewed this is a great story and right now I would love to pull Tanya's face off what an evil person.  I am so happy the evil sisters where kicked out of the cullen.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much...now go spread the word :)  xxx

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

Unfortunately, people do tend to believe the most lascivious stories.  Things might be hard for Bella, but with the family she loves around her, she can't fail.  I loved this update and watching Tanya get her comeuppance.  Small note: I loved the use of a peridot as Bella's ring.  It is my birthstone.



Author's Response:

People don't change much do they!

It was great to write Tanya's comeuppance, and it's nice of you to appreciate the peridot, it's always nice when a reader comments on a specific part of the story. xx

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

can we burn the nasty cunt bitch? i hate tanya!  good thing esme was there to hear it all.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

Gotta love those large potted plants!  Hey can be so convenient!  I have a feeling that Tanya may have just dug her own grave, so to speak.  Her reputation is shot if Esme reveals what she heard and in those days, no self respecting matron would allow her so to marry an outright gold digger.  I can't wait for the steam to rise when the family finds out what happened!!!  Kudos!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

OH YEA I HOLD THE POSITION OF PRESIDENT IN THAT FAN CLUB BUT WITH HER OVERHEARING THE FILTH THAT WAS SID SHE IS HEADED IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION LETS HOPE HE BELIEVES WHAT WAS SAID

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Haha dumb Tanya ! 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 23

Jasper and Alice had a lovely wedding, I'm sure, but I can't wait for Bella and Edward's! As I knew she would, Tanya tried to make  Bella as miserable as possible. It thrilled me to read that Edward's mother heard the vile words out of Tanya's vicious, nasty mouth! Wait until Edward hears that! Karma is a bitch, Tanya, too bad !

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

It seems the Cullen's put their trust in the wrong people. Look down on Emmett and Bella until they prove themselves, and trust vipers like Tanya and apparently her sister until they prove false; oh the hypocrisy! 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

fab chapter so glad esme heard her.tanyas horrible.update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow that was hot fab chapter.update soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Lovely,lemony goodness to start a new week with.  Life is good!  I loved their discussion and the activities.  They do connect so!  Thank you!

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks again xoxo

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you xoxo

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

Smart man, Edward, for telling his Bella of his youthful crush on Tanya. Always best to be honest about such things, I think. Now if he only has that easy a time telling Tanya about Bella!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

So glad they have made the vow to always be honest!  Steamy times in the barn.....oh how I can relate!!! LOL!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

WELL THAT WAS HOT ....THEIR JOINT WILLINGNESS  TO EXPERMENT NOW SHOW A GREAT FUTURE IN THEIR MARRIAGE BED ....SHE IS PERFECT FOR HIM LET JUST HOPE tAYNA SEES IT TOO

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)



Author's Response:

Ahhh! Thanks as always to you and your ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Tanya is always a problem for Edward, isn't she? I wonder what will have to be confessed to Bella? It shouldn't be that terrible! If love is in the air, why wouldn't Carlisle and Esme be affected? Just because they have been married for a long time only means they know each other well!



Author's Response: Tanya...just a little fly in the ointment.

Reviewer: monkeymom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm not sure what anyone would have against Carlisle and Esme sex.  But I'm all for it!   Thanks for a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

You'd be surprised!

I'll see what I can do :)

Thanks for the reviews xx

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 21

I do love a bit of Carlisle and Esme!  It was lovely too.  They are not young adults, but parents - yet their love is durable and strong.  Marvelous!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

I was so proud of Bella, defending her man from Leah's depredations! And her declaration ,accepting his proposal, and threatening the other girl, really great! Then to finish it all up in style, they rewarded themselves in such a lovely manner!



Author's Response:

Fiesty Bella is great to write and taking charge of Edward...pwoar!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

great chapter!     loved that kick ass bella!    edward was wonderful to bella for their first time....yay!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I loved writing kick ass Bella scene. ;)

Reviewer: monkeymom Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

Hurray for Bella!  She stood up for herself and claimed her man!



Author's Response:

I think I put myself in her shoes...I would so take charge of Edward...sighs

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

wow go bella!!!fab chapter that was perfect.think leahs gonna be in big trouble!!update soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh boy!  As I see it, this could go either of two ways.  Bella could trust Edward and having seen Leah was up to something before, let her have it, or she could become upset, panic, and run from the room not trusting Edward.  (there's every possibility there for her to trip down the stairs and injure herself escaping the situation!). One way or the other, this chapter was wonderful.  It filled us in on everyone's emotions, feelings, and activities.  It even let us in on the inner Mr. Clearwater!  Bravo!



Author's Response:

I do like a bravo, thanks for the review and I'm so glad you're enjoying my little romp xxx

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

WILL BELLA BELIEVE EDWARD WHEN HE TELLS HER HE DIDN'T KNOW LEAH WAS IN HIS ROOM. I HOPE SO, IF SHE DOESN'T IT WILL BREAK HIS HEART AND BELLA'S HEART WILL BE BROKEN AS WELL BECAUSE HER THINKING EDWARD LIED TO HER WILL BE BAD.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

well that went well. Everyone was there for Leah's attempt to seduce Edward.

Reviewer: haruka29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

I can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

Leah can sneer all she wants, I have a hunch Bella is about to defend her man's honor! Edward is going to be so glad he confessed all to Bella at the beach, as she already knows why Leah has been pursuing Edward, so that takes away the shock value. It should also negate any nasty little lies Miss Clearwater may throw at her! Can't wait until they tell Leah they are engaged; she will have an absolute fit!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 18

fab chapter.wonder if he will be honest and tell her.hope jacobs ok,

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

aww that was so romantic bless emmett.fab chapter.

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