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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love that Bella and Vicky are friends in this.  Their little private conversations are too cute.  

I laughed at Caius for killing Carlisle and Esme for being to stupid to live.  Ha!!!

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

You know, I do not usually read one-shots, but I gave yours a try because of two reasons: a) I read everything you write, and b) I know I won't be disappointed.

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Yeah, Peter...poorest rich guy my foot...ONLY 50 billion?  Haha :)

Once again, I freaking love your work!  This was great and I can't wait to read the next story you come out with :)

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this story.  Compared to Jasper, Peter is poor.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

You must really hate the Cullens, huh?!  I'm glad you at least got Emmett and Rose away first.  Such a different concept as well. 

Hugs, Stephanie



Author's Response:

I'm not a fan at all of the sterile Cullens.  Love Em and Rose though.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for your input.  XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

ROFL for the redneck savings plan.   LOL for the goofy proposal.  Cute little ditty hun



Author's Response:

I thought Vicky and Bella had a very creative savings account thought Peter and Jasper's way was probably more secure.  Yep, Peter sure knows how to ask a girl to marry him, doesn't he?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVED this... although everything you write is absolutely amazing! :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm glad you liked it.  Thank you for taking the time to read and review.  XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Great story! I loved reading it! The Cullens got what they deserved.



Author's Response:

Yes, the Cullens certainly did deserve their fate.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not a bad little one-shot.  I have always felt that those two characters were the ultimate "doom" to any person who dared to be an individual or different.  I like how you had the Cullens punishment dealt with and the obvious closeness between Bella/Vicky - very refreshing.



Author's Response:

Oh, Edward and Alice were at their worst.  Carlisle and Esme were so brainwashed that they lost the ability to think for themselves.  Thanks for reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love everything you write. I loved it. Yes I wish it was longer, but then again you get to the point and don't write a chapter when two sentences get the job done.

 

thank you,



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary,

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story.  I had a ton of fun writing it.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  XOXO  mama4dukes 

Reviewer: renesmee26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

holy fuck..this` the weriest story ive ever read. it was awesome.i`m not a B&J fan but woman -you fucking rock! and the death of the cullens JA genius! i always thought that alice is a real bitch..and emmet the plumper? jesus, i`m thinking of a porn scene. THAT`s HOT 



Author's Response:

Emmett the plumber--definitely a feast for the senses.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

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