Date: 25 Feb 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 06 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Charlie has found some happiness for himself, but it still makes me sad that he can't see his daughter.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Not alone? Well, that can't be good...
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Change is good. Or so I can hope.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Something about the simple 'What are you?'... has stayed with me.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Talk... Kiss... whichever. The choice is not mine. Drat.
Date: 02 Aug 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
If only I was key to his survival... *sigh*
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
You gave me chills. That's a compliment, by the way. A big one.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
I've been thinking about this story for a week. Well, much longer, actually, but I wasn't able to get to it for a while. And now, having found my way back, I'm just reminded of why it so often sneaks into my mind. Because I love it. I knew that already, but I like coming back and knowing instantly that I still do. Sometimes when I'm away, my return just makes me ask why I was there in the first place. I'm confident that will never happen here. Ever. But enough of my rambling...
He. Wants. Her. The thought makes me tingly. I like tingly.
See you soon.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Cute ending!! Any more twi-fic planned?
Author's Response:
Maybe in the fall. I am going to work on my novel this summer. I've stalled on it long enough. LOL
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
The part of Bella and Edward stories I like best, beside their love, is they always end up with the family. This was quite a tale, action and adventure galore. Meeting Emmett and Rosalie was a hoot! No wonder Marcus and Caius wanted him for their guard! Overall, a great story, which I thoroughly enjoyed!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I didn't intend on Emmett but he just sort of showed up. LOL
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks good chapter n story
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Thank you so much
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Seems like they are dating. lol. But I think Charle might not be alive when they get back.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like Charlie is in trouble. I am so happy they had a kiss but sad because she didn't seem to enjoy it. I was concerned when I started this that they wouldn't be any lemons because of it being back in time. I hope that is not the case.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
How scary. I would imgaine back in the day, a womans life was not her own.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this sounds very exciting. I cant wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks good chapter
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Thanks for reading!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah ... Emmett! I love the way you brought him into the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
What a great time to meet Emmett! That was a pretty good fight, and Aro just knew he was going to win. Fortunately, the evil old devil was dead wrong! I'll bet the happy little band of vampires is about to get a new member. There has to be a deep sense of relief now Aro is out of the picture. Sure makes me happy!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:37 PM Title: Prologue
Well, if you did bring Rosalie & Emmett into the story, I think it would be interesting to read your spin on how they joined the Cullens. I'd also read a sequel to this story, too! Just sayin! I honestly read this story in in under three hours. It's that good!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, I'll keep that in mind. ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
I just found this story today & I love it. I saw in one of your earlier reviews that this story is coming up on the end - I'll be sad when that happens! I was also wondering if you're going to bring Rosalie & Emmett into the story.
I'm looking forward to your next update ... and Edward & Bella kicking some ass! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. So glad you are enjoying. As for Rosalie and Emmett. I don't think they will show up but characters have wormed their way into stories I had no intention of putting them into before, so it still could happen. LOL
Date: 31 May 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love bringing Jasper and Alice in this way! Bravo for originality!
Author's Response:
Thank you. As a fanfic author that is about the nicest thing you can say to me. : )
Date: 28 May 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
I guess this is it, they are coming! Hopefully their preparations and training will be sufficient to winning the battle. Bella being a powerful shield for all the fighters should be the winning factor. I really like that the vampires and the Quileute wolves are friends and allies.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. We are getting close to the end now.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
MORE PLEASE!! :-D
Author's Response:
LOL, Begging on two sites now? The next chapter is with the beta so you should get it soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2012 12:54 PM Title: Prologue
This sounds like a fascinating story. I added it to my favorites and I am excited to read along as you write!
Thank you for sharing this story with us!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 19 May 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have hope that this is Alice come to visit, and not that nasty little bitch, Jane! Bella and Edward are pretty happy, with their new way of life and with Carlisle and Esme. Charlir is obviously happy and fairly content in South America, so things are really pretty damn good now. Sure would like for them to stay that way, maybe even have Bella contact here father? Just sayin'!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, you'll see soon enough
Date: 19 May 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Go Bella!!! Hopefully it is not Jane but Bella will be ready to shield them!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, you'll find out who soon! : )
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved every word. You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 May 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, lots happened in this Chapter! Glad that Bella is now an equal vampire with Edward, but that sucks they are on the run since Aro is still out there...Interesting twist on the drinking from animals theme and how it came about. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 09 May 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can't find it in me to mourn Bella's humanity, as now she and Edward are equals. I hope the Volturi aren't after them already. It's kind of exciting that they are in America and seeking a new way to live. This chapter is a really good one!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 May 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! So glad that Edward stayed with her doing her change and he got them away on a boat to America, maybe its the rest of the Cullens they find...
Author's Response:
Thanks for readnig. You'll find out who in the next chapter!
Date: 30 Apr 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Deliciously erotic and wonderful. Bella's reaction to sex is totally understandable. She will not endanger another person and place him in jeopardy. So very Bella. She would rather be lonely for the rest of her life. Something tells me Edward has other ideas now. I loved this chapter. It was straightforward and unpretentious, yet lovely and gently warm and caring.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 29 Apr 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm not seeing a happy ending to this , for either of them, but oh my! the memories they made together! This particular incarnation of vampire Edward is a wonderful lover and did a beautiful job of making Bella's first experience truly special! Every girl should be so fortunate. I wish them well, but doubt the outcome, sadly.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 23 Apr 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
For Edward, bringing Isabella back to her home must be like the sword of Damocles. He is insuring the well being and ease of existence to his race, but he is sentencing a kind, innocent woman to a virtual prison for the rest of her life. I think you've made me feel sorrier for him than her - by just a bit. Wonderful work here!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate the comments.
Date: 23 Apr 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
will he leave her with more then just memories when she returns to her father ?
is a little girl going to appear in the next chapters :)
Author's Response:
LOL, you'll have to wait and see.
Date: 23 Apr 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
I knew they would have to spend time with each other, making memories, falling in love. Too bad Bella is who she is and Edward who he is! There ought to be a way for them to be together, but I can't imagine what it would be. They truly are like Romeo and Juliet.
Author's Response:
Thanks. We'll see if we can get them together yet. LOL
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 16 Apr 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
He kissed her! At least they did not hurt her dad.
Author's Response:
He sure did! Thanks for reading.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
One of the biggest problems is how to keep Charles Swan alive, as well as keep Bella safe. I t looks like Edward is going to have to tell her much more than he intended. Little does he know, she's tough enough to take it.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
There's that inescapable attraction again! He just can't seem to help himself , and I'm not talking bloodlust here.! I sense some profound changes ahead for Edward as well as Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your reviews
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Of course, Miss Swan has no idea what Edward is, or that she should fear him. The girl needs a better vampire radar, I guess. I wonder how long it will take for her to figure out what he is?
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
That's usually all it takes, for Edward to fall for Bella isn't it? He only has to spend a little time with her and he begins to realize she's quite different from most women. Of course, the bloodlust thing does complicate matters, in this case. Bella has surely led a sheltered life, if she thinks just because a man has aquired high office, that he has high morals. If only that were true.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
It would seem that Isabella's father taught her some means of self-defense. Good for her, as it surely came in handy. Now that the would-be assailant is dead and off the train, I hope that doesn't cause her a problem. Not that a vampire craving her blood isn't a bad enough problem!
Date: 15 Apr 2012 4:03 PM Title: Prologue
Wow. Your banner is what caught my eye, but this... this is what will bring me back. Tremendous.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. That is such a lovely compliment to both me and the banner maker!
Date: 15 Apr 2012 5:44 AM Title: Prologue
Intriguing beginning to your story. How have the Volturi found out about this baby and her magic blood? Can't wait to see where this is heading!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Bella's blood isn't special, they are going to make it special. : )
Date: 08 Apr 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. It means a lot to me.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm Edward is able to control with the Vampire huh well and is starting to look at her as a woman!
Author's Response:
Yes, he is starting to hit vampuberty. LOL
Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow I love your story indeed. Bella is close to finding them? Doesthat once she finds out among these eight months, she returned toher father to give it some more vials of his blood to it. Because his father did not tell the truth? What good does not have prevented it to them and to let his daughter die leaving totally unprotected without knowing what is going on for years and years.
Author's Response:
I think Charlie is weary, it has been a long life of protecting her and he wants her to expirence life. He doesn't think they will hurt her in the end, only him.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a great story, I can't wait to see what will happen between the two of them! I saw Hunger Games and like it, but I definately agree about the camera work. It gave my 13 yr old daughter a terrible headache.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much.
And I hope that the director is paying attention cause it is what everyone is saying. Maybe it won't happen in Catching fire.
Date: 25 Mar 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
I saw HG today. I agree about the shaky cam - I actually got motion sickness & a migraine 30 min into the movie because of it. When did directors decide that was a great idea? Loved the movie even though I cried several times. Rue was adorable.
Loved the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading.
And I have no idea. I kind of hope there is a different director for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 9:16 PM Title: Prologue
Wow! I'm interiged I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 12 Mar 2012 4:03 PM Title: Prologue
A promising first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 3:53 PM Title: Prologue
I really enjoyed this early. The story promises to be sensational,different from the usual vampire stories, congratulations on theimpressive start.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: 12 Mar 2012 3:32 PM Title: Prologue
Sounds like this will be a good story can' t wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much