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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

All's well that ends well, I guess. I'm glad for Bella, after all the crap she had to go through. Sounds like all the Cullens are happy and content, so it's a nice place to stop!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

Quite the family Bella married into! She has had a hideous time, but Tanya and Victoria have paid for their evil. I thought it no more than they deserved. You get back in life just what you put out there.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

Am I sensing a tiny bit of sadist in your writing? You sure have given Bella a lot of hellish experiences. What would it hurt to be nice to the poor girl? I for one, can't wait until they get to Volterra, and the big surprise in store for them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

Is there some way I could rip apart Tanya and Victoria? If it weren't for bad luck, Bella would have no luck at all right now. Can't wait to find out what Carlisle's secret is. Whatever , I hope it saves Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think we can safely say a merry Christmas was had by all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Boy, the Cullens, especially Edward, will have their hands full watching out for Bella. If she can't smell anything, it makes her life really difficult. The only bright spot is no problem feeding from humans, or her daughter.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

That went pretty fast and fairly easy, considering the circumstances. The whole family is really happy to see the beautiful little girl born to Bella and Edward. It really is going to be the best Christmas present ever.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Emmett finally found something Rosalie could be happy about. This baby coming has got all the Cullens in a tizzy, just like any family. Poor Bella, slowly changing and growing a child inside herself at the same time. Some people have all the luck, don't they? My only worry is there will be more trauma in this story, before it's over.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

Okay, I have to hand it to you, you found a most unique spin on the Charlie problem. Victoria, of all vampires. Oh well, at least Edward killed him and they burned the pieces. Not that he deserved any less. Too bad Victoria got away. This last development is really something, too. So, Bella's change won't finish until she has her baby? I'll bet that's the answer, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

What the hell is going on here? Two vampires have stolen Bella from Edward's car, practically in the driveway? Something definitely is all wrong with this scenario!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well hell! That was the most screwed up mess! I hope the Quileutes take the Cullens up on their offer to hunt down Charlie. There has to be some retribution for that bastard! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

So that damn Charlie got his revenge! Maybe now Jake and his father will believe the truth about Edward and Bella being married. I hope he didn't hurt Bella too badly!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Let me guess, we're about to have a visit from a werewolf! How did that happen so fast? Small town gossip again, I suppose. Just when Edward was making a little progress, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

So, canon Rosalie, bitchy as usual. I just can't figure out why she's being like this. She suffered so much before Carlisle saved her, why would she want Bella to be hurt by Charlie? I just don't get it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

Cullens to the rescue! This keeps getting better and better.  It's kind of like a Twilight fairy tale, everything just falling into place. All problems have an answer and love conquers all! It's a lot of fun to read, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

You have your own personal juggernaught going here! I have to read fast, just to keep up with you! This Charli situation is awful! I hope the Cullens, minus Rose of course, can find a way to keep Bella safe from her nasty father.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow! So Charlie is a mean-drunk womanbeater. Probably just as well that Alice kept that from Edward, so he wouldn't kill the chief. That sure is a different Charlie than Bella's usual dad. No wonder Renee left him all those years ago! Wonder how long Alice plans on staying gone from Forks. I'm sure kidnapping Bella may turn out to be a bad idea.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Moving right along! First day and he's saved her and made her fall in lovewith him. The guy's obviously in a hurry to get to know his singer. It zips the story to have Alice tell him so far ahead of their meeting, so he has time to learn control, maybe?

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

I really loved this story : quite original with elements from the books. I was thrilled by the growing Voltury familly ! I was quite distressed by a small point in the beginning of the story : why Bella come live with her abusive father ? He beats his wife so why would she send Bella there ? Bella smelling problem was quite entertaining. I never saw Maggie coming. What had happen to the wolves ?

I love your style of writing and the original turns of the events ! Hope to read one of your other stories soon !

Reviewer: alicefan32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great story

Reviewer: alicefan32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hmm.  I'm guessing between this and "Hiding Bella" that you don't really like Tanya.

Reviewer: alicefan32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hmm.  Is Carlisle a member of the volturi - and I don't mean the guard?

Reviewer: alicefan32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Interesting

Reviewer: alicefan32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love Alice

Reviewer: alicefan32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

I started reading this on Twilight Archives, but they haven't been updating anthing.  I'm glad I found this and your other stories when I switched to this site.  I can't wait to read them all.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

This was a wonderfully well thoughout store.  I loved the fact that it encompassed all the books with the most unique quailities story lines.  You capture the best of the best in all books and gave a very good revision of the incidents.

I especally liked that Jacob wasn't a bother.  Mainly because I don't like his chareter any way.  So this was refereshing to read.  Charlie that was priceless as well as Larent.  I loved the way Bella carried the baby and the no senses issues.  Great work around.  All in all this was excited to read and I look forward for to reading the rest of your publishings.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

great ending but its always sad to see a story come to an end can't wait for more from you in

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it very much thanks for sharing.......

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

Aw!! I'm a bit dissappointed that you made Nessie a lesbian. I'm not homophobic but I always imagined her as straight - it's been so long since I've read this I'm guessing... no Jake?! Anyway, it was a good twist, so if that's what you were after, it worked - nice one!! I'm surprised the Denalis would accept the loss of Tanya so readily, but I guess they're just too peaceful to condone that kind of crap!! Good ending overall. Have an A - I'd give you an A+, but nobody's perfect - well, maybe Katmom!!

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

wow. love the alternative volturi they are much nicer this way.

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Tanya is an evil psychotic bitch, and poor Bella she can't catch a break can she. and what is Carlisle's secret???

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

The Bella Vs Tanya smackdown was awesome, I wonder wherre Tanya has skedaddled off too? will she join up with Victoria?

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

yay Bella is going to kick Tanya's ass. (I hope)

Please please please tell me that dog hasn't imprinted on the baby that made me gag in breaking dawn I really don't want to have to read it again. #

ROSALIE - She is a jealous, evil, conniving, bitch that the world is blessed by her inability to procreate god knows the world doesn't need any more of her.  

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

A much nicer birth than breaking dawn and wonderfully werewolf free too

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

Bella's point of view was very cool.

I am loving this story the plot is very original

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

Holy crap a 6 week change that's got to suck

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

Who the hell are the vampires???

I'm glad you gave an accurate rendition of the first time all too often with fan fic it is like something out of a movie and I think it gives younger readers the wrong idea , although lets be honest they shouldn't be reading NC17 stories anyway.

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

“Hey little sister, where are you? Do I need to come in there and get you?”  - God I love Emmett I wonder if I could swap him for my brother? hmmm worth looking into.

So we can add potentioal rapists to the dogs list of vileness.  

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

Those disgusting, dirty flea bitten Dogs (these were the cleanest insults I could come up with but I assure you I was swearing like a trucker when I was reading alot of this chapter)

How DARE they

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh Bugger and here was I thinking we had escaped the flea bitten mutts,

Mike Newton is vile and needs a violent visit from The Cullen Brothers in a big way

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

Aaaw they got married, and Rosalie is still a bitch, oh well you can't win them all

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

Bless them they are getting married but are both as insecure as usual.

 

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward has been drooling over her since… she was drooling - Gotta love Emmett he is always fantastically inappropriate sometimes.
Rosalie - she needs a slap what a bitch,
Carlisle - Yay he's made the decision already, awesome that cuts out alot of Edward angst and deliberation

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh bless him Edward is nervous.
So Alice had to save Bella from s Jasper snack attack, he really does need to gain better control doesn't he poor Jasper.
Edward is going to flip his lid when he finds out what Alice has done.
When I started this story I thought it was just going to be a fluffier version of Twilight I'm so glad its not.

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the journal entries they were a great way to explain the time passed without being too long winded.
Edward in a sling, I bet Emmett is giving him hell about that

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

myself think you wasn't harsh enough she deserved a heck of a lot of pain for what she did those the both of them

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

that was a surprise on him being royalty like the volatra in this story from

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter very tense wonder who he is calling

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love lemons and that was good

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

bella after win lol sorry but that was funny until the whole suicide thing getting

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

a girl was kinda hoping boy plz not that horrible name

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

So happy for her she can finally get a great family great chapter Great

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

damn she just don't get break at all good chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

poor bella great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

oh know what did those monster do to her intense but as always great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

Lol everyone thinks she's pregnant come on even if they went at it the first meeting they wouldn't know yet stupid humans great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bad rose really she is having some problems or what great chapter getting

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Singer or not talking is a good thing getting good

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

Okay thought vampires never forgot so how could rose even think something that horrible great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow okay not expecting that about Charlie or Jasper great chapter getting exciting

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

As always looking forward to another great story from you like how you changed up the meeting

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

that was great thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well, I have to admit, I didn't see that one coming.  What other twits do you have up your sleeve?



Author's Response:

i wont tell but you can count on one things from my stories dont look for the usual because i love twists! thanks for reading michele

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love it!!

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

I don't think you were vicious at all... they deserved it. I'm bummed about Bella's scars, but it's ok cause Edward loves her anyway. Great chapter -look forward to next update.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

Didn't see anything wrong with happened to Victoria, it wasn;t the least bit graphic. Actually I found it rather fitting for Felix to have a play thing.

The reunion between Bella and Edward while short was well done.

 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

URGH!! How coudl Tanya ever be such a bitch... I think you've really gone OOC with here in this story!! A-.



Author's Response:

i just might surprise you! Tanya really wasn't being a bitch she just didn't know he was mated...but that will be addressed in the next chapter.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

That was a really good chapter update when you can those 3 will be shocked when they get to Italy loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing....



Author's Response:

Italy is going to be fun if your into the revenge thing!!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 16

Time to shred and burn Tanya, what a surprise she is in for. These Voltori are more likable then when they are evil.



Author's Response:

i dont know shredding and burning might be too easy!! the volutri may be likeable but you know how family can be when it comes to torture of a loved one...

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

OK well that was a shocker!!!! But hell it was a nice surprise, Carlisle on of 4 brothers.

I have a big problem with Bella being disfigured not that it would mean anything to Edward other than he'd want to make mincemeat out of Victoria and Tanya, but that is just sick.

Ok once agin you ahve me talking about these charc=acters like their real...LOVE IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow that was a great start thanks for sharing this with us....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

that was great thanks for sharing.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

that was great thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

that was great thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

loved it thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

loved it thanks .....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

my guess rose and tanya so lets see loved it....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

I never liked those wolves i hope they get charlie loved it can't wait for more....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG what did he do can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

That girl is going to piss me off loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next thanks...

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it very much I hope things get better for her loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

rose is a bitch why is emmett always saving her from getting a beat down loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow that was a great chapter can't wait to see what happens next thanks playing catch up.....

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Excellent, talk about creating tension and anxiety for everyone including your readers!!!!

Love it!!



Author's Response:

that is thew ultimate review! if you could feel the tension they did, then i did my job right! thank you so much for reading and reviewing! michele

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Renesmee, hate that name, love your story.



Author's Response:

not my favorite naqme either but decided since i haven't in any of my other stories i would this time.. lol

Reviewer: jukeboxbliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

I like the way you are changing the story around.  Can't wait to see Bella and Tanya interacting ... this ought to be good.

Reviewer: klingie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

Freaking love it!!! Can't wait for Bella to wake up!



Author's Response:

thanks for reveiwing! i just finished bella's wake up and am just waiting for it to be beta-ed

Reviewer: lynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi,

I am new her and happy I pick this story first!!!!!!!!!!

I am loving it!

Lynne

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! i am glad my story was your first! welcome to the site!

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter, I'm excited to see what happens next.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

The wolves broke the treaty by breking in their house.  I'm hoping that Edward can get to Bella before Charlie beats her.  Damn those mutts!!

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