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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:04 AM Title: Little Blue Pill

I wonder if he will remember those fateful words, now that he's changed? This was a fun, sexy little story to read, thank you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:00 AM Title: Thirty

So he woke up and smiled at her, that has to be a good sign!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:57 AM Title: Twenty-Nine

Shame on me for not counting thumps!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:55 AM Title: Twenty-Eight

Wow, I'm impressed by the willingness to trust!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:53 AM Title: Twenty-Seven

Let's see how willing he is now he hears how painful the change will be!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:50 AM Title: Twenty-Six

There now, that wasn't so difficult , was it?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:49 AM Title: Twenty-Five

Smart young man, and very perceptive!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:47 AM Title: Twenty-Four

One secret down, and at least one more to go!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:46 AM Title: Twenty-Three

You tell me your secret, I'll tell you mine!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:44 AM Title: Twenty-Two

Viagra? Why?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:42 AM Title: Twenty-One

I hope this turns out better than I think it will!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:40 AM Title: Twenty

There must be something pretty special about this human, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:38 AM Title: Nineteen

Looks like the mate bond will be the saving of them both!



Author's Response:

it does!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:36 AM Title: Eighteen

I'm crossing my fingers, hoping they both get through this okay!



Author's Response:

*crosses fingers*

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:19 AM Title: Seventeen

Both kinds of lusts seem to be in charge here!



Author's Response:

it's a delicate balance

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:17 AM Title: Sixteen

Whoops, I think she has shredded his clothes from his very willing body!



Author's Response:

very willing...hmmmm

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:15 AM Title: Fifteen

Well, so far, so good!



Author's Response:

wait for it....

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 11:54 PM Title: Fourteen

What has she found in her exploration ?



Author's Response:

what for it.....

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 11:04 PM Title: Thirteen

So, that's where we are!



Author's Response:

yep!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 11:02 PM Title: Twelve

Are they on vacation, or rather, is he?



Author's Response:

both

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:59 PM Title: Eleven

Bella is playing with fire here, never a good thing for a vampire!



Author's Response:

definitely not!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:57 PM Title: Ten

He seems as drawn to her as she is to him!



Author's Response:

when you are talking about mates, it has to be that way

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:55 PM Title: Nine

Just in the nick of time, I see!



Author's Response:

definitely!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:54 PM Title: Eight

You better protect your mate, Bella, before Tanya grabs him from under your nose!



Author's Response:

oh she will, have no fear

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:49 PM Title: Seven

I hope, for Edward's sake, Bella really can control her thirst!



Author's Response:

i hope so too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:46 PM Title: Six

I wonder if Alice has seen something significant, and that's why she and Rosalie are interfering with Bella's plans?



Author's Response:

well, you know alice

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: Five

I wonder which sister is calling Isabella?



Author's Response:

i'm betting you have read the next chapter and know already

glad you are enjoying!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:14 PM Title: Four

This could be a very significant dance, Edward, so be careful!



Author's Response:

let's hope she is careful too

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:11 PM Title: Three

Look out, guy, she may want a drink only you can provide!



Author's Response:

see, i knew he was yummy ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:16 PM Title: Two

Oh dear, now she sees him, right there in front of her!



Author's Response:

and the excitment begins

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 8:13 PM Title: One

Sounds to me as if Bella has met her Waterloo, so to speak!



Author's Response:

indeed she has, nice way to phrase it!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:04 AM Title: Little Blue Pill

i loved this little drabble especially this extra epov ;D do you this you could do any more? ;)



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you enjoyed this, it was fun to write, i still write, haven't posted much lately, my RL with kids at home for the summer keep me from doing much since I don't have much 'me' time, keep an eye out, thanks for asking!

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:02 PM Title: Little Blue Pill

Very good story!  I know I haven't reviewed since the beginning because I suck at reviewing drabbles, but I wanted you to know that I looked forward to this story every morning.  It was always the first one I read as soon as I had a chance.  I liked the twist of a Bella vamp, and I really liked watching her figure out that he was her mate.  Short & sweet, and perfect for this E&B!  :)



Author's Response:

now worries, it's a drabble so it moves fast

very good, glad it brought you something to read everyday

thanks! i appreciate you taking time to read!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:17 PM Title: Little Blue Pill

thump thump.



Author's Response:

bring on the thump ;)

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:49 PM Title: Little Blue Pill

What's the worst that can happen?----You can meet your immortal, vampire mate, have amazing sex and get turned into a vampire----but really in the scheme of things, how bad can that be?



Author's Response:

seriously, like that is a bad life

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 6:32 PM Title: Twenty-Nine

THUMP, JUMP, HUMP.  Now BITE,BURN,TURN.

 

 



Author's Response:

love that! too funny

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:34 PM Title: Twenty-Nine

I'm going to go with 2000 thumps.

I would think that would be an odd sensation; the eupohoria of an orgasm and then this burn that feels like your whole body's on fire.



Author's Response:

closer than what most have guessed

definitely something you wouldn't forget

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:15 PM Title: Twenty-Seven

thump.. sputter



Author's Response:

*gulps*

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 4:49 PM Title: Twenty-Six

Well that went over well. No running, no screaming, no chasing and killing. I say it's a win-win



Author's Response:

definite win-win!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 2:22 PM Title: Twenty-Six

lets hope he keeps that no-self preservation thing going and doesn't bolt on her now :)

 



Author's Response:

ha, like he could outrun her

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 4:38 AM Title: Twenty-Five

hmm



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 10:52 PM Title: Twenty-Five

yeah... roles reversed here huh... no sense of self-preservation LOL :) Excited for the next one!

 



Author's Response:

exactly, no sense, either of them, see you tomorrow!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 10:10 PM Title: Twenty-Five

Now I have Adam Lambert singing in my head. I'm getting a mashup of him and Edward singing in front of Bella, waving his hands and looking a little manic.....I'm not sure if I like Edward in black eyeliner.



Author's Response:

oh no, that is a mash up there, hmm, i'm not sure either

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 2:57 AM Title: Twenty-Four

??



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 2:17 AM Title: Twenty-Four

oooohhhh!!! Can't wait to read his reaction to that!! :)

 



Author's Response:

at least he's not running away

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 7:28 AM Title: Twenty-Three

why indeed?



Author's Response:

lots of questions both need to be answering

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 1:37 PM Title: Twenty-Three

uh oh, now he needs answers as well as he needs to give answers



Author's Response:

exactly! these two got some things to say to each other most definitely!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:04 AM Title: Twenty-One

uh oh



Author's Response:

i know right

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 5:40 PM Title: Twenty-One

Ahhhhh She actually bit him!!  Okay so I'm not completely surprised, but what's going to happen??



Author's Response:

she did! guess you will find out more tomorrow ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:19 PM Title: Twenty-One

:-(



Author's Response:

because she bit him right?

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2012 4:44 PM Title: Nineteen

It's good to know she has this awareness of what's going on. I was starting to worry that she was going past the point of no return.......damn it, now I have Babes in Toyland stuck in my head.



Author's Response:

um, the fic isn't over yet

don't hold your breath

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2012 2:11 PM Title: Nineteen

thump & bump



Author's Response:

*giggles* i like that

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:04 PM Title: Eighteen

th..mp



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:03 PM Title: Seventeen

so many.. thumps.. so little else.



Author's Response:

well, his heartbeat is rather strong

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2012 3:55 PM Title: Eighteen

:) Love it! Stay in control Bella :)



Author's Response:

we hope she does!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 7:27 PM Title: Sixteen

Thump



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:58 PM Title: Sixteen

love commando :)

 



Author's Response:

me too! ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 7:07 PM Title: Fifteen

thump



Author's Response:

thump thump!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 4:43 PM Title: Fifteen

Be strong Bella, be strong!



Author's Response:

yes! be strong!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 6:01 PM Title: Fourteen

What is it!?!?!?! It's probably a good thing, cause it sounded like she was getting a little carried away and this might be the distraction to keep her from doing something she'd regret....then again, this Bella doesn't seem to be one that regrets much.



Author's Response:

hmm, good or bad, possibly both!

nope, not a regretful bella at all

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:24 PM Title: Fourteen

:-( so bad



Author's Response:

bad? :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:55 AM Title: Thirteen

:) go to the island!



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:37 PM Title: Thirteen

hmm



Author's Response:

indeed ;)

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 6:52 PM Title: Twelve

I'm sure I just missed it in the beginning, but where are they now?



Author's Response:

never really placed them anywhere in particular, just started in the club and now have moved outside

but there are somewhere very tropical

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 4:39 PM Title: Twelve

string us along.



Author's Response:

*evil laughs*

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 2:44 PM Title: Twelve

:) excited to see the next one!



Author's Response:

good! thanks for reading

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 1:19 AM Title: Eleven

well.



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 12:23 AM Title: Eleven

Bella is a risk taker, or just extremely cocky, either way, she's got balls....Edward's it would seem. ;)



Author's Response:

she is cocky, but when you are that old and a vampire, it comes naturally

ha! she's got him alright

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 12:12 AM Title: Eleven

uh oh... playing with fire there Bella :)



Author's Response:

indeed!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 6:47 PM Title: Ten

yes walk! :) (maybe a little more) :)



Author's Response:

yes, maybe a little more ;)

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:55 PM Title: Ten

Although Edward's a little shy, maybe nervous, I like that he is holding his own.



Author's Response:

he might be, definitely holding his own

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:35 PM Title: Ten

her Mate!



Author's Response:

i know right!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:53 PM Title: Nine

Aw already at the holding hand stage. Dang they're moving fast. ;) But then what's holding hands, when it's between "mates".



Author's Response:

exactly!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:38 PM Title: Nine

these short chapters leave us all unsatisfied and ?

 

Well Tanya backed off. Wow!



Author's Response:

*evil laughs* but at least you get it posted daily

against bella, she stood no chance

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 1:54 PM Title: Nine

stupid Tanya.... well at least she got there and made her leave... let's just hope she doesn't come back :)

 



Author's Response:

very stupid

nope, don't think she will, doesn't stand a chance against bella

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 2:11 AM Title: Eight

Poor Bella, she's the black widow fighting her nature to kill the male. Such a tangled web.



Author's Response:

ah yes, a tangled web indeed

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:32 PM Title: Eight

Ohh - I didn't see that coming!  I think my heart started thumping a bit there too!  Thanks for the update!

On a side note, I watched Breaking Dawn again last night.  One of the extras on the DVD is B&E's wedding video, and Tanya actually says some very nice, heartfelt things.  It's difficult to merge that character with what I think most of us have to come to expect in FF characters.  It's a very cute wedding video though!  :)

~allidel



Author's Response:

yeah! so sweet, i think we have taken tanya to a new level with ff

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:53 PM Title: Eight

uh oh.... she better get back to Edward quickly! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

she might just do that

thanks for reading

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:51 PM Title: Seven

oh poor bella :(



Author's Response:

have no fear, she will survive

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:50 PM Title: Six

oh! :)

Author's Response:

keep reading

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:50 PM Title: Eight

Tanya, the whore of FFiction arrives. LOL



Author's Response:

ha! she does tend to be painted the whore of FF doesn't she

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 7:39 PM Title: Seven

Ahhh...cliffie!  I'm still here and loving it...sorry I've been sucking at reviewing lately.  I like that he's protective of her, and that she seems to have more interest in him than just feeding.  I can't wait to see what happens next! 

~allidel   :)



Author's Response:

yeah, glad you are still here

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:15 PM Title: Seven

Dang, I'm hanging on the edge. It's a good thing I have strong fingers. 



Author's Response:

very good indeed

thanks for reading and hanging in there ;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:33 AM Title: Five

ohh! :) Can't wait till the next one!

Author's Response:

thanks! definitely more to come

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:54 PM Title: Four

Awesome story...looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

thanks, nice to have you reading!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 4:53 PM Title: Four

Two sets of eyes meet across a crowded room. They walk towards each other, just knowing that something magical is going to happen.......okay so not quite but it's what is happening in my mind. ;)



Author's Response:

works for me! ;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 2:24 PM Title: Four

ohh :) so good!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 4:51 AM Title: Three

Haha that's punny. Shyward doesn't know what can of worms he just opened up with that line.



Author's Response:

seriously the wrong thing to say to a vampire *giggles*

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 3:40 AM Title: Three

Loved it! :)



Author's Response:

thanks! see you tomorrow for another update

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 11:37 PM Title: Two

good chapter



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:41 PM Title: Two

oh loving this! Can't wait to read more!

-Kate



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:17 AM Title: One

Wow - sounds good!  I'm in!  :)



Author's Response:

wonderful!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:57 AM Title: One

Ooooooh. I do love when everyone thinks it's vampward, but it's really vampella. Especially when she acts bored and picky.



Author's Response:

very good catch, oh yes, bored and picky

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:24 AM Title: One

So it seems bella is th vampire and edward is the human

edward seems to be irrasitible to bella

 



Author's Response:

yep, that is correct, on all accounts

thanks for reading!

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