Pretty good! 

And, they all lived happily ever after...
Loved your story. Thanks! :o)

sorry but i find this a hugggggggggeeeee unbelievable stretch!!!!!   how and why on earth would Edwards Grandpa hook up with his daughter's grandma?????  creepy and gross,and the little girl just happens to be alive?????  come on!!!!!! reallly?????   too much

Story was really good and cute good job!!!!!

cried like a freaking baby! his grandfather seems like a bag of douche. I wonder what the article is about. loved the anniversary scene. cannot put this story down to take even a small nap. are we going to get to hear Esme's view of Finn?

yay I didn't shed one tear this chapter :)

I LOVED YOUR STORY.  KEEP WRTING ;)

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Soooo Gooood!!!
I can't imagine you losing your audience!!! Ur a talented writer. Ur also one who takes pride in their work making sure it uses correct grammer, words, spelling, etc!! There r MANY who don't & it is irritating. :) So thx 4 that!!
I follow u here & on FFnet but prefer here b/c they allow M & NC-17. :)
Keep up the great work!!!

Ok i ment to leave a note sometime before 1st wonderful story i love it. 2nd the child that was in the picture with Edwards grandfather i have a theory that might just be out there so if im right when/if im proved right im going to smile be but if im wrong it will be a pout and a shrug. Maybe she's not even important maybe she's the final pieace of the puzzle that makes up Edward and Bella's life who knows well bcak to reading!!~!!!!!!!

Loved the story so much.  I thought it was great and as many of your stories really captivating and well written. Thank you for giving us a little part of urself to entertaining us so much. ;)

I like both this characters

I just want to tell you what an amazing author you are! I never let myself start any of your stories until they are mostly, if not totally, complete.

Awesome heart felt story!!  I just got through reading Trip & I loved it!!  Thanks!!  I want to add you to my favorite author list, but I am having trouble adding anything for some reason.  I must be computer stupid!!  Oh!!  You did mention that you wanted new fan fics ro read...have you read Heaven, Hell & Harleys?  That has to be my all time favorite vampire fan fic!!

This story was wonderful. Thank you!

Bravo!!! I really enjoyed that story.any future takes in the works? I'd love to see what Masen is like down th road.

That is a label anyone would want. I love it! What a wonderful story. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Ah, it was so good. I think you ended it perfectly.  Love the new stories you have going. I always look forward to anything you post. You have a way with making me fall in love with your characters and your plot lines.

Wonderful chapter, this is one of my favorite stories and I'm really sad that it's over.
Looking forward to the epilogue.

Twin girls...perfect!

I have so loved this story. can't wait for wednesdays because of you. really love your work, thankyou, and pleasee keep it up!!!

I'm glad that Bella had a chance to send a message back to the Reservation for Jacob's friends to stay out of her personal business!

Bella doesn't owe those people any explanations for how she lives her life.

I am so excited that Edward and Bella have a date for New Year's Eve!

Now the family is perfect. I loved the story.

I'm proud of Bella for her strength. She is doing the right thing. I think she was classy in how she told Edward how much his absence affected Jax and her. Also, it was so important for Bella to have her own room and to tell Edward that his actions did have consequences...he decimated their attempt at a romantic relationship. She is a mother and now a friend to him. She has to protect Jax and herself in this situation.

I have a sneaky suspicion that little girl may be Edward's daughter!

Wow! Bella is really putting up with some petty crap at work! She needs a break!

I love that they are having twins! Edward and all his girls. He has got a pretty great life! Great job...thanks!!!

I think it is good for Bella to feel a little bit of possessive jealousy regarding Edward...he should have made it a PRIORITY to introduce Emmett's lil sis to Bella at the reception.

Also, I think it is GREAT for Bella to be asked for a date by Dr. Whitlock. She needs to see that she is attractive and datable!

Sounds like a perfect Christmas Eve to me! Great job...thanks!!!

I just came across this story and I am HOOKED! I am adding it to my favorites. I plan to quickly read the chapters posted to get up to the latest post!

This has been such a wonderful story, and your epilogue was perfect. Thanks for this!

I hope they decide to have more children and Edward gets a son to carry on his name and his good looks. I love little girls. I am from a family of all girls. I have a daughter who is now 17 and my best friend. I also have a son 14. I never realized what I missed never having a brother. Edward needs a son. His genes are too good not to pass on to another generation of males. He also will need to dilute the estrogen once those girls start going through puberty. He is going to need an allie.

looking forward to more 

I love this little family, which sounds like it won't be little for very long. I don't blame Bella. I think Edward should stay in the husband catagory and not doctor. He is great in an emergency, she needs her own doctor to take care of her parts. He should only think of her parts in a nonclinical way.

This was a really sweet chapter. I love that Jax isn't a perfect child, I hate when Tge kids do nothing wrong, it makes the story so fake. 

Edward wanting to remove Bella's IUD was hilarious. I'm glad that Bella put her foot down. Even though Edward delivering their future babies would be sweet. 

It's amazing how well everyone is adjusting. It is a miracle that they have all found each other. This is a beautiful story and I am going to be very sad to see it go. But hopefully not too soon. There seems to be some more for these 4. 

:) Great chapter

I don't know if I've reviewed yet, but I think it is time I do with this chapter.  I told a fellow reading friend about this story tonight.  She's a Team Ed only reader but I insisted she give this a go.  I have had so many emotions with this story from the 1st chp.  I'm a big Jake/Bella cannon reader as well as others.  I give them all a chance.  When I've read a few Ed/bella HEAs I also have to read a few of Jake/bella ones as well to even out things.   Soooooo...I really love that this story has a little of both characters, and even though she didn't get the HEA with Jake she will probably get it with Edward.  The last dream in this chp had me bawling for some reason.  It was a short and sweet dream, nothing over the top, but the whole gist of it made me sad that he was gone.  I know she needed to find closure to give the relationship with Ed a chance, but still it was sad but beautful at the same time.  So my point of reviewing is just to let you know that YES I am really loving your story and it is very well written and your talent is shining through.  Thanks for sharing and I'll try to review more as it goes along.  No matter what you want get a bad review from me so feel free to write away.  (I know ed should have called at least once before going off to Italy, but the way she handled her trip there was just a really mean Bella.  I know she should be mad but it was one of those 'get over it, Bella' moments for me, but you handled it great after his return. :) so good job!!)

Hugs, stephanie

I am glad that Bella had some closure with Jacob. She needed that. The talk with Edward also needed to happen. As long as they keep talking everything will be fine between them. I like how Leah reacted to what Bella had to say. Great job...thanks!!!

love the chapter ! looking forward to the next chapter

Yeah. I'm so happy they are getting married. I was really worried that Bella was going to say no there for a minute. 

I love it! They are going to be so happy together. It was so cute when Edward asked for Bella's keys. I hope she had fun driving his car. I can't wait for their Thanksgiving dinner. Great job...thanks so much!!!

As for the stories...they both sound very interesting and would love to read either one. Doors & Windows & Faith really caught my attention though.

I'm so glad that Chelsea is alright. I really hope that Bella forgives him soon. She still seems so standoffish. 

I am so glad Chelsea is okay. That was scary for everyone, but they all handled it together. I love that Chelsea called Bella Mom, but I wish she didn't feel bad about it. It's and honor that Chelsea says she feels like Bella is her Mom and Bella knows that. I can't wait for Thanksgiving. Great job...thanks!!!

loved the chapter looking forward to seeing what happens next

Well I am thinking this is not going to go the way Peter thinks it will.

I loved Chelsea's reaction to Bella. Edward knew Bella would not turn her back on that little girl. I also love the nickname Jaxie. That is perfect! Great job...thanks!!!

I love it! I had to laugh when Bella said she would tade Esme one kids for another on Saturday night. Great job...thanks!!!

Awesome chapter! So much happened. I love that the neighbor knew that Jacob took the flowers. I am so glad that Edwrad followed her to the cemetery and was there for her. It was sad to think about Jacob walking away, but it was time for Bella to let him go. He will always be in her heart, but she also had to move on and live her life.

Everyone meeting at the cemetery was priceless. The toasts were awesome, but Edward's was very special. This was just an amazing chapter. Great job...thanks so much!!!