Date: 23 Dec 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
i LOVED this little story;) is the sequel 'our 1st house' to this story?i hope so 'cos that would be soo cool ;D
Date: 25 Nov 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Very good!! Had me laughing out loud!!
:) Hoping 4 a sequel. :)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
I laughed my ass off.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
I laughed and laughed and giggled and may have snorted a time or two. This is to damn. Funny!!!! ;). Great job!!
Date: 08 Apr 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
LofuckingL! To funny!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just wanna see her take down Emmett, he so deserves it!
Date: 12 Jan 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful story, I loved it. I hope there is a sequel I would love to see more. :)
Date: 10 Jan 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
YAY sequel! wow poor bella and her poor sheets
Date: 10 Jan 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
cute ending
Date: 10 Jan 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think that would be great Our First House sounds like a winner as long as it has a outbuilding that has a bed in it for his family to romp in lol.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
I so love Emmett and Charlie to funny.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Emmett to funny he knows Alice was not for him anyway to funny
Date: 09 Jan 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Im glad you will take reviews in lieu of money because I have none of that lol. I love Emmett he just wants the food to hell with Alice lol. Cant wait for the house and the reason behind it.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Jan 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
omg god!lmao so funny,wow update soon thanks for three chapters :)
Date: 08 Jan 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
I just read through the whole thing and this shit is hilarious!! Can't wait to see who says what next! LMFAO!!
XOXOXO
Date: 21 Dec 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just found this story and so far I'm loving it! Don't give up hope, your characters are great! Can't wait to see how the dinner goes!
Date: 17 Dec 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
To funny they will be lucky if Charlie doesnt cuff them all and take them to jail. lol
Date: 16 Dec 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
My interest is not waning. I am not very good at reviewing. It is an awesome story and I was hoping for a continuation at least through New Years. It has some wonderful dynamics and it would be be wonderful if you worked those intoc this story or a sequel. Please keep writing.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
loved the chatper
Date: 16 Dec 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh shit! lmao tha is some funny embarressing shit right there lol
Date: 16 Dec 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
so his girlfriend is alice. ew. i hate alice
Date: 16 Dec 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
That chapter was funny as hell!!
Date: 16 Dec 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
I would be hiding in the bathroom with both the wine and beer. Great update.
Date: 15 Dec 2011 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow what fun family I love hearing about family like that so my family almost seem normal lol
Date: 15 Dec 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wish that I would have woken up like that on Thanksgiving!! But alas I work at a grocery store so it was work at 8 and a Boyfriend that was out of town with family because I couldn't go! LOL....
Date: 15 Dec 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am cracking up that their families seem that they would get along sooo well..... I wonder how well????
Date: 13 Dec 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
i love your bella lmao
Date: 11 Dec 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11 Dec 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good Chapter.....
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was funny that not only Bella got embarrassed but Edward too!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
This sounds like how my life goes! Love it!
Date: 06 Dec 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
All I can say is:HIHIHIHIHIHIHI!Very funny, I can`t stop laughing.It`s so sweet the Edward in your story, and Bella is a real sweetheart.I wonder what wull happen next.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Haha love it! Jasper is insane but hilarious. Rose is awesome so far. I was worried about what Esme and Carlisle might be like but it looks like they're their normal sweet selves.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
snort...oh Edward you just keep digging that whole deeper and deeper. Bella is going to hold this meeting over your head for the rest of your natural born life and prob. beyond too.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh my god hilarious
update soon please
Date: 06 Dec 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
it's so good that chapter had me smiling big time
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
That is just to funny I love it at least his family know that they have a health sex life lol
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Holly shit what a way to meet the family lol.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
You just made me put my hands over my eyes in embarrasment. Sitting in front of the computer at 3:41 in the a.m. By myself. Did I mention that I actually put my hands over my eyes?!!!!Didn't actually blush, but I am feelin' kind of warm.....HAHAHAHA! It takes a lot to embarrass me, at my age~good job!
Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good Chapter....
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good Chapter....
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well I am thinking that it isn't delivery boy Edward that is at her door....
Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh come on you cant just leave it hanging like that
so mean
:P
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
LMAO OMG!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
leave it to bella to have all the problems
Date: 02 Dec 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well I guess that it could have gone worse he could have gotten mad at her for hiding the fact that Renee isn't dead she is just gone because she doesn't care.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Funny your Bella,hihihi, very funny.I hope she and Edward will find their way.I like how you chose to picture them.Keep going.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like the term womb doner I have what is called a sperm doner that called himself my father. edward is taking the news very good the sex talk is great
Date: 30 Nov 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
LMAO CHARLIE BURST OUT CRYING GIVING THE SEX TALK. OH THATS FUCKING PRICELESS
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved the chapter looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 27 Nov 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well everyone has skeletons in their closet that they don't want people to know about it is how you deal with when you find out about someone elses skeletons that makes you decide who gets to see your skeletons for what they are and anyone worth it will seem them and know that they don't define a person.
Date: 27 Nov 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved the chapter
Date: 27 Nov 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Renee's is a ho ho ho lol
Date: 27 Nov 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
i am loving it...
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well at least she knos about his family now. Better late than never.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
She is really on a roll now and Edward is really in for it. The boy better start talking.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
HaHa!! Edward is going to be in so much trouble when Bella gets ahold of him....
Date: 26 Nov 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well I guess that things might be interesting at their table.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
So different parts of her body were wanting different things I would go with the humping one lol
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Cant wait for more! Love it!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh no! Things are getting worse!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor bella .... how intimidating!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very fun! Looking forward to more!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
lmao i like that shes a drama queen its hilarious. i cantw ait till we get to the funny parts. though i'm confused who is the pot smoker?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
She has the right to be pissed and hurt.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is in deep shit
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward has got some explaining to do. Can't wait to see how he gets out of this one :)
Date: 25 Nov 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
holy shit what in the hell was Edward thinking by NOT telling Bella about his mother!!!! oh shit!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Beat him. Great update.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bring it on. They are short chapters so we can handle it.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is going to be something all those folks and having to cook to and on a budget, well this should be good
Date: 24 Nov 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Nov 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, now it is ON!!! GAH! Edward could have warned her, and springing everything at the last minute?!! I'd wear his balls for earrings. Seriously. Can't wait to see how it turns out!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol ooh I can't wait for more. this sounds cute. :D thanks again!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the first chapter can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
i am liking it..but please update soon....
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start- Can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Update:)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
It is really rude of Edward's family to spring four unexpected guests on them three days before the holidays.
They should have them sit on the floor and serve them mac and cheese....that's teach them
Date: 24 Nov 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
This has disaster written all over it. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think this story is off to a great start! I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like it should be cute cant wait to read more.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
i like it is very sweet... cant wait for more...
Date: 23 Nov 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
cute looking forward ot the next hcapter