[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2017 7:02 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm so glad there life turned out so beautifully. They deserved the life they had made for themselves. I know you wrote his story long ago and are published author so I'm happy you left it here for someone like myself to find!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 5:49 AM Title: Epilogue
This story was a perfect ten from beginning to the last word of this story!!!!!
Thank you so much for writing it and leaving it for people like me to read!!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:53 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh... I loved this story! Thank you!
Date: 12 Mar 2013 5:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Yay!!! LOVED this story!!
Date: 24 May 2012 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
thanks for the story :)
Date: 24 May 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
bella.... you are stupid.. jasper you are too.....she so treats you like doormat and you let her...
Date: 24 May 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
jas you are the sweetest guy ever!
Date: 24 May 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
he is not a doormat... you are so mean bella.....
Date: 24 May 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
okay you can be depressed that doesn't make you cheat... sorry you are still a prick in my book ed....
Date: 24 May 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
well ed you are shooting yourself in the foot... bella you are redeeming yourself and quit using jasper as a doormat!
Date: 24 May 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
duh!!! i just can't comment arghhhhhh!!!!
Date: 24 May 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
bella you are soooo DUMB!!! I can't comment anymore because i want to SMASH her head in
Date: 24 May 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
okay once can be fogiven bella but he has been cheating on you more than once.. don't be a fool! damn now i have bad thoughts for her too!!!
Date: 24 May 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow i have no words to express my thoughts on ed...
Date: 24 May 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
jasper you are way to good to him! again what a prick edward is
Date: 24 May 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
again ed you are an ass!!! poor jasper:(
Date: 24 May 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
what a prick!! wow!!! you go jasper
Date: 29 Dec 2011 10:53 PM Title: Epilogue
This was a great story and I really enjoyed reading it. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read your next story.
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 4:49 AM Title: Epilogue
So good, so sad it has ended.
Date: 28 Dec 2011 4:11 AM Title: Epilogue
amazing ending!!! :) Thanks so much for this journey! :)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 4:29 AM Title: Epilogue
merry christmas! the story was great
Date: 24 Dec 2011 12:44 PM Title: Epilogue
heartwarming. What a great ending on Christmas eve!
Date: 24 Dec 2011 4:42 AM Title: Epilogue
thanks for the wonderful story. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and yours.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 22 Dec 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
great chatpter!
Date: 22 Dec 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, shes finally willing to admit she can love him and wants to move forward with her life with him. LOVE IT. hate to see it go, but its been a great ride, keep up the awesome kick ass work.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aïe... Les enfants risquent d'être fâchés après Jasper car ils ne doivent pas savoir pourquoi il les a abandonnés comme ça. Ça doit leur rappeler le départ de leur père. Sans le vouloir, Bella a sûrement fait mal aux enfants...
Joyeux Noël!
Author's Response:
;) Very perceptive. Not many people caught onto that! :D
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Dec 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter!!! Can't wait to read the next one! :)
Date: 12 Dec 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
good chapter. Glad the divorce is over.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
aww :) Jasper is just so sweet! Loved this chapter so much! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 20 Nov 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well so Edward is hopeless. I want to say who cares, honestly everyone does. The future women he hurts, his children, his parents and siblings. Bella will be relieved to be away from him even though she still loves him.
sad
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
More please Jen! :-D
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
excellent story!!
Date: 19 Nov 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! :) I agree with Jasper I don't think that Edward's condition excuses everything he did.... I am glad that Edward let her go because I really think she would have gone back to him if he didn't. Can't wait to see the next one!
Date: 19 Nov 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt one
Date: 16 Nov 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yep perfect way to handle this. Bella should have never gone back after she found out about the cheating. Now she gave him his chance. He is finished in all ways that can be. Pictures of the house diseaster! Pictures tell lots more than twisted words. She needs proof of the cheating.
Now moving forward. Restraining order and no contact. Their children are now hurt.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter!!! wow... Edward has just lost it.... Can't wait to see more!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to the next chatper
Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow! Just found this story and it is amazing!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
i have a feeling ducheward didnt keep it in his pants again! looking forward to the enxt chapter
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
You know sometimes people like Bella have to have the shit kicked out of them before they stand up and fight back. She has to for her kids.
Just kick his ass out and file. You have got all the evidence of his cheating. He will judge her unfairly because of his guilt. If I remember he was tired of her.
Ass
Date: 15 Nov 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh please don´t leave us hanging..what did edward do? did he hit her? or did he bed another women in their house? did they fight??????
Date: 15 Nov 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Personally I think the job is a great thing for Bella. She should car pool with Jasper. Tell Edward not to judge her by his standards. He is the cheater not her.
Get ready put that money away, you will be earning because HE will cheat again.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
You know, she is right and wrong. Do not take him back until he sees a councelor. He needs to make appointments and then go t them for a while.
If she could only here what he said about her. Sorry but children need both parents but not like this. This in the end does more harm than good.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's hard to walk away from what's familiar even if it's not good for you. I hope Bella realizes it soon and gives Jasper a shot. I have a feeling Edward isn't going to straighten up his act at all.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward ot the next chatper
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Seriously, any person who knows they are being cheated on and still stays with that person, deserves what they get... they are setting themselves up for faliure.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, you can't blame Jasper. If Bella's going to take him back, she should do it having ALL the facts.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Is Edward dying or in trouble? Is he trying to drive a wedge between him and Bella?
Date: 06 Nov 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
i hope she doenst take him back !
Date: 01 Nov 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Liking your story so far
Date: 01 Nov 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
You know in the end. Cooper will side with his Mama. Boys always, always take care of mama. Girls sometimes don't but then again, if he is having too much fun with his plaything and they are old enough *(and they arent) to figure this out he burns a bridge with his daughter as well.
I say keep them busy quit worrying about Edward. Get your lawyer and all your documentation on his cheating and.........take his ass for all he is worth. Own that company if you have to when it is over those CHILDREN deserve that.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wish cut/paste worked here (or I could just figure out how to make it work). I'm trying to review at both sites.
Love this story. It's so heartbreaking how many men act just like Edward. Prick!
I'm glad Bella & the kids have Jasper in their life.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to seeing what happens next
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow!
Google Translate. French.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love your srtory!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Date: 28 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
OOH! so far,so good!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
départ prometteur!
Google Translate, french.
Montréal, Québec, 19h40
Date: 27 Oct 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved the chapters tonight !
Date: 27 Oct 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can see this in him really. Always that self absorbed mind. I know better than you business. Well this stuff happens to women. So Help her rise above him. Go to a spa, take some time with yourself. Sue Edward for all his money, when He has his little piece and is broke, what will he do?
Date: 27 Oct 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it and can't wait for more :-)
Date: 27 Oct 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
totally looking forward t oseeing how this plays out