Date: 25 Nov 2019 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow - cute story, with a surprise ending!
Thanx for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've just found your story and want to say - I LOVED EVERY WORD. I only wish it could be longer. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed this. It was cute.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Haha.
Take that you spiteful bitch.
Karma bit you in the Ass.
Such a lovely story.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lol. Karma sucks.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lol life is good ; )
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Haha. LOL. Great little story. Thx! :o)
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol, I love it. lauren fainting just made my day..
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, I think it's a really sweet story.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of my top 5 3DD songs, and that saying something - huge fan.
Sweet!
Date: 11 Feb 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a cute lil one shot!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol! Okay, that is So fun! I loved it.
Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was great, I really hate girls like that that pick on other people just to make themselves feel better. The ending was perfect, I though it was funny you made Lauren faint at the end.
Author's Response:
eh... she deserved it. Glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was cute. Thanks for sharing it.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!!!!!! Totally loved it!!!!!! It was amazing and so sweet!!!! They fell in love and Bella didn't know how he was...!!!!!! Edward couldn't let her classmate go away with their treatment toward Bella so they got what they deserved!!!!! haahhaah!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me that you are going to make it a story???? Show us their lives in the end of high school and then in college and in life...!!!!!! Think about it?????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow... I really didn't expect so many of you to want a continuation of this! I hadn't thought any further that this. I'll think about it and see if any inspiration strikes.
I'm just stunned.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT. Absolutely LOVE that Lauren fainted in the end.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Life IS good!! loved it!! you should write more (and of course let us see how lauren and jessica act now, lol)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was so cute, if only life could be that perfect and romatic and just! Love that Edward came to her school and set that whole thing up!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh!! That was amazing!!! I love it!!
Tried to respond to your response to my comment on Uprising but it didn't take. Tried to send you a message but it didnt work so....
Thank you for your kind words! I really loved Uprising & I agree.....its like the bad boy/good girl attraction in reverse. If you read her early i/v's, she sounds so fake. Like 'oh my....I never wanted all this fame. I just want to do what I love" and hides by saying she's shy!
I don't think she has a lot of parental influence. I'm just old fashioned, too old, ugly but still hold out hope that one day he'll be on one of my flights or I'll get a seat next to him and I can chat. Can you imagine? 38,000 feet in the air on a metal tube?? Gah!
Oh well....that's why I loved Louise....hope springs eternal!
Both stories were amazing.
This one was so sweet!! Glad Bella just stayed true to herself! No need to prove anything to anyone & Edward saw that!!
Thanks again!
Author's Response:
Too bad she's not any good at doing what she loves. Every movie, it's the same cadence to her voice, the same mannerisms... that's not acting. That's just reading lines as yourself. No range whatsoever.
I'm glad you liked my little one-shot. Sometimes a song just triggers something.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely........I really like this story. Is it going to be a multi-chapter? Pleeeaaasse say yes....pleeaasssee ;-)
Author's Response:
Actually, it's just a one-shot... I didn't know where to go with it from here. But if I get an idea for continuation, I'll run with it, ok?
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG i' loving it that was just so cute i can't stop smiling
please keep up the great work
angel