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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:45 PM Title: Futuretake: The Art of Forever

Love love love 



Author's Response:

I want to start this by saying I read each of your reviews, but I'm just going to respond to this last one, for ease. :)

THANK YOU so very much for all of your wonderful comments along the way. It's been so long since this story completed, and though I get the occasional favorite or follow on it, it hasn't gotten a review in a very long while. I love that you enjoyed it and it seriously put a smile on my face every single time I saw a notification come through with another review. 

These characters are ones I hold pretty close to me, becuase this was the first fic I finished, it's my longest one, and I was with those characters more than I've been with any of the other ones I've written. It means so much to me to hear all of the kind things you had to say, and all of your compliments. 

xo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:24 PM Title: Epilogue 2 - The edge of Forever

Perfect!!!!!!!!

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 2:50 PM Title: Epilogue 1: Two Weddings and a Gay Guy

Finally!!!!!! He asked he . 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 32: At Home

Glad Edward decided to give Rose another chance because I feel like he would be a hypocrite if he didn't give her a chance to prove she can change. He has changed so much since he met Bella.  Everyone is growing up. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

Glad they worked things out. Excited for Jasper's proposal.  Sad for Rose. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

Glad they worked things out. Excited for Jasper's proposal.  Sad for Rose. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2017 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 30: Back Again

So glad that she decided to stay with him. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 29: Room to Breathe

I feel sorry for both of them.  

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Date: 15 Mar 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 28: Truth and Time

Well..........I don't know who is more pissued Rose or Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 27: All Good Things...

Oh no!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 26: A New Arrangement

Well they are taking the big step of moving in together.  

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Date: 11 Mar 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 25: Home Sweet Home

Wonder what is in their future  

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Date: 10 Mar 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 24: Second Thoughts

I hope the bet does not blow up on their faces. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 23: Los Angeles

Bella did jump to conclusions.  She should have let Edward explain  while they were still at the club. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 22: New Year, New Beginnings

Lol at Renee. So glad Emmett's mom was understanding and supportive of Rose and Emmett. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 21: Seattle

So glad that Edward finally told Bella his past story.  So glad that we finally got to hear his story. Beautiful chapter.  Awesome job. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: We Need to Talk

I am loving these chapters that have the characters POV.  

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Date: 06 Mar 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 19: Minneapolis

I need a massage!!!!!!!!

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Date: 05 Mar 2017 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 18: Celebrations and Revelations

Wow!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 17: Chicago

Love that he found out she secret stash in her little suitcase. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Countdown

Awesome New Years!!!!!!! Glad Edward and Bella put Riley in his place. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 15: Home for the Holidays

Edward acts one way with Jasper, like he really has very little feelings for Bella but then when he is with Bella or texting her he acts all sweet and really caring. I think Edward is afraid to admit his real feelings. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 14: Surprise!

How exciting for Edward and for Bella. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 13: Flying Solo

They handled Thanksgiving very well

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Date: 04 Mar 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Test

Glad she did not immediately take him back. Love Bella and Mike together.  Lol. I like that she is letting Edward think that she has a real date for Emmett's party. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 11: Two Steps Back

Glad Jasper qave up the bet. I just hope it is not to late. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2017 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Beginning

Edward has it bad.  He needs to end the bet NOW!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 9: Slipping

CCan't believe that bElla was that forward with Edward.  Oh no, I can't believe that Jasper is telling Emmett about the bet. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: On the Edge

Was Edward texting Jessica?  When are we going to find out his past with Jessica? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Fine Line

I was wondering  the same as Jasper. He has more to lose thanot his house.  I can't believe that Bella told him about her tits.lol  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6: Playing With Fire

They are getting along better. When Bella finds out about this bet she is going to be furious and very very hurt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

They are so back and forth with each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

OMGosh!! I can't believe that Bella was acting like that with someone who you works with/for. 

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Date: 27 Feb 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure

Can't wait to find out his deal with Jessica. 

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Date: 27 Feb 2017 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines

They both sure do have some hot fantasies

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Date: 26 Feb 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?

This sounds like it could get  fun!!!!!!

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 21: Seattle

This chapter could not be more perfect!!

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 19: Minneapolis

I wonder if she has aid it outloud in her sleep.

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 18: Celebrations and Revelations

Jasper might see those tests!  Will we have all of them preggers together?

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 17: Chicago

They are about to get their knk on!

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Countdown

Is bella on birth control??

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 15: Home for the Holidays

Her dream is crazy funny!

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: Surprise!

Whay are emmett & rosalie still worried?

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Date: 26 Jan 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 13: Flying Solo

This cat & mouse game is soooo good!

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Date: 23 Jan 2017 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Test

I am so addicted to this story!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 11: Two Steps Back

Shew! 

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Date: 23 Jan 2017 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Beginning

Please tell me there is more next chapter!!! 

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Date: 23 Jan 2017 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 9: Slipping

No no no jasper! 

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Date: 23 Jan 2017 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 8: On the Edge

I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews!  It's so freaking amazing!!

Reviewer: Readersheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 7:46 AM Title: Futuretake: The Art of Forever

Damn. I loved every single solitary word of this story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Much love. 

Reviewer: Twinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:28 AM Title: Futuretake: The Art of Forever

This was a lot of fun!  Thanks!

 

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:07 AM Title: Futuretake: The Art of Forever

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 9:21 PM Title: Futuretake: The Art of Forever

BPOV:  ROFL for Mikes goofy proposal on T-day.  lol for birthday party presents.  Yup friends and family always seem to buy stuff you've said no to.

Awww poor Mike with raining on his wedding day.  B is a planning problem genius.  

 

Wonderful end to the story.  TY for writing and sharing it.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 9:06 PM Title: Epilogue 2 - The edge of Forever

BPOV: sucks to be apart on holidays.  hmmm I bet he didn't forget.  

Aww nice bachlorette party  Mike is a peach.  muhahaha for Mike getting Renee to bring "the" suitcase.  Nice mental imagery for the after wedding pic on the beach

awww nice T-day surprise.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 8:48 PM Title: Epilogue 1: Two Weddings and a Gay Guy

BPOV: aww  yey for healthy baby for Rose and proposal from Em. ROFL for Mike's gift.   Great party too.  yey for first married!!!

EPOV:  awww so nice he went in person to talk to Charlie.  awww sweet proposal.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 32: At Home

RPOV:  Glad they talked but don't know if they'll ever be good friends. Surprised the others are still going to go to Paris without her since she is the one to set it up in the first place. 

BPOV: Sucks that she can't go but at least Rose was able to change her ticket. oooh Edward couldn't keep the secret to himself. awww.  LOL for Mike not liking to fly.

EPOV:  wow nice suprise E did. 

JPOV:   awww for nervous Jasper. sweet proposal.

BPOV:  Glad they took up Victoria's proposal.  This is going to be great for them. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

EPOV:  Ah so bella decided to be come the new landlord (did i read that right?) Good investment it can be. Rose needs to grow up before she pushes away all her friends.  

BPOV:  I don't care for confrontation either but sometimes its gotta be done.  Glad B got her to see her side.

JPOV: awww J's gonna propose.  Jeez 12grand.  My first car didn't cost that much.  lol. 

RPOV: Uh oh.  Yea kinda figured Paris was out.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 30: Back Again

EPOV:  wow thats great news for him.  Can understand his distraction though.

BPOV:  Love the old lady at the bus stop.  My kids do the same thing when there are smokers around.  Well at least they talked.  hmm going home to forks though.  Dunno if that's a good idea with charlie and guns and all.  LOL   Renee makes some great points.  

MPOV: LOL for the neighbor confrontation.   Although being military, kinda resent the 830 comment since when you have to be to work a 3AM.....   but I digress.

Yey for Renee calling him and not the girls.  Great intervention Mike!!!

EPOV:  uh oh drinking.  Hope he doesn't do anything stupid.  Esp with a moron of a bartender giving him the macho advice. Glad Jasper showed up before he did something stupid.    Glad he walked away from the bimbo.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 29: Room to Breathe

EPOV: Well at least Jasper gave him a heads up.  Sadly Rose is a hormonal powder keg . 

RPOV:  Wow  Mike makes some great points.  Glad he talked her down from her sniper vantage point (LOL).  Mike needs to go have that conversation with Bella now

EPOV:  Well at least she is letting him explain and he is being honest.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 28: Truth and Time

APOV:  oooh Rose is on the warpath.  Em better watch his goodies.  Hee hee.  Wonder if telling B is the way to go though.  hmmm.  

BPOV:  awww sweet of e and Esme to help with the move that way.  Ugh they should have made E tell her not do it that way. Rose was wrong to go about it that way and be all demanding too.  They are forgetting that he DID change and he DID fall in love with her. Hopefully she actually lets him explain 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 27: All Good Things...

EPOV:  Glad he's going to give it back but some time away would be nice after the gala I bet.   

BPOV:  Oh wow. WHat a week.  Def get movers.  I've done the back breaking work many years with all my military moves.  It sucks.  Pay someone if you can. aww sweet of Esme to stop in.   Wow  big offer from Victoria.  Party sounds wonderful.

JPOV: uh oh.. Boys and thier big mouths.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 26: A New Arrangement

BPOV:  Time Jump!!!   SOunds like E is really coming along in the relationship.  Wow for Rose's support.  aww poor scared Bella.  Glad Mike is there to push her in the right direction.  

EPOV: Sounds like his place would be better anyway at least to me.  Glad she realizes it.  The only bad part is that he did some manwhoring in the apt. aww for Esme actually getting some news first.  hee hee

BPOV:    yey for Charlie not being crazy

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Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 25: Home Sweet Home

BPOV:  aww for E's text. I'm a negative Nellie.  Now I think something is going to happen at that meeting.  ROFL for leaving the suitcase in forks.  

EPOV:  Glad the guys have some time together too.  Hopefully they will see he's being honest about B.

BPOV:  5 oclock rule sounds interesting.  Smart compromise on E's part.  At least she has a little time to think about it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 24: Second Thoughts

APOV:  lol for Victoria's back story.  hmm is that an omen I'm feeling coming on?

RPOV:  aww poor Rose.  Prego hormones are hard.  Nice surprise for V-Day. Wow Rose is def being debbie downer about B&E.  

EmPOV:  hmmm Em is worrying now.  They def need a guy talk and soon before something gets spilled accidnetally.  Although Jasper giving up the keys kinda just means E won the bet.   E needs to give them back and call everything even. Wonder if Em is going to spill to Rose now.

JPOV: oooh so Jasper is spilling first.  This is sooo not going to end well.  ROFL for the switchup though.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 23: Los Angeles

BPOV:  Mike and Laurent are too cute together.   ok  she is being a little childish.  At least let him explain.  

EPOV:  Wow  how did her drunk arse acutally get up and out before him?  At least she apologized.  Mike is a trip.

BPOV:  hmmm so Alice thinks he's hiding something.  Not good.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 22: New Year, New Beginnings

MPOV: aww for giving him a key.  Ooh and maybe seeing B/E too

JPOV: Sounds like a great start to his new job.

RPOV:  Ugh all day sickness. I remember those days. Kinda figured his mom would guess. 

ReneePOV:  ROFL for her sorta snooping

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 21: Seattle

BPOV:  I'm not much of an early person either. LOL for his nervousness to meet Charlie.  Nice to have a story with a normal Renee in it.   LoL for Charlie and The Fockers. 

EPOV:   awww nice compliment and I can understand wanting a little break for themselves too. Wow  I can sorta get his anger at the graduation.  At least she or someone should have warned her, esp if Riley was the same arse at the party. Glad he finally told her.  awww for ilys

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 20: We Need to Talk

EmPOV:  awww he handled that so well.  

JPOV: Glad E apologized but why dinner with them, esp after Riley was an arse at that party.  Oh just Jess.  I can see that then.  hmmm ack I really, really, really want the whole Jess story now.  

RPOV:   lol for Jasper finding the tests.  Bet that was a funny convo.  Glad she called Bella.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 19: Minneapolis

BPOV:  lol his cheesiness is cute. I vote for the ecigs too over that nasty habit.  hmmm interesting day dreams.  oooh sounds like she's made a big decision.

EPOV:  oooh so not the way for E to find out.   Jazz is gonna be in the doghouse. 10 years huh?  really need this whole story. well Bella needs it before me, but ya know what I mean.  aww Dr Bella.  Although I wouldn't do soup quite yet.  

BPOV: awww sweet way to make it up to her.  hmmm Now why do I have the feeling he did hear her

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18: Celebrations and Revelations

JPOV:  hmm sounds like E isn;t going to be happy if he gets the job but if its right for J I say go for it.  hmmm Jess spoke up for him huh?  that surprises me. Diego sounds like he'd be great at one of the Rag papers.  Ugh. 

RPOV:  Em is too cute. awww for making Vday plans already. Aww for the ILY's too.

APOV:  uh oh Rose has gone off the deep end. 

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17: Chicago

BPOV:  wow  what a vaca bag they are planning for her.  Can understand her reluctance though.   I could see taking a few things though, esp the lingerie.  kinda careless to not get her home on time though.  Be unprofessional of her to miss the plane.  uh oh...lemme guess Louis is gonna be the only bag that makes it to the plane?

EPOV: WEll at least the rest of her bags went too.  LOL.  Relaxing night in sounds about right to me esp with that much snow.

BPOV: Glad his talk went well.   What a snoop he is. Naughty boy. Meh  go for using all the items.  LOL

Surprised she hasn't asked him what the Riley thing was all about yet  

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Countdown

Uh oh Paris. That is a bad omen I think.   Cute gifts though. awww they are at a NYE party together.  Mike has a point.  Hope E doesn't hurt her.

EPOV: Wow Riley is a real dick.  Go Bella for slapping him.  aww for official labels now.  yummy end.  I'm going to pretend they used protection.  LOL

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 15: Home for the Holidays

Glad the book is going well for him.   LOL for all the Mom's and thier snoopiness.   Hmm still wondering about the Jess story.

Reviewer: Theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 14: Surprise!

BPOV:  Oh my.  sounds like the caterer has dropped the ball significantly.  Don't blame R for being pissed.  Bella (and edward) to the rescue!!!  

aww for E coming through.  Sounds like Rose is gonna have to chop a little ice of her heart for him.  Oh boy E.  You are in trouble now

EPOV:  Sounds like E got a little of what he deserved with Irina and semistalkerish behavior. Glad he got himself and her out of there before Irina pounced on them both.  

BPOV:   lol for Alice.  hmmm without a hitch.  Wonder what is going to happen now.  Great announcement.  Hmmm for Embry throwing her under the proverbial bus though.  

EPOV: awwww

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 13: Flying Solo

BPOV:  uh oh B's been stood up.  lol for Mike.   aww for T-day toasts.  hmm sounds like Alice and Rose are writing Cullen off even after the apology and flowers.  

lol Charlotte is a trip.  oh boy  Edward and his parents!!!  ROFL. 

EPOV:  awww he likes her.  Peter is funny too. Wow she acutally asked for time to make a decision .  Smart girl esp after wine. 

BPOV:  hmm he seems to want to work for it.   Sadly i'm worried about how and when she's going to find out about the bet

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Test

BPOV:  Despite what R had said, he did come over and apologize a bit.  Good point about his actions needing to support his words though.

Yea I'm not a fan of the snow or cold either.  Mike is too cute and funny.  

LOL for Aand J POVs

EPOV:  hmmm that was kinda evil of B with the date thing.  He's going to think its ok for him to bring a floozy with him 

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: Two Steps Back

EPOV:  oh E is def running scared.  sooo not good.

 

EmPOV: Well he was going to come clean to Rose at least.  

 

BPOV:  Alice is much to trusting of E and of Jasper becuase she has to know that he knows something.  Don't blame B for being cynical at this point.

 

EPOV:  Not intentionally hurting her????   Really??? what is the whole bet about then?  Moron.  Even giving him the house, J is still an arsehole and part of it.

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Beginning

BPOV:  lol for bomb dropping at breakfast.  Oh if Alice only knew about his feelings..Sigh.  Rose is giving her sound advice.  

 

EPOV:  hmmm Surprised Em is believing his line of BS.  This Jess thing has me wondering though.   Wondering if maybe E popped the question and Jess denied him horribly.

 

BPOV:  ROFL for belch. Oh my  She's gonna get hurt bad I'm afraid.  

 

EPOV:  Bella really needs to cut back on the drinks.  SHe's making it way to easy on E.   But at least he takes care of her before himself on the sex side.

 

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 9: Slipping

BPOV:  oh she is so going to regret this tomorrow. He def know how to play a woman's body though.  Glad you mentioned condoms since I don't remember seeing that in earlier chapters.  Lord knows what he'd have if he didn't.  

 

EPOV:  awww someone's missing B in the morning. Glad he's thinking of calling Jasper. hmm so Bella wants to talk.  This should be interesting. aww for Sam talking about his Kate.  hmmm she wants a date?  I didnt see that coming.

 

BPOV: Dunno if this is going to work in your favor since he's not know to "date" or be with the same woman more than once.  Guess we'll see.

 

EmPOV: ooh Jasper.  You've spilled to Em.  Wonder how long till the girls find out. 

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Date: 07 Dec 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 8: On the Edge

BPOV:  Why in the world would Alice ask Edward to come?  Is she trying to give Bella a stroke or something?   Oh my.  Never thought I'd say this in a story, but Poor Mike.  LOL for B's word vomit.

EPOV: ah so Em is E's sometimes friend too. SOunds like E is starting to drop a few bricks off the wall around his heart too....well until the bet convo with Jazz.  Sigh.  Am I ever going to like E?  At least J tried to get him to stop it.  Wonder who will break first and tell someone.  hmmm guessing the text was from Jess.

BPOV:  Can't wait to see what the papparazzi make up after this night.  Poor B with falling or attempting too.

EPOV:  B really needs to stop drinking so much.  Oh yes she is going to regret it I'm afraid. 

BPOV:  Regrets indeed I'm afraid 

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Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Fine Line

APOV:  Wonder who is going to spill the Jessica story for us.  Ben huh? There has to be more to that story because it doesn't really seem bad from what A has said so far for B to be that jaded.

BPOV: hmmm so she called him.  Ugh that's gotta stroke his ego  LOL for Billy messing with him.  Aww pedicure.  I've never actually had one myself.  Wierd boob names.  Drinking with him is soooooo not a good idea.  hmm kissing already

JPOV: aww for date 2 planned already and sweet first kiss.  Glad he realizes his mistake with the bet. But afraid its def going to backfire at some point.

BPOV:  lol for E.  He's not going to let him forget is he.

 

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Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6: Playing With Fire

RPOV:  awww Em sleeping over already.  Yea way to early to be calling someone

BPOV: Oh B.  I'm so afraid this MW is going to hurt you bad.  Wow they had a meeting without killing each other.  LOL

EPOV: Wonder what Esme thinks of his reputation.  She has to know.  No guilt huh? Men like him are so pathetic.  Gotta hate papparazzi liars too.  LOL for Jazz "ratting" him to Esme.  I'm with Carlisle.  It is a disgusting habit.   Really wanna hear the Jessica backstory

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

BPOV: Ride his coattails... why not? He came to you after all. Sigh.  Can see her need to apologize though to be professional.  But its not like he approached her in the office or in a professional session either.

JPOV: Glad J is talking with Alice but I don't think he's going to like him much when he finds out about the bet.   LOL for Newton and Laurent together maybe.  Good avoindence maneuver by B.

EPOV:  Jessica's at GQ I guess? He really likes putting his foot in his mouth about his dick.  Rules huh?  Wonder who will break them first and how.

BPOV: yummy dream

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

EPOV: Pigs indeed

BPOV: Skin crawl indeed.  Promises?  we'll see how long that lasts

EPOV: sorry E but you deserve every second of her bitchiness.  You've proved the point again with going home with another girl.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure

Oh Alice what have you done without talking to B first.

EPOV: wow didn't take long for E to put his foot into his mouth.  Surprosed she said yes.  Book does sound like a good idea though, but what a pig he is.

BPOV: I can understand Rose's point but I'd be wary too esp after the comment he made.  I'd be mad at alice not talking to her before making the appt.

EPOV: hmm Jessica huh?  Wonder how long till we get that backstory.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines

aww Rose is in wuv.  E "tried to make her aquaintence"  Really hate papparazzi and the crap they make up.

EPOV: men are pigs.  Hope J doesn't hurt Alice.  Hope Esme doesn't help but I'm sure she will. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?

LOL for thinking Em is gay. E is def a manwhore.  Can see I'm not going to like him a whole lot.  Go Bella.  Way to tell him of.  aww for smitten Rose.   Jand E are pigs.  Def hope it backfires in the end on them both before B gets hurt (or Alice since I'm sure J is gonna get with her.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 5:01 PM Title: Epilogue 2 - The edge of Forever

i LOVED this story ;) i liked the canon changes in name of the others ;) thanks for sharing this with us ;D

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 2:12 AM Title: Epilogue 2 - The edge of Forever

What a great read. I so enjoyed it. Thank U. :o)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 32: At Home

I hate how Edward turned everything around on Rose. It DOES matter that he made the bet, even if he ended it, and he's scum for saying otherwise. If he truly believes that, he's scum, and if he doesn't believe it but is just playing Rose, then he's a slightly different shade of scum. Either way, I would dump him.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 32: At Home

I know I read and review on FF, but it is one of those stories that you have to read the update on all sites it is posted.  

Thank you for the acknowledgement, and please know that although you may have times of self doubt, we do not doubt your abilities in the least.  And the recent update was proof.  

Proud of you!!!!!!

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

Hee Hee you are right. It definately isn't three months...sad face.

Reviewer: raissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 21: Seattle

finaly

Reviewer: raissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

i swear if i said edwar is an jerk that would be too kind cause his willing to win a bet without thinking of the consequences like breaking bella's heart win she says i love you

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

TY for the update,  I really enjoyed Bella and Rosie's talk.   Love this storyline,  and will miss updates when you're finished,  but can always reread! 

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

Thanks for the update.  

Reviewer: Marychell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 31: Moving On

Please don't take that long..... I've read the story on the fan fiction page at least 10 times a day for the last 2 weeks! Can't wait to know the rest of Edward and Bella's love life.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 30: Back Again

Woot! Say they are moving in together still! They have shit to work out but I wanna see them do it under the same roof.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 30: Back Again

So glad someone pointed out that Rose was not the best of Friends doing that to Bella,  Yippee Love me some make up sex time to come! ,,!   Love this story

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 30: Back Again

Although I am all for an HEA, I think Bella is too fucking immature for a serious relationship.  She either runs or wallows, and she has done both to the extreme in this chapter.  She needs to either shit or get off the pot.  Personally, I could have kicked Edward in the balls for becoming such a pussy and letting her ride rough shod all over him.  Yes he was wrong, Yes he fixed it.  But when all was said and done, and she still wallowed in self pity, he should have done them both a favor and brok up with her.  Simply put, Bella really got on my nerves this chapter.

Oh, and welcome back.  Congrats on the paper and the new job.  I have sorely missed you.  As you can see by this review your writing has illicited more emotions than I was anticipating.  Great job.

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