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Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love this and can't wait to read more! I hope you can update again soon. I wonder what Rosalie and Melissa are going to try to pull and will Emmett stand by Rosalie with whatever she does?

Reviewer: gykinga Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lovely story...I hope you will update soon.

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

they are soo cute!!! love it

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

i love it!!! rose is just a crazy person....

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

I can't believe they were acting like that in the car. That was just tacky and rude. Some things you just don't do in public and around other people. Making out  like you are in heat is one of them. They have plenty of time to do that at home.  Even exhibitionist try to be discreet. It is just the thrill of having sex in public in a sneeky manner that is a rush. They want to do it and not have people realize it is going on. Edward and Bella acted like they forgot Jasper and Alice were in the car. This was also the first time Edward had met them. Bella should have never climbed on Edward's lap. She should have waited until they got home and then jumped his bones.



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true, but they got carried away... teeanage hormones and all that. :)

 thanks for your review.

S.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bellla needs to get a hold of Rosalie and Melissa rip them a new one!!  Please don't put Edward or Bella in a compromising position to break them up!! Give both of them a backbone to stand up for themselves..

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

This was such a sweet chapter. I can remember what it is like when you meet your soulmate. It is so overwelming. Your whole body reacts when you touch. It is a feeling you can't describe fully.

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

ahhhh amazing!!!!! i love it wonder if they will get in trouble!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oops... I can't wait to see what Esme does now. I am so glad she is finally in Chicago. They are going to have a great time! I am a little worried about Carlisle and Esme leaving for a few days only because who will make sure Rose stays away. I hope Emmett has learned his lesson and will not let Rose do or say anything to Bella. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

It sounds like Renee is ready to split the second Bella goes off to college. She is making sure Bella is prepared. I am glad that Bella gets to go and be around a more normal family. Bella's seems sad all the time. Edward is too talented and smart for is own good. He seems to have problems relating to people his own age. They seem too silly to him. Bella acts older than her age because she is always around adults. That is way they relate so well.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

Cute!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

It's time! They are finally going to meet. I can't wait! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great Chapter!  I am so enjoying this story so far.

Reviewer: Twisted Puppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

update soon!!!! please!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am glad that Charlie is realizing that his daughter is growing up. They are going to have such a great time together. I can't wait for Esme to meeting Bella. She is going to love her. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

This chapter is amazing like always!!! love it!!! cant wait to see what will happen!!!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

I can't wait until she gets to Chicago. Great story.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love it.  Edward is soo sweet!  Now only if Emmett can control Rosalie and Melissa (skanks)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

I glad that Renee can be so persuasive. Bella is 18 and needs to spread her wings a little. Charlie needs to realize that his baby girl has grown up. In 6 months she will leave home and head off to the university of her choice. By this time you have either raised her right or it is too late. She is staying with another family and going with friends. She will be fine.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am so glad her parents said she could go. I don't think the conditions are too much either. Any parent should ask for those things before they let their daughter go meet someone in a stange city. They are going to have so much fun! I can't wait! Great job...thanks!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 6

Edward better get new passwords for his computer and a new lock for his door. He also better warn Bella bout Rosalie and Melissa. She needs to be on the look out for fowl play. He also better lock his cell phone.



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love it!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well I am glad everything is out in the open in the Cullen house. Rose better watch it and give up on this or Emmett should kick her to the curb. She is out of her mind. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

I can't believe Rose tried to do that! What a bitch.

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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great job!



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am glad that Bella and Edward talked everything out. Emmett was so wrong, but I am sure that Rose was involved too. Malissa is strange! Edward needs to stay away from her. I can't wait for Edward and Bella to talk again. Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh emmett you are so busted and i hope edward gets you big time. man oh man did you cross a line. wow i sure hope edward can fix this

man over before it ever begins. that sucks



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

well edward seems your a bit insecure and you have so much going for you

you seem like your all that and a bag of chips. you need more self esteem maybe you and bella will be good for each other on that note. seems your both the same in your views

loving it



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

how romantic

very cool i ma happy for both of them



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

like the premise of the story and looking forward to more



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Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

I just found this story, and I think you are doing a great job.  I know it was Emmett who sent that one letter to Bella.  Emmett is an asshole.  I'm not liking him AT ALL.  I think Bella should call Edward and tell him about that letter.  I would love to see Edward kick Emmetts ass, like he deserves.  How long do we have to wait before they meet each other? I can't wait to read whats going to happen next.  Please update soon.



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great job!



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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yeah Emmets a dick



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Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I hope you update again soon.  I really want to see what happens next!  Great chapter



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Edward did the right thing telling Melissa that he didn't want to date her.  Emmett is the one that is in the wrong telling her he would take her and whatever else he lead her to believe. 

I think it is so sweet that Edward and Bella still want to write letters along with other ways of communication.  I am glad that Edward told Esme what is going on.  This way it won't be a shock.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

Freat story!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

So sweet!  I can't wait to see what is next for these two.  Great job...thanks!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this!  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Cute!



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)



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Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

I imagine that she wished to crawl into the computer with him when she opened up that gogeous boy's picture!



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Reviewer: Discordia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aww, what a cute premise for a story!  Love the idea, and it was a great first chapter.  Looking forward to reading more.



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Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's a romantic and hopeful beginning!



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Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is going to be a great story can't wait to read more.



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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the plot bunny!



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)



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