Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love this and can't wait to read more! I hope you can update again soon. I wonder what Rosalie and Melissa are going to try to pull and will Emmett stand by Rosalie with whatever she does?
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely story...I hope you will update soon.
Date: 31 May 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
they are soo cute!!! love it
Date: 31 May 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
i love it!!! rose is just a crazy person....
Date: 31 May 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
I can't believe they were acting like that in the car. That was just tacky and rude. Some things you just don't do in public and around other people. Making out like you are in heat is one of them. They have plenty of time to do that at home. Even exhibitionist try to be discreet. It is just the thrill of having sex in public in a sneeky manner that is a rush. They want to do it and not have people realize it is going on. Edward and Bella acted like they forgot Jasper and Alice were in the car. This was also the first time Edward had met them. Bella should have never climbed on Edward's lap. She should have waited until they got home and then jumped his bones.
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true, but they got carried away... teeanage hormones and all that. :)
thanks for your review.
S.
Date: 31 May 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bellla needs to get a hold of Rosalie and Melissa rip them a new one!! Please don't put Edward or Bella in a compromising position to break them up!! Give both of them a backbone to stand up for themselves..
Date: 12 Mar 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was such a sweet chapter. I can remember what it is like when you meet your soulmate. It is so overwelming. Your whole body reacts when you touch. It is a feeling you can't describe fully.
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
ahhhh amazing!!!!! i love it wonder if they will get in trouble!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oops... I can't wait to see what Esme does now. I am so glad she is finally in Chicago. They are going to have a great time! I am a little worried about Carlisle and Esme leaving for a few days only because who will make sure Rose stays away. I hope Emmett has learned his lesson and will not let Rose do or say anything to Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
It sounds like Renee is ready to split the second Bella goes off to college. She is making sure Bella is prepared. I am glad that Bella gets to go and be around a more normal family. Bella's seems sad all the time. Edward is too talented and smart for is own good. He seems to have problems relating to people his own age. They seem too silly to him. Bella acts older than her age because she is always around adults. That is way they relate so well.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
It's time! They are finally going to meet. I can't wait! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great Chapter! I am so enjoying this story so far.
Date: 10 Jan 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
update soon!!!! please!!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Charlie is realizing that his daughter is growing up. They are going to have such a great time together. I can't wait for Esme to meeting Bella. She is going to love her. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
This chapter is amazing like always!!! love it!!! cant wait to see what will happen!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait until she gets to Chicago. Great story.
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love it. Edward is soo sweet! Now only if Emmett can control Rosalie and Melissa (skanks)
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I glad that Renee can be so persuasive. Bella is 18 and needs to spread her wings a little. Charlie needs to realize that his baby girl has grown up. In 6 months she will leave home and head off to the university of her choice. By this time you have either raised her right or it is too late. She is staying with another family and going with friends. She will be fine.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am so glad her parents said she could go. I don't think the conditions are too much either. Any parent should ask for those things before they let their daughter go meet someone in a stange city. They are going to have so much fun! I can't wait! Great job...thanks!!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward better get new passwords for his computer and a new lock for his door. He also better warn Bella bout Rosalie and Melissa. She needs to be on the look out for fowl play. He also better lock his cell phone.
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Date: 14 Nov 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it!
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Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well I am glad everything is out in the open in the Cullen house. Rose better watch it and give up on this or Emmett should kick her to the curb. She is out of her mind. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 12 Nov 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
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Date: 12 Nov 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can't believe Rose tried to do that! What a bitch.
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Date: 01 Nov 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great job!
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Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
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Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am glad that Bella and Edward talked everything out. Emmett was so wrong, but I am sure that Rose was involved too. Malissa is strange! Edward needs to stay away from her. I can't wait for Edward and Bella to talk again. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Oct 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh emmett you are so busted and i hope edward gets you big time. man oh man did you cross a line. wow i sure hope edward can fix this
man over before it ever begins. that sucks
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
well edward seems your a bit insecure and you have so much going for you
you seem like your all that and a bag of chips. you need more self esteem maybe you and bella will be good for each other on that note. seems your both the same in your views
loving it
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
how romantic
very cool i ma happy for both of them
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
like the premise of the story and looking forward to more
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just found this story, and I think you are doing a great job. I know it was Emmett who sent that one letter to Bella. Emmett is an asshole. I'm not liking him AT ALL. I think Bella should call Edward and tell him about that letter. I would love to see Edward kick Emmetts ass, like he deserves. How long do we have to wait before they meet each other? I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great job!
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yeah Emmets a dick
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I hope you update again soon. I really want to see what happens next! Great chapter
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward did the right thing telling Melissa that he didn't want to date her. Emmett is the one that is in the wrong telling her he would take her and whatever else he lead her to believe.
I think it is so sweet that Edward and Bella still want to write letters along with other ways of communication. I am glad that Edward told Esme what is going on. This way it won't be a shock. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Oct 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
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Date: 08 Oct 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Freat story!
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Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet! I can't wait to see what is next for these two. Great job...thanks!
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Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 23 Sep 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Cute!
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Date: 23 Sep 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
:)
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Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
I imagine that she wished to crawl into the computer with him when she opened up that gogeous boy's picture!
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Date: 20 Sep 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww, what a cute premise for a story! Love the idea, and it was a great first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
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Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's a romantic and hopeful beginning!
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Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is going to be a great story can't wait to read more.
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Date: 20 Sep 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the plot bunny!
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Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
:)
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