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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

excellent story ;) thanks for sharing this with us on here ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

I'm with you about leaving them at this point in their lives, sometime it's just fun to imagine it your way! This was a great story to read, even through the heart breaks! Thanks to you, and I hope your boy is doing better with all his health problems. May you and both your children have a great 2014!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

I'm so happy that he found her, but not nearly as happy as Bella or Edward, I'll bet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter

Three and a half years! Boy, that was a long time to not hear a word from each other. I'm amazed that Carlisle is on board with trying to find Bella, but glad that he and Edward are going to be closer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go

You are so good to all us readers, writing this , and other stories, while dealing with school, and a sick baby and another child! Frankly, I'm in awe of your stamina and care for everything! This breakup between Bella and Edward was just wrenching and I'm relying on your promise of a happy ending for them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options

I really can't blame Edward's parents for their reaction, they don't have quite the same outlook Bella has on Rose and Emmett being together. She knew when it all came out in the open it was going to be bad, and sure enough, it's awful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval

It looked good for a minute there with Emmett and Bella making up , after a fashion, and then Edward shows up, hears the pretty good news and all hell breaks loose!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations

Some happy holiday season this will be, with all this misery around. I think Bella should listen to Alice's advice and act on it. If she and Edward really love each other, and I believe they do, they need to work this out! Six months isn't that long to wait for what you really want!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths

I'm proud of Edward for the way he explained his face being  a mess. He's probably right thinking that Charlie and his parents will keep asking questions! I feel bad for everyone in this situation, there's lots of pain and heartache to go around!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out

It amazes me that readers, or anyone , really would feel they had the right to tell you how to tell this story! Arrogant little devils, aren't they? This revelation of Edward's age and Emmett's involvement with Rosalie is a big mess and I sure hope you have a way out for everyone! There are several people really hurting here!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel

Good recommendation, Moose on the Loose, it is hilarious! Not very funny what Edward saw at the Port Motel, scummy Banner and a sixteen year old girl! Well, Bella said to leave him be and he would provide his own rope with which to hang himself and she was right! Now I'm thinking that Bella and Edward are about to be outed, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul

Sure glad they both said those magic words! I may be old, but I still believe in true love, and think these two have it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving

Bella may not remember in the morning, but I would bet money that Edward will! They have had a wonderful holiday week and it's going to be real difficult to give that up!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting

I'm not sure I like Edward's mother. She seemed a bit condescending towards Bella. Of course if she knew the truth, she would probably snatch Bella bald-headed for corrupting her baby! I just hope they have a nice quiet time to gether, away from prying eyes.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses

Good thing Bella talked the boys out of messing with scumbag Banner. Even better that she reassured Edward she didn't mind him calling her his girlfriend. Sure brightened up his whole day!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams

Not very likely that scenario, Edward being older and undercover. I know Bella thought he was in his early twentys when they first met, but that would be too much to hope for! Looks like Emmett isn't going to accept his mom and his best friend as a couple, either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances

Thomas Banner is a total asshole, forcing himself on Bella like that, GROSS! Sure pissed off Edward, who in turn told Emmett who seems furious!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night

Very enlightening dinner with Alice and Jasper and a nice gesture, when all was said and done. I wonder when Bella is going to find out about her son's new friend? Then I will be looking forward to her admitting that Edward isn't just living out a teenage boy's dream, he really loves Bella! That may just freak her out, I'm afraid!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications

Oh what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive! Emmett is doing kind of the same thing his buddy is, just not with Edward's mother! I have a feeling that revelation may not go well! I'm thinking the dinner date will be with Alice and Jasper.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings

From the sound of it, Ms. Swan is a very good teacher, and Edward a very good student!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 13 First Time

I wonder if Bella heard angels sing or if Edward did! He lasted a bit longer than I would have thought, that was good. This will either be somewhat of a relief or stoke the fires even more!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 12 Friday

I'll cross my fingers that there are no more interruptions, and Edward will receive his first lesson!

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11 Thursday

They are going to drive each other mad if they're not careful!

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 Wednesday

I'd give fifty-fifty ods on the cheetos eating being deliberate! Too bad about Bella not being able to say no to Emmett's puppy-dog eyes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 9 Tuesday

Oops! Guess this challenge went a bit too far! She didn't mean to humiliate him, after all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 Sunday and Monday

What a brat! He might be sorry he started this little campaign! Like she said, she's older and more experienced! It will be fun to watch, I'm sure of that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7 I Want You

You really are a terrible tease, aren't you? It's okay, I' enjoying this dance they are doing! It was kind of funny the way Emmett totally got messed up. Good thing he was so drunk and so sick, it might keep him from trying it again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 Adult Time

Seems Bella isn't having any luck trying to keep the boys out of trouble! It has to warm her heart, among other body parts, that Edward wants her as much as she wants him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5 Party Hard

Why am I not surprised the team tried to party hard at Emmett's house? Bella did a pretty good job of cleaning up the mess the kids made. She is right when she says her son is a good kid. She must have raised him right.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 Unwanted Suggestions

Are we about to see that green-eyed monster rear it's head? Bella is trying to doi the right thing but this is more than she can stand! Especially since she wants him for herself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 Toys and Temptation

How cool that Alice is into the same things Bella is! Poor Edward, he's not going to stand a chance, is he? There are worse ways for a young man to learn how to treat a woman, so what's the harm?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 Off Limits

Well, that was embarassing! Now I'll bet Bella is hoping it's true Edward really is eighteen. If he's legal, he's fair game in her estimation!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 And So It Begins

Oh Bella, God must not love you very much, for this to have happened!

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:32 AM Title: Prologue

I'm sure that what she is planning is illegal as well as immoral, so, since I'm going to enjoy reading it, I'll probably go to Hell! It should be a fun trip, if the prologue is anything to judge by!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Awww, what's he like?  Lol, nothing like hogging that limelight.  A proposal at his graduation, perfect and just like Edward to go for what he wants and not wait, loved it.  I'm just so happy they're back together, in love more than ever and getting married.  I'm going to imagine they have a perfectly happy and long life together.

I've really loved this story, thank you for sharing it.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

So Edward waited even longer before he went to see Bella.  I can understand that.  He must have felt so betrayed and hurt when he read her letter, if only he'd found it a day or two after she wrote it, but then would he have been able to stay away even for 6 months, maybe not.  At least now he's more sure than ever that Bella is the one for him, lol, and even though Edward's legal now Bella still wants him too........let's face it though she's still a cougar, hahahaha!!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter

Give that man a prize!  I have a new found respect for Carlisle.  So now I know what they were hiding and Carlisle was trying to find out who his rival was.  Esme was one brazen hussy and somewhat of a hypocrite, okay her younger man may have been legal but the pot was still calling the kettle slightly black. *raises eyebrow*  I feel sorry for Carlisle that he was put through that for years and because he loved Esme he couldn't bring himself to end it.  I feel sorry for Edward too that it affected the love and care he received and how ultimately, it affected the way he and Bella were treated. Secrets and lies have so many repercussions.

I'm glad that Carlisle told Edward everything and that he would have dealt with it differently if it wasn't for Esme, boy didn't she give herself away, and I'm really happy that he's going to help Edward to find Bella.  Oh, and just to say, three and half years, he didn't go through that bag for three and a half years........eeuwww!!  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go

I need a lie down in a darkened room until it's safe to come back up for air. Poor Edward, I hope he's found that letter, whatever is says, I hope he found it.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options

So the shit has really hit the fan now.  On a positive note, at least Carlisle and Esme haven't gone straight to the police so that means they want to avoid any scandal.  Are they doing that just to protect Edward or is Carlisle's career and their standing in the community coming in to it as well.  They might want to think about how they were happy to leave Edward to his own devices so much, how selfish and wrapped up in each other and Carlisle's career they've been, they weren't bothered about protecting and looking after their son then were they.  I can understand their outrage and anger but if there was nothing more to it I would expect them to go straight to the police but people will point fingers at them and how much they left Edward alone, he was bound to get into some sort of trouble.

I'd love to know what's in this letter Bella's writing, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval

Okay, I'm confused.  Rose is 27 and Emmett is 17, so her being more than 5 years older than him and him being under 18 makes a sexual relationship illegal.  So, when Bella says she knows the age of consent is 16 and it's legal for Emmett and Rose to see each other I'm assuming that she means just that, they can see each other but it's totally hands off until he turns 18 and he will be legal, unless Rose has suddenly lost 6 years of her life and she's 21 making her less than 5 years older than Emmett and therefore making it all happy and legal.

I can't believe that Edward followed her, but then he's so upset it would seem like a good idea just to make sure.  Now it looks's like someone followed him or was on their way to see Emmett......it's a toss up as to whether it's Charlie or Esme and Carlisle.......hmmm.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations

Hahaha!!  Parents aren't stupid, of course they know somethings going on but could they imagine that Edward and his best friend's mum, his teacher are having sex?  Will they think that's what their son is up to?  They may think that Edward's gay and Emmett rejected him, after all he's spent so much time at his house.  Lol.  

Bella will answer the phone, she can't stay away and Alice has given her hope. All they have to do is keep their hands off each other until Edward turns 18. Emmett is a different matter altogether and I should imagine will want to do some blackmailing.....I mean bargaining of his own to get what he wants and to stay quiet.  Alice knows Rose, so maybe she'll be drawn further into this, you know, to do more 'bargaining'.  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths

Poor Edward.  He has been naive and he shouldn't have assumed that Bella knew his age and was okay with it, he should've said how old he was but then it doesn't matter how mature he comes across to someone like Bella, deep down at the heart of him he's still 17 and will act that way and think that way. There's blame on both sides but as the one supposedly in control of their hormones I think Bella has to take most of the blame for this.  How are they all going to work this out without anyone finding out what's been going on?  Emmett's a loose cannon at the moment although the thought of him being in trouble will hopefully make him keep his mouth shut.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out

So Bella turned into the hypocrite sort of, as she did believe that Edward was 18 but she's right she should have checked.  It looks like Rose might just think she's dodged a bullet but then with Emmett leaving I have to ask is he really going to his Dads or is going to try and make things right with Rose?  I feel so sorry for Edward, more than I do for Bella really.  Yes Edward should've told her but he's the randy teenager with barely any control over his dick and we all know what happens when that rears it's head, big brain goes on holiday, lol.  Bella really should've made sure she had all her ducks in a row before she started this.  *sigh*  This story is full of should have's, what's important now is what are they going to do about it all?

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel

Woohoo!!  Thanks to Edward they've got Scumbanner bang to rights, lol.  Now their only problems seems to be that Emmett's caught them, but what's he doing there and does he have a certain busty blond with him?

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul

Awwww, see she could say it sober too, lol.  I'm so glad that Edward was able to say it and that he got the response he wanted too.  So sweet.  I do keep expecting them to get caught though. *sigh*

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving

Alcohol lowers inhibitions and gives us courage to say and do things that we wouldn't normally, good or bad, and so I think that Bella really meant what she said.  It's not an ideal way to say 'I love you' but then none of us are perfect. Will she remember?  Well that depends on whether she's a forgetful drunk, maybe if she does remember she might pretend not to, some people think if you say it when you're drunk it doesn't count.  I'm more interested to see Edward's reaction.  I hope she does remember and doesn't pretend not to, that would hurt Edward beyond belief.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting

Hmmm, I think Scumbanner's biding his time, he's been entirely too quiet since what he dd to Bella.  Is Emmett really spending the whole week with his Dad?  I just don't seem him passing up an opportunity to spend time with Rose.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses

But would that make any difference to Emmett?  I'm not sure that it would.  Has Bella managed to talk them out of doing something potentially stupid?  I don't think she has, Emmett is very strong willed.

Jane x

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams

Now that theory did cross my mind and it would explain why he wouldn't have sex with Tanya although so would the fact that she wasn't Bella, it could have been for both reasons, *throws hands up in the air* I don't know, you have my brain in a tizzy and then there was the conversation with Emmett when he brought Rose back to Edward's.  There is also still the confusion over his age (I would go back and look over past chapters but TWCS is being an arse and keeps dropping the connection, it would take me ages, lol) it's not been properly resolved yet.  That was close with Emmett, they could really do without being caught again.  I don't care how old Edward turns out to be at this stage because one way or another the shit's going to hit the fan big time when everything comes out.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances

Oh my God!  Banner is a sleaze bag.  Is he going to cause more problems for Bella?  Edward's defence of her might have made him suspicious.  I hope Emmett's not going to start throwng his weight around, making things worse.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night

Wow!  Alice was a bit brutal wasn't she.  I can see her point but to just go Edward's jugular just like that, well woah there little pixie, slow down.  I'm glad that Edward will have Jasper to talk to.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications

Okay, so I'm taking it that although Bella seems to think Edward is 18 he's not, he's 17.  Going off what Emmett said about Edward and his birthday in the summer, having a party and getting a car I'm now wondering whether he's actually 16 and skipped a grade because he's so clever.  Can you do that in the US?  Ooooh this could be seriously messy even without involving the law.  Given what Bella's doing with Edward, how will she feel about her son being with a 27 year old woman?  Will it be a case of double standards because Emmett's her baby?  Emmett talked about being a legend at school, how can he think that this won't get back to Bella if his mates at school know?  Oh dear God, the can of worms is open, well and truly.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings

The prologue and then some, wow, Edward is an eager learner and we all love one of those, lol.  He's getting the best education possible with one to one tuition, hahaha!!  He's going to be so big headed, he'll be walking around that school like he owns the place come Monday.  I wonder if Emmett will notice a difference in Edward after this weekend and will Emmett be giving off different vibes that alert Bella?  Hmmm.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 First Time

Finally they did the deed.  Bella seems to be suitably impressed and Edward didn't embarrass himself, all in all a good show, lol.  I get the feeling that they're both going to be like kids in a sweet shop from now on. *grins*

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 12 Friday

So this is another can of worms then about to be opened by Emmett.  I'm taking it his date is the much older Rosalie and if this is the case neither he nor Bella will have a leg to stand when all of this comes to a head.  What will Edward do?  If he tells Bella what's going on with Emmett then he'll know who grassed him up, if he doesn't tell, when the shit hits the fan, Bella's going to be angry about him lying to her.  So many repercussions to this.  I loved Edward's POV, so informative, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 11 Thursday

Definitely wasted, lol.  It looks like Edward might be addicted to some sugary goodness as well, in more ways than one, hahaha!

Jane x

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10 Wednesday

Oh my God!  Has Emmett got some sort of cock blocking sixth sense or something?  Lol.  Bella caved too quickly, she should have stuck to her guns that Emmett's grounded, how will Edward react to this news?

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 9 Tuesday

Bwahahahaha!!  Mission accomplished.  Is Edward going to be a good boy or is he going to be a really good boy so that Ms Swan ruins her panties?  Lol.

By the way, I meant to say that I don't know how anyone could call this story boring.  Were they sure they were reading this and not something else?

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 Sunday and Monday

Lol, and so the epic teasing begins.  They'll both be exploding by the weekend. Bella really needs to get her own back on Edward, hahaha!!

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 7 I Want You

Bloody hell!  Trust Emmett to go and spoil it for us....I mean Bella and Edward, lol.  It's such a shame that Edward can't take the piss out of him whining for his "Mommyyyyy" Bwahahahaha!!  I couldn't stop laughing at him wanting his Mommy and promising never to drink again and let's not forget the "I love you."  Just wait until he has to clean his bathroom, I think the I love you will have gone out of the window by then. Hehe!  Cleaning up Emmett's vomit, as far as I'm concerned, was above and beyond for Edward, so sweet and thoughtful.  The week ahead for both Edward and Bella's going to be a test of wills to keep their hands of each other.  Will Edward be dumping Tanya straightaway?

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 Adult Time

Do you really have to ask who wants a naked Cubward?  Lol, just send him in my direction.  I can't believe that two of them ended up in the same club as Bella and as for Edward shoving his hard dick against Bella's bum yet again, well I think it must have a homing beacon inside it or something 'cause it knows where it wants to be, bwahahahaha!!  Does Emmett already know Rosalie, is that how they got in or was it fake ID's?  His size would make her think he's older and we all know how honest teenage boys are when it comes to getting what they want, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 Party Hard

Lol, well no one's going to forget that party in a hurry.  Bella's treatment of all concerned was more than fair, I wonder how many of her students won't be able to look her in the eye for while, lol, and what about Tanya, if that had been me I would be mortified for years, hahaha!!  I'm glad Bella made all those that had been drinking ring their parents to come and collect them, I've read loads of fics where the characters have been drinking on a night out and still drove home, miraculously none have them have ever crashed or been pulled by the police, so thank you for making that real.  I'm glad I don't have to wait for the update on the drunken boob grab, hard dick fall, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 4 Unwanted Suggestions

Talk about dilemmas.  Edward is obviously interested, duh, and has further proved this by the kiss when he helped put her to bed.  Bella then resolved to point out suitable alternatives for Edward to date hurting both his and her own feelings in the process.  Oh, and she so missed her opportunity to properly find out his age during that conversation, obvious or not it wouldn't matter 'cause Edward's interested.  Now Bella's regretting her clever plan as seeing Edward with Tanya hurts more than she probably thought it would. This leads us to the spare bedroom with Tanya, Edward and Bella, dun dun dun!  I think a BJ, at least, was the order of the night but the question is did Edward initiate this to be caught on purpose knowing that upstairs was out of bounds and that's where Bella was?  Hmmmm, there's nothing like making someone jealous to bring out the possessive predator in them.

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Toys and Temptation

God, I love this, Bella's such a cougar (yeah, I know that's the point, but you know what I mean) and so inappropriate, she kills me, lol.  At least now she has made a friend in fellow cougar Alice and found out the age of consent is 16. So the question is, keeping things legal of course, how young would Bella go?  Isn't she a tease though, she just can't help herself

I have to say that I don't have an issue with any of the age related fics, including this one, that are posting or have been completed.  I'm British so to really offend me either Edward or Bella would have to be 15 or less and the only sort of age gap that would seriously put me off, and we are talking vomit time here, is a twenty something having a relationship with someone in their sixties or above.......going out with someone old enough to be your grandad or grandma is sooooo unappealing and just euwwww!!  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 Off Limits

Cubward, so cute, lol.  She's so inappropriate it's funny.  At least now she has an age for Edward and although he still can't buy his own alcohol, things aren't quite as bad as Bella thought.  Poor Edward, hahaha, I think he was rooted to the spot with lust and embarrassment seeing Bella in her yoga outfit and pose, they're just lurching from one embarrassing encounter to another, it's priceless, lol.

It still amazes me that different states have different ages of consent, it must be so confusing.  Can't one age just be agreed on?  It would be so much simpler, like here everyone knows the age of consent is 16 so there's no room for someone to turn around and say they thought it was different between say, England and Wales.

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 And So It Begins

Bella's so forward it's brilliant, I love her.  I can't believe she just met someone and was going in for an arse grab, lol, talk about going for what you want, although she did get a little more than she bargained for.  As for Edward, well I can only imagine he was thinking all his Christmases had come at once and then to get Bella's number, well Happy Birthday too, Edward, lol.  He's obviously had a few things going through his head though 'csuse he never called her and I would imagine that would be their age difference which Bella has just found out about.  She's definitely fucked, bwahahahaha!

Jane x

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 3:47 AM Title: Prologue

Certainly is interesting and I can't wait to read the rest, find out what happens.

Jane x

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Awe, great ending and proposal was a perfect touch.

Thanks for writing:-)

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths

Okay, maybe it's his youth but can't he just try & imagine 7 months down the road. Things will look very different if he'd have a little patience.

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 First Time

They did it and no one cock blocked them! YAY is right!

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5 Party Hard

Wow, she handled that underage drinking situ really well, I thought. And the landing on Edward vs falling down the stairs, good choice;-)

Reviewer: shellabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:27 AM Title: Prologue

Not sure

Reviewer: skyofthephoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 13 First Time

wow... ;)

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Date: 30 Aug 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 Adult Time

surprising end..
loved this chapter.. :)

Reviewer: skyofthephoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 Off Limits

i am soooo loving it.. This story is different from what i normally read... Hope it turns out to be good... :)

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Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses

I think he is 16 I kno the story is written and u prolly dont read these reviews but I thought tht as soon as u mentioned he has to tell Bella something

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Wonderful story! :)

Reviewer: Tenshi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Great story!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Great way to wrap it up, and if you get technical about it, you did give a somewhat type of epi, you just didnt draw it out and go forward years and such. I can see them with kids and such later on but i really loved the way you ended this story, it fit the mood and plot line. great job.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

:)

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Date: 01 May 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

OMG my itunes hooked me with this finally chapter. I'm going to miss these two but at least their FINALLY together.

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Date: 01 May 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

Emotional reunions can be very exhaustive. Let's hope they have the opposite effect on these two. they could use a good physical re-connection.

Hope your son has recoved fully.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

OUTSTANDING.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Thank-you for the HEA.

Loving your Prezward!
Will read anything you put out, as I enjoy your writing style. Thanks again for sharing.

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Thanks, enjoyed the ride xx

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

loved the last chaptger 

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Date: 26 Apr 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

LOVED IT FROM BEGINNING TO END!!  Thank you so much for writing, you do have a gift.  I would love to write and have tried but nothing I do pleases me - so why would it appeal to anyone else.

Good luck w/ our originals and other plot bunnies.  Following the Prez, religiously.

I continue to pray for you and yours. Glad the baby is doing better.

Thanks and xo Bev

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

Loved the ending:) thanks for writing and sharing this amazing story with us:)

Reviewer: MKC Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

I enjoyed this story so much! You are a very talented author. I also love your other story, "The Presidential Treatment". Thank you again for sharing.

Reviewer: MKC Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love those happy endings.

Reviewer: MKC Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul

I love this story. I have read quite a lot of fan fiction in the last 2 and a half years. This is one of the best stories that I have ever come across. Even though Bella is (I would guess) about 17 years older, I still want there to be a happily ever after between them in this story. Thank you for continuing to update!!!

Reviewer: MKC Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting

I hope Edward always keeps his phone with him at all times. You never know when Emmett or one of his parents will find it and read his text messages. Great story!

Reviewer: MKC Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 3:58 AM Title: Prologue

Great start to this story. No offence, but I passed this story up a couple of times because I was not sure of the subject matter. The first chapter changed my mind!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

:)

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Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

Keeping the baby in my prayers.

Review: OMG I can't believe it's finally the end. At the beginning I would never thought that it would end like this. I'm so happy they are finally back together.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

LOVED IT!!! :)

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

Thank you x

Reviewer: MizCougar Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:47 PM Title: Prologue

Loved Chapter 31: Still Holding On, I am glad they are still together, well, at least back together. While I am sad that the story is coming to an end, I understand it has to. I know that life is kicking you right now and I want you to know that I appreciate your writing. I hope that once life calms a little for you, we will be granted with more of your work. :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

loved the chapter looking forward to more

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Date: 21 Apr 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

Love that they are back together!

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