Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
of course she is naive! she's not old enough to really know what goes on in the big bad world. BUT...she should trust Edward...he's old enough to know how to take care of her...in every way.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
damn cockblocking waiters!! LOL
and there is no reason anyone should ever have insomnia!
if people had more "earthshattering" SEX, they would sleep a whole lot better!
and as always...I loathe Tanya Denali!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
I dont think Tanya was telling the truth. I am sure Bella knows what she is getting into. a nice naked swim sounds wonderful ;)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
Why can't someone just slap the piss out of Tanya? Great chapter. Very sexy with the tenting of pants and all...
Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Quite steamy...I'm dying to know what Taint-ya said to Bella. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
I really not quiet sure, what I think.. it can be either.. But they diffently need to talk or the dout that was seeded will exploed.. I hope it don't go agust because of it.
awesome chapter.
Hope you had a great holiday. Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
That was awesome... What the hell did tanya say to her? maybe Edward was hard on Tanya.. I wonder?
Date: 03 Jan 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
I think Tanya is a bitch like that is new ha ha.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
This was a good chapter. I love this story so much. Please continue updating.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
well i hope bella talks with edward soon. she doesn't need to have her thoughts hanging over her head. sooner or later it is going to interfere with their relationship. she doesn't need to be second guessing what she has with edward
he is everything to her.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
man tanya what a bitch.
at least she and edward had a good time at dinner before the night turned to shit. thank god edward knows how to be a devil when needed and a night and shinning armor when needed. bella has the best of both worlds with edward
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
looking forward to the next chapgter
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
write more!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
Tanya wasn't a sub, so she didn't understand the rules and probably got a punishment spanking from Edward and maybe he was a little more aggressive cause he didn't really like her. Also, he had been hiding his true self and was probably frustrated all the way around. But, we have to hear Edwards side of the story completely before we assume he was being mean and abusive. They definetly need to talk about it after their "swim". Can't wait to see what is next for them!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
That chick is a cunt.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
wow they are coming so far
love it
i also love that charlie is gettign help
not only is edward helping and loving bella but it extends to her dad cause it effects bella
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
She is naive and trusting thats what he loves about her.
Sounds like Tanya has every right to be concerned she hasn't experienced his love.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
Hum...I would say yes she s very trusting! She wants him anyway she can that leads to trouble! He is to tough very hot! Thanks for the 2 for today!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
oh Hell Yes I want to know what Evil Skank-ya had to say to our darling Isabella!!!! Phew hot passion anyone?!? dang these two can tear it up...what a perfect match, they are truly made for each other
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Please put a conversation about Bella's encounter with Tanya. I love this story, it gets more intresting as it goes. Continue updating please! ;)
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
AHHH I'm dying to know what was said! I'm sure ther were the usual slut whore, he's just using you, or golddigging bitch, but I also know you and you would never go with just the usual banalities, you would add in a twist or two and something major that would cause Bella to seriously freak, where as she can discount everything else, this one thing she questions... But I would love to hear about that convo!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
yes we need to know what tanya said to bella!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
With every chapter, the grip tightens and I'm a bigger fan. I'm glad that Isabella could see though Tanya's bitter rant, her tears are expected as a sensitive 18year old in a relationship for the first time facing a much more experienced/jaded woman. Would love to see another showdown where Tanya is the one in pieces though.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Happy New Year. I cannot wait to hear what Tanya said.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Oh boy...thanks for the update they are si f-ing hot together! Yes we want to know what Tanya said!! Happy new year!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Great stuff xx
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
YES, I want to know what that bitch Tanya said. Great chapter, very Hot and sexy, except for the Tanya part.......patiently waiting to know.......:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
I think that we all want to hear what Tanya told Bella. I could not even imagine what she would say after we heard Edward's thoughts about his relationship with Tanya.
Women beater, hard and cold, hearless, etc.....
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
would love to hear the conversation between Tanya and Bella. I hope Edward had her sign a nda that would have just been broken pmsl and Tanya would be up the creek
Date: 16 Dec 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Edward will probably find out in the car. I think they will probably torture each other throughout dinner. I hope Charlie takes advantage of this opportunity and gets his life together.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I say that they eat dinner and when they get to desert he finds out for himself... at the table of course. I also feel he should see how good she is at keep quite and not drawing attention to the table while he does some very naughty things to her.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Ugh! Update soon!!! I wanna see his reaction!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Ung so hot!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Now we're all hungry ;)
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Thank goodness Edward put Charlie in rehab knowing Bella she would feel responsible because he is her father and she would let him drain her financially so he could keep drinking. I imagine that Edward is going to discover Bella is sans panties sometime during dinner or if he's a little impatient maybe on the way to dinner. Can't wait for more!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Good Chapter.....
Date: 12 Dec 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I hope Charlie will exactly work at getting help. Not having the medical bills will help take off some pressure.
I don't know how long it will take Edward to find out Bella has no panties on but I have a feeling when he does she is going to get fucked before they get home. lol.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I wish this updated more often, I absolutley LOVE this story, and Im always giddy when i see it's updated..... Great chapter, i cant wait til they get more into their playtime.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I think Edward will be thrilled she is wearing no knickers. lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Great chapter!!! LOVE the story!!! Update again soon pelase!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
oh my!!! Hummmm not sure it will take long and I do think she will be deliciously tortured for it.... **evil smirking grin***
Date: 11 Dec 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
First of all, wishing you good health, because without you happy and healthy, we wouldn't have this mindblowing fic. I feel like a kid in a candy store reading this chapter, it's just chock full of deliciousness, with the decisive way Edward took care of Bella's family problems, to the heat in the playroom. Can't get enough of these two!
Date: 11 Dec 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Love it! Teese two are great and thanks for not making it corporal punishment it's nice to know there are other kinds in this kind of relationship! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Great chapter - will we get to find out what happened with Charlie?
Date: 11 Dec 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I think they just might make it to the restaurant by the time Edward discovers that his 'baby girl' is pantyless ;-)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I think he is going to blow his top! lol.. Maybe even play with her at the restaurtant. mmm.. she is such a tease.. but he is better. hehe. .
The punishment were not bad.. wonder what they will be once she is been trained and she slips..
Date: 11 Dec 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I wonder what the outside world will think of the young beauty on Edward's arm at dinner tonight? He is still a celebrity and one of the hotest bachelors around.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!!!!! GREAT GREAT LEMONS OR SCENES that Edward planned out. I can not imagine being fucked on the side of a tree. WOW!!!! Glad Bella did not freak out over the anal plug. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Loved the chapter
Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Bella is going to in for a lot of fun with Edward. Her education is really beginning.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Great job...going for a cold shower now!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Ahh! Love this story! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
I have seen lots of authors advertise their new stories.. So why not!
I love this chapter. He is being so soft with her but stern. Just love this story..
Date: 30 Nov 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
He seems to be super human the man a stamina it is a dream of mine to find someone with half of that and I would be happy lol. I know sad life ha ha. I love your storys and your drabble ASBO love it.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
holly shit tie me to a tree lol
Date: 30 Nov 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Good Chapter.....
Date: 30 Nov 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
My mind is too incoherent from your fiery words to adequately praise your skills...and you've got skills!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Hot & Sexy as always.....:)
Date: 30 Nov 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Write more
Date: 29 Nov 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
f-ing HOT!!! yeah i am a little hot and bothered too!! thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
flu yea I have that now..argggh.. Hot chapter.. you did wonderfully as always...thanks..get better soon...sorry can't say more...don't feel to well to think
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
That was a fantastic ending of the chapter.. She gets collard.. I 'm sad for what Charlie is doing to her.. She will have to let go some day if he don't want help!
sad about their moms.
This chpter was a mixer of emotions. I love how Edward is showing her TLC and the care of a ture Master.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Ohhh, I am wondering if we get a double lot of lemons next week, when you finish them in the field and in the play room... ohhh dirty dirty chapter to come.
Thanks for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 28 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
OMG!!!!! I am loving this story. Loving this chapter. What is the deal with Charlie? I hope Edward straightens Charlie out. I am excited about the next chapter...anal play....love it.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
This has become my naughty obsession. I absolutly love this story. Wish you could update everyday, but I will take what I can get. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Gah I am dead! I will be waiting rather impatiently for this story to pick up right where you left off! Don't you dare fade to black - I want every "juicy" detail of the ropes and nipple clamps....:)
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
They are so hot together and I'm so happy he didn't hold back and told her how he felt about her and got her to open up a little about her mom. I thonk as their D/s relationship progresses she will find it easier to open up to him because it takes a lot of trust to just hand yourself over to a person like that. While I understand Bella's need to take care of her father because he is her father I think he has manipulated her in a lot of ways using guilt, he is using his grief as a crutch to make excuses so he doesn't have to be held responsible for the choices he has and continues to make in his life. I hope that Edward can get Bella to accept some help, there is no shame in needing help and he truly wants to take care of her in everyway not out of obligation but love. I can't wait to see where these to are going to go as they grow in their relationship.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
loved it great update !!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
wow my my my what a chapter. so bella is finally collared
love it
seems they are both in love. i bet edward will go to charlie and lay it on the line. payoff his bills and tell him to leave his daughter alone. charlie seems greedy and has alot of issues he hasn't dealt with that i beleive he will make a deal with edward
oh bella good luck. your a great girl and have a big heart
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
I love this story!!!!! .....Your writing in general.... I don't know if you have a beta, or even want one or another, but if you ever need or want an extra air of eyes to look over chapters (this story or anything else) in transient, just give me a message or email (torisurfergirl@gmail.com).
Edward makes me smile, blush, and gush soooooo much. LOOOOVEEE HIM!
Love ya,
Tori S. (torisurfergirl)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Good Chapter......
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Please don't make me wait too long for the next chapter! I'm hooked!!
I know I didn't leave any prior reviews but that's only because I was too eager to get to the next chapter and now...there isn't a next chapter to go to :(
Seriously...I am LOVING THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
You tease! Damn I have naughty thoughts now! Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
swoon....
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
That was wonderfully done.. oh my god, she would be raw if he had sex with her all the time. lol hahahaha.
I like that he looked after her. He is putty in her hand.. I 'm wondering when does she get punished. will he be able too?
Oh my god what about Charilie? this is getting interesting!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
hot hot hot!!!! well at least she opening up about her home life, as is Edward.. it's pretty amazing how similar there lives have been, not sure what Charlie's addiction is whether its gambling or drugs or booze but whatever it is, Bella like Edward have had to endure more than most....they are a wonderful matchnfor each other too!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
totally hott! looking forward to the next chatper
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice
that was fantastic.. I love the wax and Ice..
I 'm a little scaried of Peter.. that was mean what he did afterwards. What did he think bella was into like he want?
Is he going to be a problem I hope not.. But with vic and James that have bella painting. I wonder what going to happen In the future?
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12 **Playtime**
I think I begiinning to under stand charilie. he basically gave up life after his wife died. and Bella problem looked after him while she was at home.
This was awesome. sweet, He is being very carring with her.. I like that.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
Hi
I just want to tell you I love your story so far. it very intense.. all the emotions are there..
I can see I don't like charlie, what is up with that? is he mean to bella or just tells her what to do? Does he even love her? I just want to hurt him.. oh me bad. lol.
well I going to leave a review at the end of the last chapter you have posted, unless I have a question for you. it a wonderful story.. I am glade I decided to read it.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
It was tender, sweet, simple and perfect for their first time. As you mention in your A/N, Tasteward will have plenty of oprtunities to get creative, and maybe Bella can add some input ;)
Date: 16 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
the chapter was super hot!! I liked their first time. You kept it real :)
I am mad at you for making me read "For the Summer". My neck was stiff from sitting at the computer till wee hours in the morning, crying silently...Soooo goood!! you weren't kidding.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I love that their first time was not "planned" out. I am glad that it came naturally to them and just happened. I do have one question......Does Bella want to be a 24/7 sub or is she just excited to get started?????? If she does want to be a 24/7 sub is that something that Edward would be interested in?????
I am off to check out your recs. I am wondering if you will let us know what you TOP 10 stories are?????
Date: 14 Nov 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
I'm so hooked. What Charlie's deal?
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
Great chapter. He was very gentle and patient with Bella. He really loves her.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I think you did a great job with their "first time". It suited the two of them perfectly! And now, we have so much more to look forward to...like her training, and finding out what Charlie is up to. I'm loving this story!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I finally got a chance to read this, and OMG, here I was thinking he was going to like wine and dine her, then make love, but oh no not this time. But i do have to say I LOVED IT!!!!! and the breakfast part yummy. Theres so many ways that the teaser you shared could go, is Charlie only ising Bella for her money shes earning, does he have a gambling problem, or something more seious. I cant wait to find out. Im dying to see them finally do a scene with her being collared. Keep up the awesome work.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
Well, this chapter leaves me at a loss for the right word. HOT, VERY SEXY, POWERFUL, LOVING, all those don't seem enough. Great job, this story leaves me wanting more every time!!!!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
Really enjoying your story, can't wait for more!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I really enjoyed there first time and second time was even hotter can not wait ubtil they r in playroom
Date: 14 Nov 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
HOT DAMN THAT WAS GOOD.
Date: 13 Nov 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
sooo hot i love this story:)
Date: 13 Nov 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I love this story and I was wondering if we are going to see any more of Peter? That could be fun lol...
Date: 13 Nov 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I think that their first time suited them, I don't think either of them are into all the big show of things for it to just happen without any planning worked for them. They just fit, I mean they had an instant connection so their first time just happened naturally as it should. Your preview for the next chapter was crazy, I can't believe Charlie spent all that money already not to mention it was her money not his. Looking forward to see how things progress for Edward and Bella not to mention when Edward is going to step in and make sure Charlie won't be getting access to Bella's money anymore.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I am sure Bella will take to being a sub as she has everything else.