Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMGosh!!!!!!! The lemon was really really HOT!!!!!!! I stil want to know what the deal is with Jacob. Jacob is going to be lucky if Edward does not kill him. Some how I miss this chapter when it was updated. I was going through my stories and noticed this one. I know you have not update in a while but I hope you update soon. We NEED to know what Edward has planned for Jacob and we NEED to know Jacob's plans too. Hope you update soon.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
Clearly Charlie is a douche, I love Edward but sometimes his "voice" seems a little forced, I can't imagin referring to my IPad (whichever version) by "IPad 2" or "IPad Air". I think conveying wealthiness works better when the "voice" of the character is less specific. That said, I love this story so far and will most likely spend most of the night reading this. On to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Sep 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Just wanted to ask if you are ever going to add more chapters to this story?
If you are please hurry your killing me with the wait. You have a good story
going so far please stay with it.. Looking forward to reading more the 27 chaps.
sincerely, L. Jacox
Date: 23 Apr 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
I have been wondering if you are going to be able to finish this story. I have become very invested in it. I know that life has probably been hard for you. I just wanted to let you know that I am sending good wishes your way. If you can please let me know how you are doing? Thanks
Date: 23 Apr 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 27
You know i have to tell you I love this story. My problem with it is that
I have been waiting for what feels likeforever fo ryou to write a new
chapter. So are you going to continue this awsome story or are quiting!
Just asking, getting board waiting for you to write more!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
I get that she is sensitive, but I don't understand why she would let Tanya get to get like that. A playful spank to one can be a brutal smack to another. She needs to grow thicker skin if she wants this to work with Edward.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Hi, I am trying to read your fic with my Samsung android tablet and I cant get beyong the
1st chapter as it keeps returning to ch 1 after the age warning, do you know if I need to change
any of my settings?
Date: 20 Oct 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
I didn't think Tanya was a bitch at all. Her and Edward were just too different and she wasn't able to understand, I think her reaction was completely normal and to be expected from someone who doesn't have those needs or wants. And she didn't just give up on him either, she tried to make it work by giving him what he needed until it was borrowing too much from her. Just because Tanya isn't Bella and Edward's true love, doesn't make her a bitch.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
OHHH, I love this story, cant wait to see what Edward is going to do to Jacob. My guess is firstly he does not like threats, secondly, I am sure he is a force to be reckoned with.
Thanks for all these chapters as well... A lot to read after coming back from holidays.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't think Edward should pay Jacob a cent. Bella owes him nothing and I doubt Jake wants to mess with Edward.
Sure they can call the police, but no offense to a small town police force I am not sure if they can handle it. Edward might need to go higher up and he does have connections.
I am glad she told him. Instead of trying to take care of it on her own.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
these two just keep getting better n better!!
Loving the naughtyness on both of their parts!!
just when one thinks he cant get yummier... he does!!!
thanks for sharing =o)
p.s. bad girl Bella... Amazing!!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Im enjoying this to too much!!! Im loving their scenes ;o) he's so hot n sweet at the same time... cant get enough of him!!
The tree scene almost killed me!!
thanks for sharing =o)
p.s. sorry its taken me so long to review but its difficult to stop reading when u leave each chapter in such an achy way!! =p