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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 10:34 PM Title: Dreams I Sold Her - EPOV Outtake - RATED M

cool little story ;) thanks for sharing it as well as the o/t ;D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 1:18 AM Title: Part 3 - Conclusion

Well nice story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 12:19 AM Title: Part 2

when you find the false hoods. You must run. This is not a good start get over this quickly.

Reviewer: Athousandmore Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:06 PM Title: Part 3 - Conclusion

Aw! I love it! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 12:28 AM Title: Part 3 - Conclusion

Wow! I will have to go back and read the end of this chapter later after I have had time to calm down. Bella is such a fucking bitch! I hope her pride and attitude keep her warm at night...lol! Hope the end of this chapter is better than the beginning...



Author's Response:

Well, I hope you've read the end by now???   Sorry you didn't like the beginning.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts though.  I do appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 8:43 PM Title: Part 3 - Conclusion

Thanks for sharing this little story with us! I really enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking a moment to leave me a review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I loved writing this one.  It was really different than my usual story.  Thanks again! 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 2:26 PM Title: Part 2

Thinking Bella is a little too upset about him having a different job. I thought he was going to confess to having a wife and kids in London...lol!

Author's Response:

LOL - yeah, no wife or kids in London.  I'm not much for writing them cheating on one another.  There is a little more to his story, but you'll have to wait until Part 3 for all of that.  LOL   I hope to have it posted in the next week or so.  Thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.

Here's the teaser I promised.

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The last two months had been a tornado of unexpected events.  Events that had completely changed my future.  Gone was the naïve shy girl from northwestern Washington, instead a confident and on my way to being worldly woman sprang in to take her place.  I wasn’t sure where this new persona had been hiding, but I sensed that she’d been inside me all along, just waiting for the right moment to break free of the chains that I had shackled myself to.  

When I got a call from Alice a week after Edward had broken my heart into smithereens, I thought it was a joke.  She dialed into my office line direct, a number I’d never given Edward.  When she told me who she was, I almost hung up on her thinking she was calling to make excuses for her brother.  Instead she promised not to even breathe his name until I gave her permission.  And as of yet, I never had.

We’d had lunch later that week and the bomb that fell out of her mouth, sent my world spinning off axis and the shrapnel flying into every aspect of my life. 

 

Reviewer: inbetweendayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:24 AM Title: Part 1

great chapter i dont think bella should have stayed although she was a little bit naive to think he was in corporate espionage lol cant wait for more 



Author's Response:

LOL - yes, she is one very sheltered person.  And I think that in the back of her mind she knew all along, but chose not to listen to that part of her brain and rather enjoy herself.  Granted she got burned in the process.  Anyhow, I hope to have part 3, the conclusion up in the next week or so.  Thanks so much for the review.  I really appreciate you taking the time.  Here's the teaser I promised:

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The last two months had been a tornado of unexpected events.  Events that had completely changed my future.  Gone was the naïve shy girl from northwestern Washington, instead a confident and on my way to being worldly woman sprang in to take her place.  I wasn’t sure where this new persona had been hiding, but I sensed that she’d been inside me all along, just waiting for the right moment to break free of the chains that I had shackled myself to.  

When I got a call from Alice a week after Edward had broken my heart into smithereens, I thought it was a joke.  She dialed into my office line direct, a number I’d never given Edward.  When she told me who she was, I almost hung up on her thinking she was calling to make excuses for her brother.  Instead she promised not to even breathe his name until I gave her permission.  And as of yet, I never had.

We’d had lunch later that week and the bomb that fell out of her mouth, sent my world spinning off axis and the shrapnel flying into every aspect of my life. 

 

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 7:52 PM Title: Part 2

Total Assward. Great job with the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Yes, Edward isn't the knight in shining armor here, is he?  LOL

I hope to have part 3 posted in a week or so.

Here's the teaser I promised:

~0~

The last two months had been a tornado of unexpected events.  Events that had completely changed my future.  Gone was the naïve shy girl from northwestern Washington, instead a confident and on my way to being worldly woman sprang in to take her place.  I wasn’t sure where this new persona had been hiding, but I sensed that she’d been inside me all along, just waiting for the right moment to break free of the chains that I had shackled myself to.  

When I got a call from Alice a week after Edward had broken my heart into smithereens, I thought it was a joke.  She dialed into my office line direct, a number I’d never given Edward.  When she told me who she was, I almost hung up on her thinking she was calling to make excuses for her brother.  Instead she promised not to even breathe his name until I gave her permission.  And as of yet, I never had.

We’d had lunch later that week and the bomb that fell out of her mouth, sent my world spinning off axis and the shrapnel flying into every aspect of my life. 

And a little pic tease since I can on TWCS - :-)  Enjoy!

 

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 1:02 AM Title: Part 1

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope to have part 2 up very soon.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope to have part 2 up very soon.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review.

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