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Reviewer: twilover24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2017 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

Wonderful story

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved this story.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 31

Fucking fabulous all around! Big thanks for all of the creative goodness. ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

Nothing about Jacob the douch or Bella. I do have something to say about Leah getting a beat down alone at the beach the same morning homeless Jimmy is it, is fuck up in front of the studio. WTF? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

Don't worry your prideful self Bella he won't have much left after buying beach front proprrty in SD California real estate is expensive ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

So we have things that appear random but aren't! Law suit from jail bird negligent uncle. Homeless dude in front of shop, creepy dirty/religious dude at grocery store, guy lurking in alley, car following Edward home, vandalized sex machine, creepy waitress, 3 missing items from grandparents ( cuff links, earrings, pen)  upcoming trust fund for Edward they are all connected some how. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Fucking hot lemon/ evening who cares if is real. It's hot! 

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 31

merci

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

AWESOME!!! story ;) and thanks so much for completing it plus the f/t as well after you've been through so much in you're rl i hope that all is well ;D 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm thinking Marcus has the waitress stealing from them.  Somehow the server is stealing & since it seems to be family heirlooms makes me think it's Marcus.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

BEST TATTOO EXPERIANCE EVER WRITTEN!

Reviewer: nsturms72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 31

I loved this story!!!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

great story, but Bella is doing a 180 here.. first she thinks she should tell Edward about the flirting and she should have told the police about the threat she heard in Leah's office. then she stops Edward when he is confronting Jacob and she says to stop the pissing contest why would she say this when Jacob is harrassing her.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you (again) :)  I appreciate you taking the time to let me know!

Reviewer: Kelsluna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

I loved this story !!! Great mystery !!! Thank you for a good reading 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and letting me know! xoxox

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

He really needs to apologize for basically accusing her of cheating. That was low, and the fact that he thinks he knew what was going on by staring through a goddamned window proves he's mentally challenged.



Author's Response:

It was low, and he does apologize. I can't tell from your reviews if you actually like the story or not, but either way- I appreciate you taking a look and leaving a few of your thoughts on it. Thank you :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

Somebody is ransacking their places and stealing stuff! Shady!



Author's Response:

Lots of shady stuff going on. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 18

If anyone from the health department is reading your work, I think you just gave them a stroke. :P



Author's Response:

I agree 110%. lol

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

That prank had the potential to go really badly. If the girls stormed out as soon as they saw the mess, they might have gone looking for revenge hookups. Of course, that would make an awesome story in itself.



Author's Response:

You're right, I played with the idea of it going in that other direction, but as you said, that would've been a completely different story! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: cjhaaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 31

wow, a great story. can't wait till you post Walk. i really enjoyed the preview.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I just posted Walk, I hope you like it. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Jabsjb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 2:54 AM Title: Prologue

Loved it! I like tattooed Edward :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

i really really enjoyed your story.. every single chapter.  it is one that i will read over again. thank you for such a great story.  gotta love me some tatward!



Author's Response:

Thank you, that is so rewarding to hear (read) lol  I'm so happy you liked it so much!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

WOW!!  Awesome idea!!  You wrote it perfectly!  Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

She's the "c" word.  I never say that word but she needs to have the shit beat out of her!!....multiple times!!



Author's Response:

I hate that word, too. But you're right she is one and needs a good ass kicking. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yippee!!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Dannys_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

Hey, just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading this story.



Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hope he's not redeemed!  BUT I hope she doesn't give him too hard of time either.  Great story!

See?  I know more than, "Wow"!!



Author's Response:
:)   by now you know that Eddie does get redeemed. How could he not?  lol  I'm happy you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Double WOW!!  I promise I do know more words than "WOW".  I just gotta go get my kids up from school!



Author's Response:
Hey, I'll take 'wow' AND 'double wow' anytime! I'm just happy you're reading and like it!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 12:17 PM Title: Prologue

WOW!!



Author's Response:
Like?  lol  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 31

I absolutely loved this story.  I loved that you gave her two sets of twins and I adored the girls baby  names.  I am so glad that you are doing better from your surgery and I am sorry that I haven't reviewed more.

 

I am trying to catch up on all the stories I read and I am getting so behind, but eventually I will be reading your other stories as well.

Thank you for all your time and dedication to writing this wonderful piece and sharing it with us.  I would have really loved to see some pictures of the tattoos but thats ok I have imagination too.



Author's Response:
No apologies on the reviews, you already did more than most, and I really appreciate that! I am doing very well, thank you. I haven't felt this good in years :)
I'm really happy you liked the way I ended Love Ink. I really will try to figure out the whole picture thing for the future. Thank you for reading, reviewing, supporting...  :) See you next time!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh I thought that was hot.  I mean how many people can say they were inked while having your mans meat inside of you? lol   I loved it.



Author's Response:
LOL  Probably not many! I wasn't sure how that would go over, but I thought it was pretty hot :) Thanks, so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

I think the guys went overboard with the prank.  I dont think I would have reacted quite so nicely if I were the girls.  But I am glad that Rose got some pictures.

As for the accident, well it was an accident and I think Bella is right, that guy just wants money.



Author's Response:
The prank was a little over the top. I'd like to see the pictures, though. How funny it would be!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

I think Professor Black needs to be taught a lesson and I love that Bella told Rene off.  I mean seriously where does she get off thinking she can talk to her daughter that way?



Author's Response:
He's gonna get his. Renee is just a controlling biotch, who thinks that her opinion is the only right one. She'll get hers, too! (i know you already know this... lol )

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Again I wish you would include pictures.  Another great chapter. 



Author's Response:
Thanks! (and sorry!)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

i LOVED this chapter.  I love the lemons.  I would have loved to see some of the tattoo pictures or other pictures in the chapter though.



Author's Response:
Awesome :) I know you want pictures...I can't figure out how to add them, first. Second, I don't normally have time to find a bunch of pictures to add to it. I WILL look into it and try to add some in my next fic, though!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved it....so sweet.



Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 31

tears.... Great way to finally put this story to bed. Great job. I have missed them, but like i said this is the best way to wrap it up for good.



Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it-thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 31

You are a special person that has wrote a very special story I am very happy you are doing well and I cant wait for your next story.  I love the ending it was a little scarry but every one came out ok and they have the perfect family.  Thanks so much



Author's Response:
I have to admit that your words brought a tear to my eye. Thank you. Doesn't seem like enough to say, but...I really appreciate it.  Yeah  lol   I had to take them out with a bang, it wouldn't have been 'them' or the story if nothing dramatic happened  :)  But, as always, I won't ever kill off a main or not balance the good with the bad. Well, maybe someday  LOL  guess we'll have to see where things go. The next story won't have the drama this one-or any of the others- had. There'll be ups and downs, but mainly just a love story. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 31

I so enjoyed this story hate to see it end thanks for an amazing journey with this wonderful story.



Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your very nice words! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 31

Simply beautiful, with a B.



Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Very happy you liked :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 31

:)



Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 1:48 PM Title: Epilogue

:)



Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

I loved it. I love the full circle, the release of Edwards guilt, the names Allie & Ellie.

Truly - great job!



Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and for the kind words!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 31

Thanks for the final chapter, and I'm glad you're on the mend!



Author's Response:
I appreciate that, I really am feeling fantastic. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 31

Enjoyed it very much.......thank you so much for your story ;-)



Author's Response:
I'm so glad you did. Thank YOU for reading! (and reviewing)  ;)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 31

This was a great fic. i will miss it. E/k



Author's Response:
I'm happy you liked it! Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

love the names! So sad about Bella not being able to have any more babies, but they've got 4 beautiful children:)

Author's Response:

Thank you-I agonized over the names for a while before those just 'came' to me :)  Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved it 



Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the story :)

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 31

I'm glad to see that Bella was able to make the recovery from the horrible and terrifying labor she had with the twin girls and at least they got 2 of each.  



Author's Response:
I'd never have something horrible happen to a major character and not balance it with something equally good. :)   Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a review!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 31

that was more than perfect...Especially them having a little blonde Angel to remind Edward of Beth even more... then to have two as a added bonus well that was perfect...maybe not that they can't have more but after all what is important is to have a healthy wife and mother at home to raise those precious children.....  so happy you are doing better and are back to writing... look forward to whatever you come up with in the future....., take care   Kathy!!!



Author's Response:
Thank you! I thought it brought everything full circle and gave Edward the redemption and peace he still needed. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and thank you for the kind words. <3 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:20 PM Title: Epilogue

Sweet loved it thanks :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing each chapter. I'm so happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

craziness.. yeah Jasper



Author's Response:

And the hero is....Jasper :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 27

not good james you are one crazy assed bastard!!!



Author's Response:

He was so much fun to write! I'm happy you hate him!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

oh james and vicki yeah.. you better hurry ed



Author's Response:

Go Edward go!  lol  James and Vic are loose cannons.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

it is not jacob it is that marcus dude or whatever.



Author's Response:

Marcus is behind it, though not actually involved.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

oh no this is not good.....



Author's Response:

No, it really isn't :(  Buckle up

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

this is not a oh well this is serious they want to kill bella to make ed hurt.... i hope we figure this out soon



Author's Response:

That's exactly the goal, to break Edward.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 22

that jimmy had something to do with it and i know jacob did too.. or were they really after bella?  humm



Author's Response:

I think they were really after Bella.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

bluck!!! what head cases!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, just a little out there. lol 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

trouble in paradise...



Author's Response:

There always is, isn't there? It won't last long. :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

okay people are taking stuff.. rachel is some how related to Beth the one that died and they are plotting out revenge......



Author's Response:

Spot on, Maria11!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

F-ing HOT HOT HOT... damn!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah...  I think that chapter should have come with a sham-wow. I'm happy you liked it!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

sweet i love ed!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm happy you do!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

okay you keep warning us what are you going to do?



Author's Response:

I never write anything too bad. I don't like a lot of angst, nor do I write it well. You can always count on that from me :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

okay here is the bad stuff... i knew it was coming



Author's Response:

Sorry, it couldn't be avoided :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

funny and sweet who is that creepy guy?



Author's Response:

Thanks! He creeped me out, and I wrote him!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

sweet you can take me out anytime Ed... okay you foreshadowed with the waitress that something is going to happen...



Author's Response:

I drop little hints all the way through. It was a nice date, though.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh renee you sure are something



Author's Response:

Maybe she was a little over the top, but  I really wanted people to hate her.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

okay something bad is going to happen i know it... who is in the car?



Author's Response:

You'd be right ;)  any thoughts at this point who it is?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

HOT you can do me anytime Ed!!!



Author's Response:

*blushes*  I know, right?  ;)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

yeah the witch renee is here... joy joy joy!!



Author's Response:

Renee sucks. But, she was fun to write ;)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

oh boy.... over-stepping ed!!!



Author's Response:

Can you say 'overprotective' ???  :) 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

yum!! that was FWHOT!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

sweet... love ed!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah...  :)  gotta love him!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

they are so sweet together.. but you got the I love you out so something bad is going to happen isn't it?!



Author's Response:

LOL  yes. The stage is set now...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow didn't think they would hook up fast but hey it's cool.. oh joy renee YUK!



Author's Response:

I like to get them together quickly, when the core of the story doesn't revolve around their relationship. The new one, er...it' s gonna take a little longer, cuz THAT one IS about them finding each other.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

yeah.. they seem to be falling back in a groove with each other.



Author's Response:

I think it's meant to be  :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

ed as always you are deep and too much into your own head to see what is going on around you!



Author's Response:

Too predictable, you think? 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

poor bells!



Author's Response:

I know. Poor thing. I cried a little when I wrote that chapter....  :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:18 PM Title: Prologue

looks like it is going to be good.. can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so! Thanks for choosing my story to read :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 7:07 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!! I didn't review like I should have b/c was reading mostly offline on a trip... but this kept me very entertained. I am going to check out more of your work!



Author's Response:

No worries, I'm just happy you liked it! I hope you enjoy anything else you read of mine ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 8:08 AM Title: Epilogue

Sweet, will you write more?



Author's Response:

I will and have. When I get these reviews caught up, I will post the outtake I wrote, and I am working on the new one now! :) Thanks for your interest!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:58 PM Title: Epilogue

Awwww.... That turned out wonderfully!! it is good that they were able to move on and have a family and life that they both wanted.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and all the reviews! Sorry I was such a fail at responding! And yeah, I hope the ending wasn't too sticky sweet, though that's how I usually do it ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

Well I guess that James isn't going to be bothering them anytime soon.



Author's Response:

LOL  NOPE!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:41 PM Title: Epilogue

WELL i READ IT FOR A SECOND TIME NOW WITH THE EPI, IT WAS A GREAT STORY



Author's Response:

Wow, you don't know how gratifying it is to hear that! I LOVE that you read it more than once! Thanks so, so much!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow!!!! James is one messed up person who needs to stopped I just hope that the guys get him before he has a chance to hurt Bella more than he has already.



Author's Response:

Yep, he's nuttier than a squirrel den. I would never let Bella get hurt too bad. Someone will come to the rescue!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow!! I wonder how they know Edward... I am sure that they knew Liz and that is how they know him but why would they wait this long to do something ...



Author's Response:

Good question. I probably could've explained that better. In my head, it was Marcus' want for money and grasping at the straw of a lawsuit against Carlisle, that started it all.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

It is good that everyone is going to be ok.... I just hope that they find out who was behind all of this.



Author's Response:

They'll find out soon :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh man just when thing were starting to get back to normal.... I hope that Emmett is going to be ok.



Author's Response:

The beginning of the end. I can't kill off a major character. I don't think.   lol  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am thinking that there is more to the whole initials thing than the lady is saying. Could this lady be doing this to try to get under Edward's skin for the lawsuit that his uncle is bringing on to the family.



Author's Response:

Very astute, mrsrpatz!  :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well I really hope that if Jacob is involved in it that they nail him. I wonder if Jimmy had something to do with it because he said that he had been in a scuffle.



Author's Response:

Whoever did it, they'll get their due.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

It is good that they finally talked things out and seem to be on the same page now .



Author's Response:

Agreed. Communication is key!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 4:33 AM Title: Epilogue

Great story!  I loved every bit of it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm very happy you liked it!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

Well it is a good thing that Jasper and Alice do talk so that they can talk to the two of them because they are both too close to it and aren't thinking clearly!



Author's Response:

Exactly right!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

I wonder how Alice is going to take Bella and Edward looking for a place of their own.



Author's Response:

Alice is too busy swooning over Jasper to care  LOL  ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Ummmm...... I want to get a tattoo like that!!! WOW.........



Author's Response:

Oh honey, you should see the line. It's out the door and around the corner!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well I wonder what has gotten into Edward???



Author's Response:

Hehe   Edward has something up his sleeve ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

I wonder who did that to Edward's car because when he finds out he might just go after them.



Author's Response:

Most definitely.  :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well I think that the prank didn't work out like te guys wanted it to but it was funnny. I think that Bella might be on to something with Edward's uncle sueing his father because of the death of Liz.



Author's Response:

It did fall a little flat, but was still fun. And you know, Bella was right. Marcus is a greedy, sub human trying to make money off his daughter's death.

 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

I wonder how the guys are going to get them back for that little stunt. Things might get very interesting at home.



Author's Response:

It was kinda funny :)

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