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Reviewer: kopec82 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

Omg soooo bs

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

i LOVED this ;) i liked how bella would be able to gift each couple children ;) i thought the volturi fight was weird though at the end, where did the fire come from? the kids 'gifts' were awsome though ;D

Reviewer: babesbraves Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

Fantastic story I loved the twists and turns!!! But Edward would not have got off so easy if it was me!

Reviewer: DesperateRomantic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

amazing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

cute ending.  Thanks for writing and sharing.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

buh bye aro.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 20

good planning

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 19

well at least its only Aro coming with the twit twins.  COuld have been the whole guard.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

Go Mamma Bear Bella.  Kill that skanky bitch

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 17

Woo hoo yummy vampy sex

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

One bad ass bella coming up.  Wonder what skankya will do now.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

oooh skankya...you've messed with the wrong family

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

ummmm Fangs????

 

But you get this for the yummy lemony time.

fireworks

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

oooh why do I get the feeling Skankya was the one who went to the Volturi the first time????

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yummy lemon.   You get something special for that.

 

lemon

Woo Hoo for hearing her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah for family reunion

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 10

Guessing Victoria told the v?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

Yummy mini lemon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yea for giving him another chance

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

Cant say i blame b for not wanting to see them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Cant blame b for being mad. How dare he yell at her for not telling him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aww poor Charlie

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor thing having to do it herself

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

Least she found the money and all. Woohoo for ultrasound

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

House in Oregon huh? Poor b

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Poor b

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

I am glad that Bella met with Alice and heard what she had to say. I think it was very important Bella heard what they went through. I loved it when Mason called Esme. They both were so cute. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow... :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love it! What a wonderful day. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

It is just going to take time. Edward really messed things up. Bella is right...email or no email...phone or no phone...if anyone of them would have gone home to check on her anytime in the first year they would have found her in their house. This is going to be very hard on Esme. I don't see Nana wanting to be away anymore. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

He better be going to get the rest of the family. I don't know how they are going to get through this, but I hope they do. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

So he never expected Bella to be there? I wonder if Ben and Angela knew he was coming back. I am so sad that Charlie died and that all the time he and Bella missed out on. Bella had to give up so much. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am glad she knows how strong she is and she can make it through anything! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is amazing! To go through all this alone. There is no other word to describe her. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Since Bella's emails, texts & phone calls seem to be going through, why are they not calling her back? I can't believe they would not check out what is going on. What is up with the house? I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow...I hope they will respond to her messages. It is not right to leave her in this situation alone. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: christinamarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

really love this story please keep me informed when you have more

 

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

OmGosh!!  That is awesomeness!!  What a fantastic ending!  I love this story line and all that happened!!  Wonderful!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. My favorite part was the earthquake :)

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

WOW!!  That was sooo fucking awesome!!  Truly loved it!!  I hope all your stories get the reviews they deserve, and honey, that is MANY!!!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was fuckhot!!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

Beautiful!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

WOW!!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit!!



Author's Response: Girl, you are becoming one of my favorite reviers. Please know that this story may still have errors, as it was only run through my one beta. But i think you will enoy it, and it us completed.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

yeah!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh ed you are always so slow to catch up... glad you did

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

HOT times!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

i guess they are together now....at least she didn't jump right in  i am glad she stood up for herself

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

drama!! poor bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh ed you are such a fool..... i love mason

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh boy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow you are a super woman!!  couldn't have done that

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

it would be scary to be alone... how did no one see her at the store and tell charlie?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor bella

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

oh that was cute, didnt see the IVF with vamps coming but thats what i love about fics!!! would love an outtake or two with future with all the cousins!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I am planning on doing some outtakes or a small sequil. I am just trying to finish up what i am working on.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

AWESOME!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

oh wow!!

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

Okay carrying Esme and Carlisles kidis strange



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

loved the ending

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

i am glad the others are getting a chance at being actual parents, that is cool

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

Great story!! Love the earthquake, lol!!! Love the fact that Bella's giving Esme a baby, Rose too.  The worlds greatest gift.  Thank you for such a  great story. It had everything, laughs, tear, suprises!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 22 Epilogue

omg   wow  that was awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

oh my goodness!!!   that was really good

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

Now you know that anyone reading this story will never again see or hear of a earthquae without thinking of this story..  Hell yes!!!  Awesome

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

looking foward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 20

well i printed this out at once and read it all. i felt really bad for bella losing edward. then she finds out she is pregnant and what a strong person she is and takes care of herself and the baby. she was able to deliever water birth cool and now they are moving on. smart to move where the house is.ben and angela prove to be lifesavers. mason is  adorable and i love his gifts. i understand now why edward and his family left. slowly but surely the family heals and comes back together. too bad charlie was lost and not able to be part of their lives. i am sadden he didn't get to meet his grandson. tanya is a deluded woman, pshyco. i am almost thinking that mason bite his mom cause he knew she was pregnant and that he didn't want her to lose the baby. so he believes or saw that he was the one to change her and they end up with a baby girl. can't wait to see what happens next. i believe that bella will be the shield for the whole family and they will win over aro and the guards. looking forward tot he next one. thanx

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

excited for the next chapter 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

WOW, I'm on edge!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 20

LOL over the earthquake! Very anxious over the upcoming fight.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

Haha funny!!!

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh I just love this story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: bownbey Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

I can't wait to see Bella protect her family. Great writing.

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh poor bella... someone better respond to her and soon!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

intresting twist can't wait to read more

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

i wonder if they are even getting her emails.....hmmm

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I´ll bite.  I´m moving on to see what else happens.  Interesting!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: AKR Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story:) Keep writing!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter!  Poor Bella ... I hope the Cullens respond!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

ill keep reading! 

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