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Date: 09 Feb 2020 11:20 PM Title: Prologue
Wowsers. I'm hooked.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 11:20 PM Title: Prologue
Wowsers. I'm hooked.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Two lost and damaged souls. For these two, communication is the key if they are to build any kind of relationship. Bella really should explain more to Edward about her feelings regarding their previous arrangement, the good and the bad part because she enjoyed being dominated. Please update soon and let us know how these two are getting on.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh dear, it just keep getting better. The child is ot even his, he was lied to and Esme was aware it. That smacks of betrayal of epic propotion by your own mother.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Why does Bella continues to call that dreadful mother of hers is absolutely beyond me. Its obvious that she doesn't want anything to do with her for whatever reason. She keeps calling her and depressing herself. And Kate need to mind her own business, because she gave Bella a job does not equate to her dictating how she should live her life; or whom to associate with.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
So if the daughter is alive, where is she and who has her?
Date: 13 Jan 2018 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
They need to talk, l mean serious talk, the type that takes a whole day. Bella's indecisiveness is infuriating sometimes. Make your mind girl up and stick to it and stop messing each other up. We really need to hear from deranged Edward.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Let him say he is sorry it will be cleansing for bot of you.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
What, are you kidding me, he went looking for her. Aaaaah how nice, lets hope she closes the door on his face, not.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
I don't know if to feel sorry for him or to cheer in his misery. Something really bad must have happened to cause such reaction from everyone.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Run Bella run, don't even look back because here comes trouble.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
What happened between Edward and his family, it must be serious to turn him into an unfeeling and who thinks that debauchery is acceptable because he is rich.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Did you really? It remains to be seen.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
I really don't understand this Bella. She needs to grow some back bone, for sure life hasn't been easy for her but still. Its bad enough she is tolerating sadistic Edward due to need, but she appears gibberish and gullible all the time.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Some woman must have messed him up and now he is taking out on poor Bella.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
This Edward is truely evil.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bad and selfish parents, poor Bella trying really hard to make ends meet. But what she is thinking to do with the devil is not the answer.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Run Bella run don't even bother looking back.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 12:45 PM Title: Prologue
My, what do you say to that, he has a foul mouth and little regard to her. Should l say degrading, much.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
I usually watch dates on stories I read, but forgot to on this one. Now, I think I'll cry. This story is great and I so want to know how it ends.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2016 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is freaking amazing. Like wow! The chemistry between them is sizzling HOT! The kind of hot I can even feel through the PC screen LOL. Amazing! I love the idea too. Thanks so much for writing!
Date: 09 May 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
I need more!!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! When????
Date: 29 Apr 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hey, I was just wondering if your going to continue this story?
The story line is amazing, I've not read anything quite like it, and I doubt any could attempt it.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow!! I re-read this one in just few hours, its past 4 in the morning. It sure kept me engrossed! I forgot half the events that happened. I got so mesmerised by it all over again. It gave me heart ache when the story skipped 5 years. Developments that followed teared me up. Especially Edwards back story. Good thing I read it at night otherwise I wouldn't have been able to feel it fully.
It's a lovely story, I liked roughward too at the beginning. What turn of events, you sure know how to keep your readers wanting, begging for more!
I'm surely looking forward to how further events unfold.
Take care.
Date: 21 Mar 2015 1:58 PM Title: Prologue
Wow, this was a gut-wrenching read. Powerfully agonizing, in a good way. A very good way. I must have come across a rec for FYW in one of the fics I recently read, because I came in search for it. I'm so glad I did. Your writing is captivating and I found I just couldn't put it down until I was done. Now at the end, I am craving more.I know this story is years old, but I have to ask if you are well and truly done with Roughy and Isabella. Might there be more? Hopeful, but not optimistic. I enjoyed what you shared. Thank you for enthralling me with your words.
Date: 04 Feb 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
please, will you continue ?
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
The Haymount sounds so fancy and familiar. Like, The Citadel where Edward lives, The Westin where Bella worked and now The Haymount, where they both enjoy food....Strange yet not.
We have some major progress here, they have moved beyond the general talking and now have actual sentences to say to each other, or is it questions seeking answers?
-looks for the next button-
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
And there we have it....the reason for all of Edward's fuckedupwardness.
Josie is not biologically his.....so Jane was a dirty whore who led Edward to believe that Josie was his right from the get go?? No wonder Edward is suffering. I cannot imagine the pain he must be in from that betrayal which essentially broke him.
Bella's issues stem from neglect growing up, and living and dealing with the continued rejection from Renee. I'm sure watching the Graham's interact was foreign to her since she never really experienced anything like that with her own family.
I'm kind of reluctant to move onto the next chapter, primarily because there's no more 'next' button to click on and I'll be left in limbo, guessing.....Oh the drama LOL.
TFS
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
Renee is awful, what the fuck is wrong with her and why the fuck does Bella continue to torment herself with such disappointment is beyond me!
Her relationship with Edward is tenuous and so fragile.
Jane, Josie, shit how old is Edward?
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lauging together.....
Wow.....
So much progress for these two, but they really do need to get down and talk about the real shit that affects them from being able to move forward.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Maybe he needs a hug?
A paper bag?
Water?
Shit is getting freaky now!
His panic attackes seem lethal and worrying!
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
This was hard for both of them to admit their faults regarding their actions towards each other.
Edward was a sneak and smart to google her LOL.
They seem to have come to an unspoken agreement of sorts.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
WHOA!
Bella just had to awaken the monster within....tsk tsk. She doesn't even know the story and she's just throwing shit out there waiting for a reaction, which she got and clearly didn't like. If she wanted an out she should have just told him her piece whilst they were still in the lobby.
Poor Edward, clearly needs to go back to therapy.
Paul seems like a good companion for Edward, he needs to spend some time with him though.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Stalker alert!
This was definite progress.
But that was a shit show of an explanation of his actions towards her. The callousness of his words and the harsh delivery, shit was raw.
I'd venture he will be back, since there clearly is no closure YET.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
How rude! He could have at least closed the door like a civilized person, sheesh!
I don't get why Edward came back again....Could he have not done it via a letter, email, text, voicemail, singing bear, strip-o-gram, something other than himself physically being on her doorstep, in her driveway, invading her personal space. That right there just aint cool!
I get why Edward is feeling repentent for his past sins, but really now it has been a long ass time, 5 years long, surely there has to be some closure, right?
Bella is so not over this shit no matter how much she tries to convince herself. And Edward done called her ass out on it.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aw shit, 5 years later? That is a mighty long ass time!
Well, at least Bella was able to get herself sorted out with school and eventually graduated. I see the shit with her own family still lingers and haunts her. Such a shock to see that Edward is back and omfg @ the fact that Bella is still conditioned to snap into character upon hearing his voice. Now that's some fucked up sad shit right there! No matter what she has done so far is meaningless at this very moment.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Edward is beyond fucked up right now. How the hell are they going to have him arrested? That seems harsh. Alice needs to pull the stick out of her uptight ass already. And uh, is Edward also Linc? That threw me for a loop. What is the deal with this family and their fucked up secrets?
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh the shit done hit the fan!
That break was a long time coming for these two, at least Bella had the balls to put a stop to it. Poor Bella going back to the basics again. I'm assuming that Edward has arrived?
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
I know the song, it makes me weep and I don't like the vulnerability it leaves me in after listening to it, sad songs no matter how beautiful always do that to me....sigh.
This sheds some light on the fuckedupness of Edward, for the life of me though I want to know the details.....
I got to say though, the phone call whilst sexing, was seriously a turn on, the whole adrenaline rush of getting caught etc.
Bella has so many demons of her own that need addressing. Especially that shit with Charlie, and why she bothers to put herself in situations that hurt I don't understand her thinking.
I think it's time for a break....
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well at least you got yours Bella, that's something I guess towards progress, right?
I think you've had an epiphany on how to manage or in your case compartmentalize your routine so that you can survive.
I wonder what happened to Edward to seek Bella out at 3am.....so outside of the 'norm' for him and his set schedule....
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
I knew it was Jasper! LOL
But Bella didn't, LOL
I'm wondering if Edward was married with a daughter and something happened to them? So many theories are running through my head right now, it's so hard to keep up. I'm worried for Bella's mental health at this point, shit must be blowing her head up like whoa. Edward seems to be big on humiliation of Bella, or is it something more sinister? Like he hates women? So if I stick with that theory, then his wife or whatever she was must have cheated? The girl isn't his? AAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHH.
Breathe.....then click next....
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Aw Alice needs a punch in the face!
Positions, positions, my my my what a choice we have here!
I must say, Edward never keeps shit conventional by any standards!
Extremely awkward for Bella if that is Edward, but I'm going to assume that it's not and it's actually Jasper.....
LOL
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well as fucked up as this situation was and how Bella got herself snatched up out the blue by Edward the actual deed was seriously intense and of course hot as always!
I needed a cigarette after last chapter and now I need another!
Bella Bella Bella, do not try to analyze the photo chica, it will leave you even more confused that when this whole 'arrangement' began! Just go with the flow for as long as you can stand it before you feel the need to take a leap of something high.
What's up Alice' ass? She seemed to vibing some anti friendly vibes towards Bella.
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Date: 19 Sep 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
DUDEEEE!!!!
Edward, how the fuck can you not let her come on your cock after everything she went through to get to this point? Muy estupido! And you were the one saying not to catch feelings n shit, boy you done caught feelings didn't you! Just from one bang! Oh how karma works!
Bella....Charlie and Renee are fucked in the head by the sounds of things and need to be taken out back and shot! ay ay ay. Both of you need therapy or to fuck it all out -shrugs- whatever works best, right?
LOL
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Date: 18 Sep 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh that's old school - face down ass up - come on yall know that jam, right?
LOL
Wel, I'd say it's safe to assume that they have made shit officially, bumped on it n shit.
Edward Cullen, just wow, he's a piece of work!
Bella....always finding herself in some fucked up situations!
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Date: 18 Sep 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Uh, maybe he didn't plan for it? LOL
This is going to be intense!
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Date: 18 Sep 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap!
No strings attached, fucking? What more could you ask for? Apart from the $500 a night extra on top of your wages!
Bella you so need to get on that!
Angela is funny, I like this version of her :P
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Date: 18 Sep 2014 9:20 PM Title: Prologue
holy fuck!
what do you say to that?
i mean is there anything to actually say?
the whole chapter was fuck hot but damn does he have a mouth on him!