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Reviewer: nep51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 10:06 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

This was the best journey I  have been on in quite a while. Thanks for your original storyline. Once I started reading I could not stop until I finished. Bella and Edward were just adorable! You are a wonderful writer and storyteller. I encourage others to read this story.  You will be pleasantly surprised,

Reviewer: goodgodhenry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great story.  Truly enjoyed your way of bringing Edward out of the woods and Bella back into nature.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 3:19 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!! story and extra's ;) even though i've read this before i still cried several times ;D

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 9:02 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

I'm so in love with this story. I very sad to come to its end but I know that I'll be back.

Is it possible to get a pdf copy from you?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

Such a sad, sweet farewell.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

I can't read this fast enough, yt I want to savor every moment.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

Your description of Edwards actions are so clear that I can picture it like I'm actually witnessing it.

I cracked up when he tried mating.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love large dogs. I'd adopt him.

Reviewer: tinaspice02 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this. This is something I would read over & over again

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella your boyfriend only has sex on his brain. Can't wait see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:35 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

I have to say the concept of this story scared me at first. One doesn't like seeing a main character struggling to this extent and it's really out there in reality. That being said, however, you made it seem so easy and sweet so that all the unbelievable stuff was irrelevant and truth be told this is the 2nd time I've read your sweet loveable wonderful story!!  I loved the innocence of Edward and the patience in Bella to overlook his handicap and teach him how to survive and get more back in return...love, passion, and determination.  Bravo!

hugs StephanieStephanie



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the re read.

Reviewer: Kisskat99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 3:17 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

I loved this story. Of course they would find their happy ending.  Just like in real life they finally making themselves happy. Don't you just love it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading

Reviewer: Kritty67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:30 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Such a great story.  I just found it and read it over the past two days.  I loved it.  Thanks for letting me go along with you on this journey.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: cantstopreadingff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Such a lovely story. :-)

Reviewer: Kalahara Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:08 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Great tale! Unique and orginal! Thanks for entertaining me!~



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Sorry about the lateness of my response Gmail sent all my reviews to my junk mail.

Reviewer: Anaztazea Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

great start

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. Sorry about the lateness of the response. Gmail sent all my reviews to my junk mail.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

i have cried for the past couple of minutes and had to let you know this story is the best . it takes alot to move me and this beautifully written chapter captivated me. actually this entire story from the beginning .

thank you for sharing your story . i cant wait to continue reading



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, what a lovely compliment!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:00 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

great chapter. I finally got a chance to sit down and read it, and it was sweet and funny. I loved Renee coming into it, and asking all kinds of questions. i about spit my drink out when she asked about him going to the bathrrom and holding his dick.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:40 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

ahhhhh i so love that bella told renee the truth and she couldn't stop asking him questions. off course edward answers.

the girls how precious.i knew edward would make a great dad

they both are great together and thrilled they have friends like rose and emmett who accepted them both fully. what a great family

i had so much fun reading the story and loved how it ended thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 2:55 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

This was a lovely chapter.  You did a great job with this story.  thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:03 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 11:27 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Awwww, so sweet and perfect. Thank you for taking us on this journey and allowing us to be a part of their HEA.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: js18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 10:31 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

thank you for a wonderful story



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 6:07 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Beautiful.. 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:45 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Beautiful as always..loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 3:42 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Loved it !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 3:13 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

AAAWWW!!  Absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read!!!  The base is so different, funny but lots of love. Even from the beginning.  She loved him enough to be pateint with him and teach him even thou she thought she may have to give him up. Thank God Rose and Emmett came along with their job offer, that was just what they needed. Edward will probably never be refined and all that, but he doesn't need to be cauase Bella loves him just the way he is.  GREAT STORY GREAT JOB  THANK YOU!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 1:16 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 12:40 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 10:35 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

great ending! was that Leah's way of saying goodbye? Renee was a trip ...lol

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes it was part about Leah saying goodbye and part about Edward realizing his place completely.

Reviewer: hoppyliz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:39 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

This is an absolutely great story! Well done!

I enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. The next future take is with the beta and should be coming soon.

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:53 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

This is a lovely story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Another Futuretake is coming. I just have to find time around christmas here to finish it

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 5:57 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:38 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

where they met?! great idea!!! do you thin the wolves will be watching nearby?

Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 10:54 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

Yay! I am so happy you are continuing with the story! I don't know if you're taking requests or not, but one outtake that I would love to see is when Bella tells Edward she's pregnant and how he reacts, or something along those lines. Keep up the good work I love your writing!

Author's Response:

LOL, thanks. I don't think I will be doing outtakes so much as future takes, but I will consider it.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 5:50 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

how sweet i love your edward!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I love writing him

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:48 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

SWEEEEET Post anther one!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 26

They found their way. Sweet story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 12:54 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:26 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

Oh I was so excited to  see this update.  I am glad Edward gets to get married and enjoy his babies and wife!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 7:15 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal

Aaawwwww.........the proposal was prescious. Is there going to be another outtake featuring the wedding? Hope so.....can't wait!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Reviewer: bunnysue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am really enjoying your story. I have had a hard time reading fic lately untill I found this. This is so different, THANK GOD! Thanks for your hard work to write this.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

AAAA+++++

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

I totally enjoyed it, I think I have read some of you work before but I can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 23

that one needed a tissue alert

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

awww, he could sex my fence



Author's Response:

LOL, yes, I'm sure he knows just how to use the hole digger.

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

ut oh

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

that was funny I could just picture it

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

yay



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks for your reviews, even the small ones make me smile.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow again, poor Edward

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

gonna get cold in winter

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

hopefully Charlie left her some money and she can get a cabin in the woods and they can live happily ever after

 

or maybe the Cullens left him a rich boy and he will be like Tarzan coming home to Greystone

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

what a great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

well isn't she accomodating

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

yes the most beautiful man in the world

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

wow will she end up living in the cave with him or bring him back to Forks

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

A lot like the story Feral that I am reading in FanFiction but it doesn't have wolves



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews. I have head about Feral. I didn't want to read it while I was still writing this, becuase I didn't want to be swayed in any direction, but I have heard it's great and intend to check it out.

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 26

I have really enjoyed reading this story.
Thank you writing

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: TwiTrek23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you for sharing this story, it was really raw and beautiful; I can't wait to read more ^-^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

even savage Edward is cute with his possessiveness

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

Aaaawwwww.......I'm so sad to see this story end. I loved every chapter. I know you said you'd be doing a few outtakes, but do you think you will be doing a sequil since Bella and Edward will be have twins in the near future? Pleeeaaaasse.........  :-)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 27

Sweet!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 27

MINE yes Edward yours!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

cool love the insight!  it's nice to see what ed was thinking.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

thanks for the wonderful story!  i am glad things worked out!!  it was beautiful and i enjoyed it!!  thanks :P



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed. The short EPOV outtake from Chapter 1 was just posted.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

good glad billy didn't do that wow the guilt to know where they stopped looking is where he was! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 24

OH F!!!! what an a-hole!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

how sad... poor ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

oh where is it all going to go? 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

yeah at least they know.  Em is wonderful!  so is rose!  i hope they can help ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh no!  how funny rose and her "puppy" play comment i almost died laughing!  why doesn't bella just tell the truth?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

hum what is going to be em and rose's reaction i am soo wondering.  i hope ed will be happy.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

i hope he likes where they are going.  i wonder if the wolves will follow them too?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

yeah!  one thing is falling in place.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

yeah there is your way out!  great!  haa rose and em old neat twist!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

he remembers poor guy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

interesting... i still can't see her staying there.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh it just keeps getting more complicated.. she can't live with him and he really can't live with her... argh!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh poor poor ed... i thought at least one family member would be alive to help him.  how sad!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

yeah we need more info!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh boy.... what is she going to do?  i knew they are going to hook up but.wow complicated!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh boy... can't talk but we can do that! haha!! that's nature for you

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

oh the "dog" is out of the bag!  HAHA!! i can't believe they fired her!  what is she going to do?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

oh boy is he going to want to go back... will she find out where he is from and who he is?  wow!  i can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you again for all your reviews, they are great to read!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh my didn't expect that...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your reviews. Glad you are enjoying.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh boy... poor bells! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

interesting turn of events... she is going to go back.. that is funny that the wolves are the same as the pack and the russet wolf likes her... can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

oh boy how is she going to find her way out?  what is going to happen to ed?  this is very interesting can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great story but it feels like you ended it in the middle are you planning a sequel?



Author's Response:

There are going to be future outtakes.

 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

this was a truely wonderful story, thank you so much for takign the tiem to write it and share it with us all.  Very nice.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh boy how did he get there?  what is his story?  i can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

You'll see : )

Thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh intersting thanks for not having her sleep with ben! oh ed can't wait to meet you!



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 26

great ending! so happy for them!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 26

(applause) that was an amazing story and one of the best ive read in a long time! Thank you for your hard work you're amazing!

Author's Response:

<3 thank you so much!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wonderful! So sad to see it end!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 26

thanks for the wonderful story.  The ending was perfect, no big hype, just a simple loving family.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

Excellent story. Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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