Date: 14 Mar 2018 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think the brothers are really stupid and immature
Date: 13 Mar 2018 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Btw I’m loved ng this sequel
thank you
Date: 08 Aug 2017 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 48
On my God these to books are perfect 😁 please keep writing.😀
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2016 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 48
Great story. I would have loved to see what happened to them in the future. Just a glimpse of what they ended up doing.
Date: 24 Oct 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 48
This is completely fantastic!! I Love it!! ;)
Date: 19 Oct 2016 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMFNG!! OHSHIT!! I think he may just flip his shit! lol
Date: 19 Oct 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
THIS IS AWESOME!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 48
I'm so in love with this story. I haven't felt that feeling of... I don't know how to explain it other than hope, hope for love, and hope to succeed. And you wrapped that all In 48 chapters. Amazing job.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 48
Just read both of the stories. loved them! I hope one day you share a future take with us.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 48
I don't usually like boxing and actually refuse to watch it, having said that, I really loved both of these stories! You did a wonderful job educating the uneducated about this sport and making it enjoyable to learn about at the same time. I love ur stories. Keep up the good work!
Date: 15 Sep 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 48
Thank you so much for a great story, am looking forward to many more. Love your writing.
Ruby2sday
Date: 02 Sep 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 48
Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 45
So very glad to see this updated. Thanks for letting me know and for the add to ur FB group!
Date: 16 Aug 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 48
Yeah!! For the team and for Edward and Bella.
Date: 12 Aug 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 48
Loved! It was wonderful!
Will there be any future takes?
Author's Response:
Maybe at some point. Not sure and nothing set in stone.
Date: 12 Aug 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 48
Easy to have patience when awaiting excellence. Can't wait until any of your other unfinished come alive again. I will follow as long as you write.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 48
thank you so much for sharing this AMAZING!!! AWESOME!!! story with us ;) i noticed you pressed complete but i really hope you come back to post an epliogue or f/t ;D
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 48
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 48
I REALLY need to go back and re-read this, and the prequel; thanks for finishing it, hon!! :-D
Date: 11 Aug 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 48
A good, clean ending. A good story.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 48
Now that you have finished this story will you work on your other stories like The Wife...I really miss that one.
Author's Response:
That's the plan, but I'm not promising regular updates or anything. I've got a lot going on and I won't put that kind of stress on myself again.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 48
awwwww damn girl i am crying now. such a good ending...
Date: 08 Aug 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 47
It would be hard to fight a friend. They know each other too much. But at least they know they have the national championship.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 47
FUCK YES!!!! she beat that bitch....yes!!! i cant wait for the next chapter even though the fight is between friends.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 47
thank you so much for posting this awesome chapter ;) looking forward to more ie the last chapter and an epilogue? ;D
Date: 04 Aug 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 47
Good chapter. Wish Tanya had gotten more payback.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 47
Yay! Thanks so much! Are we getting future takes as well? Is live to see the gang with little ones.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 46
Ahhhh! Can't wait for the update! I've read this and the first story straight through. .......and NOW I have to wait!
Author's Response:
Soon. The wait won't be long. :)
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 43
Great scene!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awe!!!!! So sweet and made me smile!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 30
Glad that went well!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 29
Way to go Papa Ed! Thats awesome!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Powerful chapter! Loved it!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
That's complete bullshit!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 44
Cant wait for more love this story
Date: 10 May 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 46
i;m so glad i began reading this sequel i've enjoyed it ;) btw ben wasn't mentioned in the last couple of chapters? also i thought embry was gay? it was mentioned that he was talking about some girls he liked? looking forward to the rest ;D
Date: 07 May 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 46
ok i am all caught up and i hope tanya's ass gets kicked!!! i cant wait to see how this ends...is it wrong that i want to see everyone happy and with babies lol
Date: 02 May 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 46
Welcome Back! Can't wait to see updates on all of your stories.... :)
Date: 02 May 2016 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 46
Great chapter, great to see it back. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us. I really love this one and fighting for love. I cant wait until this one updates. Really looking forward to it. :) I hope you are doing ok. I saw a few of your authors notes saying you were having some health issues. I hope they are under control or doing better. And Happy new year!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
Bella needs to take Tanya down.
Date: 28 Dec 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 45
Can't wait for more
Date: 24 Dec 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 45
Maybe you didn't like it, but you got us to the big fights.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 45
But it was a great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 45
Hey, don't sweat it! I'm just greateful you didn't flounce off into the sunset after all the persecution you've suffered on FFN. It also sucks that we can't contact authors on here, but I guess that's the spammers fault!! :-(
Date: 16 Oct 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 44
I love this story, I know it was taken off Fanfiction for some unknown f**king reason but I was hopeing you will keep posting chapters on this site!!!!
Keep it up, Thanks:)
Date: 23 Aug 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 44
So great to get an update on this wonderful story.
Date: 21 Aug 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 44
Edward always knows what Bella needs.
Date: 30 May 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 42
So glad u are continuing this story.
Date: 27 May 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 43
They need to train while their supporters find more sponsors. They need a business minded person working on how to increase revenue.
Date: 15 May 2015 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 42
They should have gotten more support from the students the whole year. They can't spend all their time as a group and expect people to know who they ars. Networking is always important.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 42
poor Maggie.....
Date: 10 May 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 42
looking forward to the next chatper
Date: 06 May 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
Phil has a great team. He needs to trust them. They want this program to succeed.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi I love this story! Are you planning on continuing as I noticed its been almost a year since you last updated? If so ill be eagerly awaiting it!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
Were you ever able to finish this? On another site, perhaps? Thank you for a great story.
Susan
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
I hope Emmett, Jasper, and Renee can finally understand. I believe Bella when she said this is their last chance. She can be happy with just Edward, Carlisle and Esme. She is finally living again and not just excisting. They should be happy that they have a happy Bella again. Emmett and Jasper need to worry about their own relationships. Those two should have married their mates years ago. They are lucky they didn't get dropped on their butts for not legally declaring their love.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 40
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Apr 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 39
They do hold her suffering over her head. They mention it all the time. They like to pick the scab. I think they like her needing them to surrive and now she doesn't.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 38
OMG SHE KNOCKED HIM OUT.. BELLA SAYS KNOCK YOU OUT... EDWARD WIFE SAYS KNOCK YOU OUT... MRS. CULLEN-MASON SAYS KNOCK YOU OUT... OUT.. LMAO
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 38
Yeah Bella! Emmett and the rest deserve the same treatment. They better back off or they could really lose her. Renee call Bella selfish, has that lady looked in the mirror. I know Carlisle and Esme did not mean to start this shit storm. Bella and Edward are at school and they don't have time to deal with their issues. Edward and Bella just need to state their views and tell them to like it or leave. They can be escorted off the campus.
Date: 26 Mar 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 38
looking forward to more
Date: 24 Mar 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 37
This team made UCLA look good. They should have no problem keeping the program.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 37
Looking forwards to the next chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
It is great seeing the happy, but tough Bella.
Date: 18 Mar 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 35
This team has done very well for a first year team. There should be no question about keeping the team. They are winners.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
OH HELL YEAAAAH !!! OMG YOU ALWAYS GET ME SO PUMPED AND EXCITED WHEN I READ THIS STORY I JUST WANNA FIGHT SOMEBODY LMAO
Date: 15 Mar 2014 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Mar 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am glad they got married. Most of their expenses are cover, since they are in school. Since they are keeping it a secret for now, they will still get money from their families. They won't have to face the real world for awhile.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 34
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh sweet baby Cullen!!! THEY FRIGGIN DID IT!!! Oh god it was so perfect for them and I totally cried at Carlisle's note to Bella and Edward. He knows his little sister so welll, as he should. I cried like a baby to be honest lmao. OMG I JUST LOVE IT!!
It was soo them and I knew Carlisle and Esme were going to be there... IT WOULD have felt wrong for them not to be there... and I half expected at the end for the rest of the family to come strambling in!
TWO CULLENS MARRIED TO TWO MASON'S.. fuck yeaaaaaaaah
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
I had a feeling they were there, since they had a personal note from Carlisle. They should have been there for the wedding. Carlisle and Esme are the most important family members for Bella and Edward. They are a young couple, but after all that they have been through I think they will have a very successful marriage. Now they just have to finish school before they have children.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
I think eloping would be the best thing for them. They love each other and that is all that matters.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter, Looking forward to more. :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
HELL YEAH... LETS GO GET MARRIED EDWARD!!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 31
They really are so cute together.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter, Looking forward to more. :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
omg perfect ending and as much as I feel anger towards Bella's parents, her sister, and brother in-law... I'm glad they were there at Carlisle wedding. Because I'm damn sure that if they werent, one day he would have regretted it, since they're alive and all.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Feb 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love Edward's parents. They understand Bella and Edward. Bella's parents should have stayed away. They are just causing her more anxiety and pain.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
omg please for the love of all thats holy, update i miss this story.. seriously i have dreams about it every time i re-read fighting for love and the lucky ones!!
Author's Response:
in case you didn't see it, I just updated it.
Date: 01 Jan 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
Is this the end of the series? I do not see where I can receive an alert for more chapters. Please let me know if this is the end, if so I can understand why you aren't happy with this particular chapter.
I just want you to know that I so enjoyed the series & hope that you do more soon, but I would love this story to continue with a better ending.
Thank you,
Ruby (ruby2sday@cox.net)
Author's Response:
I still have a lot of this story to write. I'm just struggling to get it going. I don't know why this chapter felt off to me, but at the time it did.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 27
*gasp* Liam punked out?!
Or did he get bribed? Hmm...
Great chapter BB!!
Date: 09 May 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 12 Mar 2013 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
Looking forward to more