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Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi. I miss this story! hope you plan on finishing.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wondered how all that was going to work with "claiming", "mates" and the jealousy and all.  But they all seemed to handle it well.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward is finally completed with his true mate!  As long as the all understand that I think Edward will be ok!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great story! wow! Can't wait to see more :)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

Very interesting! I like it!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

Congrats on Mocked by Destiny.. I read it and loved it!

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

As always with your chapter....WOW!!

Keye

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very pleased to see Edward FINALLY claim Bella. It certainly will be interesting seeing how the rest works out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well I am glad they stoped because Edward needs to be there first.  Bella needs to be with them when they find him she will be able to track him best I think because his sent is so strong to her.

Reviewer: bownbey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think this is great, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Omg wow another great story from you.. To bad I wont be able to get caught up for awhile. I am due for anytime now to give birth.. I will catch up keep up the great work on all stories.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

I get that Jasper wanted Edward to be Bella's first but Edward didn't wait for her and in fact cheated on her several times with Jazz so even though Edward did not fuck Jazz he was still a long way from the virgin he claimed to be... Hope they find Edward soon and Bella kicks his ass before giving in to him...lol Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love it.  Great update.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

curious to see how this story goes...

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

please continue, very interesting so far cant wait to see if bella survives and if there will be one happy couple of the 4 of them.

until next update :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

Umm - so that is a hell of a place to stop!  But I totally understand :D

So I take it Carlisle is going to change her to save her ~ yeah!

Thanks so much and I'm looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh holy shit - was that smoking hot or what!!!!!!

Poor Bella - hope she is ok!

Thank you~



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! next chapter is almost done. its only going to get get better from here on out. nails233

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward run and hide.  How is Bella going to react now that she thinks that Edward doesnt love her????



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! only time will tell, how she responds. next chapter is almost done. nails233

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow!  What an exciting chapter!!!  I am riveted and cannot wait to read what happens next!!  That was some cliffie too!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! next chapter is almost done. nails233

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy Shit that is one awesome first chapter.. I CAN NOT wait for the next one.. Thank you for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! more to come real soon! nails233

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Holy Shit!  No!

:(



Author's Response:

Trust me kepp reading. Have faith in me and you will be rewarded. I promise. Thanks for reading it! Nails233

Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great one has begun!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella cant die they all need to get it on together ya im a perv lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! And all i can say is your pervy side will love whats coming! I know mine is! LOL, more to come real soon. Nails233

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I think I like this one. What's your update schedule?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! as for my schedule i try to update weekly (barring no disasters) but dont have a specific day. as soon as i get it back from the Beta i post. I dont like to keep the readers waiting. Nails233

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow what a gripping story and what a cliff hanger!!!  Can't wait to read more.

 

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I am so happy you didn't freak out, This will be a very differant story, not everything is as it seems as you have seen with the first chapter. You have read my stories enough to know i love to do the unexpected. thanks again Nails233

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

As you already know I loved it thanks for the shout out love to babe !!!! awesome job!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL you better!

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