Date: 05 Feb 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Enjoy reading the story. Thank you.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:18 AM Title: Fandom GIves Back Eclipse Edition-Out take
I was so excited to see this story had updated! I had always loved it. This was another great one!
~Jessi
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:35 AM Title: Fandom GIves Back Eclipse Edition-Out take
Awwww...I loved this so much..
Thanks a million for it!!!
Really missed TodayWard...
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: Fandom GIves Back Eclipse Edition-Out take
thanks this was a good out take
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:30 PM Title: Fandom GIves Back Eclipse Edition-Out take
He is so sweet!!
Thanks, you for writting and the lady who decided to share it:)
Date: 29 May 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
such a great story! you did a wonderful job with the emotions. Glad Edward got his happy life he deserved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm honored you read it. This is the most angst I've ever written! It was hard for me. I'm better w/ drama and romance.
Date: 29 May 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Im loving this Bella! great chapter...I will read more tomorrow!
Date: 28 May 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Youre killin me smalls...youre killin me! yeah i totally quoted the sand lot...dont knock it that movie rocks! Loved the chapter even though I want to make Edward better and beat the shit out of Mike Newton. I hope that Bella was able to stop him before he cut to deep.
Author's Response:
LoL I love that movie too! L7 weenie!
Newton is definitely an ass in this story. Glad you like it!!!
Date: 28 May 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to cry...and you said my stuff was depressing. I really hope he finds some kind of happiness.
Author's Response:
LoL I don't usually do angst so it may not be as bad as yours but this Edward is pretty sad and broken. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
This was a very well written touching story and I thank you for sharing it with us all! I look forward to checking out your other writings in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I'm thinking of adding some out takes since this story was so short and I really miss writing this Edward.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
his was a pretty good story thanks
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved Bella standing up for Edward to Mike!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun. Happy to have you reading! :)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow poor Edward. He must have really had a rough time to get to this point.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. Poor Edward.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was a cute ending. A happy ending. It needed one. I loved it, and can't believe it was over so fast. This was a fantastic story.
Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awww... how cute! I can't believe this story is already going to be coming to an end.
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
YAY! You had me so nervous here! It ended happy though. Bella just has to not screw this up for him.
Jessi C.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Who is it!??!?!?! GAH! I'm gonna die! This is so nerve wracking!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is entering the joys of being a teenager. Poor guy he has to get the crash coarse in just a few days.
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Cute. Edward is finally beginning to change is views of the world.
Jessi Cullen
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Dun Dun Dun! Whoa nothing like getting feelings out in the open! I like this bold Bella. Poor Edward he is being bombarded with all these feelings he can't even name because no one has ever showed them to him before. I can't wait to read on!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww... Go Bella! I love this story... O can't wait to see what happens. Your Edward is so dark and different, but a normal teenager beneath it all. I'm glad you didn't do Bella as the typical klutz and uncoordinated little girl who can't stand up for anything. It makes this story and your characters more believable.
Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! That means alot!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is an amazing story and I can't wait to continue it. You capture the essence of Edward so well!
Jessi Cullen
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I h ope you enjoy the rest of it!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I want to begin crying right now. This is so sad. I can't wait to read more!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 06 Feb 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was a wonderful story, thanks for sharring:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was simply perfect...
Date: 02 Feb 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Damn that was close..I felt like holding my breath right through it...
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
God! That was the best day ever for him...
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad he's open up a little. one step at a time seems to be the right approach with Edward.
Yay! Eddie got kissed...
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved Bells for those moves, both getting rid of the razors and putting that punk in his place...
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very intriguing..
I really feel for your Edward.. he seems so lost and makes you just wanna bring some light to his dark world. While reading chap 1 I was surprised when I got to it his reason for breaking into the pawn shop.
Chief Swan is a life saver right now..
I'm glad Bells caught him in the bathroom...
Date: 30 Jan 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward did deserve a beak in life after all he had been through, and he found a whole family to love him. It was a wonderful story and I'm sad to see it end.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. He did deserve happiness after all he had been through. Thank you for reading!!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope we get to read more about Edward interacting with Renee and Charlie and getting more comfortable with them. I like that they try to make Edward feel welcome and appreciated and do not push him too much.
Bella and Edward are going too fast and I'm interested to see what her parents will think about this development in their relationship.
Date: 28 Jan 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow! Bella actually has a lot of self-esteem in this story and is the one calling the shots with Edward, they had a very nice first kiss. I like this Bella!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
:) realy cute story
Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving how accepting and warm are Renee and Charlie, they aren't usually portrayed like that and much less being married! Bella is as sweet as always, and I feel bad for Edward, always expecting things to go bad again, which is understandable considering his background.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is really, really depressed. I hope he and Charlie can develop a good relationship that can help Edward overcome his inner demons.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just Beautiful. Please keep on writing, just like this, without too much pain.
Thank you very much for this.
Author's Response:
No, thank you!!!!! I am happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 26 Jan 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
omg what a beautiful story you make me cry. I love your story short and sweet perfectg.........
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!