Date: 24 Jan 2014 2:02 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
jealous edward
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:51 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Aww I would love if this got continued! It was so hot I loved it :)
Author's Response:
thanks for the suggestion, but unforunately not something working on
thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Jun 2011 7:05 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
We wish that Edward would get Bella pregnant and then they would be connected even more EEEEEEE
Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:54 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Poor edward i liked it though
Date: 01 Feb 2011 7:34 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
So hot and awesome 1 shot
Author's Response:
so glad you enjoyed!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:20 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
I loved it alot will there be another chapter
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed
not sure if this one will get continued
very tempting
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:21 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Wow, not the ending that I expected at all. Its nice to see that Edward doesn't always get what he wants. Great job.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 1:49 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Only one thing i didn't like in the whole story.... That tiny little blue "Yes" next to Completed for the story's info!
You both proved how much you own my ass!!
I loved it and eventhough you know very damn well I love E and B pairing as well as the R and B one this was great!
Damn! I am now all hot and bothered....
***pouts***
Loved it!
xoxo
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:06 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
What did she say?
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:23 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Hot, as always, but I'm left feeling for Edward. He seems to grab me more than any other character this time, which is a rarity for me. And why change the relationship anyway? Personally, I'm a believer that marriage changes things and it seems the had it perfect already. Just saying.
I hope this doesn't seem negative, it's not meant to be. It's quite the compliment to your writing that a character who only speaks three lines has captured my attention so much.
Cheers, Balti K
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
wow that was differnt hot but different I loved it
Date: 20 Jan 2011 2:36 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
WOW! This was sooooooo good! I love reading your lemons :)
I feel bad for Edward though. I would have broke down and started bawling my eyes out when I saw the tear streaming down his cheek.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:17 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
It is an interesting arrangement. The girls on a position that controls both guys, Rose the head of all.
It has a possibility of turning into a long story. Four people not only sharing a house, but so much more. Power, obedience, pleasure, pain. How to cope with it all and life outside their house.... I don't know if you've considered it, I hope so.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:41 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Well, if my vote counts, I vote for you to continue!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:30 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Loved it very much and don't expand it right now I like what you 2 are working on lets keep focased on that......
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:25 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
wow! Loved this! would love to see it expanded :)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:05 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
I would love to see this story expanded ...it was fuckhot awesome! Having Edward & Emmett as slaves was a great twist! I really enjoyed it!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:54 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
And I'll say it again - that bit between Edward and Bella just makes me CRY!
But mm mm mm, Slaveward... ;)
Hot stuff, ladies!