Date: 04 Sep 2012 11:00 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That was so hot. I love poly and slash stories, I'm such a perv, lol.
I love that they were able to discover and enjoy this side of their relationship and that they found Edward to do that with. That was the last thing Edward expected to happen when he met up with Jasper, lol.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 2:56 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That was hot hot hot... I have read MsKathy's The Trip Home and loved it... I myself an a Poly junkie.... To bad you don't feel like turning this into a full story I think you could do it justice, but I respect your feelings that it needs to stay a one shot....
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:28 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Oh My Jasper! That was incredibly HOT! If that was your first lemon & slash, you should definitely keep writing these kind of fics! I can't say I'm not bummed that you won't continue this, but I'm definitely gonna check out your others!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:18 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Wow! I know you said you are not taking this past a O/S... but dang girl. Keep writing. You have a good feel for the Poly pairing and I think you should continue other stories. I will be checking out your other fics soon!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:50 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Whoa! That was fucking unbelievable! Very impressive for your first slash and lemon! Double cherry poppin! Well done! ;)
I love how Edward was the one she loved all that time ago and he was the perfect match to her and Jasper. Too bad you won't consider continuing this. I can see a lot of fun times for these three.