[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:07 PM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
I just finished it and I loved it this was a great read thank you
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 6:29 PM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
thank you so much for completing and posting this AWESOME story ;D
Date: 13 Jul 2013 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
Awe. I love Edwards Journal writings it's his soul being bared and I love it. I also truly love this story. I don't know much about the BDSM world..but from what I have researched I think you are doing a wonderful job portraying it. :)
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:26 AM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
I started reading this on ffn along time ago. I dont know why I never finished it there. But I found it this morning and read the whole thing through. Excellent story. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
scene was hot. eddie is on cloud nine! lol
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
Wow, they had a full day, lol. I'm so glad that Edward has wrote in his journal what he's feeling for Bella. I think he's going to be in for a nice surprise, hehehe!
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
Bella's dream was hot, I would have been gutted to wake up, lol. What did Bella decide whilst she was at the spa? When will they finally confess their love for each other?
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Oh my God!! That was so hot and intense I feel as weak as Edward. I need to go lay down, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
I think Bella was remarkably calm when Mike sat down next to her. If it were me I probably would've stabbed a fork in his leg, lol, not just thrown water on him. I hope Jessica's learned her lesson, she needs a long talk with Mike and not to bother setting him up with anyone, no woman deserves to be with a two timing arse like him.
I hope this weekend goes as well as Bella's thinking it will. Maybe she'll be able to talk about her feelings more if she gets a sense from Edward that he feels that same. I think, from the way Edward's so submissive, she may have to take the bull by the horns, so to speak, and bring it up herself.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Charlotte had some good advice for Bella and I think it prepared the ground for both of them to get to know each other better. Unfortunately, as confident as Bella is as a Domme she's still struggling to say and let Edward know what she's really beginning to feel for him other than being his Domme.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
So she does have feelings for Edward other than as his Domme. It's going to be interesting seeing how they work out both sides of their relationship.
Both these two have had bad relationships previously, I hope they don't let that effect what they could have together.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
Wow!! That was amazing, I'm effin exhausted, lol. Does Bella feel the same as Edward? I know she felt the electricity the same as Edward did but does she want to beg him to stay like he wants to beg her to keep him forever? Awwww.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
There's no way on this earth that I could be a submissive. Getting up that early and doing all that excercise would kill me for the rest of the day, lol, I would have been punished just like Edward but for falling asleep in the playroom, not what you want really is it? Bwahahahaha!!
I was surprised with Edward's age but then by 40 I would expect a man to just be about grown up enough to know what he finally wants and needs, lol. Will his family find out what he is? Will they really care? I love that he's a successful man with his own business.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Wow, that was really hot, we'd all love a multi orgasmic man, lol, Bella's a very lucky girl and I can't see her chucking Edward into the street anytime soon.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:56 AM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
yeah they had 4 babies!
i love that they are still able to enjoy the lifestyyle after all that time!
perfect!
was that the first time he ever yellowed/almost red?
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
they are a perfect dom/sub and vanilla couple! im sure it isnt all rainbows and roses, but they are too sweet! i love that after so long they bith finally got their happily ever after!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
i freaking knew that phsyco was going to do something and he was the one on the phone!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
holy hell that was a hot hot hot chapter!
too bad they are both too nervous to admit their true feelings for each other....
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
ooohhh! i like where this is going!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much
Sorry for my lag in responding to your review. Kasi~
Date: 21 Dec 2011 11:52 PM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
Thank you for sharing this awesome story. After reading your A/N for this chapter, I can't wait to head over to start on the story you mentioned.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story. I am so sorry for the delay in replying, it is very unlike me to let it go for so long. I also have stories posted here on twcs under the names of WeeKittyAndTAT and JessAndTAT as well. I sure would love to read your reviews of those stories! Thanks for reading and reviewing and hope to hear from you again.
Kasi~
Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
please please tell me what his name that she calls him means pretty please
Author's Response:
To answer your question I am takign the direct quote form the story. "We discuss what I will call him. I am okay calling him my slut on occasion, however I prefer to call him something I have never called any other submissive. I settle for my slave in Irish, mo daor, or my sweet in Irish, mo milis."
Thanks for reading and reviewing, can;t wait to hear what you think of the rest of the story.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
yeah together on all levels! now they just have to get rid of mike!
Author's Response:
I know right, have faith Iam a HEA kinda girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi~
Date: 04 Nov 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
oh boy i knew he was going to go crazy.. hey dont' worry how long it takes to respond to my reviews... i am just glad you respond, your life comes before all this! take care! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing again. I love that you are enjoying this story. I struggled at times to write it, but I managed to finish it up on the posting time frame, all but the epi, that took a bit longer, but I think it was wortht he wait.
Kasi~
Date: 04 Nov 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
hum interesting. it is intersting how they have put their relationship in someone elses hands. I mean i know he is a mentor and he has been there done that, but it is intersting. It would be nice to let someone else make those choices. But i do see his point you have to have a base before you build on it.
Author's Response:
Master Peter is a very wise man, and I loved having him for Bella to fall back on and still remain her strong self too. Thanks for reading and reviewing, sorry it took longer to get back to you on the last three, I was busy with real life for a few and had to go spend a wonderful amount of time at the store..yay lucky me! :) Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
you go master peter!!
Author's Response:
I loved writing Master Peter! So much fun. Thanks for all these reviews they are seriously making my day brighter! Kasi~
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
oh ed you really stepped into it with that comment. i knew mike was going to get all crazy. i see that she didn't send anything to ed so i wonder what was in the box. poor ed!
Author's Response:
Yeah I know right? Loved this a lot! Thanks for the reviews, Kasi~
Date: 04 Nov 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
knew it was coming poor ed.... i want to cry for him!!!! mike is going to go all crazy i have a feeling...
Author's Response:
I have the feeling you might be on to something and yes that chapter was extreemly hard for me to write. I spent a good portion of it tearing up myself. I hated hurting him like that, thing get better I promise. Kasi~ thanks again for the reviews and for reading my story.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
oh ed you got it bad.... the kink was great! the punishment is not my thing but in know it's part of the story. she is going to freak when she read it. i can see her trying to run away from him... maybe not...
Author's Response:
Thanks for yet another wonderful review. Things will get a tad bit stressful for a bit. Havae faith she will do the right thing.
Kasi~
PS...thanks for the words about it being HOT, I had a lot of those type of replies...
Date: 04 Nov 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
bella is always so perfect in the stories.... she cums easily and squirts no wonder everyone gets fed up with her attidtude....it was HOT!!
Author's Response:
I actually love her attitude it was perfectly fitting for this story. I also enjoy writing hot juicy lemons. Most people don;t realize that like 85% of BDSM participants are not in a loving relationship together. In other words most Doms or Dommes do not live with or are in love with their submissives. Do most love them? Yes. Do most care for them? Of course that is a part of a true bdsm relationship is for the submissive to wholely give themself over to the complete control and care of the Dom/Domme. Relationships for Bella in this story are not easy to come by, because the one person she has ever cared enough about to love cheated on her and broke her heart. Plus on top of that she is left being the sole survivor of her blood line both sides. She has learned how to be alone, and that is what she does best. It is part of why she has the desire to be a Domme, she has this driven nature in her to control matters. It is easy for her as long as she is in control, when she feels the shift of that she lets the stress get to her. More exciting story coming, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 04 Nov 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
damn just f him into another world bella......
Author's Response:
I know right? WOOT~
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope to hear more from you as this goes. Thanks for the story love by reviewing.
kasi~
Date: 03 Nov 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
poor bells! at first i thought it was going to be edward but then when it was mike i was like wtf what a cheating sob!!!! can't wait to read what is in store....
Author's Response:
There will be some interesting turns happening soon, and you might even find yourself mad at Bella (a few chapters down the road), and your not alone in that, but it changes. No worries, I can't wait to hear what you think.
Kasi~
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Nov 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
she is so caring i love it.. i know the hard stuff will come into play too but you can really see how she cares about him. the casting thing is way cool..i love her train of thought! HOT!!!
Author's Response:
I know right??? I did a bunch of research on this and when i was looking at toys and thigns that a person coudl do or use, I found that and thought WOW COOL! so there you go...LOL
thanks for the reviews, I love them all!
Kasi~
Date: 03 Nov 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
well at least she sees she has feelings that is good i thought maybe she would fight them. That is one thing i don't get about the lifestyle, i am an old fashioned girl and i can't see past having sex with someone you don't love. I could do the kinky stuff...well some but not that! can't wait to see where it all goes!
Author's Response:
Maria~
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I understand exactly what you are saying this lifestyle could not be for me either. I am not saying that casual sex is bad for some people, nor am I saying that this lifestyle is not good either. But it is not for me personally. Writing this story was a HUGE challenge for me, and I hope that I did the BDSM parts well because it is a preference for some people and I would never sit back and put it down, or wish to color it in a bad light. I think there could be parts adn portions of the bdsm lifestyle that could be very freeing and fullfilling, but again it is not for me. Thanks again for the lovely review, I hope to hear from you again, so I can see what you think as it goes.
Kasi~
Date: 01 Nov 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
hum what next?
Author's Response:
Another review....SQUEE...(sorry had to have an alice moment) I love reviews, so thank you so much. I hope that you continue to enjoy the story, thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi~
Date: 01 Nov 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
ooh is bella falling for him? i hope so. they sure are HOT together!
Author's Response:
Oh Bella the Domme that seems to not ever let her feelings show will melt soon enough, the ice queen has found her own brand of heating pad...LOL Can't waitt o read your reactions to coming chapters. Be forewarned that you may find yourself even mad at her in the coming chapters a time or two. Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing me the story love that I feel this story actually deserves. Thank you! Kasi~
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
hum intersting you are a sex god ED!!!
Author's Response:
I really loved writing this story and I am glad to see that you are reading and enjoying it as well. There are lots of surprises adn fun to be had and found inside the chapters of this story and I am excited to read your reviews yet to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hugs~ Kasi
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:27 PM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
This truly was a wonderful story. Although it is a romantic and sweet story it also focuses on the true trials in life specially with fertility and the added aging factors of the characters. I think u have done a great job overall. I also see a marked improvement in your writing style as the story progressed. I must say the later chapters are really good. I'm a writer myself so I understand how hard it is to write specially when a story has difficult themes. Love your work. Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thank you, so very much for your wonderful review. I am proud of any of the stories I have written, or helped write. Considering the education I have. Having anyone read something I write, makes me proud. Out of the two stories that I have written and completed, I have had very few negative comments made of them. Less than a handful, I would say. I grew up being the fat girl who got picked on, so I spent a lot of time skipping school. I used to skip at least one or two days a week in 7th grade. In 8th grade I virtually did not attend school at all the last whole half of the year. In 9th grade I skipped 47 days of school and spent the equal equivalent in In school suspension, so I in reality missed almost 100 days of the 180 day school year by spending it either skipping, or out of classes. Not to mention the many days, when I would just go to my first class be counted as present and leave. In tenth grade I was involved in a car accident that ended my high school career completely. I should have graduated in the class of 1988 and I actually took the GED testing in 1994 and got my GED. I have honestly never taken and passed any kind of English or Composition class in high school or Jr, high. I was never a good student, even in elementary, because I hated school. I started skipping school in 4th grade. To have the ability to write a story that anyone reads and have them thing it is good, or well written is amazing to me. I have always loved reading and I have always been an avid reader. Even skipping school, I spent a lot of time with my nose in a book, maybe not the books teachers would have wanted me to read, but all the same I read. My biggest issues are my usage of tense, and punctuation when writing stories. All in all I am proud to have anyone read and complete my stories, and I am very grateful for any of the reviews I have gotten. Thank you again for reading and reviewing my story. I know that you are already reading Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso, that Jess2002 and I am writing, and I hope that you continue to enjoy that story as well. I will be putting out a one-shot with weekitty here soon. It will post both here and on fanfiction the author name for that will be weekittyandtat. I look forward to hearing more from you in the future. Thank you again, Kasi~
Date: 20 Oct 2011 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
Great story
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. Thanks again for the reveiw.
Date: 17 Oct 2011 7:59 AM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
That was wonderful I am going to miss the stimulation these two give me lol. Thanks and I look forward to anything else you write.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being sucha loyal reader. I have another completed story right now already posted called A Sub Search. AND under the author name JessAndTAT my great pre-reader from both My sisters 3 and A Sub Search and I am co-writing this together. It updates weekly and if we keep on writing the way we have we may be able to post more frequently. The name of the story is Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi~
Date: 17 Oct 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
OMFG I cant believe it is over Thanks for a great story. I love that they are going to get married and have childeren life is good.
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you liked this part! thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 30 Sep 2011 3:42 PM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
I so enjoyed this story! You did an awesome job of wrapping everything up!!! *Keye gives Kasi a high five*
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~
Thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter and all the others you reviewed as well. Thanks for being one of my best supporters. I started a new stalker story with jess2002 and our author name is JessAndTAT check out Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso if you get the chance, I promise it is gonna be good...Ohh and this time it is Edward that is being stalked by a nut case! WOOT WOOT...I personally woudl stalk Edward too if given the chance....Not Rob, I think himand Kristen belong together, but Edward, yeah I woudl so stalk that vampboy....hmmm, but damn he could read my mind and all the crap....darn it...oh well fantasies are fun anyway! LOL
Thanks for the high five, and thanks again for being one of my followers.
Kasi~
PS hope to see you reading LK&IV...pro and chapt 1 are posted both here and fanfiction :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 6:23 AM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
~Kasi~
Well, this is a bittersweet moment, I hate to say goodbye to these two, but I know that all good things must come to end end! Lol! I am happy to say that I managed to review everyone of these wonderful chapters. And this epilogue was no different, I couldn't have asked for a better ending, And to see my name in the final author's note, brought a tear to my eye! Thanks for the acknowledgement and I promise to be waiting with baited breath for your next masterpiece! Lol! I guess until you post something new, I'll start on My Sister's 3, I can't wait! Thanks for the kind words and pimping my story! Now get to writing and give me something new to read!
Luv ya bb!
~Kraz~i
xoxo
Well, here I go for the last time... rating then submit!
Author's Response:
Krazi~ My wonderful friend....Thank you so very much for being a true light in my life whiel I wrote this story. I told you that I woudl lay credit where it was due, and you are the one that instilled the trip off to chicago in my head for the Epi. Of course I would take one last minute to pimp you out to my wonderful readers, because your story KICKS BUTT! Congrats on your nominations in the Tomato Soup awardsbetween my two stories I was nominated 11 times, I doubt I will win, I am up against some pretty tough compition, but I am completely honored, just because I was nominated. Sadly enough, I slacked on gettign my nominations turned in, and feel like a shitty reader of my favs. I am sure that you will like My Sisters 3 it is a pretty decent stalker story, it got reviews, where people said to me..."You write a really good crazy person!"....I was not sure that I shoudl take that as a compliment, but I did...LOL As for somethign new to read...I can do that for you my dear....Actually in the authors note, there was the info about the new story, it is a collab with Jess2002 and our author name will be JessAndTAT. It is another stalker story, it will be a forbidden romance type book, combined with a mysterious stalker, and of course some hot ass lemons, because well....I enjoy writing them! If you ever want to check and see what I am up to check me out on twitter AT teamalltwilight of course or facebook I am Kasi Teamalltwilight. Jess is going to work on making us a blogspot, (Maybe you could give us some hints??? Since your blogspot rocks!) for the new story and our profile over at fan fiction has a poll to vote on the title choices for the new story. So if you have a minute check out the profile over there, and vote. The only thing that I will say about who is stalking poor Professor Edward, will be a HUGE surprise....the only people I will willingly eliminate from suspects is Alice, cause she is his twin sister, Esme, cause she is his momma, and Bella, cause she is the dective who is finding herself falling into a forbidden love with him, since she is supposed to be protecting him, not sexing him up. HMMMM....YUMMY! I am grateful for all of the story love you have shown me along this journey in A Sub Search....I luv ya too bb! XOXO.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 12:51 PM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
excellent story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I am so grateful to have you with me for this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Please watch out for a new story to post under the writers name JessAndTAT, it will be amazing. Thanks so much!
Kasi~
Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:13 AM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
What a wonderful and unique love story. Thanks for all your hard work... I'll miss the updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I will miss my followers from this story a lot. Please take a momnet to add JessAndTAT to your authors list, and when we start our new story, you can catch it, I promise it will have some hard core lemons eventually. But it will be full of fun, suspense, adn of course a nasty mystery stalker who will enjoy watching Edward, and maybe even kidnapping him too...LOL I am so exxcited for it, SO EXCITED.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 9:19 AM Title: A Sub Search: Epilogue
Oh my word, Kasi,
Once again you brought me to tears with your story, I loved this chapter and this story. I am so looking forward to reading the other two stories. You are just flying ahead in leaps and bounds, Girl! Good for you and congratulations on your nominations. You really deserve them.
Take care and we will talk soon.
Love,
Michele (peoplelikeus)
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you for always, always having my back and being there for me. I am so grateful for your support of my story. Thank you so much. I am done with the subward for a while for sure, I have the stalker story onthe burner and that will post under the suthor name JessAndTAT, please check that out and let me know what you think.
Kasi~
xoxo
Hugs to you chicka!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
Tis story is a ten from start to finish.I really enjoyed it.It was such an interesting take to have Edward's character be the submissive. I hope your eplogue includes a wedding children and a scene.
Thank you so very much for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review. I have really enjoyed writing this story. I am working on the epi now, and I should have it done here within the week, I got behind on time getting it done. I assure it will be worth the wait. There will be a trip to chicago, a wedding, a scene or two and maybe even some action on the IVO process they have talked of going through. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story, I look forward to your thoughts on the epi after it posts.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
Thank-you so much for writing such a great story; I absolutely loved it. I really enjoyed your Bella and Edward, they were just perfect. I also loved the story line and the rest of the characters, but with Mike, not so much; I know the story wouldn't have been as good without a good antagonist to amp up the scary factor. Thanks again, and I look forward to the epilogue and any outtakes you may decide to write. xoxo
Author's Response:
Hello 1918~
Thank you for reviewing my story. I am really glad that you liked reading it so much. I had intended to work on the epi this weekend, but I have yet to get to it.....I will be workign on it tonight after I get my house clean, because my back to school kids have been trashing my house. Lucky me. Anyway.....The epi will be awesome, I actually have a decent plan for it, where I wrote most of the story without any guideline or solid plan in mind.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing,
Kasi~
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
Kasi, Kasi, Kasi-
What can I say Hon, parting is such sweet sorrow! I just hope this won´t be the last story from we get from you. You´re an amazing writer and it´s been a pleasure taking this journey with you. I agree that you´re leaving it at a good place, even though I´m going to miss these two.
I was right about the rings, even though I was wrong about who was going to propose. So one out of two isn´t bad! lol! Christmas and Paris were perfect and maybe as an outtake we can witness the trip that Bella, Edward and Katie take to Chicago.
Now what I would like to see in the epi? Hmm... I guess I would love to see them with their hands full of kids, since they want to use a surrogate and have Bella implanted as well. A mommy Dommella and a subDaddyward would be cute to watch. Thank you again for an amazing story and I proudly write my second to last review. And might I add, I´ve reviewed every chapter! Squeee!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
I think you may have just helped me with my story and you will see why when I write the epi, I will even point out who gave me the idea in the authors note, so be sure to read it. I love not havign an outline when I write a story, because it gives me the freedom to shoot from the hip. I have written this entire story, without a guide. Thanks for saying that I am an amazing writer. That compliment coming from you, makes me feel really good. I am so glad that you have been here throughout this entire story and have reviewed eacha dn every chapter. THANK YOU!
I sent a message to my pre-reader Jess several months ago about a story idea I had. I love her writings and I have always wanted to co-write a story with someone. So I pitched my idea of a stalker story where Edward is being stalked. Her and I sent a few emails back and forth and have shared a few phone calls discussing it too. Once I have this story completely wrapped up, I will finish writing the first chapter I started. I am going to enjoy writing this story, because most of the time it is Bella who is the victim, this time Edward will be. It will be a mystery/romance/drama type of story, but it will be a really good read. Wait until you see who I pitched to Jess as the stalker......Bwahhahhhaahhaahhaa.....It is purely evil! LOL
I hope to see you on board for that. I am also currently helping a girl with a story she is writing it is not yet posted here, but if it does get posted here, the first few chapters will need to be re-beta'd because they lack a few common things. But the story is good, if it gets posted here it will most likely show me as a co-writer, but not positive. It is called Year Of Hell by weekitty on FF. She approched me for help, and I have been re-writing each chapter before it posts since like chapter 4. She has a wonderful storyline, one of the freshest ones I have read in a long time. But the skills to tell the story properly are lacking. She writes out her chapters and they come to me, they are okay, but they need tweaking and spelling and grammar adjustments. Without Word, I suck, but life goes on. Anyway so watch for that too, if you want.
Thanks again for always reading and reviewing. xoxo
Kasi~
PS....WHERE IS YOUR NEXT CHAPTER? I am seriously missing me some domward!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
Kasi-
Imagine my surprise when I discovered that I had not reviewed this chapter! Shame on me! I could have none of that, so here I am, a day late and a dollar short, but I´m here. Lol!
Of course I loved it! It was so sweet how because of Master Peter´s rule, they had to go back to dating like teenagers. Too cute! And when Master Peter reprimanded Bella and handed her her ass was priceless!
I´m so glad that she enjoyed her time with the Cullen´s and the no sex rule has been lifted! Somebody´s getting ready to rumble! Lol!
Great chapter as always bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Hey baby! You know that old saying? "Better late, then never" works for reviews too! I love that you always remember me....Thank you! No worries, you missed no moneys....don't you know??? We write the hot sexy stuff and don't get paid for it! LOL
I am so glad you loved it. I had so much fun writing a lot of different parts of this story thus far, but having Master Peter hand Bella her ass (as you so eliquintly put it) was the bomb diggity for me. I needed the reader to see both her sides and I think between the Mike crap and Master Peter they seemed to bring her down a notch, low enough to re-evaluate her own being.
I am writing the epi right now and striving to give my readers the things they asked of me. I also found out this past week that A Sub Search is up for 2 different (so far) Tomato soup awards, I am rather excited about that. My Sisters 3 is up for 1 award too. I am kinda excited, I have been nominated a few other times, but never. I did however win the Dommella's dungeon for A Sub Search as a one shot, so no big complaints. I am really excited about wrapping up this story, and giving it closure. I have a really excellent idea for the next story swimming through my head. So watch for that....Edward is being stalked!!! OMFG...like any one of us HOT TO TROTT Fan fic momma's wouldn't stalk him given the chance! LMAO
Anyway thanks as always for reading and reviewing. <3 you big time girlie. xoxo
Kasi~
Date: 09 Aug 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
This was a fitting end to a yummy story. The fact that Bella wanted she and Edward to wear her parents rings was very sweet. I love that. I also like their right hand rings as well.
Nice the that the Cullens accepted her into their family as a daughter. Everyone needs love and now Bella has tenfold!
Looking forward to the epis!
Keye
Author's Response:
The epi will be worth the wait I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing all along. Thanks so much! Kasi~
Date: 02 Aug 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
definitely a wedding scene and baby scenes.....conception and delivery amongst scenes of them being a family.
Author's Response:
I will for sure be toucvhing on the wedding, as a flashback I think. Plan to show them 5 years down the road and how things are going for them. I will be sure to be wordy, to answer all the questions, or at least hopefully answer all the questions people have.
Thank you so much~
Kasi
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, the epi will post in the next 3 weeks. Thank you for the continued story support and love. Kasi~
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
What a lovely way for mistress to show her devotion to Edward... well done.
I would love to just know what their life together was like in the future, children, jobs, home, other family etc, making this lifestyle fit into it.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I will be sure to show them in say 1 yr, 5 yrs, 10 yrs, down the road. I think that will be the easiest way to do it. I have only one other request to show the wedding. I think I will do that as a memory. Thank you for the story love, and the review.
Kasi~
Date: 01 Aug 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
I would very much like to see the wedding in the epilogue unless your doing a sequal. but i'd like to see it or at least hear about it.
i loved the whole commitment thing with the sub/mistress thing they had. it was nice.
Author's Response:
I will be sure to put the wedding as a part of the epi, there will not be a second book on this however. I do promise to wrap up all the loose ties people ask about. I loved researching the submissive/Dominant commitment thing, there is much to learn about this taboo lifestyle. I hope that I shed some decent perspective on it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Epi will post with in the next three weeks.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
Hey Kasi-
You knocked it out of the park as usual! I´m so glad that Mike is now a thing of the past and these two can move on to happier times! Gah... Mama Es is so fierce and protective going all mama bear on the nurses. Too funny! So, I´m just dying to know if Bella put her mother and father´s engagement or wedding bands in Peter´s safe. It would be totally cool if she flipped the script and proposed to Edward, who of course will totally say yes! Can´t wait for the next chapter, good job bb!
Smooches,
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Thanks for always sayign such kind things about my story, I am truely grateful for all of the nice things you say. I FLOVE Esme, and think she ROCKS! As for turning the tables, and proposing to Edward, that is not really Bella's style, she is a strong Domme, but she has grown to realize she needs that softer side too. You know the next chapter is off to the beta now and it is the LAST chapter before the epi. It is a big one too, over 11,000 word count. I love this story too much to kill it by dragging it through the dirt. I want to let it go on a good note, I hope I am managing to do that. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving the characters in the coming chapter.
Much Love! XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
I made it, I finally caught up! Well everything seems to be good, so I guess I was wrong in my semi-bad thoughts. I have such a suspicious mind. Even at the last chapters of a story, I sometimes think someone or something is going to jump out, and all hell would break loose. This was a great chapter. Am I wrong to be happy that Mike got a little more than he deserved? I can't say I would have been sorry if you had killed him off though. I can't shake this nagging feeling I have regarding Mike, maybe I've read too many stalker type stories where you think they are gone, dead, or just out of the picture and as soon as you feel safe they jump out at you. I have such a crazy imagination. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :) xoxo Oh I almost forgot, I think Bella's parent's wedding rings are in that velvet jewelry box. *shrugs* Just a guess. Again, awesome chapter and I'm so glad you wrote this story. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. I am glad you are all caught up. I think that you will be happy to know that 100% for sure Mike is no longer anything, but a bad memory. He served his purpose, of causing them to get closer. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser BPOV
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
Ooooh, a sex swing, how fun! What a great chapter, I loved it! I am kind of freaking out here, this is the second time Bella has hit her head, and hard too. I suddenly have a bad feeling, I don't even want to type out my guesses, I'm hoping my ideas are wrong. I'm such a wimp; I'm a little scared to read the next chapter, but here I go....xoxo
Author's Response:
Yeah, you are all caught up, and I am currently at 6838 word count on the final chapter. In the middle of a really BIG event. I am guessing it will be close to 10,000 word count by the finish, give or take a few. I am glad that you loved the return to the playroom, they really needed that time.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, xoxoxo Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
I just love this hot, sexy couple so much! They are both the whole package, and just so cute and sweet too. I'm feeling a bit sappy now. :P xoxo
Author's Response:
I had my moments whiel writing it believe me! Thanks again Kelly, I am grateful for the story love!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
Oh fuck, you are killing me here! I swear my stomach had a knot in it as soon as the phone rang at Edward's house, and it still does. I can't believe that S.O.B got into Bella's house and trashed her bedroom, and left that death threat to her and Edward. I know it's not that important in the scheme of things, but I wonder if he found her playroom, or trashed any other part of her home. He had to have scaled a fence or something at Edward's to get close enough to take pictures of them, unless he used a telephoto lens. *rolling my eyes at myself* I don't know why I always wonder about all the little details, but I do. I loved this chapter, it was an especially emotionally charged one. Once again, you rock! xoxo
Author's Response:
Kelly~
I am really glad that you are enjoying this so much. You are going to be getting caught up right about the same time I send the final chapter before the epi to my beta. You may get done before I am ready, but I am sittign with 5430 word count right now. Got Christmas almost written about and then the surprises, I have one of those written, but not the other yet. I think it will go over well, or at least I hope it will. I may touch base on this story in the future and do a out-take or two as well, but those will most likely be all playroom scenes, since I get a lot of requests for more smoking scenes all the time.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
Loved this chapter, love your story! I don't mind a bit of drama, or a little angst, but of course I'm a sucker for the happy times. :D Isn't it funny how you just connect with some stories and characters, I mean some more than others? I mean no disrespect to any authors of any story I've read, because I like 99.9% of the stories I read, but sometimes stories just grab you more, ya know? I really feel like that about your story, your E/B, and your writing; I really love it all. By the way, I had to tell you that I am reading Sugar Daddy Needed and have ButterflyBetty fav'd to read also. We all come together in some way in this fandom, don't we? :) xoxo Kelly
Author's Response:
That we do, Kelly. I love Sugar Daddy Needed, and I have been with Jess on that story since she started thinking about writing it. I love that story a lot. As for Butterflybetty, Lisa is a wonderful writer, and phenominal friend and a truely amazing person. I tend to read mainly only human stories and I am a HUGE Bella and Edward fan, both on and off screen. I think Rob is one HOT MO FO....and I think it woudl be amazing to kiss him, or just lick that damn jaw of his...wooo...okay then.....but, I think that Kristen and Rob together would make beautiful babies and I just love the chemistry they have. I do understand the sometimes relating to some things or stories more so than others. I personally have put a lot of my own life into everything I have written so far. In My Sisters 3, I wrote about the stalking, and there is a short, not super descriptive rape scene. The rape and stalking from personal experiance, only the stalking and rape was done by someone whom at one tiem I was completely in love with and was married to. Much different situations, but I used a lot of those fears I felt to help me portray it in a real way. With A Sub Search, I have used personal experiances with people whom I know very well, that are involved in swinging. Now swinging and bdsm are completely different, however there are a lot of simularities as well. I also pride myself in doing as much research as I can. As for the fandom bringing people together, i think your right, I talk more to some of my fandom friends then I do to my neighbor. Thanks again for all the reviews and the story love, I am so happy you like it. <3 :) Kasi~ xoxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Awesome chapter, I loved it so much! I just knew either Charlotte or Peter, or both would kick their butts. I have such a big grin on my face right now, ya; I'm a big ole dork. :P I knew it! I thought 'Allen' was Mike, what a loon. Well I can't wait for Thanksgiving dinner, their first date, and the next meeting with Master Peter. So much to look forward to; I really love your story! xo
Author's Response:
I am so happy that you are loving this! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
PS...I am a big ole dork too....no worries!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
I'm almost vibrating with excitement to read the next chapter, and this one was great! I cringed when Edward slipped, and Bella yelled "Red!". I can't wait to see how their talk at breakfast goes. You really rock with this story! :) xo
Author's Response:
I had a difficult time writing this. I was going to have Bella be so cold to him, and have him end word and walk. But I changed my mind, and decided to change my plan a bit. The funny thing is about this story......I have no outline, and I have made several plans where I have ended up changing those plans. I can not tell you for certain what will happen until I write it. I have honestly written every chapter of this story from the seat of my pants. I never had any of intention of adding Mike into the current story, he was just supposed to be back story. Mike plays a very big part in the story now, and that all just came about. You will see I am working on the last chapter right now, I took a break to reel in my thoughts, and read over what I have. I am bringing full closure with the next chapter that will post, however there will be one epi chapter that will show them a few years down the road. I just hope that everyone loves it at the end the same as they did in the begining. Thanks for the sotry love, and reviews. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
*heavy sigh* I hadn't planned on another long review, but.....First, let me say that I love reading your a/n's, they're so cute! Well, this was a fantastic chapter; I really loved it. I was expecting the other shoe to drop, but it really landed with a big ole explosion and maybe even some aftershocks. What Edward wrote in his journal was really beautiful and heartfelt. When Bella got to the end and started to shut down, I really got misty eyed thinking about how this was going to crush Edward's feelings. But I understand why Bella feels the way she does. I still think she's in denial and I think she knows it too, she's just so gun shy of being hurt again. Now don't ask me why, but I had a tiny feeling that something might be up with Mike. I would never in a million years guess that he would turn out to be a delusional stalker though, and what happened to his girlfriend and children? *sighs, again* I wonder how Edward and Bella can even continue their BDSM relationship, with all of their feelings swirling around like a tornado. Ohhh, this is going to be good; I can't wait. :) xo
Author's Response:
Yeah the last two chapters were hard to write too, believe me! Thanks for the a/n comment, glad to know someone reads them. I have found that I can write Edward, so much easier than I can write Bella. Bella is truely scared, she has only known hurt. As for Mike, yeah he will be a pest, but he does play a very key part in the finale of the story. The girl he cheated on Bella for and had children with left him, I did not go into detail, she is just no longer with him. Yes where you are in the story, Bella and Edward are certainly trapped in a drama tornado. Just try to not hate Bella too much, I had a few reviews where people wanted to smack her, or hated her. I guess those are good reviews in a way, because I was able to make someone feel those deep emotions. Thanks again for all of your wonderful reviews, and for the story love. If you decide that you enjoy the stalker side of this story, you should check out My Sisters 3, it is complete, and was my first story. :) Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
Holy crap. This was a great chapter. I kind of felt that Edward might be the one to let his feelings known, as Bella is sort of still struggling with hers. I'm now waiting for the other shoe to drop, especially after what you said in your last review response. By the way, I thank you for your responses to my reviews; it is really nice to hear back from authors; I know you don't always have the time to, so thanks! Again, great chapter. Now off I go,(only slightly cringing)to see what Bella's reaction to Edwards declaration will be. I'm thinking she might get spooked, even though she has,(I think)the same feelings, or close to as Edward's. I just hope that if she does say the 'walk away' safeword,(I forgot what it is, sorry) that maybe Charlotte and Peter will help her see the light. Oh my, sorry for the novel of a review! :) xo
Author's Response:
end all word is knick knack and no worries of too much anyway. things get rough, but Bella will seek the correct help to fix things. Thanks for the wonderful reviews, I LOVE them all SO SO SO MUCH! I try to answer eacha dn every review, and I pride myself on being an author who does. With my first story, My Sisters 3 I answered and replied to every review I got, except the ones that were sent in at finfic without the reviewer logging in. Thanks again for devoting so much time to my story. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
I can never say it enough; I just love your story and your Edward and Bella. I really love the way you've written them. xo
Author's Response:
I hope you still like me after the coming chapters. just keep in mind I am a happily ever after h00r. thanks for reading and reviewing...Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
Damn, they're hot. I love how sweet they are together when Edward isn't collared. I also love how Bella takes care of Edward, she's a good Domme as is he a good sub. I can't wait until Bella lets Edward know how she's feeling about him and vise versa. xo
Author's Response:
This was one of my favorite chapters to write thus far. The one I am working on right now though will be the best in my opinion. thanks for r&r...Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
*giggles* I'm having a blast reading your naughty, sexy story! xo
Author's Response:
It is kinda naughty isn't it??? I had a few reviews telling me that they either needed a smoke or a cold shower after a couple of chapters...lol
Thanks for the wonderful reviews, and the story love.
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hump Day
I love, love, love your story! xo
Author's Response:
Yay!!! No matter what a simple I love your story always makes me feel like writing it was worth all the time. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
Ooooh, I'm so excited to see how this 'casual' conversation goes for Isabella and Edward. I don't know why, but I have the biggest grin on my face right now, and I feel giddy. :P
Author's Response:
Ahhh, thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you are so into the story. :) Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: His Scene
:) I really love your story; I think you've written it really well. I'm so excited to read the next chapter! xo
Author's Response:
At least you have a few more to read before your all caught up. Thank you for the lovely reviews they mean the world to me. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
I'm sure you don't need the feedback now, since I'm sure you've already gotten tons of positive praise for your story, but I'll give you some anyway. I think you've done a great job portraying the BDSM lifestyle so far. I have no personal experience to go by, just what I've read about it on the web and of course some other BDSM based stories. I love it when an author researches the content in their story or gets advice from someone who has knowledge about said content, for me it makes the story more real, or believable. I'm really enjoying reading about your Bella and Edward. xo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. My one biggest goal in this story was to try to portray it as real as possible. I have learned a ton doing research on bdsm. thanks again for reading and reviewing. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
Loving your story so far. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much. I was very proud of this as a oneshot, but so many asked for it to be a full story. I hope you continue to like it through the end. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi~
Date: 21 Jul 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
Is it her parents rings in the safe???? Things are looking up for these to. Never wish bad on anyone but what happened to Mike could not have happened to a nicer guy.
Author's Response:
I wanted whatever happened to Mike be somethingn final, and I did nto want to kill him, but paralized is not something he can be released from, unlike prison. He is done, thank goodness. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
*dies laughing* Love Esme:
I still can feel the warmth that passes through me, when I hear Esme tell the nurse, 'you clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, who is beside himself with worry about his beloved laying on that bed, than you are about taking care of his beloved, who I consider my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!'
Dying to know what Bella put in the safe and why?
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~
I love Esme too! I love making her all loving, yet badass! The next chapter will be a long one...Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
I'm glad almost everyone is ok, I guess Mike got what he deserved.
I can only think that Bella has a set of rings and plans on proposing to Edward (a role reversal), I hope that goes well.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
Hey Sweetheart - I loved this chapter and I'm excited to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Michele~
I am really glad you liked this chapter, the story is almost finished. The next chapter is goign to be a long one. Lot's of closure will take place. Thanks for always being a supporter of my story! Watch for the big PIMP out of People Like Us in my next chapter post! Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
what is in TEXAS? I don't remember...... well, I live in Texas, so are you sending them to me so we can all get it on??? LOL!!!!!
Author's Response:
Texas is where Jason's family lives, and where he grew up. I would gladly send them all to you to get it on, and hell I woudl happily take the leftovers, if you could send them back to Iowa when you are done. *WONDERS HOW SHE WILL GET THEM ALL IN THAT DAMN BOX!* LOL...Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
This was wonderful!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you think so. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
you know i love ur story! thanks for pimping me out!
Author's Response:
Jess~
I always pimp you out! You rick my socks! Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
thanks as always awsome chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
did it have to end there i just started reading this and i love it...
Author's Response:
Hey Kaybaby~ I am glad to have you on board reading my story. Yes I had to end it there, because the chapter was already over 8000 word count before it went to the BETA. I promise to update as soon as I can. I am really glad that you are enjoying the story though. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
Date: 15 Jul 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
another great chapter. glad they are working out all sides of ther relationship
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
Kasi-
Whoa... I´m gonna need a cold shower after all that hot goodness! Lol! I thought she passed out there for a minute, subward really put it on her! haha! That scene was smokin hot babe, loved it! I´m glad that they decided to live together. I hope that the catch that sick bastard this time, I hate Mike! Poor Bella if she hits her head one more time... poor girl´s gonna be Kookoo for Coco Puffs! Lol! Awesome chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
I am so glad that you loved that juicy lemon, I was actually nervous it was the first scene I have tried to write in a while. I thought it would be cool to show that sometimes even the Dom/Dommes can have their own sense of subspace. I actually read about it from a few of the D/s sites I have done research on. I spoke to a couple of Doms too they were very interesting conversations. I loved the kookoo for coco puff that was SO FUNNY.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
Kaai-
Sorry this is lat bb, but I just gotta add my two cents! lol! Love what you did with it and I´m glad that B didn´t turn away from Edward in some noble attempt to protect him. Glad to see their going to get back to the D/s part of their relationship and Master Peter has taken them off of punishment! Lol! Can´t wait for that I should be explosive! Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Krazi~
Thanks so much for the wonderful reviews you always leave for me! You are so kind, you have such a fuck~tastic story yourself, yet you take the time to show me story love. I am so proud to call you a friend, and I am so grateful for your support and kind words. Thank you so very very much!
Kasi~
Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
DAMN THAT FUCKER MIKE NEWTY LMAO
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
Man that guy is a nut case for sure!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong
Wow what a way back to playing ;) Please tell me they got Mike or was that Jess and please tell me Bella is ok
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close. I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad. I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message. During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to. There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize. The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain. I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either. Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all. I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too. I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story. There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue. Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 17 pre-view.
I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time. After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door. So many people have come to the hospital today. Esme, and Carlisle, both were here. Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed. Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan. He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s. Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par. Edward has all, but refused to leave my side. He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan. Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme. The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision.
Esme surprised me the most. She has always been so easy going and nice. Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well. Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge. She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention. It was almost amusing to watch and hear her. I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse. ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!’ Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room. I have never felt so loved in all my adult life.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
Best line ever:
"Some things just cannot be eaten amongst company," I
I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Keye~
I loved that line too! A LOT! I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
great chapter and as always the plot is awesome!
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you so much. I have posted 15 already, so no teaser there, however I am working on 16 and it will be HOT! I have the ending all done in my head and it will come to an end soon. Thanks as always for the story love. You are a great writer and a wonderful friend!
Kasi~
xoxoxo
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
I know they still have to deal with the Mike situation but it feels like the biggest hurdles are conquered!
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
Awesome fic!!! I can't wait until Mike gets put under the jail!!!
Jo
Author's Response:
Jo~
Not sure about under, but no worries..okay? I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
loved it.....really god chapter.
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
After everything that has been happening it is no wonder she wants her control back there are not to many things she has control over with Mike on the loose. I am so happy that they are working on a true relationship not just a D/S,
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
WOW, HOT, and SIZZLING!
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
It is good to see them find their normal. With the insanity that their lives have become, I can see just how much they need their D/s roles returned to them to help them each find their calm centers.
I do hope Bella doesn't over think Edward's statement that he would like her to one day be his wife. He needed to express this to her to show her the depth of his devotion to her.
Author's Response:
I think you will find that Bella thinking about things, is for the best. It is all good...I promise. I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
Well... with everything bad happening it's good that they are doing something positive. Wonderful chapter... I look forward to Mike getting caught, I can't wait to see how it happens.
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
I am very glad that Edward and Bella are working everything out.
Mike is a psychopath. I was shocked at the damage he did to Bella's house. That is a lot of rage. I really think that Mike is lethal in this story. I can't believe that Jessica had been giving Mike money under Jason's nose. I guess she doesn't believe that he is dangerous.
I think that Bella should tear down her house and build on the other side of her property. I think she owns like 8 plots of land? I could not go back into that house. I would not want to go back into my house if I was Edward either. The first weekend that Bella and Edward spend as a vanilla couple was ruined by Mike's stalking.
I am ready to see what happens to our favorite couple next. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella owns her entire block. Lot's of stuff int he upcoming chapter, it will be really good. I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.