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Reviewer: Lelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 34

Hmmm, take it from me, there is only one water when you give birth to twins. I even had boy/girl twins and the girl was born first! Emmet is in the absolute clear. Your water breaks, and you are in labor, the first twin arrives and you continue in labor until the second twin arrives. Now, my second twin arrived 8 minutes after the first. My mother's second twin arrived 12 minutes after the first. My grandmother's second twin arrived 23 minutes after the first. Honestly? I suspect the decreased time is down to the fact that the mother has gotten a bit bigger with each generation. My grandmother was 5', my mother is 5' 2", and I am 5' 4". My daughter is only 5', the same size as my grandmother, so it will be interesting to see how long it takes for her second twin to arrive. She is only 18 right now, no where near to getting pregnant. Odds are she will give birth to fraternal twins though. When I was 18, a doctor told me I was 40,000 times more likely to have twins than another person. Sure enough, I was in maternity clothes at 6 weeks but I had some complications, my twins were delivered at only 28 weeks. I hope my baby's babies stay put longer than 28 weeks! They were only 2 lbs 7oz and 2 lbs 14oz, so they were a bit on the tiny side. I hope she has a much calmer time than I did.  Just FYI.

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 35

This is a fantastic story, thank you for creating it then sharing with the rest of us, I couldn't put it down!!! :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth

I'm SO confused!!!!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 35

amazing story!!!!! i thought they were going to end up as vampires though? anyway thanks so much for sharing this on here with us ;D

Reviewer: xXxSn0wAngelxXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11

Some family/friends they are ... Personaly I wouldn't speak to anny of them for at least a few mounts! Leave along live with them. No one should have the right to make a girl's or a guy's first time a joke.

Reviewer: robbeeleebabe2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 35

This story is amazing!! Thank you sooo much for writing it!!!

Reviewer: Eternal TwilightFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

I loved the wedding chapter and I found out listening to a thousand years in the background made it slightly more emotional. I love reading the story.

Reviewer: nessie125 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

that was to funny when my friend tonya was yonger we played a prank on her she got drunk her mother had fire red hair she was afraid one day her hair  would turn red so we took out her bedroom light bulbs and replaced then with red ones so when she woke up and looked in the mirror her hair would be red she laughs about it now but then we thought it was holarious her not so much

Reviewer: nessie125 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

damn i always wondered what a drunk edward would be like i think i like him but the sexual tention is getting too much 

Reviewer: lulaalice Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

I had read this story a few months ago and it was one of those that you just could not stop reading because it was just that good. I have a friend on Face Book that told me she thought there was a sequel to Secound Chances but I don't seem to be able to find it. If there is PLEASE let me know because I would love to read it. I have read several of your stories and enjoyed them all.

Alice

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 35

This was a wonderful story, even the teary parts, so thank you so much!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 34

Thank you so much for the happy ending! I see what Alice meant by two birthdays, the twins actually were born on two different days. Those are two lucky little children, with so much love and caring, and anything  they will ever want!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 33

Could you choke our chickens just a little more?What a place to leave everybody! Boy, I hope Edward and Bella make it through this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas

One fabulous, fantastic Christmas, followed by the rather traumatic birth of little Miriam. That was so sweet, hearing Jacob talking to his new little daughter. The gifts all the Cullens gave each other were absolutely wonderful, by the way!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 31 Holidays are Approaching

Edward and Bella got a little carried away with their role playing. Angel and Buffy, indeed! How silly! Shopping with the Cullens was kind of a fun experience, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 30 Halloween

I can see why you laughed yourselves silly. That was probably one of the best Halloween parties ever known to mankind. I laughed so hard  I choked. Great chapter!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon

So much for the theory that you have to go somewhere exotic for a honeymoon to be memorable. Bella and Edward's three weeks in Chicago were perfect, and just what a honeymoon should be!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 28

That was weird, to have a beautiful wedding and then have Mike Newton attack Bella! Even more weird was how everyone blew it off after Edwardbeat him up and Charlie arrested him, they all went back to the reception and danced. Oh well, at least no real damage was done to Bella or the babies.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 27

It's nearly time and preparations  almost done. The hen party at Charlie's was touching, with all the heirlooms and gifts. The trip to Port Angeles for the suits, not so much. Poor Edward, he has to fight them off with a stick! He takes such good care of his Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

Ah yes, the VCullens, my very favorite, loving pervert vampires! How lovely that Carlisle and Esme gifted the house to them, and Emmett and Rose were super, rehabbing Bella's old truck. The new Volvo was great, but Alice and Jasper gave wonderful gifts also.  Lucky young couple, to have such a loving, generous family!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

As long as you're not planning one, or having to pay for one, don't you just love weddings?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

How nice to have that whole boubdary thing settled. Nice too, that Jacob and Edward are becoming friends, as well as Bella and Crystal. Friendly relations won't hurt any of them, it's lots better to get along with your neighbors.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 23

Embarassing, but very funny, too. At least Esme, Alice and Rose didn't find Edward and Bella asleep on the piano! All this hustle and bustle is going to get worse before it gets better. Wedding plans, shopping trips, Bella will be a basket case here pretty  soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 22

I see the hormones aren't through with Bella's moods quite yet. Mike and Jessica are just as bad as they were in high school. I guess some people never change. It's probably best that Bella knows about the Quileutes and their wolf gene. No sense keeping secrets with that bunch.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

That went really well and a whole lot better than it might have. Good for Charlie and Bella  to make up. Probably some of Sue's influence on him. I love it when everybody gets along.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

That phone cal to Renee was pretty funny, but not half as much as Bella teasing Jasper. I'm sure glad Bella's moods have settled down. Now to see about calming Charlie. Maybe he'll be in a better frame of mind.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 19

Nothing like a little good loving to make everything okay! Of course, a shopping spree/spa day doesn't hurt, either. Edward is the most romantic guy, no wonder Bella loves him to pieces.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

I remember mood swings from being pregnant, but Bella is a little over the top. She is the female equivalent of Jekyll and Hyde! All this can't be good for the twins, or for the relationship between her and Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Charlie, must have shocked him pretty badly, for him to faint. Good thing Sue was there to care for him. This must have happened while Bella was away. Wonder if wolves will be involved?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Some happy news and some worrisome. For instance, where is would-be rapist Tanya? I wonder the Cullens arent't still hunting her. Glad Bella and Edward are going to be fine, hope that holds true when Charlie finally processes the news.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Of all the rotten luck! I hope the Cullens catch up with Tanya and kill her! How could she be  such a selfish bitch, and hurt Bella and Edward so much? Her family will be so ashamed of her actions. Thank God  she didn't kill them both!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

Just when you thought it was safe to get in the shower, Tanya shows up! She ought to be thrilled to see Edward again , even in his human form. Can't wait for Bella to get after that blonde vampire, on top of her man!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

They had to drive clear to Chicago, but at last, Bella and Edward are one!That was beautifully done and certainly worth the wait.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bella is evidently getting better at lying than she use to be, maybe from living with the Cullens all this time. Charlie seemed to accept all the story, anyway. Now I must admit to being real curious as to why blood is all over the house?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

Who knew, my favorite vampires are a bunch of piss-ants? That was kind of a dirty trick to pull on Bella and Edward, and not very considerate of any of them. The confrontation between Bella and Ally was pretty darn funny, though.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

This may not end well, as Alice is pushing an awful lot of tequila down Bella ans Edward's throats. Wonder if she knows about humans and alcohol poisoning?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward is going to have keep an eye out for Ally, if he wants to escape trouble with Bella's feelings. They all sound like their typical beautiful selves, as they go out clubbing and dancing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

Cracked me up when Esme yelled upstairs to tell Edward and Bella to quit fooling around and get to sleep. Just like that was perfectly normal. Wghat did she think was going to happenbetween two people  young and in love? That part about Carlisle sedating them was hilarious! These new vampires ought to get things stirred up nicely.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

Things were looking pretty good there for a minute, then Alice had to interrupt. Wonder who's coming to visit? Please don't let it be the Volturi!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

This second chance at life for Edward seems to come with limits. He sort of remembers Bella , but hardly recognizes his family, let alone realizes what they are. This screaming and burning sensation is also weird!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...

So now the Cullens have not one human child, but two, one of whom doesn't remember them. I'm curious as to how Bella will react to this. Was part of her love for Edward tied to the fact that he was a vampire? Guess we'll see!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me

Guess Bella wasn't imagining things after all. I know this won't go smoothly, but at least they're all going to be together to hash it out. Hope nobody goes into shock.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth

Edward must have been a very good guy, to get this chance to come back to Bella, and as a human, no less! It seems he doesn't remember that his family are vampires. That may come as quite a shock!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Moving

I know this is a story and it's not real, but I keep thinking of Bella and all the Cullens without Edward, and it makes me tear up, I can't help it. It's just not right for him to be gone, even though he is. We all lose loved ones, but not Edward, damn it! How will Bella get through it?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing

Killing Edward in the first chapter wouldn't be my first thought, but I do see why you warned everyone to read a few chapters before killing you both. I sure hope the readers paid attention!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 35

oh that was so sweet loved it

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

thanks god they all made it safe loved it

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 33

Oh no I hope they will make it and that the babies will be ok.

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas

 that was so sweet and funny loved it

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 31 Holidays are Approaching

lol loved it

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 30 Halloween

LOL that was too good loved it

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon

that was so sweet loved it

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 28

I loved it I hope Mike gpes to jail for hurting her

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 27

loved it

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

lol that was great loved it



Author's Response:

May I just say that you are amazing for reviewing every chapter! Also, when you finish this, I've started on the sequel but it's a WIP. Thanks so much for enjoying!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 25

loved it

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24

lol loved it

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

God he can not get a break at all  poor Edward

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

Iam so happy that went so well for them

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

I hope things go better for her when they talk to charlie

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

He was so sweet Bella needs to be nice to him too lol loved it

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

poor Edward he can't win lol

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

AWWW twins love this so sweet

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am so happy that they are ok and getting married an going to have a baby loved it

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

oh no Tanya needs to die for doing this to them

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

EWWWW Oh no Bella is going to kill her lol loved it

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was soooo good I loved both pov's that was so sweet and hot!!!!!!

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh crap I hope they are all ok

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

They are so evil I really felt bad for E&B  .

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it .But Alice is kind of being a bitch to them they were apart for 4 years can't she leave them alone lol

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved it But how does Bella know about Tanya?

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

I hope that girl Ally stay's away from Edward or Bella might kick her ass lol loved it

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am so happy that he remembers more I just hope who ever is comming will not hurt them.I love this story!!!

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh crap i hope he is ok

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...

I feel bad that he can't rember them but he will and now he is back with his Bella

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me

Oh crap what a way to run into him lol .I can't wait to read the rest

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth

Iam so glad he is alive .And Charlie is such a great guy to try and help him

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 Moving

That was so sad I feel so sad for them all .I can't belive that Charlie was so cool to just let Bella go with them like that

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing

Oh no Edward can't die .this looks really good

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 20

well rene took the news well
charlie doesnt make sence to me i mean he let her leave with the cullen he sent edward there shes 22 years old whats his problem anyway
i loved to messing with jaspers power thing
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

ok so that was beautiful too bad bella didnt deserve it after being a bitch to edward and everyone else
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

holy batman did bella eat some bad grizzly shes lost it
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

you sure have alot of fainting in this story
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

so her heart rate just because she was waking up well
a baby hey i wonder if edward is healing fast because of vamp stuff maybe he still has vamp sperm and the baby will be a hybrid lol
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

tayna of course
these 2 just cant get a break now will edward change to be with her
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

somehow i dont think we have seen the last of ally
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

so 4 new vamps
they seem ok but you never know
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

ok ok so yours makes more sence he was in pain from the rush of memories can you imagine (well i guess you can) 100 years of memories hitting at one time
so i dont think thw company is tayna that wouldnt scare alice the wolves maybe if charlie told billy they would wonder whats going on and might want to check things out
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh is edward changing back maybe bella kisss released to many hormones for his frail human body to handle
the question will vamprie edward be able to remember or will he be a savage newborn all over again
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...

poor edward thats not going to confuse him at all "your human"
Diane

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me

i guess charlie told edward where to find them i think he was too shy to just walk up and knock on the door
now edward never asked to be turned so i dont think he will want that now but what about the volturi are they in your story will edward remember his family everything about them
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth

well it sure take a long time to come back from heaven 4 years
so is edward still 17 or has he aged
did the cullens change bella so she could stay with them forever or maybe she was to heartbroken to want that anymore
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 Moving

no fixy no likey
so really surprised the charlie just let bella leave like that i guess he just couldnt deal with a greiving bella
Diane

Reviewer: radvan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing

i reserve the right to come back and throw you in the fire if you dont fix this ;)
ok so dont ease us into any thing jump right in there why dont you
this is pretty early in their time together right like a couple of weeks
Diane

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon

Aw - LOVED the honeymoon Ch.!! Especially Bella opening the can of "whoop ass" on Newton!! The citrus was nice too - hmmmm, chocolate!! :-P

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas

Pretty soon Bella will be having her babies. They will be prepared because Carlisle keeps checking on them. He will know if they are breech or not. I wish I would get gifts like they do.

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Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 28

Mike is such a dipshit Glad he is taken care of loved it update when you can thanks.....

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Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 27

that was wonderful update when you can thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 27

Alice is so mean. They should have not have to be apart. I think that is the silliest ritual.

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